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Reviewer: twirob13 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2014 7:38 PM Title: Chapter 23

awesome sequel thanks for sharing it with us ;D

Reviewer: jmthorn Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 May 2013 4:25 AM Title: Chapter 23

This is a very good story wow I laughed and cried and got aroused all in one story... Simply amazing work 

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2012 12:09 AM Title: Chapter 23

I am so sad it is over. Although, it is a fantastic end for their exciting beginning. Edward is so friggen cute. :)

Reviewer: jenn1214 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Nov 2012 9:34 PM Title: Chapter 23

Loved how you ended it.

Reviewer: Lovedwardalways Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Nov 2012 4:05 PM Title: Chapter 23

Yes I agree sad to say goodbye to creeper and his drummergirl this was such an amazing story. But I love all your stuff. Peyton is still one of my all time favorite characters. I loved the letter what a perfect way to end the story. Take your break from all things e&b we will be herewhen you return.

Reviewer: Purple Passion Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Nov 2012 3:23 PM Title: Chapter 23

I loved this letter Edward wrote to Bella.  Your writting will be missed. I will be patiently waiting to hear from you again ;-)  Bye for now.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Nov 2012 3:16 PM Title: Chapter 23

:) loved this

Reviewer: Lovedwardalways Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2012 7:13 PM Title: The Perch

Wonderful ending loved it.

Reviewer: Bcullen1026 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Oct 2012 5:40 PM Title: The Perch

Awww...that was so perfect! This was a crazy intense ride but I lvoed every minute of it. Thanks for sharing!

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2012 9:29 PM Title: The Perch

OMG! This is so perfectly beautiful! I love it!!! :)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2012 5:29 PM Title: The Perch

:) loved this story

Reviewer: michele_my_bella Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2012 4:22 PM Title: The Perch

That was beautiful 

Reviewer: keola Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2012 3:45 PM Title: The Perch

a lovely well writen and very satisfying ending. nicely done! thank you

Reviewer: tlwatkins36 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2012 2:23 PM Title: The Perch

I loved it!  It was perfect for them.  Edward is such a sweetheart when it comes to loving his Bella and vise versa with Bella.  You couldn't have done a better job ever.  can't wait for the epilouge

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2012 1:30 PM Title: The Perch

I dont want to say goodbye... I am crying so hard right now... well, holding my breath so I can type.

 

This chapter was so beautiful.  She got some feelings out and it helped her epiphany.  I loved it!

 

Its so amazing to think back to that late night/early morning jog that took Creeper to the woods behind Drummer Girls house and seen her in those tiny shorts and her Disney shirt...  Wow.

 

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Oct 2012 10:48 PM Title: Score

I love this story!! Twice!!! ;)

Reviewer: Lovedwardalways Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Oct 2012 7:27 PM Title: Score

What a perfect first time where Edward was such such the typical guy his first his body was quick to react but was trying to let her get hers first but his body was not cooperating and just was over excited by the all the pleasure over load. I love he was wanting more but did not want to do anything that would hurt her he is so sweet.

Reviewer: jenn1214 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Oct 2012 12:43 AM Title: Score

That was so sweet. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 08 Oct 2012 4:26 PM Title: Score

:)

Reviewer: loventherussian17 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Oct 2012 2:00 PM Title: Score

Great chapter loved it

Reviewer: loventherussian17 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Sep 2012 3:22 AM Title: Broken Up Beats

Really great so far can't wait to see wat happens next update soon

Reviewer: Purple Passion Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Sep 2012 8:04 PM Title: Broken Up Beats

Oh..........so sad. Won't be long before Ren is gone. Poor Bella.

Reviewer: Lovedwardalways Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Sep 2012 7:55 PM Title: Broken Up Beats

He just knew, he felt she needed him. I think Phil understand and was prepared for it. I love Emmett he is so sweet worrying about Bella.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Sep 2012 1:50 PM Title: Broken Up Beats

:)

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Sep 2012 1:37 PM Title: Broken Up Beats

I love this!! :)

Reviewer: Lovedwardalways Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Sep 2012 3:28 PM Title: Chapter 19

That was funny with the stare down. I think dinner went well. Fun times in the garage that was hot.

