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Reviewer: SOAGirl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2012 1:13 PM Title: Chapter 3

Oh Fuck the Cullens are here. I loved Jaxs and Bella in this chapter. He seems so sweet with her but yet he still is that bad boy.

Jaxs is to damn hot.

SOA GIRL

Reviewer: SOAGirl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2012 1:08 PM Title: Chapter 2

Wow you seem to have almost all of the Sons Of Anarchy in here. I am impressed with that.

I really want to see how the vampires play out in this.



Author's Response:

I wanted this to be a true Sons of Anarchy and Twilight story.


The vampres will be as really and play just as bigg of a rols as the SOA!


Thank you soooo much for reading me !

Reviewer: SOAGirl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2012 1:05 PM Title: Chapter 1

I would love to ride with Jaxs anytime and any where.

I am glad to see a SOA story being posted to this site.

I LOVE Jaxs.



Author's Response:

I love Jaxs tooooooo!!!


He is soooo hot that hwe is just the coolest!!!


Thank you soooo much for reading me!

Reviewer: ALewis Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2012 4:06 AM Title: Chapter 13

No no no, don't make him a vamp!!!! I like him better as a human. Now the hot forest sex with Em, KILLER!!!!!! I believe I need to change my panties *fan fan fan fan, hell I need a plug in fan I'm burning up from that!*

Author's Response:

I just love you!!!!!!

Jackson is a very strong hot strong willed boy. I don't think that you will be disappointed!!!!!!!

Thanks for after reading EM plugging in fan LOL! That is like me receiving a naughty girls award!

Wait a few more chapters until I send out loven at petersgirls best. 

Thank you for coming over here to read me.

Love ya sister!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 

 

 

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2012 2:13 PM Title: Chapter 13

Oh sweet forest loving! Damn!

*fans self*

13's a good number! =D

So...Jax. To be a vampire or not. Hmmm...

I don't think he'd want to be turned. But hey, this is your story, sis! You go with your gut. I'll support ya no matter what. 

And yes, the way you marked the chapter name worked. :)



Author's Response:

Hey I sent you a email!!!!!!!!!!!!

You are no. 69 review for this story. It is just a fucken omen!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! LOL!

Love ya tooooooo sister!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 

 

Reviewer: Cullensbabymama7 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2012 6:36 AM Title: Chapter 13

CHANGE HIM!!! CHANGE HIM!!! GOD I LOVE THAT BIKER DUDE..  I WOULD BE WITH HIM HES FUCKIN HOOOOT AS SHIT!!!!

cant they work out a shedual or something, jacksong gets her certain days a week, and then emmett gets her,, and to make it even she gets a whole day with the baby to herself???  god that would splended lmao god im such a slut for even asking that lmao



Author's Response:

Yes our Jackson is such a hot bad boy that he is sooooo good!!!!

Emmett is such a cool fine piece of vampire that he is sooooo bad!!!!!

I am giggling at your repsonse because you are not the only one that wants her to have both of them. Almost everyone does not want either one of them to be sad or lonely.

If you are a slut then I am the Queen slut because there could be a little a hot smutty naughty Emmett, Jackson and Bella action coming *****wink****wink***** LOL!!!!!  They both just put my panties into a tizzzzyyyyy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

But we still have many things coming in this story; bikers tracking Jackson and Bella down, vampire war that Emmett will have to fight, Clay wanting to kill Jaxs and Bella to keep his secrects, the wolves getting involved (oops did I let that slip out) Rosalie wanting Emmett back, Dickward being well a dick and both Emmett and Jaxs both wanting Bellas love. She is such a luckly little thing, isnt she!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I am just giddy that you want to read me. My stories have been deleted from FanFiction because their highest rating is M (16 years and younger) and well when I write all of my stories have cussing, hot sex and some have violence.

I am posting chapters as readers want to read. I loooovvvedddd your review and thank you sooooo much for reading me!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


 

Reviewer: secret lover of him Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2012 8:37 PM Title: Chapter 13

I love it I can not wait for more



Author's Response:

I am glad that you like it .

