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Reviewer: MarilagML Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 May 2012 7:14 PM Title: Chapter 5

Not for me.  You're revealing too much too soon.

Reviewer: MarilagML Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 May 2012 7:07 PM Title: Chapter 1

You know, I love Sailor Moon so I'm gonna read this one. :-)

Reviewer: bronzeandbeautiful Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 May 2012 10:00 PM Title: Chapter 2

ok so english 101 never start a sentence with "hello my name is". try to keep "i" out of sentences as much as possible. doing these two things will entice a reader to be even more drawn into your story; also it may challege you to come up with more indepth ways of writing. i do hope you take this adavice constructively and not matiously.

Reviewer: may of rose 2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Apr 2012 4:49 PM Title: Chapter 1

Your welcome.

Reviewer: renesmee26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Apr 2012 3:24 AM Title: Chapter 1

oh my god ! i love you.. you mix the two things a loved so much.. thank you.. don´t worry someone might help you with your story if i wasn´t  non-native english speaker i´d  glad helping you.

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