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Reviewer: twi-sessed Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2017 12:52 AM Title: Chapter 5 - I Want You Both

Loved it!  Hope you continue to write!

Reviewer: moewerts Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2012 3:27 AM Title: Chapter 5 - I Want You Both

That was awesome!  Just what I was looking for.  I've met Jackson at a 100 Monkeys concert.  He is even more sexy in person.  And perfect to imagine doing all of this with :)

Reviewer: MelissaJHackett Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Aug 2010 1:07 AM Title: Chapter 5 - I Want You Both

OMFG!!!!!  Can we say H-O-T!!!!!

Reviewer: carnal_angel Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Aug 2010 11:51 AM Title: Chapter 5 - I Want You Both

mmm...all i'm sayin

Reviewer: darkest-terror Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2010 1:45 AM Title: Chapter 1 - The Proposal

Lol, I have a couple Jasper stories you might be interested in. That's pretty mcuh all I write now.



Author's Response:

Oooh, Hale yeah!!  Are they posted on here or somewhere else?  You can email me the link(s) if you want -- twilightmom2009@yahoo.com.  I'd love to read them!!

Reviewer: darkest-terror Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2010 8:18 PM Title: Chapter 5 - I Want You Both

-sigh- Jackson... Yummy, naked Jackson... -sigh-



Author's Response:

I know, right?!?!  How much better can you get than that?  I'm sorry if I offend any person on Team Edward/Kellan/Jacob/whoever, but I am Team Jasper all the way to the end.  That's the main reason I wrote this story.  I couldn't find any fan-fic out there that satisfied my Jasper craving, so I took matters into my own hands.  I am assuming you enjoyed, so I thank you so much!!

Reviewer: darkest-terror Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2010 8:10 PM Title: Chapter 4 - In the Shower

Mmmm, Jackson. -sigh-

Reviewer: annatwo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 May 2010 2:46 AM Title: Chapter 5 - I Want You Both

That could not have been any hotter! WOW! You really know how to write an erotic scene.  I'm impressed.



Author's Response:

I am so glad you liked it!!  This was the first sexual story that I've ever written and I am glad that I have gotten so much positive feedback on it.  Thank you, thank you, thank you!!!!

Reviewer: sessahhh Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2010 2:49 AM Title: Chapter 5 - I Want You Both

Fanfuckingtastic Missy. I think I am in need of a towel and definitely a new pair of panties. H-O-T. 

Loved this line as it gave me a little giggle given the context: "I can feel Jasper poking me in the back..."



Author's Response:

Do you know how many pairs of panties I went through writing this?  OMG, I had to write this at night after my husband and kids were asleep because of the naughtiness it contains. 

As for that special line, I had to throw it in there like that because for some reason, I could just hear it coming out of Bella's mouth.  Couldn't you?

Reviewer: sessahhh Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2010 2:38 AM Title: Chapter 4 - In the Shower

Yum-oh! I love the little bit of pre-sexing girl on girl loving we get here. But nobody got an O. How sad. I hope they make up for it in the bedroom. 

Reviewer: sessahhh Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2010 2:25 AM Title: Chapter 3 - Hanging with Jacob

Mmm... Jacob without a shirt.... I'll be over here for a little while thinking about that. 

Good job with this chapter. Made me smile. 

Reviewer: sessahhh Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2010 2:20 AM Title: Chapter 2 - Making Her Decision

It was a good reprieve between smut. You know, we need some plot sometimes. 

Reviewer: sessahhh Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2010 2:13 AM Title: Chapter 1 - The Proposal

I love this line: "Kiss me...down there," I whispered. hehehe. So cute. I also like how unbelievably non-canon your Edward is. I doubt the series version would be anything close to this understanding. Talk about jealous,

Reviewer: bloodykitchengirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2010 4:22 PM Title: Chapter 5 - I Want You Both

Very nice plot ! Great lemons, it's too bad the story is over...



Author's Response:

Aw, thank you so much!!!  And who says it's over?  I might write a sequel!!

Reviewer: bloodykitchengirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2010 7:28 PM Title: Chapter 1 - The Proposal

Great beginning !

Reviewer: L-Anne Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2010 4:53 AM Title: Chapter 5 - I Want You Both

Yeah I am sooooo FREAKIN' JEALOUS!! LOL  Great little story!!  Too bad Edward didn't join in! LOL ;o}



Author's Response:

Have you ever been to the site twilighted.net?  I tried to get them to use this story, but they thought that it was a little too far out of character.  However, one of the betas suggested that I include Edward.  I've been thinking about adding him in there.  Would it be a good idea?  Maybe One Night with Bella 2.0?

Reviewer: peggytje Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Feb 2010 7:45 AM Title: Chapter 5 - I Want You Both

really really hot jasper..... like your story by the way ;-)

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Feb 2010 8:46 PM Title: Chapter 5 - I Want You Both

Hot hot hot.  Lucky Bella!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Feb 2010 3:41 AM Title: Chapter 5 - I Want You Both

yummy.  Jasper is so hawt

Reviewer: smmiskimen Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Feb 2010 11:37 PM Title: Chapter 5 - I Want You Both

Jackson is pretty damn hot just as that chapter was! I am glad I found your story!!!

Reviewer: smmiskimen Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Feb 2010 9:20 PM Title: Chapter 4 - In the Shower

Yummy yummy yummy!!!!!!!!!!! Need I say more?

Reviewer: smmiskimen Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Feb 2010 7:28 PM Title: Chapter 1 - The Proposal

This is definitely interesting! I have to read more



Author's Response:

Go ahead, all the chapters are posted.  It gets better!!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jan 2010 2:19 PM Title: Chapter 4 - In the Shower

hmmmm yummy so far.   I'm so team Japser myself. 



Author's Response:

Ah, Team Jasper.  The things I could do to that vamp.  Mmm...

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jan 2010 2:08 PM Title: Chapter 1 - The Proposal

not bad.  I was just thinking that this was a post vamp thing.   Just in my mind.  Not a bad thing at all.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jan 2010 6:09 AM Title: Chapter 3 - Hanging with Jacob

hmmm  cant wait for next chapter

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jan 2010 5:57 AM Title: Chapter 1 - The Proposal

hmmm before the wedding and her still human.....  not what i was expecting



Author's Response:

Is that bad?  When I decided to write this, I really wasn't thinking about any of that.  I just started writing.

Reviewer: Ms Riley Cullen Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jan 2010 8:58 PM Title: Chapter 1 - The Proposal

UM...WOW. I LOVE IT!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much!  You are my first review on this story!!  Yay!  I just want to let you know that it's a short story.  I am writing another one, a little more drama than good old-fashioned smut, and I'll get it on here soon.  Well, posting the 2nd chapter right now.  Have a great day!

Amy.

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