I willl be posting another chapter tonight or in the morning.

Thank you soooooo much!!!!!!!!!  I look forward to what you think of the next chapter!!!!!!

Reviewer: mymonkeyman12 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2012 7:20 PM Title: Chapter 13

O M G  O M G  O M G  O M G  O M G EMMETT HOT HOT HOT HOT SEX

I loved it and hope that there is a million more to come!!!!!!!!!!!

Does that mean that Jackson will die?

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Niece Bird: Auntie Bird loves you tooooooooooooooooooooooo

I cannot figure out how to send a message from here. Anywho

XOXOXOXOXO "Over" Leave me a message on here and I will check it later.

 



Author's Response:

My little MonkeyMan

I thought that you would just love that!!!!!!!

I am sending you allllll the Emmett love that I can !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I will never tell about Jackson, but that will be out soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Thank you Darlin for following me over here!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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EMMETT + MONKEYMAN   FOREVER

Reviewer: crystanroten Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2012 3:43 PM Title: Chapter 13

holy shit!!!!! noo no no i hope jax pulls through and doesnt get turned. ugh then bella would alwyas be around him and the cullens and never make a choice. cant wait for more!!!!



Author's Response:

Holy shit is soooo correct! I think that you will be pleased with the next chapter. Bella will have to choose one of them !!!!!!

But there are things that will have to be dealt with first. The bikers looking for them, Clay wanting to kill Bella and Jaxs to protect his secrect, vampire war, Rose still wanting Emmett, the wolves getting involved (oops did I let that slip out) and do not forget pain in the ass DICKWARD!!!


I am posting another chapter tonight or in the moring. Thank you sooooooo much for reading me and I am loven the java!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: rooby1321 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2012 3:15 PM Title: Chapter 13

It worked! I wish i could be pinned against a tree like that! Great chapter and a quick read. i want more! Can't get enought if this story. Keep em coming! 



Author's Response:

I am glad that you liked it!! I think that Emmett is just a fine piece of vampire!! Wait until you see the next smutty lemon fluff goodness that I send out!!!!!


I did post this to FanFic but I don't think that I am going to post anymore there. All new chapters will be posted here first.


I am posting another chapter tonight or in the morning.


Thank you sooooo much for reading me!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: fanette Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2012 2:18 PM Title: Chapter 13

Omg! Jaxs is going to be a vamp! I guess that would make him one bad ass biker! Rose is a bitch, and I hope she gets what she has coming to her. Loving the balls to the trees (lol) sex emm and Bella had! He is such I good guy. I can't wait to see what you do next!



Author's Response:

That is cute and yeah that would make him our naughty hottie kicking ass  bad biker boy,

Rose will be getting some pay back soon (hehe)

I think that Emmett is a fine piece of vampire and I love him sooooo! Wait until I post the next hot naughty and smutty lemon goodness!!!!!!

I will be posting again tonight or in the morning.

Thank you for reading me!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 

 

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2012 1:46 PM Title: Chapter 13

oh wow, turn him with his problems. Holy cow. I just don't want Bella with him in the romantic sense. I know, I know you are the writer it is your journey.  I think Bella deserves a good life, one where she is loved and taken care of and that is Emmett.

 

good chapter.



Author's Response:

I think that you will be pleased with the next chapter.  I think that Emmett is a good man and would take great care of Bella. 

But this story is far from over. They are still going to have many ups and downs. Along some more complications. Also a few more surprises!!


Thank you for reading me!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 

Reviewer: Team Switzerland 2009 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2012 1:23 PM Title: Chapter 13

Love the story! I just read the whole thing straight through :D Can't wait for a new chapter!



Author's Response:

You are just soooo making my day.


I love when someone wants to read me!!!!!!! I just have a huge smile on my face that you read it all at once !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


I have many chapters done and will keep posting.

 

But I am curious as to which one has won your heart, Emmett or Jackson?  A lot are telling me both of them.


