[Report This]Date: 14 Jun 2012 8:07 AM Title: Chapter 5
UPDATE please:(
Date: 14 Jun 2012 5:41 AM Title: Chapter 5
Awesome chapter. I want more
[Report This]Date: 12 Jun 2012 1:07 AM Title: Chapter 4
OMMGGGG i love this story you have to update more !!Cant wait to hear more!!!
[Report This]Date: 07 Jun 2012 12:47 AM Title: Chapter 2
oooo shes a sneaky one that Victoria!
Maybe Emmett will kill her off if he has been changed lol
Date: 04 Jun 2012 5:32 PM Title: Chapter 4
Hello there, I was following this story on ff.net but with all their issues and PG-13 drama going on, I decided to favorite you over here instead. I like this chapter and how Bella was introduced to Alice. Shame about Emmett, but now I wonder if Bella will fess up to Edward about what she is or if it will be revealed when Emmett tries to eat him :)
Date: 04 Jun 2012 8:23 AM Title: Chapter 3
So, here I am. I remember I commented on this chapter on ff net (and got no answer). I found the sentence I staged her body like it was suicide a real mistake. A drained body and no blood anywhere will not look like suicide to even the dumbest policemen. Please, change this part. On TWCS is easy to make changes.
Date: 04 Jun 2012 6:29 AM Title: Chapter 1
I'm an author as well and I had to post my stories (here only one for the time being) elsewhere. It's sad you know? We've put all our efforts, people read our stories, reviewed and all of that is gone. I try to stay low because I don't want something like that happening to me and if it does then it does.
Thanks for answering the question. I have something in mind but 'nuff said. lol
Date: 04 Jun 2012 6:22 AM Title: Chapter 1
In this story, yes....I probably should have that more clear.
Also, thank you for your support regarding the little shits. I just went through the process of deleting all but one chapter of each of my stories. (with the exception of two...I completely deleted them since there were lemons in all of the chappies posted). It sickens me that pre-pubescent teenagers have that much power.
I'm not one to cause a ruckus but I've had it. So, I'll wait for my invite for AO3 and post here.
Hugs!
Josie
[Report This]Date: 04 Jun 2012 6:16 AM Title: Chapter 4
It's so sad that a bunch of spoiled little shits, managed to chase wonderful authors like you from ff.net.
Anyway...
I really love your story. It's wonderully written and I can't wait for more. BTW are your Edward's eyes emerald green? Just asking...
Author's Response:
In this story, yes....I probably should have that more clear.
Also, thank you for your support regarding the little shits. I just went through the process of deleting all but one chapter of each of my stories. (with the exception of two...I completely deleted them since there were lemons in all of the chappies posted). It sickens me that pre-pubescent teenagers have that much power.
I'm not one to cause a ruckus but I've had it. So, I'll wait for my invite for AO3 and post here.
Hugs!
Josie