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Reviewer: anothertwilighter Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2023 1:35 AM Title: Chapter 18

Thank you for this story I really liked reading it.

Reviewer: LBD Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Jun 2016 5:21 AM Title: Chapter 18

AWESOME STORY!!!!

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2015 4:32 AM Title: Chapter 18

Nice end.  Glad Ang was ok.  Ty for writing and sharing.

ty

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2015 4:30 AM Title: Chapter 17

Ugh  Sucks that ang got hurt and Maria almost got her way.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2015 4:25 AM Title: Chapter 16

hmm wonder if Maria will leave it alone or not.  Yummy movie time.  

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2015 4:12 AM Title: Chapter 15

Lol loved her telling Maria off

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2015 4:09 AM Title: Chapter 14

Wow a visit from around and Maria huh

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2015 4:03 AM Title: Chapter 13

Yummy first time

dl

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2015 3:57 AM Title: Chapter 12

Glad they had some fun. Aww for the ily.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2015 3:52 AM Title: Chapter 11

Wonderful surprise.  Lol I went 2stepping and line dancing last night

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2015 3:47 AM Title: Chapter 10

Glad he and Jake came to an understanding.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2015 3:41 AM Title: Chapter 9

Awww for Angela.  Glad b can keep her in her life now.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2015 3:37 AM Title: Chapter 8

Ugh wonder how long until fuckward shows himself again? Hope the pack behaves

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2015 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 7

Glad she and j talked it out.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2015 3:25 AM Title: Chapter 6

Hmm off it were m or v, dont think they would have left her alone. Hmm or maybe they are waiting for the major to change her.

Reviewer: AdminKelly Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2015 1:38 AM Title: Chapter 5

Aww for her wanting to fix up the cemetery and house stuff 

Reviewer: AdminKelly Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2015 1:32 AM Title: Chapter 4

Glad he's being honest 

Reviewer: AdminKelly Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2015 1:24 AM Title: Chapter 3

Glad she is asking questions and he's willing to answer.   Love Peter and charlotte. 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2015 12:49 AM Title: Chapter 2

oooh Bella is a decendant of Maria???  ooh my.  And she's met maria and victoria???  hmm

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Feb 2015 8:49 PM Title: Chapter 1

*Interesting start.  sucks about Charlie.

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Sep 2013 1:01 PM Title: Chapter 18

Thanks for the story

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Sep 2013 1:00 PM Title: Chapter 17

Wow!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Sep 2013 12:57 PM Title: Chapter 16

Kinky...

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Sep 2013 12:53 PM Title: Chapter 15

Lucky girl bella

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Sep 2013 12:50 PM Title: Chapter 14

Why does my namesake have to be evil?  Oh well

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Sep 2013 12:44 PM Title: Chapter 13

Hot!  Oh darn way to ruin the moment 

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Sep 2013 12:41 PM Title: Chapter 12

Sweet!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Sep 2013 12:37 PM Title: Chapter 11

Fun!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Sep 2013 12:33 PM Title: Chapter 10

TMI Jacob you didn't have to know all that

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Sep 2013 12:27 PM Title: Chapter 9

Like your jake. 

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Sep 2013 12:23 PM Title: Chapter 8

You go girl!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Sep 2013 4:18 AM Title: Chapter 7

Hell ya!  Let's get it on!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Sep 2013 4:15 AM Title: Chapter 6

Who is it?  I got no guesses

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Sep 2013 4:13 AM Title: Chapter 5

Bella is sweet as always

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Sep 2013 4:10 AM Title: Chapter 4

How sad for them...but now they have each other

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Sep 2013 4:06 AM Title: Chapter 3

Oookay...

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Sep 2013 4:01 AM Title: Chapter 2

Wow lots of twists

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Sep 2013 3:55 AM Title: Chapter 1

Interesting!  Let's see where it goes!

Reviewer: loventherussian17 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2012 5:34 PM Title: Chapter 18

Great loved it

Reviewer: amhall1977 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2012 3:08 AM Title: Chapter 1

wow found this and loved it hopeing for more

Reviewer: jlou10dun Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2012 2:11 AM Title: Chapter 6

tip: work on your use of then vs than



Author's Response:

Thank you, I probably didn't catch that.  

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