Reviewer: Lovedwardalways Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Aug 2012 4:49 PM Title: Caution

Emmett is just awesome exactly what Edward needed. Bella is the balm to his soul. Love Carlisle he is funny.

Reviewer: Purple Passion Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2012 4:11 AM Title: The Rhythm of the Night

So very original there Edward.  That was just too sweet for words.

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2012 3:13 AM Title: The Rhythm of the Night

Amazing!

Reviewer: michele_my_bella Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2012 12:52 AM Title: The Rhythm of the Night

I love this. Every woman deserves to feel this loved...sigh

Reviewer: Caligyrl4cullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2012 6:03 PM Title: The Rhythm of the Night

What an awesome chapter!!!!! All of it was just fuking fantastic!!!!! Swoon age definitely high. Damn our boy is good. Lucky lucky Bella ;)

Reviewer: Lovedwardalways Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2012 3:29 PM Title: The Rhythm of the Night

Oh my gosh how can you not love Emmett he is too funny. I love that Edward made dinner for her. Esme is such a good mom always know what you need when you need it. I love that they got to play together.

Reviewer: Lovedwardalways Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2012 4:59 PM Title: The Drumroll

I loved maggie's present. Edward is so sweet.

Reviewer: Caligyrl4cullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2012 8:28 AM Title: The Drumroll

Your chapters are always worth the wait... What a sweet chapter that most definitely needed tissues. Can't wait to see what all creeper has planned. Im
sure that'll have a tissue warning just from his thoughtfulness. Can't wait!!!!

Reviewer: Purple Passion Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Aug 2012 7:15 PM Title: The Drumroll

That was so sweet what Edward did and said to Bella's mom about him taking care of her daughter and that she didn't have to worry about her ever being alone ;-)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Aug 2012 3:17 PM Title: The Drumroll

:)

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Aug 2012 2:15 PM Title: The Drumroll

So absolutely fantastic! I love this story! I am very excited about Edwards birthday surprise for Bella! Can't wait! :)

Reviewer: Lovedwardalways Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2012 6:33 PM Title: Assist

That is so cute she knew he was coming and made him cookies it's her birthday she should be the one getting presents. I am happy he talk to his mom a little. I am sure she will love what ever he has planned.

Reviewer: Caligyrl4cullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jul 2012 10:25 PM Title: Assist

Our stalkerward is so sweet with such a huge heart. Love him to pieces!!!!! He will make our girls day the very best, can't wait to read that come to life. Got a little misty eyed but that's ok cuzz her bday is gonna be awesome!!! I can tell!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Jul 2012 1:47 PM Title: Assist

:)

Reviewer: jenn1214 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2012 9:32 PM Title: The Drag

This chapter was so sweet. I was perfect for them.

Reviewer: Lovedwardalways Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2012 7:36 PM Title: The Drag

LOVE !!! LOVE !!! LOVE !!!! It. He is just so perfect how he can read her and knew something was wrong. How he would not let her off the hook he made her tell him what was wrong then comforted her let her know all way there and then pleasured her for all he was worth.

Reviewer: TwilightTucker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2012 4:11 PM Title: The Drag

Absolutely perfect

Reviewer: Caligyrl4cullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2012 3:52 PM Title: The Drag

Yeah!!!! They definitely needed time to regroup and talk it out. Those times seem to just solidify heir bond so that's good. Plus who wouldn't need sexy time with creeper??? ;) lol. Can't wait to see the bday surprise... But now a Lil nervous about the hard stuff I the upcoming chapter

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2012 2:01 PM Title: The Drag

:)

Reviewer: Lovedwardalways Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Jul 2012 7:52 AM Title: Too Many Cymbals

Just telling you again if you need you know we will all wait patiently for you. So if you need to post once every two weeks do it. I love this story so much and now that she got all that off her chest maybe she can think straight and decide some stuff.

