Date: 21 Dec 2020 3:58 AM Title: Chapter 23
This was so cute.
Date: 21 Dec 2020 3:58 AM Title: Chapter 23
This was so cute.
Date: 26 Jan 2019 4:18 AM Title: Chapter 23
Awesome story! Thank you very much.
Date: 26 Jan 2019 4:18 AM Title: Chapter 23
Awesome story! Thank you very much.
Date: 24 Sep 2017 5:47 PM Title: Chapter 23
Glad she "unlocked her heart to him".
Nice way to end the story with lots of babies & happy families!
Date: 24 Sep 2017 5:42 PM Title: Chapter 21
Crazy Karen! How did she get out of jail? Glad that Bella killed her!
And the fact that Victoria was in the FBI... quite the plot twist. I'm sorry she lost her job, but at least she was honest about everything
Date: 24 Sep 2017 5:26 PM Title: Chapter 19
If Victoria is telling the truth, I feel bad for both her and Edward. They were both victims of the crazy lady, Karen!
Date: 24 Sep 2017 4:41 PM Title: Chapter 13
Lots happening here.
Didn't see Tanya killing Jake or her blackmailing Charlie. Loved the date
Date: 24 Sep 2017 4:26 PM Title: Chapter 10
Very interesting developments , both in business and personally.
Date: 24 Sep 2017 4:11 PM Title: Outtake: The Note
Great Note!
Date: 24 Sep 2017 4:10 PM Title: Chapter 7
Good to see Bella stepping up to get back at Mike. He seems like quite the tool.
It seemed like she may begin to reciprocate Edward's feelings. Look forward to their talk continuing
Date: 28 Feb 2017 8:07 AM Title: Chapter 21
Stupid Karen!
Date: 28 Feb 2017 6:45 AM Title: Chapter 16
Great chapter!
Date: 28 Feb 2017 6:35 AM Title: Chapter 15
Stupid Mike!
Date: 26 Feb 2017 8:31 AM Title: Chapter 12
Why did Tanya kill Jacob?
Date: 26 Feb 2017 7:31 AM Title: Chapter 10
Great chapter!
Date: 26 Feb 2017 6:22 AM Title: Chapter 9
Stupid Jessica!
Date: 26 Feb 2017 6:08 AM Title: Outtake: The Note
Go Bella!
Date: 26 Feb 2017 6:07 AM Title: Chapter 7
Excellent chapter!
Date: 26 Feb 2017 6:00 AM Title: Chapter 6
Loved it! Stupid Mike!
Date: 18 Nov 2016 5:37 AM Title: Chapter 23
I read this once before on fanfiction.net, I believe...and I loved it then...but then I couldn't remember the name...and I stumbled upon it tonight on fanfiction.net...but there was only one chapter there...and I was fortunate enough to find it here...
Love the story and would love to see a sequel, sometime. :-) Thank you for sharing your talent.
Date: 10 May 2016 10:28 PM Title: Chapter 23
Great story. Thank you for sharing.
Date: 09 May 2016 7:00 AM Title: Chapter 23
Great story. You did a great job for your first mobward.
Date: 26 Apr 2016 12:32 AM Title: Chapter 23
Loved reading this story. You did a great job writing it. Thank you for sharing with us.
Date: 26 Apr 2016 12:24 AM Title: Chapter 21
Well, that was interesting. Lol
Date: 26 Apr 2016 12:11 AM Title: Chapter 20
OMGosh, there are some many turns in this story. Love it!!!!!!
Date: 25 Apr 2016 11:52 PM Title: Chapter 19
About time he ask her. Lol. Wow, Karen Newton is crazy.
Date: 25 Apr 2016 11:39 PM Title: Chapter 19
So Victoria was drugged too. Wow, can you say mommy dearest.
Date: 25 Apr 2016 11:27 PM Title: Chapter 17
Love Bella and Edward together. They have such a connection.
Date: 25 Apr 2016 11:15 PM Title: Chapter 16
I think Bella is pregnant..
Date: 25 Apr 2016 10:53 PM Title: Chapter 15
OMGosh! Bella is one bad bitch.
Date: 25 Apr 2016 10:16 PM Title: Chapter 14
What the hell? I am so glad that I do not have to wait for an update. I am so off to read the next chapter.
Date: 25 Apr 2016 2:53 PM Title: Chapter 13
I can't believe that Charlie has let Tanya blackmail him all these years. If he has not cheated on Renee with Tanya then why pay her. Loved the date.
Date: 25 Apr 2016 2:16 PM Title: Chapter 12
Ok, what is the deal with Tanya? What are her ties to Jacob?
Date: 25 Apr 2016 1:19 PM Title: Chapter 11
Loved this chapter
Date: 25 Apr 2016 2:12 AM Title: Chapter 10
Love that Bella stood up to Edward. I am wondering if Edward cleaned up the mess in his pants before he met with Emmett. Lol
Date: 24 Apr 2016 1:57 PM Title: Chapter 9
Lol. This whole chapter was hilarious. Esme and Renee's made me laugh then Jessica getting her ass whooped was great. Edward was engaged to Jessica because his father wanted it but Esme had been planning his wedding to Bella since they were kids. That just seems strange.
Date: 24 Apr 2016 2:55 AM Title: Outtake: The Note
Love it
Date: 24 Apr 2016 2:54 AM Title: Chapter 7
Mike is so dumb. I want to know what was in the note.
Date: 24 Apr 2016 2:43 AM Title: Chapter 6
The Newton's just fucked up.
Date: 24 Apr 2016 2:36 AM Title: Chapter 5
I am glad that Edward was honest with her about his feelings.
