Date: 11 Jan 2017 5:25 AM Title: Chapter 45
Loved it all! Great story :)
[Report This]Date: 12 Apr 2016 5:24 PM Title: Chapter 46
This story drag a lot
Date: 05 Jul 2015 3:18 AM Title: Chapter 46
That was such an amazing story. Just the right amount of everything. Thank you for sharing your talent.
Date: 03 Jul 2015 2:22 AM Title: Chapter 6
OMG he is setting her up with Jacob... That is crazy.
Date: 03 Jun 2014 3:56 AM Title: Chapter 41
where was charlie while dimetri tried to rape bella
Date: 02 Jun 2014 8:38 PM Title: Chapter 36
I think that somehow bella is going to get it by dimetri
Date: 27 May 2014 11:54 AM Title: Chapter 13
this is so frustrate it
[Report This]Date: 21 Apr 2014 12:40 PM Title: Chapter 46
Wow this was an absolutely awesome story!!!!!! I loved how they went back to masen when they were free ;) Thanks for sharing this and the o/t ;D
[Report This]Date: 16 Mar 2013 4:56 AM Title: Chapter 30
God girl...I am praying that their plan works too!!
[Report This]Date: 16 Mar 2013 3:51 AM Title: Chapter 28
Shit!! Why did I not see that coming!! You are certainly keeping the suspense right at the edge!! Love it!!
[Report This]Date: 16 Mar 2013 3:12 AM Title: Chapter 26
Oh my goodness girl!! Loving it!! Please tell me that there is a HEA!!!
[Report This]Date: 16 Mar 2013 2:39 AM Title: Chapter 24
My heart is breaking for these two...so flipping sad...
[Report This]Date: 16 Mar 2013 1:55 AM Title: Chapter 22
Wow!!! Fucking Awesome!!
[Report This]Date: 16 Mar 2013 12:34 AM Title: Chapter 16
Holy shit that was hot!! Are there any men out there that are really like that?? Now for that cold shower!! Thanks for a good story with a interesting plot!
[Report This]Date: 15 Mar 2013 6:11 PM Title: Chapter 7
I can't even begin to imagine what Edward is hiding...seems like witness protection??? Love the story! Thanks!!
[Report This]Date: 29 Aug 2012 8:36 PM Title: Chapter 46
Great story!!!
:)
Author's Response:
Thank you and thanks for the awesome reviews :)
Bee xx
[Report This]Date: 29 Aug 2012 2:40 PM Title: Chapter 40
Yeah 4 this mission! But, w/7 more chapters, I'm guessing it's not smooth sailing from here on out!!
I AM expecting an HEA though!! **usually it is marked Not an HEA if so** :)
[Report This]Date: 29 Aug 2012 1:19 PM Title: Chapter 36
Seriously--this story is AWESOME!! I Flove me an FBIWard!
:)
[Report This]Date: 29 Aug 2012 3:34 AM Title: Chapter 27
Gah-Flove this story!!!
Man up Edward! Quit leaving Bella - ur reasoning is stupid!!!
Charlie-SHUT UP!! He gets the 'I hate you' award!!
Thx. :)
[Report This]Date: 28 Aug 2012 10:44 PM Title: Chapter 12
Awesome story!!! Can't get enuff!!
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Date: 19 Jul 2012 3:21 AM Title: Chapter 27
bella gives in too easy....especially with charlie she shld have left him to wallow in some self pity for making edward leave and she gives in to edwarx to easy he shld prove to her tht he wont leave before she lets him get some lovin....great story so far tho im enjoying it
[Report This]Date: 15 Jun 2012 6:50 AM Title: Chapter 45
I am so glad that I saw this rec'd. I don't remember where but fortune was with me that day. I must read the prequel before I put these two characters aside. I know it will be equally as good.
I always enjoy romance but add in suspense and mystery and you are after my heart. Dangerouly In Love had all the elements of a fantastic story. Many authors ramble through their stories only making sure there is lots of sex to hold the reader. But DIL had a true beginning, middle, and joyous ending. You held my attention each and every chapter. That within itself is a feat.
