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Reviewer: UNImominTX Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jan 2013 4:34 AM Title: Hear Me Out

I can't seem to read the chapter entitled Hear Me Out.  It says it's that chapter but it looks like a repeat of Chap 1.

Reviewer: Create3333 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Oct 2012 9:08 PM Title: Epilogue

I'm so confused. They seem to have gotten back together without acknowledging what happened. Why did she leave in the first place?!? Something's not right here...

Reviewer: cmg1218 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Aug 2012 2:40 PM Title: Epilogue

I so loved this and happily await bpov!

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2012 7:02 PM Title: Destruction

Wow she just left him no explantion as to why....

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2012 7:42 AM Title: Growth

Okay.  progress has been made. A few chapters back you through us all for a loop when you relived the first chapter.

Reviewer: TwilightTucker Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2012 2:48 PM Title: Memories

I'm not going to be able to follow, understand or do anything with this story until chapter 22 is fixed. It is a copy of chapter 1 and tells us nothing about Bella's pov. I still don't know what is going on and don't see where you have acknowledged this to any reviewer.

Reviewer: Twix Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2012 7:25 AM Title: Memories

Chapters 1 (Destruction) and 22 (Hear Me Out) are duplicates and Bella's explanation is missing from this version of the fic (it exists on FFN).

Reviewer: yankeerose Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2012 12:23 AM Title: Reaching Out

I'm missing a chapter somehow...I don't see any chapter with Bella's POV.

Reviewer: manolomel9 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Aug 2012 1:40 PM Title: Reaching Out

The chapter with Bella's side of the story is missing here, can you repost it (chapter 22 that was posted is actually a repeat of chapter 1 and i assume was posted in error).  I would like to know what she told Edward that is making him rethink things....then I will understand this chapter a little more. Thanks

Reviewer: TwilightTucker Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Aug 2012 5:41 AM Title: Hear Me Out

I'm lost and disappointed. This says it is chapter 22 Hear me Out. But it is. ER stun chapter 1

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2012 1:42 AM Title: Hear Me Out

I thought he filed divorce papers and she was gone. You are loosing me here going back and forth. He is calling girls and getting dates. So what is this chapter one you lost from way back there?

Reviewer: darcy Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2012 1:56 PM Title: Hear Me Out

Isn't this chapter one?

Reviewer: dj071688 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2012 12:28 PM Title: Hear Me Out

Okay you do realize that chap 22 is a repeat of chap 1?

Reviewer: twilightfanatic93 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2012 5:18 AM Title: Moving Forward

yep  pretty much feeling the same way that I have the whole time. Well, I'm glad that he is moving on and I'm glad that he didn't give in to her and that he stood up to her... Finally! lol but I just don't want him to be lonely. I dunno... I guess I'm torn, but I can say that if they do get back together I'll still have a grudge against her cause he didn't deserve the way she treated him. Okay.. rant done! haha great job hun 

Reviewer: sherylbaby Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2012 4:59 AM Title: Moving Forward

I am an Edward and Bella HEA fan.

Reviewer: dj071688 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jul 2012 12:52 AM Title: Getting Rid of Bella

I am usually an HEA type of girl, however, the only HEA I see in this story, is this marriage needs to be over.  Excellent writing.

Reviewer: sherylbaby Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2012 4:07 PM Title: Getting Rid of Bella

I don't understand what is wrong with Bella. Doesn't she love Edward?

Reviewer: dj071688 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2012 1:47 AM Title: I Don't Know

Bravo, bravo, bravo.  Finally Edward finds his balls.  Alright.  Pride.

Reviewer: dj071688 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2012 1:35 AM Title: A Flash of Anger

Alrighty then.  I feel slightly vindicated.

Reviewer: dj071688 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2012 1:30 AM Title: Is It Worth It

No answer to that question.  I reserve the right to read further and pass judgement at the end.

Reviewer: dj071688 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2012 1:16 AM Title: Date Night

You did great with the fluff.  Still don't like her, but you did great.