Date: 24 Apr 2016 2:26 AM Title: Chapter 4
So Charlie likes Edward. That's good.
Date: 24 Apr 2016 2:19 AM Title: Chapter 3
Great job
Date: 23 Apr 2016 11:50 PM Title: Chapter 2
I'm surprised that Edward didn't hurt Mike.
Date: 23 Apr 2016 11:42 PM Title: Chapter 1
TThis story sounds very interesting. Can't wait to read more.
Date: 07 Jan 2016 4:26 AM Title: Chapter 23
I found this as a feature story and so glad I took the time to read it. Thanks for sharing it.
Date: 19 Dec 2014 2:38 PM Title: Chapter 23
LOVE THIS STORY!!!
Date: 08 Jun 2014 3:14 PM Title: Chapter 10
Ok so Bella and Edwaed dry hump and both had the Big O. Shouldn't she and Edward clean themselves up? Edward underwear should be full of spunk and that would be uncomfortable. Just saying. Still enjoying the story.
Date: 07 Feb 2014 9:00 AM Title: Chapter 23
Lovely way to end this, with babies coming all over the place! They may not be the conventional family, but other than what they do for a living, everything else is the same! Like all the other stories of your's that I have read, it was a dandy!
Date: 07 Feb 2014 8:51 AM Title: Chapter 21
That was a sad chapter because of Victoria and scary because of her mother and happy because Bella killed Karen and the FBI can't arrest them!
Date: 07 Feb 2014 8:40 AM Title: Chapter 20
Kind of a cute chapter in a way, even with the cliffhanger! One thing about life in this outfit, it's never boring!
Date: 07 Feb 2014 8:21 AM Title: Chapter 19
Emmett surprised everyone, himself included, when he shot Mike! Tanya is getting quite the second chance at life, hope she makes the most of it! Edward's proposal was quite lovely, and the ring sounds fabulous!
Date: 07 Feb 2014 7:59 AM Title: Chapter 19
This would be tough for any man to process, as it's far more likely to be a woman in his position. Not that it doesn't ever happen to men, just not anywhere near as often. Hope they can help Victoria if she helps them!
Date: 07 Feb 2014 7:42 AM Title: Chapter 17
What has this woman got up her sleeve now? I can't wait to see what Edward and Bella have in store for Karen! Hope it's painful! Speaking of pain, you have my deepest sympathy about what happened to you. Believe me, I can empathize!
Date: 07 Feb 2014 4:33 AM Title: Chapter 16
Figured that Laurent and James were done for, but was a bit surprised that Mike's mom is the mastermind behind this abduction. Since Bella's jeans are tighter fitting and she's not been eating, I'm guessing she's pregnant! I hope that nobody else had sex with Edward while he wad drugged!
Date: 07 Feb 2014 4:05 AM Title: Chapter 15
Don't know who will kill him and don't care! Just as long as someone does it, that's all that matters! What an idiot to have gotten mi9xed up in this mess! What I still can't figure out is why they kept Edward alive? Don't get me wtrong, I'm thrilled they didn't kill him, just curious as to what it's for?
Date: 07 Feb 2014 2:18 AM Title: Chapter 14
Rats, they took Edward! This can't be good for anyone, especially him! Bella will be out for blood now, you don't screw around with her man! That business over Tanya was a strange bit of foreplay, but whatever floats your boat!
Date: 07 Feb 2014 2:04 AM Title: Chapter 13
Tanya got off easy I'm thinking. The dinner date Edward produced for Bella was wonderfully thoughtful and very romantic!
Date: 07 Feb 2014 1:47 AM Title: Chapter 12
Maybe Tanya got out of rehab too early and wanted drugs and Jacob wouldn't deliver? Otherwise, I can't think why she would kill him!
Date: 07 Feb 2014 1:33 AM Title: Chapter 11
Some background is always welcome, but the two of them finally getting together wasn't at all bad, either!
Date: 07 Feb 2014 1:22 AM Title: Chapter 10
Looks to me like Mike, wanting to make his mommy proud and take revenge on Bella, has allied himself with people who want the family drug business. Anything to cause trouble. Like I said before, Mike is just plain stupid!
Date: 07 Feb 2014 12:53 AM Title: Chapter 9
The whipping she receieved will probably only make Jessica hate Bella worse than she already did. What else was Bella supposed to do but defend herself?
Date: 07 Feb 2014 12:38 AM Title: Chapter 8
Probably something to do with L and J, would be my guess. That's the problem with electronics, they interrupt at the worst times!
Date: 07 Feb 2014 12:27 AM Title: Outtake: The Note
That was just too funny!
Date: 07 Feb 2014 12:10 AM Title: Chapter 7
Boy, Mike really is stupid! How the hell could Bella disrespect herself by having anything to do with that loser?
Date: 06 Feb 2014 11:43 PM Title: Chapter 6
Where is Bella coming up with this theory of loving Edward means losing his friendship? Poor girl must not know that in the best relationships, those two things go hand in hand! How shitty of Mike, or his mommy, to destroy Bella's beloved business!
Date: 06 Feb 2014 11:29 PM Title: Chapter 5
Hmm, maybe Edward shouldn't have gotten so ticked until he knew for sure how Bella really felt about him? We're about to find out!
Date: 06 Feb 2014 11:13 PM Title: Chapter 4
I am real curious as to what Karen Newton thinks she is going to do to Bella? It would seem to behoove her to shut up and go away, instead of making nasty remarks and threats!
Date: 06 Feb 2014 10:40 PM Title: Chapter 3
Much better, now that Bella has a clue about Edward's feelings for her. It was a bit on the brutal side when he calmly offed the guy who stole his gun shipment! Pretty ruthless character, this Edward!