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Reviewer: Eileen22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Oct 2012 4:33 AM Title: Chapter 1

Edward is such a selfish bastard. He didn't deserve a happy ending when Bella had to suffer. Your writing is really good but I can't stand this jerk and weak Bella. 

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Apr 2012 1:51 PM Title: Chapter 1

It is a good read. My problem is that Edward always gets everything. Bella gets screwed.  Is this some underlying message that being selfless lets the self be consumed with loss.   So he is remorsefull.  He gets a life with Vicky and a baby. Moral to the story?  Should have broken it off when he left and Bella could have found Jake.  She was after all just a working class girl.

 

 

Reviewer: cjrich Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Apr 2012 6:26 AM Title: Chapter 1

Wow, crying my eyes out here.  Very dark, not the usual, but very well writen and a story I will not forget.  Thank you - Cheri

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