Date: 18 Mar 2016 1:16 AM Title: Epilogue
I never get tired of reading this story
Date: 28 Sep 2014 12:48 AM Title: Epilogue
wow short and sweet story ;) thanks for sharing ;D
Date: 25 Mar 2014 11:43 PM Title: Epilogue
Very nice wrap-up, with all the happy ever after for the whole band. Best of all was Laurent's death, so no more worries about him getting revenge. Happy marriages, healthy babies and blooming careers, what could be better? It was a real treat to read all your song lyrics, too!
Date: 25 Mar 2014 11:32 PM Title: Chapter 21
The stork has been one busy bird in this story! The ring sounds beautiful , and I hope Edward gets a chance for payback with Emmett. Now if only lightning would strike Laurent, everyone could live happily ever after!
Date: 25 Mar 2014 11:23 PM Title: Chapter 20
Sounds to me like Edward is going shopping for a ring, and maybe Bella is pregnant?
Date: 25 Mar 2014 11:03 PM Title: Chapter 19
That was actually pretty nice of Bella to bring Tanya home to keep her safe from Laurent. I don't like the sound of her telling them all that he isn't through causing trouble, either! It's just plain scary to have someone like that after you!
Date: 25 Mar 2014 10:47 PM Title: Chapter 18
This Laurent is obviously a dangerous person and I worry that he is intent on hurting Bella and Emmett, like it's they're fault he committed a criminal act, got caught and served time for it! I hope they are taking measures to be safe.
Date: 25 Mar 2014 10:31 PM Title: Chapter 17
Good news and bad, it seems! The child isn't Edward's and Bella seems to have a stalker! Let me guess, he is a psycho stalker, just to add spice to the stew!
Date: 25 Mar 2014 10:13 PM Title: Chapter 16
I knew there was something fishy going on here, just not sure if it's Jake or Garrett on the phone! I'm crossing my fingers that Edward isn't the father of the slut's baby! Edward's parents are thrilled about his relationship with Bella, so that makes it nice for them both.
Date: 25 Mar 2014 9:58 PM Title: Chapter 15
I am not one bit surprised that Tanya tried to pull this scam on Edward! She was pissed when he told her to get out and not ever come back. Plus, Garrett probably said something to Kate about Bella and Edward being together, and Kate told her sister! I rest my case! I bet it doesn't break Bella or Edward!
Date: 25 Mar 2014 9:31 PM Title: Chapter 14
Oh goody, they both said the words! As if there was any doubt in their minds! It has to be really ego-boosting for a man to have a woman go to those lengths to be romantic. How it shows her regard for him, just like when he does the like for her!
Date: 25 Mar 2014 10:10 AM Title: Chapter 13
How romantic and she did it all for him! How cool is that?I love it !
Date: 25 Mar 2014 9:45 AM Title: Chapter 12
That is a very touching set of lyrics Edward came up with to express how he and Bella are taking their time falling in love! Too bad Jake skated on the charge of running Bella off the road!
Date: 25 Mar 2014 9:19 AM Title: Chapter 11
What the hell is wrong with Jake, is he insane? Normal people don't run cars of the road and try to kill people! I hope they hang that bastard out to dry!
Date: 25 Mar 2014 9:04 AM Title: Chapter 10
Well, well, look how clearing the air makes everything all better! I like this new attitude between them, and the wakeup from Emmett was hilarious!
Date: 25 Mar 2014 8:54 AM Title: Chapter 9
So, what isn't okay? Emmett didn't choke Edward for sleeping with his sister, much as he may have wanted to! By the way, I thought Garrett had a lot of nerve calling Bella a whore, the creepy hypocrite!
Date: 25 Mar 2014 8:38 AM Title: Chapter 8
I find it rather ironic that Garrett come to the club to confess his sin and Bella nonchalantly tells him, no sweat, she slept with Edward so they are even!
Date: 25 Mar 2014 8:29 AM Title: Chapter 7
Dating Garrett must have acted on Edward rather like waving a red flag in front of a bull! Garrett accused him of marking his territory and I must say, he did a lovely job of it!
Date: 25 Mar 2014 8:05 AM Title: Chapter 6
Edward may be pretty, but he's also pretty dumb if he thinks that was a smart thing to do last night! Bella has already had one guy screw her over and sure won't want to repeat that experience!
Date: 25 Mar 2014 7:54 AM Title: Chapter 5
Oh dear! This won't end well, especially if seeing him kiss Tanya hurt Bella like I think it did! Then again, maybe the jealousy will work and make her realize she wants him herself!
