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Reviewer: amouna Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Sep 2022 2:54 AM Title: Epilogue

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Reviewer: amouna Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Sep 2022 2:54 AM Title: Epilogue

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Date: 02 Sep 2022 2:54 AM Title: Epilogue

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Reviewer: snowangel23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2020 11:39 PM Title: Chapter 22- Terrified

Loved it!

Reviewer: snowangel23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2020 11:39 PM Title: Chapter 22- Terrified

Loved it!

Reviewer: snowangel23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Mar 2020 5:59 AM Title: Chapter 9- Family time

Loved it! 

Reviewer: snowangel23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Mar 2020 1:54 AM Title: Prologue

Loved it!

Reviewer: Sandy74 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Nov 2016 7:56 PM Title: Chapter 17- Confrontation

I am so glad they  finally decided to communicate.

I'm still mopping up tears here.  Really good story.

Keep up the good work OK?

Reviewer: Bliss Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2016 12:37 AM Title: Epilogue

I just love your story! Awesome job😍

Reviewer: noomom Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jul 2016 12:07 PM Title: Chapter 7- It is the east, and Juliet is the sun

What does autodidact mean?

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2016 10:37 PM Title: Epilogue

Beautiful chapter. Exceptionally well written. I loved every word, beginning to end.

Sherry

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2016 7:19 PM Title: Chapter 30- Brand new ending

Fantastic chapter.

Sherry

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2016 5:56 AM Title: Chapter 29- Going home

Looks like fate...

Sherry

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2016 1:26 AM Title: Chapter 28- Normalcy

Bella is being level-headed.

Sherry



Author's Response:

thank you so much for taking the time to read and review each chapter!!! :)

 

kat

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2016 6:39 AM Title: Chapter 27- Change of plans

Excellent way to spend a rainy day.

Sherry

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2016 7:28 AM Title: Chapter 26- Making plans

I'm enjoying how they are rebuilding their relationship.

Sherry

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2016 6:28 AM Title: Chapter 25- Our happy place

It seems like Bella is gonna over-think things too much.

Sherry

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2016 5:26 AM Title: Chapter 24- I promise I'm worthy

An amazing first date ended very well.

Sherry

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2016 3:21 AM Title: Chapter 23- The Date

Heavy discussion.

Sherry

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2016 1:03 AM Title: Chapter 22- Terrified

Such a great time with the kids, having a 'family' day.

Sherry

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2016 6:41 AM Title: Chapter 21- What feels right

Not even 9 o'clock and Edward has had a full day. lol

Sherry

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2016 5:45 AM Title: Chapter 20- Hide and seek

Tanya really got on my nerves in this chapter. I'm glad Bella corrected her about overstepping her boundries with her kids.

Sherry

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2016 9:25 PM Title: Chapter 19- Eagerly awaiting... not!

Gotta give Edward is due, he's trying.

Sherry

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2016 7:16 PM Title: Chapter 18- A long way to go

Heartbreaking and emotional chapter. They're working through so much hurt and anger.

Sherry

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2016 5:58 PM Title: Chapter 17- Confrontation

What an emotional chapter. A lot of things came to light. 

Sherry

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2016 9:04 AM Title: Chapter 16- Confused

I love Emmett being the one to help Edward sort out his feelings.

Sherry

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2016 8:25 AM Title: Chapter 15- Fireworks

Damn Rose for breaking the spell.

Sherry

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2016 7:55 AM Title: Chapter 14- Part of his world

Tanya isn't gonna be able to deal with kid's messes. lol

Sherry

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2016 7:07 AM Title: Chapter 13- The jet set life of my ex-husband

About time someone spelled it out to Bella, now someone needs to set Edward straight.

Sherry

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2016 5:22 AM Title: Chapter 12- Eye-opener

I'm starting to not like Tanya so much.

Sherry

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2016 3:34 AM Title: Chapter 11- Moving On

I really dislike Edward right now. lol

Sherry

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2016 1:18 AM Title: Chapter 10- Explanations

lol Parent Trap them.

Sherry

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2016 12:43 AM Title: Chapter 9- Family time

Quality time with the kids as a family will make your mind wonder to the 'what if's'.

Sherry

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2016 10:38 PM Title: Chapter 8- The first day

Gotta do what you gotta do for the kids.

Sherry

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2016 9:36 PM Title: Chapter 7- It is the east, and Juliet is the sun

Heartbreaking decision to make.