Thank you sooooooo much!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: giannakylie Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2012 11:00 AM Title: Chapter 13

I must admit that i am upset with Bella for hooking up with Emmett while jax is fighting for his life. I have never liked Rosalie but I kind of want Emmett with her just so Bella will go back with jax, but at the same time I want her to pick jax over emmett! I love your story your an amazing writer! I cannot wait until you next update.



Author's Response:

A lot of you have become torn between Emmett and Jackson. They are each are so differnt but the same when you think about it. You will start to see over the next few chapters just how much that vampires and bikers are a lot a like.


Bella is confused which one to be with tooo. She had to connect with Emmett, even though it was not the best timing.................... Because she loves and needs them both but in differnt ways................................


The three of them have many problems to still over come; the bikers looking for them, vampires coming to kill them, Rosalie is going to be a bitch, Edward being his pain in the ass self,  Clay has to protect his secrects from the club and will stop at nothing to do that, the wolves will not like it when they all come back (oops I told you a serect) LOL!

Thank you for calling me an amazing writer but I do not think that I am. I have only been writing for three months and I do it because I enjoy it. I am in my own little Emmett and Jackson world when I write this.

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I have more chapters done and will keep posting!!!!!!!!!!!! Thank you sooooo much for reading me and making my day!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 

Reviewer: Angelik Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2012 9:10 AM Title: Chapter 13

Wow stress. Clay will try to kill her daughter Bella?? This animal has no feelings? I understand that he did not create more ..... urgh is his daughter, blood of his blood. Son of a ....

I support that Jaxs be transformed, to discover that Emmett saved his life several times ..... and learn to share with

Emmett the Bella and live loving the three forever hehe, of course, that Bella is transformed too. And when Jaxs vampire is that he knows the father's murder by the killer Clay and suck it to death hehehe, I'll enjoy sitting in the chairs in the front row hehe.

 

You wanted to know my opinions of the chapter, this is it hehe.

Love them both, for me she gets with both. I can not choose one. That is, YES to Carlisle.

 

Please update fast I look forward to more, His story every day is more addictive and want more and more and more ....

hehe

 

PS. Emmett was damn hot    

^. ^

 

PS. In your profile right next to your name is written (contact) is there that we write to you to get you in writing in our own. It is the MP from here.




Author's Response:

Clay will become a huge problems for Jaxs and Bella. But keep in mind with Bella being blood the gavel is rightfuly hers.............................!!!!!!! It is not only Clay though; you have the vampires coming, Rosalie wanting Emmett back and wanting to kill Bella, going back to Fork with the wolves, oops did I let that slip out (hehe)!!!!!!!   Of course do not forget the biggest pain in ass, Edward.

Clay has many secrects that may surprise you ****wink**** .


It seems that almost everyone feels the same way, both of them should be with Bella. There could be some serious Emmett, Jackson and Bella interaction coming to this story ******wink******wink*******


This has never been my most popular story,MY JOURNEY is. You cannot help but to fall in love with my Peter LOL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


But I sooooo love writing it. I get lost in it when I do. I many chapters already done. My stories were deleted from FanFiction because the highest rating they have is M (16 years and younger). I was heart broken when they did and I lost my Mojo for a little while. LOL! But I am back now!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I will keep posting as long as someone wants to read me!!!!!!!!!!!! I just all school girl giddy when I know that it is enjoyed.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


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PS Thank you I think Emmett is just a fine piece of vampire.


PSS You can contact me anytime. I love reader interaction and would love to hear from you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


Thank you sooooooo much for reading me and sending me coffe cups!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!




 

Reviewer: inlovewithSethPaulJasper Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2012 6:21 AM Title: Chapter 1

Mama Bird. Did u get my pm's on yahoo or ffn? Also how do u post a story on here? I have no idea how to do all that.

Let me know what to do please. Lol!



Author's Response:

I still do not know HOW YOU ARE PM from here!!!!!!!!!!!


I have a meeting this morning and I will be on this afternoon and I will help you!!!!


LOVE YA

MAMA BIRD

XOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXO

Reviewer: inlovewithSethPaulJasper Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2012 5:38 AM Title: Chapter 13

OMG!!!!!! M AMMA BIRD!!! I FU**ING LOVE IT. 

