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Reviewer: bevey99 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jan 2020 3:20 AM Title: Chapter 20

God I loved this story.  I hope you do continue it someday.   One of the funniest things I've read in quite awhile.  Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jan 2020 3:12 AM Title: Chapter 19

OF course! That's the Last step, instead of the first.   But will he put a baby in her the old fashion way???

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jan 2020 3:05 AM Title: Chapter 18

Thought that babies couldn't leave the hospital until the weighed 5 lbs?  Number would have had to stay awhile.

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jan 2020 2:57 AM Title: Chapter 17

SWEET

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jan 2020 2:51 AM Title: Chapter 16

OH Fuck.    I'm sure Ed fainted.

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jan 2020 2:45 AM Title: Chapter 15

Oh god, baby blocked.

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jan 2020 2:34 AM Title: Chapter 14

NKOTB no no no no

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jan 2020 2:09 AM Title: Chapter 10

AWE  he's sensitive. 

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jan 2020 2:03 AM Title: Chapter 9

hahahahahahaha   GO TEAM EDWARD 

You should post this on other sites.  It's too good to set with so few reviews.  I've had my account here for years, but most people don't bother with using this site.

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jan 2020 1:41 AM Title: Chapter 7

Oh jeez, his word vomit is the best ab workout ever.  

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jan 2020 1:31 AM Title: Chapter 6

Oh geez, Edward's word vomit.  Priceless

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jan 2020 1:22 AM Title: Chapter 5

You're killing me.

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jan 2020 11:10 PM Title: Chapter 2

I'm glad I'm not drinking anything.  I would have ruined my computer.

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jan 2020 10:43 PM Title: Chapter 1

THIS is hysterical. hahahahaha  love love love

Reviewer: sue1zide Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2018 3:16 AM Title: Chapter 20

Perfect!

Reviewer: sue1zide Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2018 3:16 AM Title: Chapter 20

Perfect!

Reviewer: sue1zide Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2018 3:15 AM Title: Chapter 20

Perfect!

Reviewer: ifonly Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2018 8:06 PM Title: Chapter 20

YES, YES, YES! (Ha) 

Please if you would ... Sequal, or just more of this. 

My d.o.h. ( dear old husband) said I hadn’ laughed that hard since he  asked me to marry him. I still don’t remember what he said, I just remember the look he was making. That was 41+years ago. 

‘Love this . O and by the way , He was up stairs when he swore I woke him up  again “heehawing”.

           Thanks

Reviewer: bobbysgirl1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Dec 2016 3:01 AM Title: Chapter 20

I had to re~read this favorite little gem of mine. I always hoped there would be a long! long! sequel after this was finished but.... Well maybe one day 😉   READ YOU SOON

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 May 2016 6:25 PM Title: Chapter 20

Thanks for sharing.

Sherry

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 May 2016 6:09 PM Title: Chapter 19

About time Edward. lol

Sherry

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 May 2016 1:57 PM Title: Chapter 18

Lizzy is such a fun character.

Sherry

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 May 2016 1:43 PM Title: Chapter 17

Gotta love Lizzy for trying.

Sherry

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 May 2016 1:14 PM Title: Chapter 16

That was unexpected.

Sherry

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 May 2016 6:33 AM Title: Chapter 15

What a way to go into labor.

Sherry

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 May 2016 8:52 AM Title: Chapter 14

Seven minutes of heaven, lol.

Sherry

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 May 2016 4:50 AM Title: Chapter 13

Opening a new chapter in their lives.

Sherry

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 May 2016 5:29 PM Title: Chapter 12

Looks like life is heading in the right direction for them.

Sherry

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 May 2016 5:19 PM Title: Chapter 11

Emmett is gonna end up getting beat up by a pregnant woman.

Sherry

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 May 2016 8:47 AM Title: Chapter 10

I love Esme's persistance.

Sherry

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 May 2016 6:57 AM Title: Chapter 9

The joys of dealing with family.

Sherry

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 May 2016 11:49 AM Title: Chapter 8

Renee has struck.

Sherry

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 May 2016 4:45 AM Title: Chapter 7

Seriously, Edward is a doctor, but he isn't acting like one.

Sherry

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 May 2016 4:32 AM Title: Chapter 6

Edward has a lot of catching up to do.

Sherry

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 May 2016 3:32 AM Title: Chapter 5

I like Emmett's lightheartedness about the situation.

Sherry

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 May 2016 7:50 AM Title: Chapter 4

Poor Edward; he's a sucker for one and an idiot for the other. 

Sherry

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 May 2016 6:47 AM Title: Chapter 3

Out of the mouths of babes.

Sherry

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 May 2016 6:14 AM Title: Chapter 2

Looks like they are off to a good start, lol.