Sherry

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2016 9:00 PM Title: Chapter 6- The beginning of the end

Edward was acting a bit selfish this chapter. Damn Alice for planting that seed.

Sherry

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2016 8:07 PM Title: Chapter 5- His girls, angels & muses

The struggles of parenthood are real.

Sherry

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2016 9:21 AM Title: Chapter 4- Doing what's right

At least he's stepping up and taking responsibility now.

Sherry

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2016 8:57 AM Title: Chapter 3- Edward's side

The consequences of actions are real.

Sherry

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2016 8:20 AM Title: Chapter 2- Dropping the bomb

Yikes.

Sherry

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2016 7:24 AM Title: Chapter 1- That hot, drunken boy

Rut-roh...

Sherry

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2016 6:15 AM Title: Prologue

A very intriguing beginning.

Sherry

Reviewer: Dollydimple Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 May 2016 10:06 PM Title: Epilogue

Just read this from start to finish' absolutely loved it. Great writing.

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Mar 2016 6:05 PM Title: Epilogue

amazing story thanks for sharing it with us ;D

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Mar 2016 2:42 AM Title: Epilogue

great story

Reviewer: twi-sessed Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Mar 2016 9:10 PM Title: Epilogue

I LOVED this story!!!  I hope you will find the time and desire to write another one. I'll have my fingers crossed!

Reviewer: babylou23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Feb 2016 6:00 PM Title: Chapter 29- Going home

i dont know y but it will not let me review at the end os story. just wanted to say that i love your wonderful story. I love this edward he's very realist flaws and all :-) congrads on baby no2. I cant wait to see what you write next. take care bblou

Reviewer: babylou23 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Feb 2016 5:55 PM Title: Epilogue

aww I loved this story and this is one of  fave edwards ever. He is very realist and I like that, flaws and all. thank you for a wonderful story. I would not normal read this type but I am very glad i did. I can not wait to see what you write. Congrads on baby no.2. bblou :-)

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Feb 2016 1:20 AM Title: Epilogue

This story was worth every bit of the wait!!!!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Feb 2016 9:26 PM Title: Chapter 30- Brand new ending

This was so amazingly sexy! The piano & his words took it over the top!

Reviewer: MistySummer Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Feb 2016 9:32 PM Title: Epilogue

Wonderful you ended it beautifully.

Reviewer: Chiisuture Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Feb 2016 9:18 PM Title: Epilogue

i really loved reading this story. it was sweet and you've put a lot of effeord and time in writing this. 

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Feb 2016 3:43 AM Title: Epilogue

Excellent Story

Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Feb 2016 2:14 AM Title: Epilogue

I started reading this a long time ago but I didn't finish until now. It was a good journey.

Thank you.

Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Feb 2016 4:18 PM Title: Chapter 12- Eye-opener

Does Bella know that Alice was the little bird in Edward's ear about his unhappiness and suggesting divorce?

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Feb 2016 4:01 PM Title: Epilogue

good

Reviewer: vickic Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Feb 2016 3:20 AM Title: Epilogue

I will say that I really enjoyed this, it made me cry, laugh, think, and just enjoy reading. thanks for sharing it.

Reviewer: cjrich Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Feb 2016 2:04 AM Title: Epilogue

Just want to thank you for sharing this wonderful story. You had me from the very first chapter so long ago.I understand about RL so glad that you were able to finish.  Please don't think I am being sarcastic because I would love to read anything you found the time to write no matter how long it takes. You have an amazing gift and I am a fan for life. XOXO,Cheri

Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Feb 2016 12:57 AM Title: Chapter 10- Explanations

They both made wrong decisions back then. 

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Nov 2015 3:39 AM Title: Chapter 30- Brand new ending

good. can't wait for the epi :)

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Nov 2015 1:31 AM Title: Chapter 29- Going home

convenient :)

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Nov 2015 1:02 AM Title: Chapter 28- Normalcy

good

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2015 11:54 PM Title: Chapter 27- Change of plans

good

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2015 11:18 PM Title: Chapter 26- Making plans

good

kind of been wondering if tanya cheated with riley

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2015 11:03 PM Title: Chapter 25- Our happy place

hope she doesn't get too caught up in her own head 

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2015 10:44 PM Title: Chapter 24- I promise I'm worthy

good

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2015 10:23 PM Title: Chapter 23- The Date

good

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2015 9:19 PM Title: Chapter 22- Terrified

good

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2015 8:57 PM Title: Chapter 21- What feels right

lol

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2015 3:32 PM Title: Chapter 20- Hide and seek

good

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2015 2:54 PM Title: Chapter 19- Eagerly awaiting... not!