I would love to see you tackle a historical romance - 1800 Regency England. Our fandom has so few of these and this genre is one of my favorites. I feel you would do this type of story justice!!! Who knows, perhaps I just hit you with a plot bunny!!!
Thank you for taking so much of your time writing for our fantastic fandom. You're a brilliant author and I look forward to reading more of your stories and hopefully your book when published this summer!!!
See you soon -- enjoyed!!!! :D
Elaine -- sparkledamnu on twitter Sparkle Damnu Phillips on FB
P.S. It's 2:45 a.m. EST here in Georgia (US). It's great to be retired and be able to nap the next day after reading a wonderful story most of the night!!!! O.O
[Report This]Date: 15 Jun 2012 6:22 AM Title: Chapter 44
Really good chapter!!! Devil child - great description of a toddler.
Now on to the last chapter!!!
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[Report This]Date: 15 Jun 2012 6:11 AM Title: Chapter 43
I liked that Edward received justice for he and his family, but I' more pleased that there wasn't any vendictiveness from him and Alice. Aro recognized his errors and realized his injustices. There is no return from the ashes left in his wake!!!
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[Report This]Date: 15 Jun 2012 5:45 AM Title: Chapter 42
Now that I can breath and know that E&B and the rest of the family are going to be ok ---- I feel the need to rant. I'm so upset with Charlie!!! And I was bragging on him earlier -- you're evil!!! :D He at least realized his error in the end. But he sure made a chaotic mess there for a while!!! Grrrrr. And I loved that Jacob came to check on them.
Wow, I'm getting close to the end of this part. I am so enjoying your story and I can't thank you enough for gifting our fandom with your words!!!!
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[Report This]Date: 15 Jun 2012 5:14 AM Title: Chapter 40
I don't think I've drawn a good breath yet -- and I fear more to come!!! Things were too perfect!!
Love it!!!
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[Report This]Date: 15 Jun 2012 2:31 AM Title: Chapter 37
Cat claws!!!! Our Bells is the cat's meow protecting her Lion!!!
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[Report This]Date: 15 Jun 2012 1:54 AM Title: Chapter 36
I'm not making any comment here -- it would only melt or make the page combust!!!!
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[Report This]Date: 15 Jun 2012 1:05 AM Title: Chapter 35
Yehah, chop, chop, chop, swish, chop, chop, chop - yeah, that was my ninja move!!!! :D
Smexy times -- nothing better.
I also love how you weave direct quotes from the book into your story!!!!
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[Report This]Date: 15 Jun 2012 12:33 AM Title: Chapter 34
Safe, warm, happy, loved, tingly, family, hope, relief - those are just a few of the words that I'm feeling for these two. And let's not forget beautifully written.
I'm a little hesitant to venture forth. This is chapter 34 of 45 -- I almost hear the words - Dum de dum dum!!! I feel you're holding out on me!!! I guess you might be understanding more of why I prefer to read completed fics. I am so impatient when it comes to updates!!! Call it old age or whatever - but, I must shyly and hesitantly hit "next" because I feel something's a coming!!!!
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[Report This]Date: 14 Jun 2012 11:17 PM Title: Chapter 32
Excuse the language here, but it seems to fit my feelings you evoked - damn, that was some deep shit!!! I don't know who I felt for the most, Bella having to experience being molested by that creep; Edward having to watch the love of his life go through that knowing he couldn't do anything without causing teh whole situation to go south; or Jacob, he has some hatred in is blood for the Volturi doesn't he? You're good -- like -- really good!!! Yeah!!
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[Report This]Date: 14 Jun 2012 10:51 PM Title: Chapter 31
Oooh, so Jacob is gonna help!!!! I really am enjoying Jacob here. It's quite nice to read about a really good Jacob!!!!
Thank you so much for choosing our fandom to bestow your brilliance upon!!!
