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Reviewer: dreamkeeper1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Dec 2017 2:28 AM Title: Chapter 32

Love it

Reviewer: bakergrama52 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 May 2016 5:39 AM Title: Chapter 2

I absolutely love this story...glad I finally found it again..must be the fourth time (?) I've read it...love the writing too....thanks!

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Oct 2015 12:39 AM Title: Chapter 32

quite a funny little story but the ending was a bit ridiculous ;) btw if they've been talking for a year and a half how come she didn't know about him being adopted? i'm looking forward to reading the sequel now ;D

Reviewer: eyelubtwilight Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Sep 2013 1:32 PM Title: Chapter 32

<3!!!

Reviewer: gatorgrl91 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2013 11:16 PM Title: Chapter 32

:)

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2013 8:47 PM Title: Chapter 32

Love the beat down on SkankRen

TY for writing and sharing.

ty

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2013 8:43 PM Title: Chapter 31

yey for promotion.   What a skank.  Fraternization is a big nono.  guess Skank never got the memo from the army.  LOL

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2013 8:38 PM Title: Chapter 30

Busy night.  wow. em is too funny

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2013 8:31 PM Title: Chapter 29

awww sweet ceremony

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2013 8:08 AM Title: Chapter 28

woo hoo  Wedding coming up!!!!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2013 8:01 AM Title: Chapter 27

aww sweet little proposal.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2013 7:53 AM Title: Chapter 26

I'll ignore my knowledge of the military for this promotion part.  LOL

 

Jessica...what a skank.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2013 7:29 AM Title: Chapter 25

they are too cute together.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2013 7:20 AM Title: Chapter 24

Woo hoo  Sweet first time!!!

dl

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2013 7:04 AM Title: Chapter 23

Mike is so pathetic.  They are too cute together!!!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2013 7:01 AM Title: Chapter 22

Sweet chapter and first kiss

kiss

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2013 6:57 AM Title: Chapter 21

Glad the girls aren't letting her mope.  Woo Hoo for sweet reunion.  What a wonderful surprise!!!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2013 6:53 AM Title: Chapter 20

Wonderful way to meet the 'rents!!!

 

Reviewer: cwrhoads Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2013 6:47 PM Title: Chapter 32

An Army Captain does not get promoted to Lt. Col. The next step would be Major.

 

Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2013 1:34 AM Title: Chapter 32

oh i had so much fun readng this story

it was a hoot. so love bold no mess bella

love a man in uniform

love and look forward tot he sequel

Reviewer: Love to drive like a vampire Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2013 12:39 AM Title: Chapter 32

Are you making a follow up to this amazing story? I hope so I would love to read more about these amazing characters and the big extended family they seem to have all created from the ashes of more than one broken family.

Reviewer: MaineMomma Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2013 11:02 PM Title: Chapter 20

Esme is definitely decorating the house for Edward and Bella.

Reviewer: bookreader2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2013 11:42 AM Title: Chapter 26

whoa ..our man does not waste time does he ...hope she takes  it all in ...I would faint

Reviewer: roseblossome Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2013 3:40 AM Title: Chapter 31

Loved the story!!  Can't wait for the next part!!!

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2013 3:39 AM Title: Chapter 32

Love that the army wants bella

Reviewer: AMCLARK Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2013 10:36 PM Title: Chapter 1

OMG OMG! so sorry didnt see the new chapters! lol thanks

Reviewer: AMCLARK Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2013 10:19 PM Title: Chapter 21

Omg! Really loved reading this story! Please update soon so looking forward more! :-) 

Reviewer: twilightlover127 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2013 9:53 PM Title: Chapter 32

Omg so excited!!!!!! How soon till the sequel is up???!!! I need to know what's gonna happen!!!! Loved how Bella kicked skank r us's ass it was hilarious!!! Omg they're gonna have babies!!!!! Hopefully four!!! Can't wait for the sequel!!!!!!!

Reviewer: tlwatkins36 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2013 5:47 PM Title: Chapter 32

I loved it! So the skank finally went down!!! lol

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2013 3:28 PM Title: Chapter 32

:) loved this

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2013 3:28 PM Title: Chapter 31

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Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2013 3:25 PM Title: Chapter 30

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Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2013 3:25 PM Title: Chapter 29

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Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2013 2:48 PM Title: Chapter 1

love it and look forward to more

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2013 2:31 PM Title: Chapter 28

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Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2013 2:30 PM Title: Chapter 27

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Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2013 2:29 PM Title: Chapter 26

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Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2013 2:29 PM Title: Chapter 25

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Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2013 2:29 PM Title: Chapter 24

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Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2013 2:28 PM Title: Chapter 23

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Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2013 2:28 PM Title: Chapter 22

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Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2013 2:28 PM Title: Chapter 21

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Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2013 5:43 AM Title: Chapter 20

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Reviewer: rhapsody9278 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jan 2013 5:45 AM Title: Chapter 19

I am loving this story. Short but very sweet. Can't wait for the next chapter! :-)

Reviewer: loventherussian17 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Oct 2012 3:08 AM Title: Chapter 19

Great story so far can't wait to see wat happens next update soon

Reviewer: ChristineDaee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Sep 2012 1:45 AM Title: Chapter 19

LOVE THIS SO FAR! HOPING TO READ MORE OF IT LATER!