I need more pleaseeeeeee!! 

I can't beleive how HOT AND SEXY EMMETT WAS IN THIS CHAPTER!! 

Auntie Bird is going to love you!!

BELLA BETTER SAY YES!! YES!! YES!! to Carlisle. 

I need more Mamma Bird, pleaseee. LOVE YOU XOXOXOXOXOXO

P.S you never did pm me. and what site were u going to pm me on? Yahoo, or Fan Fu**tion? let me know please. 



Author's Response:

Hey kid!!!!

Did you really think that Emmett was hot???? I was thinking that I did not do enough for him!!!!

I am trying to make it up to Auntie bird ****cough cough****

She did send me something today but I have not read it yet. I wanted to get this chapter posted tonight.

Are you posting to this site yet???????????????

I do not know how to PM here!!!!!!

Mama Bird Loves YA!!!!!!!!!!!!!

XOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXO

Reviewer: analitica1234 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2012 4:06 AM Title: Chapter 13

I loved the chapter! This is getting so good that it's becoming addicting. I DEFINITELY NEED MORE ASAP. I cannot wait to see how everything is gonna be.

Author's Response:

Hey Sunshine Girl!

I will be posting another chapter tomarrow.

I am sooooo glad that you like it!!!!!!

Hell I might post two chapter tomarrow.

Your such a sweetie!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Thank you soooo much!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: ALewis Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2012 3:40 AM Title: Chapter 1

Love this story can't wait til it's up to date.

Author's Response:

Thank you for coming over here to read me. It really means alot to me!!!!

This story is up to date with Fanfiction because of the two chapter authors note chapters that I posted.

I am going to post the next one today or tomarrow. I will be posting it here first. It will be new!!!!

I still have not made up my mind about posting to FanFic. I know that are just going to delete it anyways.

Thank you sooooo much for reading me!!!!!!

 

 

 

Reviewer: coolbikermama Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2012 2:01 AM Title: Chapter 12

What the hell PG11. You had my boy shot.  I had not read this chapter until now.

I am just kidding. But he better get better so that he can have some hot Bella loving toooo!!!!

I am still waiting for my Jackson threesome story!!!!!

 

Love ya sister!!!!!!

 



Author's Response:

I know that your upset that Jackson got shot! But you know he is a fighter.

I am considering a little trist with them all but read the next chapter first!!!!

Love ya sister!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: fanette Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2012 1:49 AM Title: Chapter 12

Wow it's getting crazy! I hope jaxs is ok! I hate that he has a broken heart and now he is shot, poor guy. I wish there was two Bella's so they would both be happy, or maybe they could learn to share her! That would be YUMMY! Love it, more please!!!!,



Author's Response:

It is a little crazy now but wait until you see what I have planned over the next few chapters.

I think that if there were two Bella it would be easier. But I know that I would love to be Bella in this story and get Jaxs and Emmett. Hell I would be excited to just have one of those hotties!!!!

If I thought that I could pull off a Bella, Jaxs and Emmett loven time I would do it. Yes yummy is a good word for that LOL! But who knows, I might have to do that before this story is over ***wink***

I will be posting another chapter or two tomorrow,

Thank you so much for reading me!!!!!! I love getting the coffe cups, it makes my day!!!!!!

Reviewer: crystanroten Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2012 12:38 AM Title: Chapter 12

holy shit!!! ok so rose is a bitch nothing new there lol poor jax he loves her and she is killing him by still going with emmett. maybe jax getting shot will help move her along back to him!



Author's Response:

Holy shit is right. But I think that you will be saying that over the next few chapters too.

Yeah Rose is kind of always a bitch LOL! Except when I wrote her in MY JOURNEY and she is the fun one.

You are so wise. Bella will walk beside Jaxs just like she promised too.

Over the next few chapters you will see how vampires and bikers really are not that differnt.

I am posting another chapter or two tomorrow.

Thank you for reading me!!!!!!!

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2012 12:34 AM Title: Chapter 12

Well I am for changing MS Bella so she can kick Rose's ass all by herself.  I think that Esme and Carlisle should stop that from going on in their family.  If everyone disowned Rose she would not have an audiance for her bitching.