Reviewer: dj071688 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2012 12:55 AM Title: Getting Closer

Okay, you are not shy to have sex with your wife who left you, but you don't feel right sitting next to her.  Oh, Jessica needs to know this.



Author's Response:

And i totally envisioned Edward telling Jessica and them talking about it, but when I went to write it I just couldn't.  Guess that's not how it happened. lol. But yes it just plays into how her actions have made him feel guilty and insecure about things he shouldn't, but when they were alone it was just them and he didnt have time to think about anything.  

Reviewer: dj071688 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2012 12:50 AM Title: Remembering

My son was two in 2000, I was a huge fan of sleep.  Sorry.

Reviewer: dj071688 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2012 12:38 AM Title: Soft Touches and Whispered Words

No comment.

Reviewer: dj071688 Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2012 12:33 AM Title: Moment of Truth

Yeah, Edward, I would like some answers myself.  You know after thinking about his statement, "I want my wife back", "I want to save my marriage", my question is why.  It is obvious that she did not think enough of it to even discuss her reasons for leaving, and why would someone want to spend the rest of their lives with someone who could easily do a repeat performance.  Is is the fear of being alone?  just asking.

Reviewer: dj071688 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2012 12:23 AM Title: Car Ride

OMG. 

Reviewer: dj071688 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2012 12:17 AM Title: A Truth Revealed

BINGO.  The fact that he saw her making out with someone else and still he took her back.....well he is a better man than most.  I would not have taken my husband back if had been me.  A relationship without trust can not stand.

Reviewer: dj071688 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2012 12:09 AM Title: Glimmer of Hope

Bitch,bitch, bitch.  Edward.....just say no.  Now you need to tell her you need time.  Don't do it.

Reviewer: dj071688 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2012 12:04 AM Title: Intoxication

Now he is apologizing.  Damn.

Reviewer: dj071688 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2012 11:59 PM Title: No Regret

Edward needs to sell the house, and get the hell away from the area permanently.  No phone contact, no forwarding address, let her see how it feels.  God I hate this Bella.  Which translates into good writing on your part.  In case you were wondering.

Reviewer: dj071688 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2012 11:53 PM Title: Anti Nausea

That bitch.  She devastates the man, then CASUALLY asks him how he is doing?  I don't know where you are going with this story, but I do not want them to get back together.  Anyone that can be that callous after ripping someone's heart, does not deserve a second chance.  j/s

Reviewer: dj071688 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2012 11:45 PM Title: A Phone Call

Damn, she is just cold-hearted.  I know we are only seeing his side of things, but from what I am reading, he is clueless which begs to wonder......what the hell.

Reviewer: dj071688 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2012 11:38 PM Title: Destruction

I see that Edward didn't see this coming, so why the hell would she disconnect her phone not permitting him to at least talk to her.  Must say, I hate her right now.  Very painful.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jul 2012 7:40 AM Title: I Don't Know

The dragging it out. She is obviously guilty. So I mean she cheated on him in some manner. She lied to him. I don't think I would trust her.  Let her go back to Jacob Black. Be done with hurt. DRAMA>

Reviewer: darcy Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2012 2:10 PM Title: I Don't Know

For some reason I feel like that chapter was a step forward for Edward. He's standing up for himself and communicating his feelings. Hopefully he'll let his anger abate and he'll do the other half of communicating--listening.

Reviewer: twilightfanatic93 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2012 5:56 AM Title: I Don't Know

Welp... least to say... I am... PROUD of Edward!! he finally didnt give in to her. I know that it took a lot out of him but its time he started to speak up for hisself. Regardless if she has her reasoning or not I'm glad that he didn't give in to her. Great job hun as always. 

Reviewer: Jmcfall Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2012 4:47 AM Title: I Don't Know

Thank you 

Reviewer: Jmcfall Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2012 4:43 AM Title: Collision

Thank you 

Reviewer: kgunter34 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2012 2:36 AM Title: Collision

If it was Edward kissing some woman he would be hung out to dry.  Can't wait to read their convo.