Reviewer: monkey22marie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Aug 2012 9:51 AM Title: Chapter 19

Awww I can wait for the next up date

Reviewer: Sunshine72 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2012 3:54 AM Title: Chapter 19

Are you going to continue to post on this site?  I am having a real hard time with my account on Fanfiction.  I noticed that this story is finished on fanfiction, I LOVED it,  and you said to keep alerts on for the sequel.  Thank you!

Reviewer: malina1979 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2012 2:41 PM Title: Chapter 1

i´m waiting impatiently for the next chapter(s). i love your story!!

 

lg malina

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jun 2012 5:15 PM Title: Chapter 19

Awww love it

Reviewer: jomik1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Jun 2012 5:51 AM Title: Chapter 19

Loved her present. Now they've made promises to each other. He just needs to come home now.

Reviewer: jomik1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jun 2012 4:53 AM Title: Chapter 18

Bella is going to die when she finds out that the house she watching being built is really her house!!!  I wonder what her birthday present is??

Reviewer: L-Anne Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Jun 2012 6:53 PM Title: Chapter 19

Loved it!!!! He sooo incredibly sweet!! B 

Reviewer: twilightmenrhot Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jun 2012 5:49 PM Title: Chapter 19

I adore this fic! Happy when I find new installments, thrilled with Edward's promise ring.

Reviewer: Nannyjojo Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jun 2012 12:11 PM Title: Chapter 19

oh my i love it.

love the fact that she is sending him pics of what will be their house, and she doesn't even know.

Loved the ring and all of it.

thanks for the updates. looking forward to more.

Reviewer: lovingrobpatz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Jun 2012 2:34 AM Title: Chapter 19

Yes!!! I love time jumps;) how many months??? Those thirteen mos need to pass quickly. I can't wait for them to meet face to face. Don't get me wrong I love the emails and he is so freaking cute w the house and the promise ring. I just want to melt with them two. I just hope that nothing bad happens to him or anything like that. C u soon. Thanx for updating!!!

Reviewer: mialuvtwilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jun 2012 12:56 AM Title: Chapter 19

Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jun 2012 12:07 AM Title: Chapter 19

aww :) SO amazing.... can't wait for the time jump!

-Kate

Reviewer: beachlover Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2012 10:40 PM Title: Chapter 19

!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: beachlover Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2012 10:33 PM Title: Chapter 18

I liked the little longer chapters as well

Reviewer: Love to drive like a vampire Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2012 10:32 PM Title: Chapter 19

Loved the part about the ring. I am now wanting to read more to find out what you have up your sleeve for this amazing story. I can't wait until the next time that updates are published.

Reviewer: beachlover Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2012 10:06 PM Title: Chapter 17

Perfect! She is clueless.

Reviewer: katie0422 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2012 9:57 PM Title: Chapter 19

i can't wait to see what happens next!!! love this story

Reviewer: twilightlover19 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2012 8:42 PM Title: Chapter 19

I can't wait to find out what Bella is going to say to Edward buying a house..I love it

Reviewer: twilightlover19 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2012 8:41 PM Title: Chapter 18

Love it

Reviewer: LilCullen454 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2012 8:37 PM Title: Chapter 19

That is a great present from Edward to Bella!!!!!

I can't wait for them to see each other in person!!!!!

Reviewer: mommabear75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2012 8:30 PM Title: Chapter 19

i wanna a edward

Reviewer: magilin19 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2012 8:01 PM Title: Chapter 19

Love it!

Reviewer: beachlover Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2012 7:56 PM Title: Chapter 16

He is sure moving along!!

Reviewer: ldyidori Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2012 7:56 PM Title: Chapter 19

hehehe I don't think Bella will get it till the pool aqnd dojo go up

Reviewer: Lynnks Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2012 7:48 PM Title: Chapter 19

I'm really enjoying this story.  I really like how she is watching the house being built without knowing Edward is having it built.  I look forward to her finding that out and meeting Edward face to face.