 

Poor Jax, lost his "Old Lady" and got shot all in one day.  My husband has tried to call me that, I said... SAY WHAT?   Don't call me that !  I may be old and a lady but don't combine them.  LOL



Author's Response:

Over the next couple of chapters you will see Ms Rose being put in her place along with Edward in the family.

Poor Jaxs the boy just can't seem to catch a break.

That is cute, I will have to remember that one. My husband is a construction worker and he lets the old lady slip once in a while. I will have to use that on him LOL!

I will be posting again tomorrow.

Thank you for reading me!!!!

Reviewer: analitica1234 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2012 12:23 AM Title: Chapter 12

Wow this is getting so intense! I hope jaxs gets better. Please update soon I NEED MORE!!!

Author's Response:

Hey My Sunshine Girl!!!!

It will be getting more intense over the next few chapters. Wait until you see what I have planned!!!!!

Jaxs is a strong boy and I am sure with Ms Bella by his side he can do anything.

I will be posting another chapter or two tomorrow.

Your such a sweetie!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2012 8:28 PM Title: Chapter 11

Well, girl friend I love how Bella told Edward off.  LOVED IT.  Now I am concerned for her bed hopping.  Time in between would be better.  She is still young.  Jax did love her but that life was not good for her, or Able.  so I said it.

Edward is too self centered. Product of being raised elite and then being closed off as a vampire.  Go find Tanya she will make you worldly Ed.

Emmett  and Jasper are more regular guys.

 

 



Author's Response:

I have always thought Edward was kind of controlling of Bella. I agree that he is very self centered and thinks that he is above eveyone else.

I have always loved Jasper and Emmett.


Thank you for reading me and I am posting the next chapter that will have the drama queen, Rosalie. I hope that you enjoy!!

 

Reviewer: coolbikermama Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2012 4:36 PM Title: Chapter 11

I just wanted to high five Emmett and give Jackson a big hug. But I expect to see some hot Jackson loveing going like like you did for Emmett!!!!

Reviewer: coolbikermama Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2012 4:34 PM Title: Chapter 10

Awesome chapter sweetie. It makes me sad for Jackson.

Reviewer: coolbikermama Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2012 4:26 PM Title: Chapter 9

Clear that tabel for me Jaxs. Just do it!!!!!!

Reviewer: coolbikermama Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2012 4:25 PM Title: Chapter 8

You can keep writing more hot Jackson stories!!!!!

Reviewer: coolbikermama Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2012 4:23 PM Title: Chapter 7

You know my vote. Jackson could ride me like a harley anytime!!!!!

I love ya sister.

Reviewer: coolbikermama Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2012 4:22 PM Title: Chapter 6

I keep reading and falling more in love with this story each chapter.

Reviewer: coolbikermama Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2012 4:21 PM Title: Chapter 5

I still am in love with Jackson but I have a kindenss for Emmett now!!!!

Reviewer: secret lover of him Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2012 4:08 PM Title: Chapter 11

I love love love this story i am so hooked on it... But i would love for bella to be with Jax...Please keep writing....

x stephie



Author's Response:

It always makes me giddy when someone wants to keep reading me!!!!!!!

Do not count out our hot bad boy outlaw yet ****wink****

I am going to post another chapter today. I hope that you enjoy it!!!!!

Thank you soooo much for reading me!!!!!!!!

 

Reviewer: crystanroten Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2012 4:00 PM Title: Chapter 11

damn. damn damn lol bella girl you have some choices to make! ugh hate that she was with emmett but i get why. ready to see what happends next!!



Author's Response:

You are tooo cute. Jackson is far from being done with our Bella. That hot bad boy outlaw just never knows when to quit!!!!

I am posting another chapter today. I love that you want to keep reading me!!!!!!

 

Reviewer: fanette Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2012 3:31 PM Title: Chapter 11

Awwww see Emmett is soooooo good for her! But poor jaxs, I want him to be happy too! Great job. 



Author's Response:

I see Emmett as the sweet and romantic one. Jackson is that bad boy that you cannot help but to love too.

