Date: 16 Aug 2016 4:46 AM Title: Chapter 23
amazing story, would have loved to know what else happened with them
Date: 30 Nov 2015 3:15 PM Title: Chapter 23
Good tender hearted story.
[Report This]Date: 26 Jun 2015 9:14 PM Title: Chapter 23
great little story but i wish it had more background detail but it was still enjoyable ;) thanks for sharing this on here with us ;D
Date: 13 Jul 2013 8:16 PM Title: Chapter 23
Sweet story and well written.
Date: 13 Jul 2013 6:17 PM Title: Chapter 4
There is a definately "eww" factor to Bella's husband being Charlie. All I can see is his mustache :0 Stuff nightmares are made of.
Date: 21 Mar 2013 11:04 PM Title: Chapter 14
Awwwww how cute is Edward???
Date: 21 Mar 2013 10:45 PM Title: Chapter 11
Geesh Bella freak out much????
Date: 21 Mar 2013 10:22 PM Title: Chapter 10
How cute are they???
Date: 21 Mar 2013 9:27 PM Title: Chapter 9
He is adorable!!!!
Date: 27 Sep 2012 1:30 PM Title: Chapter 23
Great loved it
[Report This]Date: 02 Sep 2012 3:41 AM Title: Chapter 23
Sweet.. Yep I teared up several time. Enjoyed!
Meg
[Report This]Date: 12 Aug 2012 7:19 PM Title: Chapter 23
Wonderful story! I would love to see a sequel to this. Just to know CJ arrived.
[Report This]Date: 11 Jul 2012 11:41 AM Title: Chapter 23
This was a extremely sweet story. I really enjoyed it. Thankyou for sharing it with us.
XoxoxoxoX
Ashmerlin
[Report This]Date: 30 Jun 2012 7:33 PM Title: Chapter 23
Great story. Thanks for writing.
Date: 27 Jun 2012 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 23
I loved it! thanks!
Date: 26 Jun 2012 4:45 AM Title: Chapter 23
cute ending
Date: 26 Jun 2012 1:55 AM Title: Chapter 23
Really enjoyed reading this story, thanks for sharing.
Date: 26 Jun 2012 1:10 AM Title: Chapter 23
Great ending! :) Loved reading this!
-Kate
[Report This]Date: 26 Jun 2012 12:45 AM Title: Chapter 5
love the chapter
Date: 26 Jun 2012 12:04 AM Title: Chapter 23
Great story even if its your first, are you considering a sequel? I really enjoyed this one ^^
[Report This]Date: 25 Jun 2012 7:45 PM Title: Chapter 22
fantastic chapter and the perfect ending.so romantic.
Date: 25 Jun 2012 1:58 PM Title: Chapter 22
aww :) It was a great ending for this chapter and their evening :)
-Kate
Date: 25 Jun 2012 5:38 AM Title: Chapter 21
looking forward to more
[Report This]Date: 24 Jun 2012 8:48 PM Title: Chapter 21
awww lovely chapter that was so sweet.update soon n awww love this story
[Report This]Date: 24 Jun 2012 8:46 PM Title: Chapter 20
fab chapter.glad she didn't over react to edwards offer.
[Report This]Date: 24 Jun 2012 8:43 PM Title: Chapter 19
wow that was sooo hot and romantic the perfect first time.
[Report This]Date: 24 Jun 2012 8:40 PM Title: Chapter 18
aww that was so romantic and hot.fab chapter
Date: 24 Jun 2012 6:53 PM Title: Chapter 21
This is a wonderful story but this chapter was weird to read since Lebron just won the NBA title with the Miami Heat, during his second year there.
Date: 24 Jun 2012 4:32 PM Title: Chapter 21
aww :) Love that Edward did that for him!
Date: 24 Jun 2012 3:54 PM Title: Chapter 21
awww so sweet.. I love how CJ feels about their relationship and wants them to become a family... so sweet
[Report This]Date: 24 Jun 2012 3:53 PM Title: Chapter 21
I have to say, I had tears in my eyes after reading CJ reaction to the tickets. I loved Edwards comment "I'm getting a stomach ache just thinking about how much food you ate, kid. How are your mom and I going to be able to afford to feed you when you're sixteen if you eat this much at eleven"?
Thats was sweet!! :). Love this story!
[Report This]Date: 23 Jun 2012 6:28 PM Title: Chapter 20
I am sure there are organizations out there. Even if they are not directly for those of military kids I bet there is for single parents and stuff which is pretty much the same. I mean it's not same circumstances for all to be single parent of course there's different circumstances but the ending is all the same single parents and what not. I hope she really considers it and if there is uses it. Even if he didn't go pro like he wants it will help him in playing with other kids and getting out more like he needs and she wants.
Date: 23 Jun 2012 4:47 PM Title: Chapter 20
Great chapter! and I agree, there should be programs like that for all military families, whether they have lost a parent or not really. Can't wait to read more!
Date: 23 Jun 2012 4:05 AM Title: Chapter 19
YAY! :) LOVED it! Cant wait to read more!