Reviewer: bubblescurly18 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2012 7:42 PM Title: Chapter 19

Oh dear the sweetness overload in this chapter nearly killed me but what a way to die hehe xxx

Reviewer: nicci Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2012 7:32 PM Title: Chapter 19

how sweet are these two all these i do's and excited expressions  love it

Hugs xxxx

 

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2012 7:29 PM Title: Chapter 19

awww sweet birthday.    happy dancehappy

Reviewer: Hayley3296 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2012 7:15 PM Title: Chapter 19

write more!!

Reviewer: Teeam_Emeett_4_Lifee Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2012 7:11 PM Title: Chapter 19

AWWWWWWW:)

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2012 7:10 PM Title: Chapter 19

Aw, SO amazing!  LOVED IT!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2012 6:46 PM Title: Chapter 18

OH WOW...SO amazing :D

Reviewer: bubblescurly18 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2012 6:39 PM Title: Chapter 18

Ahhh love love loving it hehe this plan to build Bella's perfect house is great and I'm glad this Jacob is nice and not about to steal eddies girl he isn't right ? Xxx

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2012 6:07 PM Title: Chapter 18

sweet chapter

Reviewer: LilCullen454 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2012 5:57 PM Title: Chapter 18

That house is going to be awesome!!!!

Can't wait for the next chapter!!!

Reviewer: mommabear75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2012 5:44 PM Title: Chapter 18

love me some edward hmmmmm

Reviewer: L-Anne Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2012 4:54 PM Title: Chapter 18

Loved it!!! Hmmmm I wonder if those words are " Will you marry me?"

Though he might want to wait and ask in person!!

But I would say yes a million times!!! Lol

Reviewer: ecullensgirl1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2012 4:51 PM Title: Chapter 6

Hahahaha, payback is a bitch, Jasper! He's probably going to be a little leary about eating Bella's baked goods again.   It seems that Bella and Edward are quite taken with each other even if they've only met through their letters. It's pretty romantic, if I say so myself.

Reviewer: sweet and delightful Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2012 4:41 PM Title: Chapter 18

I just recently found your story, Love it! I am looking forward to more chapters

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2012 4:35 PM Title: Chapter 18

wow! Amazing.... that house will be beautiful! :)

 

Reviewer: ecullensgirl1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2012 4:22 PM Title: Chapter 5

I figured Bella would be pleased when she saw the pic of Edward. :) I can't wait to see how she replies to his letter.

Reviewer: nicci Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2012 4:20 PM Title: Chapter 18

so we've moved forward in time and are on course for Bellas birthday can't wait

Hugs xxx

Reviewer: L-Anne Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2012 8:52 AM Title: Chapter 17

Lol!! Boy is Jake sneaky!!!!!  I love her dream house!

Loved it!!

Reviewer: ecullensgirl1 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2012 6:07 AM Title: Chapter 4

I knew that was what Bella was up to. I think the pics and letter are great! So,  Edward is  surprised how hot Em's sister is.  I sure the pics and letter are going to be viewed many many times by Edward. LOL

Reviewer: ecullensgirl1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2012 5:56 AM Title: Chapter 3

Loved the letters from the boys.  Didn't Jasper think he would get caught in his little white lie? LOL   Edward's letter was sweet and I pretty much know what Bella has in mind with the pics. :)

Reviewer: ecullensgirl1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2012 5:46 AM Title: Chapter 2

Bella's a real sweetheart.  I will tell you I love anything in EPOV. :)

Reviewer: ecullensgirl1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2012 5:42 AM Title: Chapter 1

I like it so far :)

Reviewer: nicci Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2012 11:23 PM Title: Chapter 17

she has a very well formed view of what she wants and isn't Jake a sweetie so nice of him to make her future home ala bella

Hugs xxxx

Reviewer: ldyidori Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2012 11:06 PM Title: Chapter 17

hehehe jake rocks something tells me she will get the idea when the house of her dreams starts going up...or at least get a hmmmmm out of her.

 

Reviewer: bubblescurly18 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2012 10:55 PM Title: Chapter 17

I'm not too sure that Jake was as slick as he thinks stains points I think he was a bit obvious but u might hav planned it that way but maybe Jake and Bella r always like that in this story xxx

Reviewer: bubblescurly18 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2012 10:48 PM Title: Chapter 16

Can I firstly just say awwwwwwww I mean like epic awww he is giving her a custom house oh my this boy is good xxx

Reviewer: bubblescurly18 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2012 10:42 PM Title: Chapter 15

That was incredibly sweet I love that Bella cried and that the girls can defend themselves damsels in distress can get annoying lol xxx

Reviewer: bubblescurly18 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2012 10:36 PM Title: Chapter 14

I didn't like what was said I loved it the birthday gift was fab xxx

Reviewer: bubblescurly18 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2012 10:32 PM Title: Chapter 13

I'm so glad I was busy when u updated this so part 3 is already here Nd I don't have to wait hehe xxx

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