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Reviewer: its simply me n you Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Sep 2017 10:47 PM Title: Chapter 17

Good story.  Military life is hard.  Glad they got everything worked out and their life is coming together nicely.

Glad she got to throw out at least one of the skanks from a NewYears party

Reviewer: its simply me n you Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Sep 2017 10:27 PM Title: Chapter 13

Woo Hoo!  He's home!  

And we discovered who the blue eyed stalker is.  Hope he isn't a problem any longer

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Jun 2015 2:56 PM Title: Chapter 17

great story ;) are you stil going to post that epov o/t? thanks for sharing this on here with us ;D

Reviewer: gatorgrl91 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2013 12:02 AM Title: Chapter 17

I enjoyed this! I'm on a roll reading all of the stories you have posted, except for a few I have ready read.
I loved the angst and the love!! :)
Thx for the ride!

Reviewer: jomik1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2012 12:43 AM Title: Chapter 17

Wonderful ending. Looking forward to the outtake



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and I'm glad that you enjoyed it. The outake should be coming soon.

Reviewer: jomik1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2012 11:59 PM Title: Chapter 16

Sweet Chapter

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Date: 10 Jun 2012 11:49 PM Title: Chapter 15

Glad she stood up for herself, he needed a wakeup call

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Date: 10 Jun 2012 11:40 PM Title: Chapter 14

Finally!!!

Reviewer: jomik1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2012 11:29 PM Title: Chapter 13

yay, they're reunited.  Good bye creeper.

Reviewer: jomik1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2012 10:51 PM Title: Chapter 12

Yay, they made it out.  Now, Bella needs to wake up so she'll know too!!

Reviewer: jomik1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2012 10:27 PM Title: Chapter 11

The creepy guy is worrying me!!  Glad to see that Edward is doing everything he can to get home

Reviewer: jomik1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2012 9:59 PM Title: Chapter 10

I'm glad he's alive, now they just need to find him

Reviewer: jomik1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2012 9:54 PM Title: Chapter 9

Okay, it will be alright, I know it will b alright!

Reviewer: jomik1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2012 9:41 PM Title: Chapter 8

Glad to see that Edward was able to come back for a little while. I'm worried about what will happen.

Reviewer: jomik1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2012 7:37 PM Title: Chapter 7

Wow, I didn't expect the inheritance. Glad she's going back to Seattle to go to school.

Reviewer: jomik1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2012 7:30 PM Title: Chapter 6

So gad Edward won't give up.

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Date: 10 Jun 2012 7:18 PM Title: Chapter 5

So hard to decide to open yourself up again knowing you could be hurt wosre than before. She needs to move on but that doesn"t mean it's not hard to do.

Reviewer: jomik1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2012 7:05 PM Title: Chapter 4

Wow, lots going on in that chapter

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Date: 10 Jun 2012 6:56 PM Title: Chapter 3

Little by little she is moving forward. I'm not sure what to make of James.

Reviewer: jomik1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2012 6:47 PM Title: Chapter 2

It would be hard to deal on the day you were supposed to get married.

Reviewer: jomik1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2012 6:30 PM Title: Chapter 1

Loved the chapter.

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