Date: 22 Jun 2012 10:42 PM Title: Chapter 18
gah! You can't end it there! :(
Date: 22 Jun 2012 8:39 PM Title: Chapter 17
looking forward to more
[Report This]Date: 22 Jun 2012 4:33 PM Title: Chapter 17
me to she is sooo lucky!fab chapter aww that was so emotional bless cj.
Date: 22 Jun 2012 2:10 PM Title: Chapter 17
such a great chapter! I love how Edward is with CJ, and I think setting up the game with Jasper and his nephew was a great idea! Can't wait to read more!
-Kate
[Report This]Date: 22 Jun 2012 6:19 AM Title: Chapter 16
poor edward lol.fab chapter bless cj.update soon
Date: 22 Jun 2012 3:38 AM Title: Chapter 16
looking forward to more
Date: 22 Jun 2012 2:12 AM Title: Chapter 16
just found this and I am loving it! CJ and Edward's relationship is so great! Can't wait to read more!
-Kate
[Report This]Date: 21 Jun 2012 9:24 PM Title: Chapter 15
I can't wait for the sory to start to get really going well!
[Report This]Date: 21 Jun 2012 5:22 PM Title: Chapter 15
yey their talking again.fab chapter.update soon
Date: 21 Jun 2012 10:20 AM Title: Chapter 15
Aww, they made up. Love the story. Yes some lemony goodness. I think you've made us wait long enough.
I'm still loveing CJ.
[Report This]Date: 21 Jun 2012 6:45 AM Title: Chapter 14
awww that was so emotional sat sobbing reading it.fab chapter.update soon
Date: 21 Jun 2012 3:07 AM Title: Chapter 14
I wish I had reviewed your story earlier!! Yeah I'm loving your story. Ugh it made me cry I loved this chapter!! Because yeah I identify with CJ growing up like he is makes you to mature a lil early but I'm so glad he found Edward :D Thanx for the story and I hope theirs an update soon!!! :D
Date: 21 Jun 2012 12:51 AM Title: Chapter 14
Corner please!!!
Date: 20 Jun 2012 11:14 PM Title: Chapter 13
Aww man. What a place to end! Lol. I just found this story and I love it! Can't wait for more!
[Report This]Date: 20 Jun 2012 7:32 PM Title: Chapter 13
awww bless him.fab chapter.hope they work it out.update soon
[Report This]Date: 20 Jun 2012 7:30 PM Title: Chapter 12
oh dear and it was going so well.fab chapter
Date: 20 Jun 2012 1:58 PM Title: Chapter 13
Oh Bella Bella Bella
Date: 20 Jun 2012 11:41 AM Title: Chapter 13
What a wally ok i ready with the hankies well actually a box of tissues but what you gonna do xx
Date: 20 Jun 2012 2:12 AM Title: Chapter 12
Noooo. I wish she would have let him explain. Maybe CJ can talk some sense into her.
[Report This]Date: 20 Jun 2012 1:45 AM Title: Chapter 12
HEA HEA HEA HEA
[Report This]Date: 19 Jun 2012 7:39 PM Title: Chapter 11
aww thats so romantic.fab chapter.update soon
[Report This]Date: 19 Jun 2012 7:37 PM Title: Chapter 10
me too lol!wow that was a hot moment.fab chapter
[Report This]Date: 19 Jun 2012 7:35 PM Title: Chapter 9
lol he defo handled that really well.fab chapter.
[Report This]Date: 19 Jun 2012 7:32 PM Title: Chapter 8
awww glad she said yes.fab chapter
Date: 19 Jun 2012 3:08 AM Title: Chapter 10
looking forward to more
[Report This]Date: 18 Jun 2012 11:44 PM Title: Chapter 10
WOW, that surprised me!
Author's Response:
I hope it was a nice surprise!
Date: 18 Jun 2012 10:30 PM Title: Chapter 3
I hate that her husband was named Charlie...ewwww lol
Author's Response:
I've had several comments here and elsewhere that me naming her husband Charlie really squicked people out. I get it....I mean in strict canon Charlie is her dad, so yeah, that is creepy to contemplate. But I thought back over the hundreds of stories I've read that were not strictly canon and the readers seemed to be okay with how the author used the character or the name of the character. Like all the stories where Edward is gay (so not canon), or Bella is married to James or Mike Newton (really, really not canon)....but throw Charlie in there as a husband and people are grossed out, LOL. Anyway....I really appreciate you reading and reviewing and hope you'll stick with the story. There's some pretty good stuff coming!
Date: 18 Jun 2012 2:18 PM Title: Chapter 9
Edward is so cute, I want eead about the date..l please, update as soon as possible.
Author's Response:
I love this Edward...updating again tonight so come back and read! Thanks for your review.
Date: 18 Jun 2012 10:37 AM Title: Chapter 9
loved the chapter
Author's Response:
Thanks for sticking with me...I appreciate the feedback.
