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Reviewer: snowydreamer32 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2023 7:05 PM Title: Chapter 3

Loved it 

Reviewer: snowydreamer32 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 May 2023 11:48 PM Title: Chapter 2

Loved it 

Reviewer: snowydreamer32 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 May 2023 11:41 PM Title: Chapter 1

Loved it 

Reviewer: Edwardlov3 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Dec 2020 3:58 AM Title: Chapter 23

This was so cute.

Reviewer: Edwardlov3 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Dec 2020 3:58 AM Title: Chapter 23

This was so cute.

Reviewer: MzSexyBBW Signed starhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 01 Aug 2019 1:21 AM Title: Chapter 1

Awesome

Reviewer: MzSexyBBW Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Aug 2019 1:20 AM Title: Chapter 1

Awesome

Reviewer: campyrs2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jan 2019 4:18 AM Title: Chapter 23

Awesome story!  Thank you very much.

Reviewer: campyrs2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jan 2019 4:18 AM Title: Chapter 23

Awesome story!  Thank you very much.

Reviewer: its simply me n you Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Sep 2017 5:47 PM Title: Chapter 23

Glad she "unlocked her heart to him".  

Nice way to end the story with lots of babies & happy families!

Reviewer: its simply me n you Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Sep 2017 5:42 PM Title: Chapter 21

Crazy Karen!  How did she get out of jail?  Glad that Bella killed her!  

And the fact that Victoria was in the FBI... quite the plot twist.  I'm sorry she lost her job, but at least she was honest about everything

Reviewer: its simply me n you Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Sep 2017 5:26 PM Title: Chapter 19

If Victoria is telling the truth, I feel bad for both her and Edward.  They were both victims of the crazy lady, Karen!

Reviewer: its simply me n you Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Sep 2017 4:41 PM Title: Chapter 13

Lots happening here.

Didn't see Tanya killing Jake or her blackmailing Charlie.  Loved the date

Reviewer: its simply me n you Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Sep 2017 4:26 PM Title: Chapter 10

Very interesting developments , both in business and personally.  

Reviewer: its simply me n you Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Sep 2017 4:11 PM Title: Outtake: The Note

Great Note!  

Reviewer: its simply me n you Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Sep 2017 4:10 PM Title: Chapter 7

Good to see Bella stepping up to get back at Mike.  He seems like quite the tool.

It seemed like she may begin to reciprocate Edward's feelings.  Look forward to their talk continuing

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2017 6:23 AM Title: Chapter 23

l LOVED THIS!

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2017 6:23 AM Title: Chapter 23

l LOVED THIS!

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2017 6:23 AM Title: Chapter 23

l LOVED THIS!

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2017 6:23 AM Title: Chapter 23

l LOVED THIS!

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2017 6:23 AM Title: Chapter 23

l LOVED THIS!

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2017 6:23 AM Title: Chapter 23

l LOVED THIS!

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2017 6:23 AM Title: Chapter 23

l LOVED THIS!

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2017 6:22 AM Title: Chapter 23

l LOVED THIS!

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2017 6:22 AM Title: Chapter 23

l LOVED THIS!

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2017 8:20 AM Title: Chapter 23

Loved it 

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2017 8:20 AM Title: Chapter 23

Loved it 

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2017 8:07 AM Title: Chapter 21

Stupid Karen! 

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2017 7:35 AM Title: Chapter 20

Loved it! 

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2017 7:23 AM Title: Chapter 19

Loved it! 

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2017 7:06 AM Title: Chapter 19

Loved it! 

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2017 6:59 AM Title: Chapter 17

Loved it!

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2017 6:45 AM Title: Chapter 16

Great chapter! 

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2017 6:35 AM Title: Chapter 15

Stupid Mike! 

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2017 6:22 AM Title: Chapter 14

Uh-oh! 

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Feb 2017 8:52 AM Title: Chapter 13

Loved it! 

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Feb 2017 8:31 AM Title: Chapter 12

Why did Tanya kill Jacob?

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Feb 2017 8:23 AM Title: Chapter 11

Loved it! 

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Feb 2017 7:31 AM Title: Chapter 10

Great chapter! 

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Feb 2017 6:22 AM Title: Chapter 9

Stupid Jessica! 

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Feb 2017 6:14 AM Title: Chapter 8

Loved it! 

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Feb 2017 6:08 AM Title: Outtake: The Note

Go Bella! 

