Date: 31 Oct 2015 11:37 AM Title: Chapter 19
i love love this story.
i have been waiting for an update for a very very long time.
i realize that it's not the right time for bella to become pregnant
and understand edward's relief, but he needs to realize that bella
is only 18 and doing an admiral job being responsible for many
things least of all being grace's "stepmom". he shouldn't have
spoken to her at the end as if giving her an ultimatum...if you can't
handle it, i gotta know now... that was unfair.
as a woman, she had her feelings hurt, thus edward could have been
more gentle with her rather than his caveman ultimatum...
he needs to apologize,,,imo.
love the story, ty.
Author's Response:
Well, next update will be Epov :)
-Jenn
[Report This]Date: 26 Oct 2015 8:18 AM Title: Chapter 19
Please continue and update very very soon!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much :)
Date: 25 Oct 2015 4:18 PM Title: Chapter 19
I think they need to sit down and have a discussion about what they both want out of the relationship and where they are together in the relationship. Loving this story so far.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much. Next chapter is EPOV and will will gain answers.
Date: 25 Oct 2015 1:52 PM Title: Chapter 19
I LOVE THIS! I LOVE THEM! I AM ALWAYS SO EXCITED FOR MORE!!! :)
Author's Response:
Thank you so much :)
[Report This]Date: 25 Oct 2015 10:49 AM Title: Chapter 19
That was really heated and not in the good way. Thanks for the update!
Author's Response:
I know, I know. Thank you :)
[Report This]Date: 25 Oct 2015 9:40 AM Title: Chapter 19
loving this
Author's Response:
Thank you :)
Date: 20 Aug 2015 1:32 PM Title: Chapter 18
OMG! WOW!! This story is absolutely fantastic! I am so excited for more!!! :)
Author's Response:
Thank you.
Jenn
Date: 20 Aug 2015 1:18 PM Title: Chapter 17
I love this!!! :)
Author's Response:
Thank you so much.
Jenn
Date: 04 Jul 2015 6:45 PM Title: Chapter 15
Has anyone thought about this
well known common maneuver called "transferring schools and credits"?
there are many colleges/universities in Chicago she can easily transfer to.
certainly hope she isn't planning on remaining in Arizona for the
next 4-5 years....
Author's Response:
Well, it hasn't been that long. You'll have the answer to this in the next update. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Date: 04 Jul 2015 3:39 PM Title: Chapter 16
I love them! I love this story and I am excited for more!! :D
Date: 04 Jul 2015 3:19 PM Title: Chapter 15
I love it! ;)
Author's Response:
Thanks so much :)
Jenn
Date: 30 Jun 2015 7:27 AM Title: Chapter 16
I Love it so much. I cant wait for more. LOVE YOU!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
Love you, too. LOL
Thanks so much.
Jenn
Date: 30 Jun 2015 2:53 AM Title: Chapter 16
More please! And soon~
Author's Response:
I'm working as fast as I can. Thanks for reading.
Jenn
[Report This]Date: 18 Feb 2015 7:36 AM Title: Chapter 13
Please continue and update this story soon please!!!!!
Date: 22 Sep 2014 1:27 PM Title: Chapter 13
Oh my! Rose is a beast! My heart is breaking for Bella and Edward. :(
I am excited to read more!! I can hardly wait! :)
Date: 21 Sep 2014 10:50 PM Title: Chapter 13
I started reading this yesterday. I'm totally addicted! I can't wait for more!
Date: 18 Sep 2014 12:21 PM Title: Chapter 1
Hope to read more
Date: 17 Sep 2014 12:32 AM Title: Chapter 12
This is awesome!! I am so excited for more!!! :)=)
Date: 16 Sep 2014 3:22 PM Title: Chapter 1
So glad there will be no censuring lemons!!
Date: 16 Sep 2014 3:17 PM Title: Chapter 12
I'm so glad this story is here too! I won't miss any updates!
Date: 16 Sep 2014 7:02 AM Title: Chapter 12
I loved the chapter(:
[Report This]Date: 21 Aug 2014 3:56 AM Title: Chapter 11
so glad i subscribed to you here too!!!
poor bella, when she leaves all three of them are going to be such a frickin' mess!!!
[Report This]Date: 16 Aug 2014 8:13 PM Title: Chapter 10
cannot wait for more
Date: 28 Oct 2012 7:25 PM Title: Chapter 9
i love love love this story i hope you post more soon!!!!
Date: 05 Oct 2012 3:05 PM Title: Chapter 9
Great story really love it so far can't wait to see wat happens next hope u update soon
Date: 24 Aug 2012 6:49 AM Title: Chapter 9
Hello yoouhoooo!!!!!! Can you update this please I'd love to finish reading this story!!!! and umm I FUCKING HATE ROSE AND THE POWER YOU ALLOW HER TO HAVE OVER EDWUUURRRD
[Report This]Date: 18 Jun 2012 10:43 AM Title: Chapter 9
Hey! I was so excited to see that you are on TWCS, so I left FFN (again) to follow you here. I say again because I've followed a lot of my fav authors over here, and happily, because frankly I'm tired of FFN's BS. =)
I loved this chapter so much, and I truly adore your story. I love your Edward and Bella. Thanks for writing. xoxo Kelly
Date: 09 Jun 2012 3:45 PM Title: Chapter 9
great chapter! I still have a hard time believing that Rose managed to screw him over in court like she did....but with the right lawyer, I guess anything is possible. Can't wait to see how she reacts when she finds out that Edward likes Bella....more than she thought she did. And curious if there will be any drama at the gym...between Seth and Bella...some of those guys gotta be crushing on her already!
til next time dear!
Jen
[Report This]Date: 09 Jun 2012 12:05 AM Title: Chapter 9
Nice start. I can't wait to read the rest.
Date: 08 Jun 2012 10:24 PM Title: Chapter 8
Its about time he kissed her.
Date: 08 Jun 2012 10:04 PM Title: Chapter 9
Just found this and read all nine chapters. I like this so far! Can't wait till the next update. Thank you :)
Date: 08 Jun 2012 9:53 PM Title: Chapter 5
Poor Bella
Date: 08 Jun 2012 9:44 PM Title: Chapter 4
I really like this story a lot but I get so dissapointed when they chapter is so short because I want more. lol
Date: 08 Jun 2012 9:36 PM Title: Chapter 3
Wow I wasn't expecting Rose to be such a bitch after she married Emmett I thought she would have settled down.
Date: 08 Jun 2012 9:23 PM Title: Chapter 9
Great chapter.. Glad you updated on here too.. I saw the update on ff.net and i was upset I wasn't going to be able to read lol..
Date: 08 Jun 2012 9:22 PM Title: Chapter 2
I love when Jasper is her brother. lol And I love Angela for taking charge to help her.
Date: 08 Jun 2012 9:08 PM Title: Chapter 1
Wow that was a great chapter. I really feel for Edward. I cant wait to read more. I am concerned about how short the chapter was though. Are they going to get longer?