Sherry

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 May 2016 5:26 AM Title: Chapter 1

Now that progressed quickly.

Sherry

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Dec 2015 1:33 PM Title: Chapter 20

Love love love this story! Awesome job writing it. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Dec 2015 5:02 AM Title: Chapter 19

It's about time they get marry.....4 kids later......lol.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Dec 2015 4:52 AM Title: Chapter 18

I hope Lizzy comes around. Glad all 3 babies are doing ok.  Wow, 3 babies.  I can not imagine. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Dec 2015 3:47 AM Title: Chapter 17

Love what little Lizzy says at the end. Lol.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Dec 2015 3:40 AM Title: Chapter 16

What? ????????? Triplets! !!!!!!!!!! Wow!!!!!!! Lol!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Dec 2015 8:40 PM Title: Chapter 15

OMGosh! What a way to start labor.  Lol

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Dec 2015 8:29 PM Title: Chapter 14

Finally! !!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Dec 2015 8:20 PM Title: Chapter 13

I love how Edward worries about Bella. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Dec 2015 3:03 PM Title: Chapter 12

Glad they are getting things work out. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Dec 2015 1:26 PM Title: Chapter 11

Loving this story. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Dec 2015 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 10

Love the comedy you write with. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Dec 2015 3:11 AM Title: Chapter 9

This is too funny.  I am loving it.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Dec 2015 2:02 AM Title: Chapter 8

Lol!!!!!!!!!! This is too funny!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Dec 2015 1:53 AM Title: Chapter 7

Lol!!!!! How old is Edward?  He is,acting like a teenager. Lol.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Dec 2015 1:24 AM Title: Chapter 6

Lol!!!!!! Love Edward's reaction to Bella's dad and Charlie's reaction to Edward. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Dec 2015 3:42 AM Title: Chapter 5

Lol!!!!!! Love how Emmett is. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Dec 2015 2:44 PM Title: Chapter 4

They are too funny. I started reading this story a while back. I do think know if I read and did not review or if for some reason I lost the story to read. 

They are too funny. 

Reviewer: lamelurker Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Dec 2015 5:05 PM Title: Chapter 20

Thank you for writing and sharing your story! I really enjoyed it.

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Feb 2015 9:57 PM Title: Chapter 20

i loved this little story ;) i love how you write a confident bella and a shy edward ;) and he's uncut!! fabulous ;) i'm british as well ;) and i would love it if you wrote some sequels to your stories ;D

Reviewer: li-spar1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Nov 2014 4:32 AM Title: Chapter 1

OMG loved this 

Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Sep 2014 11:46 PM Title: Chapter 20

Perfect!

Reviewer: Intsu Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2014 4:15 PM Title: Chapter 20

Please write a sequel to this fantastically funny story.  I love the way you have portrayed my favourite characters.  Their dialogue has me in stitches constantly.  Thank you for your amazing sense of humour.

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jul 2014 4:18 AM Title: Chapter 10

I thought he saw her naked when she dropped the towel..a few chapters back

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jul 2014 4:07 AM Title: Chapter 8

LOVING THIS

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jul 2014 3:45 AM Title: Chapter 5

This story is too good

Reviewer: wendymariecullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2014 11:05 PM Title: Chapter 20

Loved the story hope you do decide to continue maybe they'll have even more kids that would be hilarious.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2014 11:29 PM Title: Chapter 3

I am really loving this story. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2014 11:27 PM Title: Chapter 2

Ok, that explains some things. They are killing me and making my laugh. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2014 11:26 PM Title: Chapter 1

This sounds very interesting and funny. But how in the world did Edward know that Lizzy was his daughter? How did Bella really get his sperm....luck of the draw???? I can not believe that Alice told Lizzy that Edward was her daddy. Bella and Edward should have been the one to tell her that. I would be pissed if I were Bella. 

Reviewer: littlevampire Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Dec 2013 12:04 AM Title: Chapter 1

oh wow i loved this chapter

especially towards the end i couldn't stop laughing, i had to stop reading at one point

Reviewer: Sophilia Tantrum Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 31 Oct 2013 1:46 PM Title: Chapter 20

I really loved it!  it's been quite a while that I've read something that made me laugh out loud.  Thank you for that :)  Because I liked this story, I wish that it had a little bit more details in the story, and less of a "speed through time" approach.  you are quite the witty writer ;)

Reviewer: Sophilia Tantrum Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Oct 2013 10:18 AM Title: Chapter 1

OMG!  you are an amazing writer!  It's been ages since I've laughed out loud while reading a story.  I'm really enjoying this one ;)  I can't wait to see where the story is going to go.  Thanks again for witty writing :)

Reviewer: loventherussian17 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2013 11:56 AM Title: Chapter 20

loved it

Reviewer: Flutterfli Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Apr 2013 7:43 PM Title: Chapter 20

Absolutely love their story. Got to laugh alot, and even got a couple of small lemons. Would love to see at least a couple of future takes if you never write a sequel. This was the perfect little story for a drab weekend. Oh, and loved how you worked Twilight and the cute guy into the story. LOL Hope to keep reading your great stories.