I am posting another chapter after I post to my other stories.

Thank you soooo much for reading me and sending me coffee cups!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: giannakylie Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2012 2:42 PM Title: Chapter 11

I have fallen in love with your story! I love jaxs!!! I hope everything works out for those two!



Author's Response:

That is soooo sweet. Jackson will be sad for a chapter ot two but his bad boy outlaw self will shine again.

I am posting another chapter today after I post to my other stories.

Thank you sooooo much for reading me!!!!!!!

Reviewer: analitica1234 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2012 2:21 PM Title: Chapter 11

Omg this is gonna get so good!!! I love bella and emmett's interaction. Please update soon I REALLY NEED MORE ASAP. You're an amazing writer!



Author's Response:

I am going to start calling you my sunshine girl!!! Since all of my stories were deleted by FanFic I lost some of my Mojo LOL!!!! They are deleting all stories that contain cuss word, sex and violence.

Well that is everything that I write. Their highest rating is M (for 16 and younger) I have only been writing for 3 months and was really nervious about posting my stories here.

I cannot thank you enough for telling me that you like my story!!!!!!

I am posting another chapter today!!!!! I hope that you enjoy it!!!!

Reviewer: mymonkeyman12 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2012 2:16 PM Title: Chapter 11

This is of course my favorite chapter. Emmett is so romantic and loving.

Love the steamy lemon. Will you do another one for me????

 

Love ya sister.



Author's Response:

Darlin I am going to send you the most hot vampire Emmett loven lemon that I can.


I love you sooooo much!!

Reviewer: mymonkeyman12 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2012 2:14 PM Title: Chapter 10

I would love to have a picture of ne kissing Emmett. I do not know why everyone is getting so upset LOL!

I am still loving this story!

Love ya back sister!

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2012 11:59 AM Title: Chapter 10

Oh my. Well this will help her to split.  This situation with Jax is hard for her.  After Edward she has trust issues and now she has to break his heart.  Well pack up girl you are leaving.



Author's Response:

I am posting the next chapter today. I love it when someone wants to read me. I hope you enjoy our romantic boy in it. Yes it is going to be hard on Bella with the problems that she has had with Edward.

Thank you soooo much for reading me and making me feel welcomed here!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: inlovewithSethPaulJasper Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2012 3:58 AM Title: Chapter 9

God I just love this story and CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE! Love ya Mamma Bird XOXOXOX 

Keep up the wonderful job. 

Reviewer: crystanroten Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2012 3:33 AM Title: Chapter 10

ohh damnnnnn!!!! bella girl get it together! and why are peter and char there whats gonna happen....but poor jax getting a picture like that. bellla needs to choose soon.



Author's Response:

There will still be many things happening in this story. Yes Jackson will be sad for a couple of chapters. But then his bad boy self will shine!!!!

I love reader interaction and I am posting another chapter today for those that really want to read this story. You of course are one of them and I LOVE IT!!!!!

I hope that you enjoy it!!!! Thank you sweetie for making my day!!!!!!!

Reviewer: crystanroten Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2012 3:25 AM Title: Chapter 9

first huge thank you for the post just for me!!!!  loved it as usual. poor jax and bella damn they must all be so confused. and oh shit edward coming now hope he doesnt start trouble! 



Author's Response:

A HUGE thank you for reading me. This is not my most popular story. But I love to write it. When I am in the zone on this story I could write 10,000 word a chapter so easy. But I have to tell myself to stop.

Edward is always trouble LOL!!!! I am very curious as to what you will think of the next couple of chapter that I post.

I still have many surprises for this story and hope that you enjoy it.


Thank you sooooo much for making me feel welcomed here!!!!!!!  Also sending me coffee cups makes my day!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: fanette Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2012 2:35 AM Title: Chapter 8

Hi. Just read your story, and it's real good!  I have never seen soa, so I am a little lost on some things but not enough not to love your story. Poor Emmett, I would love to see Bella and him together. But I like jaxs too! 



Author's Response:

That is so sweet of you. I really like it when someone is ejoying my story.