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Feb 2017 6:07 AM Title: Chapter 7

Excellent chapter! 

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Feb 2017 6:00 AM Title: Chapter 6

Loved it!  Stupid Mike! 

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Feb 2017 5:53 AM Title: Chapter 5

Loved it! 

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Feb 2017 5:45 AM Title: Chapter 4

Loved it! 

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Feb 2017 5:39 AM Title: Chapter 3

Loved it! 

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Feb 2017 6:22 AM Title: Chapter 2

Loved it! 

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Feb 2017 6:16 AM Title: Chapter 1

Loved it! 

Reviewer: SarcasticBimbo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Nov 2016 5:37 AM Title: Chapter 23

I read this once before on fanfiction.net, I believe...and I loved it then...but then I couldn't remember the name...and I stumbled upon it tonight on fanfiction.net...but there was only one chapter there...and I was fortunate enough to find it here...

Love the story and would love to see a sequel, sometime. :-) Thank you for sharing your talent.

Reviewer: shegoddess Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 May 2016 10:28 PM Title: Chapter 23

Great story. Thank you for sharing.

Reviewer: kneon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 May 2016 7:00 AM Title: Chapter 23

Great story. You did a great job for your first mobward.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Apr 2016 12:32 AM Title: Chapter 23

Loved reading this story.  You did a great job writing it. Thank you for sharing with us.  

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Apr 2016 12:24 AM Title: Chapter 21

Well, that was interesting.  Lol

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Apr 2016 12:11 AM Title: Chapter 20

OMGosh,  there are some many turns in this story.  Love it!!!!!!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2016 11:52 PM Title: Chapter 19

About time he ask her. Lol. Wow, Karen Newton is crazy.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2016 11:39 PM Title: Chapter 19

So Victoria was drugged too. Wow, can you say mommy dearest. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2016 11:27 PM Title: Chapter 17

Love Bella and Edward together.  They have such a connection. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2016 11:15 PM Title: Chapter 16

I think Bella is pregnant.. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2016 10:53 PM Title: Chapter 15

OMGosh! Bella is one bad bitch. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2016 10:16 PM Title: Chapter 14

What the hell? I am so glad that I do not have to wait for an update.  I am so off to read the next chapter. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2016 2:53 PM Title: Chapter 13

I can't believe that Charlie has let Tanya blackmail him all these years. If he has not cheated on Renee with Tanya then why pay her. Loved the date. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2016 2:16 PM Title: Chapter 12

Ok, what is the deal with Tanya?  What are her ties to Jacob?  

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2016 1:19 PM Title: Chapter 11

Loved this chapter 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2016 2:12 AM Title: Chapter 10

Love that Bella stood up to Edward.  I am wondering if Edward cleaned up the mess in his pants before he met with Emmett. Lol

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Apr 2016 1:57 PM Title: Chapter 9

Lol. This whole chapter was hilarious.  Esme and Renee's made me laugh then Jessica getting her ass whooped was great. Edward was engaged to Jessica because his father wanted it but Esme had been planning his wedding to Bella since they were kids. That just seems strange. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Apr 2016 3:08 AM Title: Chapter 8

Perfect 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Apr 2016 2:55 AM Title: Outtake: The Note

Love it

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Apr 2016 2:54 AM Title: Chapter 7

Mike is so dumb. I want to know what was in the note. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Apr 2016 2:43 AM Title: Chapter 6

The Newton's just fucked up.  

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Apr 2016 2:36 AM Title: Chapter 5

I am glad that Edward was honest with her about his feelings. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Apr 2016 2:26 AM Title: Chapter 4

So Charlie likes Edward.  That's good. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Apr 2016 2:19 AM Title: Chapter 3

Great job 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Apr 2016 11:50 PM Title: Chapter 2

I'm surprised that Edward didn't hurt Mike. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Apr 2016 11:42 PM Title: Chapter 1

TThis story sounds very interesting.  Can't wait to read more. 

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2016 4:26 AM Title: Chapter 23

I found this as a feature story and so glad I took the time to read it.  Thanks for sharing it. 

Reviewer: virginie Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Sep 2015 4:55 PM Title: Chapter 23

merci

Reviewer: yagalinus0420 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Dec 2014 2:38 PM Title: Chapter 23

LOVE THIS STORY!!!