Author's Response:

dont you normally review on ff? haha you're throwing me for a loop aren't you?  Love you here or there! <3

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jun 2012 2:12 AM Title: A Flash of Anger

that was a short story. Fine. I don't blame him. Not being honest with your spouse is the beginning of the whole problem.  Perhaps she does not love Edward enough after all. You can not carry on with two men and not cheat someone. Obviously.

 

This is one part of Twilight I hated. The hole Jacob thing. I understood her feelings after he helped her but hey.. shit or get off the pot. Make a decision.

Reviewer: twilightfanatic93 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2012 10:00 PM Title: A Flash of Anger

I don't get why the hell she was mad at edward for forgiving jacob when she kissed him! the audacity! that little credit I gave her last chapter I have taken back lol. 

Reviewer: sherylbaby Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2012 9:59 PM Title: A Flash of Anger

Shit!!!!!!!!!!

I think that Bella better run her ass after Edward and tell him she will cut Jacob out of life if it means saving her marriage. A spouse is more important than a friend. She also needs to TRULY apologize to Eward.

Are you planning an HEA? I can't read all this heartache, thinking that they won't be able to work it out...

 



Author's Response:

I don't want to give anything away BUT I will say I think you will be safe reading on. *wink, wink, nudge nudge*

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2012 5:52 PM Title: Is It Worth It

I don't think she is bad. I think like all people in relationships we get comfortable. Sometimes you forget to nurture your relationship like a child. Then it grows right along with you both. If you don't do this then you start loosing parts of each other. you replace that relationship part with something else, like work, sports, other people, reading etc.   This is the danger zone.



Author's Response:

Yes exactly and then the little things start to eat away at you when things go outside of that comfort zone and make little problems seem astronomical, and god forbid you have any underlying issues you need to deal with as well.  

Reviewer: twilightfanatic93 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2012 2:08 PM Title: Is It Worth It

I guess she's not too bad. But I still feel like that Edward could be more of a dick lol. I wanted him to get mad at her especially after she slept with him and then left. I guess I can't really say how I would act seeing as I was never in that situation. But I guess that I am glad that they are starting to work it out. 



Author's Response:

hold that thought :) Everyone won't always be so complacent and happy. 

Reviewer: TwilightTucker Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2012 2:06 PM Title: Is It Worth It

Yes. So far she still is. But I think that is. Because I still dont understand why she left.  Did she have an affair.  Why did she say those things to him and now suddenly want him back?



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review...answers are on their way I promise :D

Reviewer: twilightfanatic93 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2012 10:28 PM Title: Getting Closer

I love this story. I know this may sound harsh but I'm glad Edward didn't sit intimately next to her. she doesn't deserve it especially after that whole sexcapade thing she pulled. but I still love this story lol 

Reviewer: twilightfanatic93 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2012 9:16 PM Title: Glimmer of Hope

awww really? I mean I like Bella and everything but I just feel that she should atleast jump through one hoop before he lets her jump in his arms. 

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 May 2012 3:34 AM Title: Moment of Truth

hmm

 

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 May 2012 3:07 PM Title: Car Ride

Yet we don't know exactly what she Has done. We know she wanted to seperate.  Perhaps out of fear of what she might do.  We shall see.

Reviewer: yankeerose Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 May 2012 11:34 PM Title: Destruction

Please forgive me...I seriously do not want to make any wonderful author sad.  Yes, your story is fiction (and I'm enjoying it very much) but it is also a very serious subject.  I have been reading ff for many years now and its surprising how many readers see themselves in the stories.   Once again, forgive me for being so blatant with my opinion and feel free to remove my review if you feel the need. 