Thank you sooooo much for reading me!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Also thank you for sending me coffee cups!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 

Reviewer: inlovewithSethPaulJasper Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2012 2:31 AM Title: Chapter 10

Oh you know I love this story on top of your other 2 stories as well, Mamma Bird. 

I can't wait to read were you left off at on FANFUCKTION.ASSHOLES.NET!! That is my new name for that site. 

They are nothing but a bunch of Stuck up MOTHERFU**ERS! 

Love ya, XOXOXOXO



Author's Response:

You crack me up kid!!! Autie Bird has been on and off of here today. I think in my next update that is what I will call Fanfic. The will delete me for sure then LOL!

I have been trying to keep up with both sites and all the PMs but I am falling behind! I can't wait until your over here too!!!!

Mama Bird out!!!

LOVE YA!!!!!! XOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXO

 

Reviewer: mymonkeyman12 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2012 10:19 PM Title: Chapter 9

Emmett saved her. he could save me anytime!!!!!

Reviewer: analitica1234 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2012 10:18 PM Title: Chapter 9

Thank you so much for the chapter! I have to say this is getting better and better. I really cannot wait to see how everything develops when Edward comes. Loved it and cannot wait to see what you have next!

Author's Response:

You are like the sunshine of my story. I am going to post another chapter for you!!!!!!

Edward to me has that way of kind of runing everything when he is around. Things are going to really start geting complicated for Jackson and Bella in the next couple of chapters. But stay with me ****wink****

I love writing this story. This was never my most popular story but it is my favorite. When I write it I am so in the zone that I have to keep reminding myself to find a place to stop each chapter.

Thank you sooooo much for reading me!!!!!! You have made me feel welcomed here and that means alot to me!!!!! I will post as soon as post to my other stories.

 

 

Reviewer: mymonkeyman12 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2012 10:17 PM Title: Chapter 8

This is one of my favorite chapters!!!!!!

Emmett shirtless is great. Oh where did you get that picture of him??????

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Date: 17 Jun 2012 10:16 PM Title: Chapter 7

EMMETT EMMETT EMMETT EMMETT  I would choose Emmett

Love ya too!!!!!

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Date: 17 Jun 2012 10:15 PM Title: Chapter 6

We love you too. That is why I am here on this site. They deleted four more of the stories that I read!

Awesome chapter and I can't wait until everyone is over here in one place.

Reviewer: mymonkeyman12 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2012 10:13 PM Title: Chapter 5

You know if I was Bella that I would have jumped Emmett right there!!!

I love this story have been reading it again!!!

 

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2012 9:49 PM Title: Chapter 9

oh crap.. Edward



Author's Response:

I think that is how we all feel about Edward, oh crap. He really knows how to ruin a good time LOL!

Thank you sooooo much for reading me!!!!!

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2012 9:45 PM Title: Chapter 8

YEA>>. now get her the hell out of this bike club.



Author's Response:

I think that you will enjoy chapter 11 and 12. I will be posting again today. I see Emmett as the sweet and romantic one!

Thank you soo much for reading me!!!!!!!

Reviewer: crystanroten Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2012 9:11 PM Title: Chapter 8

ohh wow first what a hott lemon...and are you going to have bella get some kind of tattoo showing she belongs to jax? like a crow or something or jaxs name..that would be hott. and wow she is clays daughter hmm and wow emmett kissed her ugh hope she doesnt get confused and have a love triangle type thing and just tells him no and goes home to jax. i mena she did just promise to walk by his side from now on....cant wait for more!!!



Author's Response:

I am glad that you enjoyed the lemon fluff. Bella will be getting that tatt before this story is over. Just remember that this story is still far from being over. I am posting the next chapter after I post to my other stories on here.

I am curious as to what your response will be to the next chapter. Bella will walk beside Jackson just like she promised too. Like I said if you read all of the story I do not think that you will be disapointed!!! But that does not mean that you won't be surprised from time to time.

Thank you sooooo much for reading me!!!!!!!!

 

Reviewer: crystanroten Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2012 9:02 PM Title: Chapter 7

well u7 know who i am allll for JAX!!! lol poor bella man she needs to give tara a beat down for real!