Date: 18 Jun 2012 2:53 AM Title: Chapter 8
looking forward to more
Author's Response:
More is coming! :)
Date: 18 Jun 2012 1:18 AM Title: Chapter 7
Yup. I'm in love with CJ.
Date: 17 Jun 2012 6:07 PM Title: Chapter 7
Yes,
I love CJ
Author's Response:
CJ's getting a lot of love! Thanks for reading and reviewing.
[Report This]Date: 17 Jun 2012 5:09 PM Title: Chapter 7
aww bless him.fab chapter
Author's Response:
CJ is the man, isn't he? Thank you for reviewing every single chapter...I truly appreciate it.
[Report This]Date: 17 Jun 2012 5:05 PM Title: Chapter 6
me neither its lethal.fab chapter.
Author's Response:
LOL. I like the word lethal to describe it!
[Report This]Date: 17 Jun 2012 5:01 PM Title: Chapter 5
awww their just too cute.fab chapter.
Author's Response:
Thank you! The reviews mean so much to me.
[Report This]Date: 17 Jun 2012 4:56 PM Title: Chapter 4
awww that was so emotional.fab chapter.
Author's Response:
I'm so glad you're enjoying it. Thanks again.
[Report This]Date: 17 Jun 2012 4:54 PM Title: Chapter 3
poor bella shes been through alot.fab chapter
Author's Response:
It was heart wrenching to write..I cannot even imagine coping with her situation in my real life. I wanted to write a Bella that's a strong and determined woman, someone who is really a role model for single moms...I hope I've been successful.
[Report This]Date: 17 Jun 2012 4:50 PM Title: Chapter 2
fab chapter gonna check out your life can change in a moment
Author's Response:
I appreciate the review. You're going to LOVE her story, I promise.
[Report This]Date: 17 Jun 2012 4:45 PM Title: Chapter 1
fab start.
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: 17 Jun 2012 3:05 PM Title: Chapter 7
looking forward tomore
Date: 17 Jun 2012 12:42 PM Title: Chapter 7
As for your question on end notes. Yes, I fell for CJ right away. I don't review much, but your story deserves it. I stop what I'm reading everytime I get the alert that you updated. I absolutly love this story. I can't wait to see how it unfolds.
Most stories have them fall in love and into bed right away. I also love that you update often. I look forward to the next chapter.
Kim
Author's Response:
Wow. I'm so verklempt! Thank you so very much for such an encouraging review....very happy you like the story...and super thrilled that CJ is getting his share of love. Um...forewared is forearmed: I don't draw out the Edward/Bella relationship too long...goodies are coming pretty quickly and they're HOT. At least I have been told so by my friend Judy who has read the whole story and who also gets mad props for my gorgeous banner. Thanks again....this has made my day.
Date: 17 Jun 2012 4:14 AM Title: Chapter 6
looking forward to more
Author's Response:
Thanks again for taking the time to read and review.
Date: 17 Jun 2012 1:44 AM Title: Chapter 6
I am really liking this story. I am excited to see where you are going to take it.
Author's Response:
So happy you like it! Thanks very much.
Date: 16 Jun 2012 9:22 PM Title: Chapter 4
Hmm I'm not sure I can even try to picture Bella and Charlie as anything other then father/daughter. It's kinda creepy lol. :) Good story so far though.
Author's Response:
I know what you mean...I just wanted to change it up a little bit and I liked the name CJ for a boy, LOL. Charlie worked better than Caius, haha. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Date: 16 Jun 2012 8:23 PM Title: Chapter 6
I love this story so far. Please keep updating.
Author's Response:
I'm glad you like it...thanks so much for the review! Updating daily.
Date: 16 Jun 2012 1:32 AM Title: Chapter 5
cute chapter lookaing forward to more
Author's Response:
Lot's of good stuff coming...thanks for continuing to read.
Date: 15 Jun 2012 3:38 PM Title: Chapter 4
looking fowrard to mroe
Author's Response:
Lot's more to come....thanks for reading!
Date: 15 Jun 2012 1:36 AM Title: Chapter 3
I am excited about this story so far. Can't wait to read more.
Author's Response:
I am very thankful that people are reading and reviewing...thanks very much for your interest in my little story.
Date: 15 Jun 2012 12:16 AM Title: Chapter 1
Love it
Author's Response:
Thank you so much!
Date: 14 Jun 2012 11:49 PM Title: Chapter 3
looking forward to more
Author's Response:
I'm going to shoot for daily postings.....thanks for reading.
Date: 14 Jun 2012 11:43 PM Title: Chapter 3
You've caught my heart. Can't wait to see what happens. Thank you for sharing.
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading! I think you'll like what's coming up.
Date: 14 Jun 2012 9:29 PM Title: Chapter 2
looking forward to more
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading and commenting! I'm posting more soon....the story is 100% finished, so I will post as time allows.
Date: 14 Jun 2012 12:31 PM Title: Chapter 1
I am in love with CJ!! <3
Author's Response:
Me too! He's an amazing boy.