interesting that esme invited her

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2015 2:19 PM Title: Chapter 18- A long way to go

good

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2015 1:54 PM Title: Chapter 17- Confrontation

good

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2015 1:26 PM Title: Chapter 16- Confused

good

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2015 1:09 PM Title: Chapter 15- Fireworks

good

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2015 12:55 PM Title: Chapter 14- Part of his world

can't wait to see e's reaction to james

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2015 12:36 PM Title: Chapter 13- The jet set life of my ex-husband

things with e's family and how they feel about b are clearer now. earlier on it seemed like their relationship might not have turned out too good

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2015 12:14 PM Title: Chapter 12- Eye-opener

yet - yikes

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2015 11:41 AM Title: Chapter 11- Moving On

ugh

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2015 11:13 AM Title: Chapter 10- Explanations

wondering about garrett 

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2015 10:54 AM Title: Chapter 9- Family time

wonder what's happening on the 4th

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2015 10:34 AM Title: Chapter 8- The first day

feeling bad for b . . .tough situation for her to be in

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2015 10:27 AM Title: Chapter 7- It is the east, and Juliet is the sun

seems like b was justified in her reason for reacting the way she did. he never discussed it with her and she was dealing with sick babies and work . . . and then based on the prologue, he divorces her pretty quickly 

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2015 10:05 AM Title: Chapter 6- The beginning of the end

kind of bad that e's family wants him to think about divorcing b

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2015 9:52 AM Title: Chapter 5- His girls, angels & muses

good

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2015 9:38 AM Title: Chapter 4- Doing what's right

good

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2015 9:23 AM Title: Chapter 3- Edward's side

tough situation

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2015 9:14 AM Title: Chapter 2- Dropping the bomb

very awkward for them

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2015 9:08 AM Title: Chapter 1- That hot, drunken boy

yeah, e doesn't seem so nice

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2015 8:59 AM Title: Prologue

good start

Reviewer: Chocolate Heals All Wounds Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 May 2015 6:23 AM Title: Chapter 7- It is the east, and Juliet is the sun

I'm going to continue reading but I had to comment after gettig all of their background up to the divorve and I am completely on Bella's side. Yeah it was bad for her to say it was his music or his family but he really needed to calm down and see things clearly. While he was feeling all these things Bella had no clue about them and for him to completely unload and say "hey I'm leaving come with me" was not realistic at all on his part.

Reviewer: ARschmitt4 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 May 2015 11:08 PM Title: Chapter 30- Brand new ending

When do we get an epilogue? I loved this. 

Reviewer: Mounds01 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Apr 2015 5:56 PM Title: Chapter 30- Brand new ending

I loved the story, a lot of hurt and misunderstanding caused by miscommunication. I liked how Emma remembered the memories of her family and I'm glad for the HEA. Great job!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Apr 2015 6:16 PM Title: Chapter 30- Brand new ending

You did a marvelous job!  Loved this story....it was very "real" and I appreciate that! 

Reviewer: MissKM Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Apr 2015 1:25 PM Title: Prologue

love, love, loved this story. Thankyou for sharing with us 

Reviewer: cjrich Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2015 12:29 AM Title: Chapter 30- Brand new ending

Such a wonderful story, beautiful characters and amazing ride. I will miss your talent.  Truly hope that you will continue to post your words for your fans, namely me! Looking forward to seeing the epilogue, hoping for a little baby bump of a son for Edward... maybe? XOXO,Cheri

Reviewer: pamspastime Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2015 5:19 AM Title: Chapter 30- Brand new ending

This was a great story....I enjoyed it from beginning to end.....and the characters were wonderful......Thanks...

Reviewer: vickic Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2015 4:50 AM Title: Chapter 30- Brand new ending

Enjoyed it very much, I do hope they enjoy their house, it sounds lovely

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2015 2:58 AM Title: Chapter 30- Brand new ending

I did love this story!!

Thanks for the update and sharing the story!!

 

Reviewer: pamspastime Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Feb 2015 6:33 AM Title: Chapter 29- Going home

So happy to see an update.....Wow a job offer in LA. That will solve so many problems for them. give Bella a reason to be there besides just giving everything for Edward and being together....even though I think he was going to make the move to her this time...

looking forward to more....see you soon :)

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