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Reviewer: faeries232 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Sep 2016 9:19 AM Title: summary

Sounds like an amazing story!

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Sep 2016 1:22 PM Title: Chapter 3: Fuck Promotions

lol for potty mouth Carlisle

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Sep 2016 6:38 AM Title: Chapter 3: Fuck Promotions

Carlisle is losing it lol.  Bella will help him out.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Sep 2016 6:25 AM Title: Chapter 2: Yeah Totally late

Jessica is such a bitch.

Reviewer: TinksTwiHeart Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Sep 2016 2:40 PM Title: Chapter 2: Yeah Totally late

Love it!!!!

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Sep 2016 2:40 AM Title: Chapter 2: Yeah Totally late

Sigh I can see Jessica is going to make her life difficult I bet.  yey for Angela coming to her rescue

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Sep 2016 2:35 AM Title: Chapter 1: A New Start

Good start.  Can't wait to see where you go with it.

I saw the review about formatting.  I'm an admin so if you need assistance, please let me know.  Kelly@twcslibrary.net



Author's Response:

Thank you thats great, fixed it now, I think the first one was a error. but thank you if i get stuck I will drop a email :)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Sep 2016 3:07 PM Title: Chapter 1: A New Start

He is a great dad. It is great he has such a great support

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Sep 2016 2:34 PM Title: summary

good info

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Sep 2016 2:31 PM Title: How Long???

thanks

 

Reviewer: zanath Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Sep 2016 10:16 PM Title: Chapter 1: A New Start

The text does not wrap properly.  I have to use the scroll bar at the bottom to go back and forth to read the complete sentences.  Perhaps someone on the web site can advise you pf another fprmatting that will fix this problem.

The story has a good start though, and if it gets easier to read formatting wise I will continue to read.  Thanks



Author's Response:

Hi there, Yeah I noticed this from the recent upload, It takes forever as I have a new system I have now fixed the problem, it just takes a while for it to re format :) 

thank you, Cullen-madness101

Reviewer: bobbysgirl1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Sep 2016 7:56 PM Title: How Long???

I look forward to it again.  READ YOU SOON  : )

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