Author's Response:

Oh no no no sweetie you definitely took that the wrong way.  I should've specified I'm sorry.  What makes me sad about your review is that you said many times your patients take back the person who left them but only a small percenteage of those relationships remain stable for more than 10 years.  The odds are sad, not your views.  And when I said this is fiction I meant because it's fiction I'm going to bend the truth to make a more fairytale type ending probably then the actual statistics are.  if that makes sense.  I would never remove a review even the people who say my writing sucks. :)  I accept it all good bad and the rude, I'm just thankful you took the time at all!!  And again I am just sad about how many families and things are broken up and don't last even after trying to reconcile thats all.

Reviewer: yankeerose Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 May 2012 2:39 PM Title: A Truth Revealed

Forgiveness is a personal thing.  I could never forgive anyone for leaving me, no matter what their reasoning was.  To my mind, running away means you are no longer vested in the relationship and are either a) looking for someone else...which means they feel you are not the best out there or b) are in an affair that they are hoping will work out to a permanent relationship...most of the time this does not happen.  Now of course there are relationships that are abusive and I always tell my patients...RUN AWAY AS FAST AS POSSIBLE!  But that is just me, and yes my patients many times do take back the person who left them.  The sad part is that only a very small percentage of these relationships remain stable for more than 10 years.  It also gives the person who left an unfair advantage...the other person is so happy to have them back, that they are willing to do almost anything to keep them from leaving again.  Its really quite sad.



Author's Response:

This review kind of made me sad BUT Edward is not nor will he ever be abusive in this story and well...its fiction and they're Edward and Bella so not all the rules apply to them...maybe. :D

Reviewer: yankeerose Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 May 2012 2:23 PM Title: Intoxication

He would have regretted it forever.



Author's Response:

Yes, and thats why he stopped.  He already has major regrets over what he did let happen.

Reviewer: yankeerose Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 May 2012 2:20 PM Title: No Regret

Wouldn't it be great, if we all had friends/family that had a vacation house within driving distance that we could go to in times like these?

Are you planning on doing Bella's POV, it usually takes alot for a woman to break up her marriage.  Men are easier swayed.  (its the psychologist in me)



Author's Response:

Psychologist eh?  That makes me excited and nervous at the same time...maybe i could ask you some questions about how you do therapy and whatnot?  :)  I tried to see if I could message you or something from here but it wouldnt let me so if you're on fanfiction.net private message me there or just let me kno and we can figure something out if you're up to it . <3  Btw thats for all of the reviews.

Reviewer: yankeerose Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 May 2012 2:15 PM Title: Anti Nausea

My heart goes out to anyone who is heartbroken...we've all been there.  Its the most terrible feeling in the world.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 May 2012 3:20 PM Title: A Truth Revealed

What Alice did may NOT be what Bella has done. She may not have cheated in the sexual kind of way. She may have felt an attraction and then got scared, thus the separation.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 May 2012 1:17 AM Title: Glimmer of Hope

I think this is a start.  He is nothing. Well perhaps she never went further than perhaps talking and eating out. Let us hope that she did not damage her marriage by cheating.

 

I am not disappointed. Sometimes you have to shake things up to get a change. Let us hope that this will eventually heal their marriage.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 May 2012 6:34 PM Title: Intoxication

No cheating says something about you personally! I taught my children you have to be honest in a marriage if you can not stay in your marriage and keep your vows then divorce. DONT cheat. It demeans you!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your reviews.  I will have another chapter up shortly and I hope you read it, especially after reading what you had to say. :)

 

-Jezz

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 May 2012 6:31 PM Title: No Regret

well after 12 years of marriage you need to talk. I have been married 3 times that and let me tell you there is always valleys. You have to work at marriage. She did not cheat while they were together and that is good. She however did find someone else. That is sad in so many ways.  That says lack of committment. Commit to the marriage and Make it work. At least have the balls to stand and fight.



Author's Response:

I couldn't agree more. :) And thats all I can really say without giving anything away for the future. <3  Thanks for all of the reviews.

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