Reviewer: KBB Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2014 3:14 PM Title: Chapter 10

Ok so Bella and Edwaed dry hump and both had the Big O. Shouldn't she and Edward clean themselves up? Edward underwear should be full of spunk and that would be uncomfortable. Just saying. Still enjoying the story.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2014 9:00 AM Title: Chapter 23

Lovely way to end this, with babies coming all over the place! They may not be the conventional family, but other than what they do for a living, everything else is the same! Like all the other stories of your's that I have read, it was a dandy!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2014 8:51 AM Title: Chapter 21

That was a sad chapter because of Victoria and scary because of her mother and happy because Bella killed Karen and the FBI can't arrest them!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2014 8:40 AM Title: Chapter 20

Kind of a cute chapter in a way, even with the cliffhanger! One thing about life in this outfit, it's never boring!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2014 8:21 AM Title: Chapter 19

Emmett surprised everyone, himself included, when he shot Mike! Tanya is getting quite the second chance at life, hope she makes the most of it! Edward's proposal was quite lovely, and the ring sounds fabulous!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2014 7:59 AM Title: Chapter 19

This would be tough for any man to process, as it's far more likely to be a woman in his position. Not that it doesn't ever happen to men, just not anywhere near as often. Hope they can help Victoria if she helps them!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2014 7:42 AM Title: Chapter 17

What has this woman got up her sleeve now? I can't wait to see what Edward and Bella have in store for Karen! Hope it's painful! Speaking of pain, you have my deepest sympathy about what happened to you. Believe me, I can empathize!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2014 4:33 AM Title: Chapter 16

Figured that Laurent and James were done for, but was a bit surprised that Mike's mom is the mastermind behind this abduction. Since Bella's jeans are tighter fitting and she's not been eating, I'm guessing she's pregnant! I hope that nobody else had sex with Edward while he wad drugged!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2014 4:05 AM Title: Chapter 15

Don't know who will kill him and don't care! Just as long as someone does it, that's all that matters! What an idiot to have gotten mi9xed up in this mess! What I still can't figure out is why they kept Edward alive? Don't get me wtrong, I'm thrilled they didn't kill him, just curious as to what it's for?

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2014 2:18 AM Title: Chapter 14

Rats, they took Edward! This can't be good for anyone, especially him! Bella will be out for blood now, you don't screw around with her man! That business over Tanya was a strange bit of foreplay, but whatever floats your boat!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2014 2:04 AM Title: Chapter 13

Tanya got off easy I'm thinking. The dinner date Edward produced for Bella was wonderfully thoughtful and very romantic!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2014 1:47 AM Title: Chapter 12

Maybe Tanya got out of rehab too early and wanted drugs and Jacob wouldn't deliver? Otherwise, I can't think why she would kill him!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2014 1:33 AM Title: Chapter 11

Some background is always welcome, but the two of them finally getting together wasn't at all bad, either!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2014 1:22 AM Title: Chapter 10

Looks to me like Mike, wanting to make his mommy proud and take revenge on Bella, has allied himself with people who want the family drug business. Anything to cause trouble. Like I said before, Mike is just plain stupid!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2014 12:53 AM Title: Chapter 9

The whipping she receieved will probably only make Jessica hate Bella worse than she already did. What else was Bella supposed to do but defend herself?

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2014 12:38 AM Title: Chapter 8

Probably something to do with L and J, would be my guess. That's the problem with electronics, they interrupt at the worst times!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2014 12:27 AM Title: Outtake: The Note

That was just too funny!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2014 12:10 AM Title: Chapter 7

Boy, Mike really is stupid! How the hell could Bella disrespect herself by having anything to do with that loser?

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2014 11:43 PM Title: Chapter 6

Where is Bella coming up with this theory of loving Edward means losing his friendship? Poor girl must not know that in the best relationships, those two things go hand in hand! How shitty of Mike, or his mommy, to destroy Bella's beloved business!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2014 11:29 PM Title: Chapter 5

Hmm, maybe Edward shouldn't have gotten so ticked until he knew for sure how Bella really felt about him? We're about to find out!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2014 11:13 PM Title: Chapter 4

I am real curious as to what Karen Newton thinks she is going to do to Bella? It would seem to behoove her to shut up and go away, instead of making nasty remarks and threats!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2014 10:40 PM Title: Chapter 3

Much better, now that Bella has a clue about Edward's feelings for her. It was a bit on the brutal side when he calmly offed the guy who stole his gun shipment! Pretty ruthless character, this Edward!

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