Date: 25 Mar 2014 7:36 AM Title: Chapter 4
It must be nice to have a talent like that to help you get over a crap boyfriend! What a nerve to call after a year and the way they split up! Some guys have way more balls than brains, not to mention consideration! I'm thinking there will be more between Bella and Edward than just music.
Date: 25 Mar 2014 4:54 AM Title: Chapter 3
Nice that Bella is dreaming about Edward, since he's thinking seriously about her too! I have a feeling that her singing with the band is going to be a success!
Date: 25 Mar 2014 3:57 AM Title: Chapter 2
Amazing voice and crippling shyness on a stage. Bad combination! I hope they can talk her into singing but won't hold my breath. It won't be easy, I'm sure.
Date: 25 Mar 2014 3:39 AM Title: Chapter 1
I can just imagine what big brother Emmett's ways will be! Can't blame Bella for wanting two lousy hours to study for finals!
Date: 12 Jun 2012 2:45 AM Title: Epilogue
AWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!! i loved the ending alot!!!!!!!!111they all had there happy ever afters!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!anyway you had an awsome story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 08 Jun 2012 7:58 PM Title: Epilogue
Very sweet story. I enjoyed it very much.
Author's Response:
I think you are reading your way through my entire collection. Thanks, glad you enjoyed it.
Date: 08 Jun 2012 7:45 PM Title: Chapter 21
Emmett may have overreacted just a little bit!!! Sweet end to the chapter.
Date: 08 Jun 2012 7:42 PM Title: Chapter 20
Tiffany's!! Hmmm, I wonder why he is going there???
Date: 08 Jun 2012 7:36 PM Title: Chapter 19
Uh Oh, what else is going to happen??
Date: 08 Jun 2012 7:20 PM Title: Chapter 18
Wow, well that took me by surprise. But it does answer the question of what happened to Charlie and Renee.
Date: 08 Jun 2012 7:13 PM Title: Chapter 17
Oh, another little Cliffy. I thought I knew who it was but now, not so much!!!
Date: 08 Jun 2012 7:08 PM Title: Chapter 16
Uh oh, time for the truth??
Date: 08 Jun 2012 6:59 PM Title: Chapter 15
Yep, that was the other shoe. I knew Tanya would be back.
Date: 08 Jun 2012 6:53 PM Title: Chapter 14
Yey, We have the I Love You's!!!
Date: 08 Jun 2012 6:33 PM Title: Chapter 12
Aww, that was a sweet chapter. I wonder what Jacob has to say to Bella.
Date: 08 Jun 2012 6:17 PM Title: Chapter 11
Poor Bella, but at least Edward is getting his feelings in order. Someone needs to kick Jacobs butt!!
Date: 08 Jun 2012 5:56 PM Title: Epilogue
great little story keep up the awesome work.
Date: 08 Jun 2012 5:49 PM Title: Chapter 10
Okay, much better. Now they are starting to move forward. Wonder what's coming up next
Date: 08 Jun 2012 5:44 PM Title: Chapter 9
Well lets hope they can start to move forward now.
Date: 08 Jun 2012 5:38 PM Title: Chapter 8
Oh, a little cliffhanger. On to the next chapter to see what's going down.
Date: 08 Jun 2012 5:35 PM Title: Chapter 7
hmmm, so where do they go from here??
Date: 08 Jun 2012 5:29 PM Title: Chapter 6
First he wants to "hypothetically" date her, then he decides to be with someone else to get her out of his system and make her jealous, then he feels guily. Boys are sooooo STUPID!!!!! I know they're not together but he is still playing games wiith Bella.
Date: 08 Jun 2012 5:14 PM Title: Chapter 5
Oh, no, no, no, no, no!!! Don't do it Edward!!! Gah!
Date: 08 Jun 2012 5:02 PM Title: Chapter 1
ok off to start another story of yours, and the first chapter sounds prmoising cant wait to read more.
Date: 08 Jun 2012 5:02 PM Title: Chapter 4
Jacob needs a beat down! Loved that Bella and Edward are getting closer.
Date: 08 Jun 2012 4:54 PM Title: Chapter 3
Looks like they both are starting to see light!!!
Date: 08 Jun 2012 4:44 PM Title: Chapter 2
Great chapter. Looking forward to the next one
Date: 08 Jun 2012 4:10 PM Title: Chapter 1
Love this. I'm excited to see where this goes.