Reviewer: Caligyrl4cullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2012 5:04 PM Title: Too Many Cymbals

Poor drummer girl... Soo much heart fail at such a young age and our poor stalker boy who shoulders it all for her happiness. Let's hope she can't work some of it out in her head. Living by the what ifs is never good.

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2012 2:55 PM Title: Too Many Cymbals

This was really great! I loved the connection with Bella and Rose. :)

Reviewer: Lovedwardalways Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Jul 2012 6:16 AM Title: Outtake #2 Through His Mother's Eyes

I love seeing thru his mothers eyes the love they share and how he is not her little boy any more. Wonderful chapter.

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jul 2012 7:26 PM Title: Outtake #2 Through His Mother's Eyes

Oh...that was really beautiful. 

I liked seeing Edward and Bella through Esme's eyes. 

 

Reviewer: Caligyrl4cullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jul 2012 6:37 PM Title: Outtake #2 Through His Mother's Eyes

Awwww, they see the bond our kids have. Mama bear will come out, prolly for Bella's benefit too at some point. Can't wait to see how she makes E squirm with a mothers stare lol. Let's hope they have E's parents in their corner cuzz I'm sure there will be bumpy times in their life

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jul 2012 3:58 PM Title: Outtake #2 Through His Mother's Eyes

Fanfriggentastic!!! I love Esmes POV! :)

Reviewer: Lovedwardalways Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2012 4:55 AM Title: Shielding

Yeah totally loved it. Jasper is such a good friend how can you not love him. The mom bonding thing was so cute. Can't wait to see what his parents say after Bella leaved.

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2012 3:16 AM Title: Shielding

Oh, I love this so much!!! :)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2012 1:53 PM Title: Shielding

:)

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jun 2012 8:02 PM Title: Paradiddle

This is so fantastic!

Reviewer: Lovedwardalways Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Jun 2012 4:14 PM Title: Paradiddle

He is so cute pouting about the cookie. I bet they were suprized to see Bella.

Reviewer: Lovedwardalways Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Jun 2012 8:18 AM Title: A Conversation With Mom

I love how she can see her mom so perfectly.

Reviewer: Caligyrl4cullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jun 2012 4:28 PM Title: A Conversation With Mom

Uh oh... Then you prep us with remember I gave you this when talking about the next chapter... Makes me nervous!!! I'm guessing something, angst, parents disapproval or summin is gonna happen at the dinner we've all been waiting for.

Reviewer: Bcullen1026 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2012 1:06 AM Title: Two Splash, Four Crash, Two Chinas and a Ride

Every chapter I read of this makes me happier and happier that you decided to write this sequel. It's great! Thank you!

Reviewer: jomik1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2012 10:53 PM Title: Two Splash, Four Crash, Two Chinas and a Ride

That turned out to be a really sweet chapter.  Poor girl was driving herself crazy.  Maggie was just what she needed.  A mother figure to help her through.

 

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2012 10:33 PM Title: Two Splash, Four Crash, Two Chinas and a Ride

I love it!!

Reviewer: Caligyrl4cullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2012 8:37 PM Title: Two Splash, Four Crash, Two Chinas and a Ride

Maggie rocks!!! Glad Bella's got someone there for her since she can't get the feedback like that from her mom. I'm sure same will be an outlet too but that's always difficult being creepers mom and all. Can't wait for the dinner scene!!!!

Reviewer: Lovedwardalways Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2012 6:19 PM Title: Two Splash, Four Crash, Two Chinas and a Ride

Wonderful chapter I love her rambling as she mutters along her problems in a jumbled mess and Maggie just listening and being supportive.

Reviewer: IsisDraven Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2012 2:53 PM Title: Two Splash, Four Crash, Two Chinas and a Ride

I love Maggie she is so sweet and really cares for Bella. This was such a good chapter.

Reviewer: jomik1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2012 9:40 PM Title: Encroachment

It was sooo worth the wait.  Absolutely loved the chapter. Now I can't wait for the official meeting with the parents.  Looking forward to the next update.