Reviewer: Tashiebrookie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2013 8:58 AM Title: Chapter 6

Lol love it love Edwards IMS;)) love the twilight reference, my 7yo said about the same. I said something about watchin the twilight zone and she said mom how could u forget your favorite movie it's the twilight saga not zone;)) 

Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Mar 2013 5:52 AM Title: Chapter 14

finally thank god. i thought they were going to combust

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Date: 26 Mar 2013 4:49 AM Title: Chapter 9

i love the last line that was priceless

Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Mar 2013 4:32 AM Title: Chapter 7

oh god so love it all

thank you for writing

Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Mar 2013 4:17 AM Title: Chapter 6

oh my god these families are gojng to kill me they are too much

i can not wait to meet renee

loving it

Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Mar 2013 3:55 AM Title: Chapter 5

oh my god twins didn't see that coming

 

oh mama esme will have a field day as well as alice

Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Mar 2013 3:26 AM Title: Chapter 4

oh my god i love this little girl

i can't believe she got him to spend the night

and bella got in the bed--man i love this story

Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Mar 2013 3:06 AM Title: Chapter 3

i laugh and laugh more

love it

Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Mar 2013 2:46 AM Title: Chapter 2

god i love this story

edward is a hoot

seems he is all business and no life. alice surely helps things along.

love it

Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Mar 2013 2:29 AM Title: Chapter 1

oh my god i am in love with this story

i am so glad i went to your site to see what else i can read and came across this story. love it

Reviewer: rgh Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Feb 2013 4:45 AM Title: Chapter 2

Love everything so far that you have written!! 

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2012 8:15 AM Title: Chapter 20

It's perfect the way it is, but it would also be fun to see if they have another boy! This was a lot of fun to read, so silly at times, and so sweet at others!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2012 8:03 AM Title: Chapter 19

These two are just a little backward, but they finally got to the proposal part!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2012 7:56 AM Title: Chapter 18

What a wonderful thing to bring home your babies and their mama, with all the family waiting to help and loving you! What could be better?

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2012 7:43 AM Title: Chapter 17

The child has a great future before her as a negotiator of some sort! She really knows how to get what she wants! Three babies at once, what a three-ring circus that's going to be!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2012 7:33 AM Title: Chapter 16

The carnival must be in town, as the ride just keeps on going around! Who knew a third one was hiding in there? Everyone's going to be over the moon!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2012 7:21 AM Title: Chapter 15

Babies, bless them, do pick some of the strangest times to decide to enter the world!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2012 7:08 AM Title: Chapter 14

I'm so happy for them, the poor little deprived things! They finally got together, and about damn time! Just wait until the babies get here, they really won't have time then!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2012 7:00 AM Title: Chapter 13

This pregnancy has even inspired Alice, it seems! Just wait until everyone finds out about the twins! Moving right now is the sensible thing to do, still it must be stressful.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2012 6:49 AM Title: Chapter 12

I wonder what Edward meant when he said everything went tits up? I thouight it was all going real well!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2012 6:43 AM Title: Chapter 11

Trust Emmett to barge in at exactly the wrong time! I want to know what they are having as much as Bella and Edward do!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2012 6:28 AM Title: Chapter 10

Esme is acting like a crazy woman, no wonder Bella is angry! The part about Edward crying over feeling the babies move kind of got to me, too!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2012 6:16 AM Title: Chapter 9

The fun just never ends with this outfit! With Emmett spilling the beans, so to speak, that save Edward from having to confess to his folks.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2012 6:03 AM Title: Chapter 8

We seem to have stumbled into the twilight zone, with Bella and Edward coming back from the doctors and finding his parents stoned on the couch! Damn, I love this story!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2012 5:53 AM Title: Chapter 7

These two better get busy and find a way to tell everyone everything! You can see them fall in love right in front of their daughter, so it looks like a wedding and a bigger home are in the near future.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2012 5:42 AM Title: Chapter 6

I love Charlie, I really do, he's such a good guy, and a good dad. He's finding all this just too funny, as do I!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2012 5:31 AM Title: Chapter 5

OMG, could this get any better? Edward seems to have a penchant for fainting at momentous news! Sure shocked hell out of Emmett to hear all the goings on.

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