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Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2013 10:12 PM Title: Chapter 6

So, a little background on Bella's strange and wonderful childhood! I'm glad Esme thought to ask for Peter Concord's help, and I feel, given time, Bella will be glad too. The newborn bond between her and Edward is slightly encouraging, hinting that they may be closer in the future. I have found these six chapters fascinating and can only cross fingers and toes, and hope that you will indeed finish this story. It's so good, I really would love to see how it works out for all concerned.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2013 8:21 PM Title: Chapter 5

Bella's first day of school went better than expected, apart from Eric recognizing her. The interaction with Edward went better than I thought it might. I like that she is drawn to him, seemingly against her better judgement. And lastly, who's driving the purple PT Cruiser?

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2013 7:59 PM Title: Chapter 4

What secret is Bella hiding about her spending time in California? Why wouldn't she remain anonymous, is there some part of her life that would be considered public, in some way? Sounds like that will tie in with what Esme found out in Port Angeles, from the psychiatrist!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2013 7:33 PM Title: Chapter 3

One of the saddest things I ever heard was Bella telling Esme she hasn't been a child for a very long time! Sounds to me as if someone needs to smack Renee, once or twice!What has this girl's life been like for thirteen years? Plus, I hope to hell someone tells Bella how much her father wanted to be a part of her life, and wasn't allowed to !

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2013 7:14 PM Title: Chapter 2

I'm starting to get a pinched feeling in my chest, that Bella has had something awful happen to her! I sure hope I'm wrong, but since I've already seen your style in As Children After Play, probably not! I'm buckling in tight and preparing for the ride!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2013 6:25 PM Title: Chapter 1

I'm betting that the new foster child from Arizon, by way of Chief Swan, is the girl Edward saw in the bar! Just a hunch!

Reviewer: furiousstrength Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Nov 2012 7:18 AM Title: Chapter 6

Oh holy fuck I remember Lady Lovely Locks! That's part of what I love about your stories, you're my age so I get a HUGE dose of nostalgia with some of the things you talk about.

 

Do you think you'll ever come back to this story? I'm all caught up with Wisp so I decided to start this and am now addicted. I think it's fantastic and I enjoy how you don't have Edward and Bella falling into bed in chapter 2 and him curing all her woes with his honey scent and cinnamon breath.

Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2012 7:32 PM Title: Chapter 2

This just breaks my heart. Bella has been through so much. I feel so bad that she is sleeping like that. Great job...thanks!!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2012 12:11 AM Title: Chapter 1

What a sad situation. I can't wait to see what Bella thinks. Great job...thanks!!!

Reviewer: ded Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2012 1:07 AM Title: Chapter 6

enjoying your story. please continue. thank you for sharing

Author's Response:

Thank you! Yes, I need to update this one soon...

Reviewer: jussica1990 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2012 3:51 PM Title: Chapter 6

Did not see that coming, although there's a reason a lot of child stars don't end up continuing into adulthood, update soon :) xx



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review! Yeah, I need to update this one, it's been lonely.

Reviewer: jane210 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2012 3:44 PM Title: Chapter 6

Well writen and a very good story line so far, keep up the good work!

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: kymmie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2012 3:50 AM Title: Chapter 6

I wonder what's you g on with her and her past. I can't wait to find out. I like it. 



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review! I need to update this story, it's been a while...

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2012 2:26 AM Title: Chapter 6

i loved the chapters and watched lady lovely locks when i was a kid ... looking forward to more chapter 



Author's Response:

Hey, someone who knows Lady Lovely Locks! Thanks for the review.

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