Reviewer: Caligyrl4cullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2012 7:47 PM Title: Encroachment

So love how he knows disney movies/characters!!! This is was really sweet chapter where they can reconnect and just be drummer girl and creeper. Totally excited about the meet and greet with his parents. I'm sure he'll be a mess but hopefully it'll be a good thing!!!

Reviewer: tinare05 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2012 6:08 PM Title: Encroachment

OMG they are so sickly cute!

Love it!!!

Keep writing

Cheers 

Tina

Reviewer: purplemischief Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2012 3:49 PM Title: Encroachment

That was hot and then sweet.

Reviewer: Lovedwardalways Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2012 3:34 PM Title: Encroachment

Wow that was so worth the wait the tease over on Facebook was killing me. That pic was awesome. I love that it was above the undies and they are taking things slow. Loved it.

Reviewer: IsisDraven Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2012 2:58 PM Title: Encroachment

That was so hot and sweet! I love these two!

Reviewer: Lovedwardalways Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2012 2:05 AM Title: Extra Time

I am happy he went back to the notebook they need that connection. Gosh Edward is a perv and I love his Pervy side.

Reviewer: Caligyrl4cullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2012 3:16 PM Title: Extra Time

Yeah!!!!!! It does seem like they'll need garage time to reconnect and solidify the strong bond they already have. Love them!!! I hope the future Convo goes well... You know the one... E's soccer career, her following wherever he goes cuzz she's a smarty too... Her and her mom... Really do love these kids!!!

Reviewer: jomik1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2012 5:38 AM Title: Finding A Groove

Oh my, you paint quite the picture with your words! I could definately "see" our soccerward!

Reviewer: Lovedwardalways Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2012 6:51 AM Title: Finding A Groove

That was totally hot, watching a sweaty Edward is just mouth watering. The skank twin were annoying if they think his mind was anywhere button Bella at his birthday they are sadly mistaken.

Reviewer: IsisDraven Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2012 2:46 PM Title: Finding A Groove

I loved Bella's reaction to watching him play. I wanted to scratch Heidi's eyes out for Bella for going after Renee like that. Such a good chapter. Hope you get to feeling better!

Reviewer: jomik1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2012 6:54 AM Title: Hard Tackle

Loved it. Our boy sure is in this deep! Can't wait for the next chapter.

Reviewer: Caligyrl4cullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2012 5:48 AM Title: Hard Tackle

Awwww, i think our Lil caveward needs some extra loving once Bella's dragged back to their cave. It's cute tho, and cue the hot sweaty soccer players next. She's gonna be drooling like no ones business

Reviewer: IsisDraven Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2012 5:54 PM Title: Hard Tackle

Holy crap that was intense. I think all these emotions are so strong and new he just doesn't know how to deal with them all yet. Such a good chapter.

Reviewer: jomik1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2012 5:33 AM Title: Chapter 3

Loved the chapter. Bella's making it thru the day slowly but surely. And Edward is just wonderful!

Reviewer: rdmickey1989 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2012 3:12 AM Title: Chapter 3

So I found you here, and so I will read my updates from here. 

 

They are just so dang sweet together. 

Reviewer: IsisDraven Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2012 7:16 PM Title: Chapter 3

The beginning of this chapter I feel so bad for how overwhelmed Bella is. These two are just too sweet for words. I love Angela,Rose and Em. They were just what she needed for other people besides Edward. I love how Edward wouldn't let her hide her feelings from him. Such a great chapter.

Reviewer: Purple Passion Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2012 8:48 PM Title: Give and Go

I love these first two chapters :-)

 

Reviewer: Caligyrl4cullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2012 5:38 PM Title: Give and Go

Yea!!! Such innocent high school romances and all things that follow them. So excited about update!!! Love this story and can't wait to see where these guys go.

Reviewer: Fanfictionfan1664 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2012 1:51 PM Title: Give and Go

That was just what I needed! I had a cheesy grin on my face the whole chapter! Thanks for the update.

Trip

Reviewer: Purple Passion Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 May 2012 3:35 AM Title: Quarter Notes on the Bass Drum

Loved the first chapter of this sequel. Can't wait till Thursday ;-)  Happy writing !

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