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[Report This]Date: 14 Jun 2012 7:34 AM Title: Chapter 24
I feel as though my heart broke in two!!!!
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[Report This]Date: 14 Jun 2012 7:13 AM Title: Chapter 23
I really like your very vocal Charlie. Yes, he was strong in the Saga but you have given him so much more depth!!!
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[Report This]Date: 14 Jun 2012 7:00 AM Title: Chapter 22
So well written -- I was hanging onto each and every word. Such a tangled web yet so simple to read it through your words. Now I need to move on to the next chapter.
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[Report This]Date: 14 Jun 2012 6:23 AM Title: Chapter 21
Wicked leaving it there -- but I don't have to wait -- I'm wicked!!!! Laughs wickedly!!! This is simply the best!!!! Intense. Edgy. Unfolding slowing!!! Awesome.
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[Report This]Date: 14 Jun 2012 5:29 AM Title: Chapter 17
I love how your words make their love so tangible for the reader!!!!!
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[Report This]Date: 14 Jun 2012 5:03 AM Title: Chapter 15
I'm finally where I can read again today!! Enjoyed the bit of info.
Love the story.
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Date: 13 Jun 2012 4:45 AM Title: Chapter 5
One word - steamy!!! This seems to be going by really, really fast. It's simply that good.
Can't wait to get further into what's going on in Edward's life!!!
Oh, what a tangled web we weave!!!! I have so many questions. I'd love to pick your brain.
Thank you for writing such a wonderful, all-consuming story!!!
Elaine -- sparkledamnu on twitter Sparkle Damnu Phillips on FB
Author's Response:
Thanks Elaine. I'm glad to hear your enjoying it :)
Bee x
[Report This]Date: 13 Jun 2012 3:43 AM Title: Chapter 2
Wow, I've just finished the 2nd chapter - I was at the end of it before I knew!!! Really good start to your story. I hope that I can remember to review after each chapter but based on the first 2 that might be hard for me. Next tends to be my best friend on completed fics!
Thanks for writing for our fandom!!! Now on to 3!!!
Elaine -- sparkledamnu on twitter Sparkle Damnu Phillips on FB
Date: 10 Jun 2012 12:27 AM Title: Chapter 45
Great story! I really enjoyed it :):)
Date: 23 May 2012 8:25 PM Title: Chapter 45
Grate story :)
Date: 23 May 2012 3:36 PM Title: Chapter 45
amazing ending... thank you for writing such an amazing story! :)
-Kate
Date: 23 May 2012 1:43 AM Title: Chapter 41
Well........I'm glad Demetri is completely out of the picture now, thanks to Bella :-)
Date: 23 May 2012 12:05 AM Title: Chapter 41
OMG!!!!!!
Date: 20 May 2012 8:53 PM Title: Chapter 40
I am thinking not.... :)
Date: 20 May 2012 8:34 PM Title: Chapter 40
I hope Demitri doesn't find Edward and Bella.
Date: 19 May 2012 9:40 PM Title: Chapter 39
I really hope that Edward, Bella and the family make all survive this last mission in one piece.
Date: 19 May 2012 7:37 PM Title: Chapter 39
oh here we go! :)
Author's Response:
:)
Date: 18 May 2012 12:09 AM Title: Chapter 38
I am with Rose on this... they should have called Jasper... something seems fishy to me.
-Kate
Date: 16 May 2012 5:26 PM Title: Chapter 37
great chapter! Love that their missions are going well... Can't wait to read the next one... And Bella has come such a long way from the beginning :)
-Kate
Date: 15 May 2012 2:03 AM Title: Chapter 35
You mean they actually came up for air ;-)
Date: 14 May 2012 11:28 PM Title: Chapter 35
great chapter! :) can't wait to read more!
Date: 14 May 2012 7:56 PM Title: Chapter 33
oh crazy.. at least he kept his cool to get what he went in for and get out and not blow their cover :) Can't wait to read the next one!