Author's Response:

I know that you are a Jackson girl. So am I . I see Emmett and Jackson both as good but they are completely differnt.

Thank you soo much for reading me and send me coffee cups!!!!

I cannot tell you how you make my day by reading me!!!

 

Reviewer: analitica1234 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2012 7:59 PM Title: Chapter 1

Omg I would really love it if you would post the next chapter, it would definitively make my day.

Author's Response:

You are soooo making my day!!!! I am posting to my other stories and if you will give me about 15 minutes I will post the next chapter for you!!!!!!

Thank you sooooo much for reading me and sending me coffee cups!!!!

 

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2012 5:33 PM Title: Chapter 7

I really don't know anything about the biker people. All I can say is Bella would be so much better off with Emmett. Get away from the biker gang.



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading me. I love Emmett too!!!!!

Reviewer: 19casey94 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2012 4:36 AM Title: Chapter 3

I want her and Jax!!!!! Is this really Bella & Emmet??



Author's Response:

This story is not even a 1/4 of the way over yet. You will have many surprises in this story. There are still many things and events that will evolve around Bella, Jaxs and Emmett. Things will get complicated for a while for Jaxs and Bella due to all of the Cullens that end up coming into their life.

But you will not be disapointed in the end I promise ***wink***. If you would like me to go ahead and post chapter 8 let me know. Thank you soooo much for reading me!!!!!!!

Reviewer: analitica1234 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2012 3:00 AM Title: Chapter 7

This is so freaking awesome! I need more asap please update soon.

Author's Response:

That is so sweet. I truly love it when reading my stories is enjoyed. I can post chapter 8 if you would like???? Please let me know. Thank you soooo much for reading me and my coffee cups!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: crystanroten Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2012 8:13 PM Title: Chapter 6

loved it!! glad emmett and bella seem to be just friedns and that she loves jax. hmm renee is back what was up with her and clay ...she really doesnt like the club does she....cant wait to find out!!



Author's Response:

You have just made me sooo happy. I am posting chapter 7 but it maybe a few days before I post anymore. Things will get a little complicated for Jaxs and Bella but true love always will prevails ****wink**** Thank you for reading me!!!!

Reviewer: crystanroten Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2012 5:54 PM Title: Chapter 5

loved how long this chap was!! cant wait for more!!!



Author's Response:

You are such a sweetie. The next one is almost as long. If I do not post today, I will tomarrow. Thank you for reading me!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: coolbikermama Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2012 4:00 PM Title: Chapter 4

Love you PG11 and I will follow where ever you go to read you!

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Date: 16 Jun 2012 3:58 PM Title: Chapter 3

This is onr of my fav chapters.

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Date: 16 Jun 2012 3:58 PM Title: Chapter 2

I love this story so much. I hope you continue writing

Reviewer: coolbikermama Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2012 3:55 PM Title: Chapter 1

The pictures of Jaxs is yummy.

Reviewer: crystanroten Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2012 1:43 PM Title: Chapter 1

ah ha!!! yesss!!!



Author's Response:

You are bringing a huge smile to my face and making my day!!!!!!!!! Thank you sooooooo much for reading me!!!!!!!!! I will be posting chapter 5 just for you today!!!!!!! Also thank you my coffee cups!!!!!

Reviewer: crystanroten Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2012 11:27 AM Title: Chapter 4

loved bad ass bella. but why do i get the feeling emmett is going to come between jax and bella..ugh i hope not i want bella and jax to stay together!!!



Author's Response:

This story has many twist, turns to it and surprises. I promise if you keep reading that you will not be disapointed ****wink**** Thank you for reading me!!!

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Date: 16 Jun 2012 5:31 AM Title: Chapter 4

My man is finally in here. He was Bella saviour!!!! I love Emmett.

Reviewer: shirleypositive72 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2012 1:15 AM Title: Chapter 3

YES! Update again. Soon!

Author's Response:

I just posted chapter 4. That is sweet of you that you like it. Thank you for reading me.

Reviewer: crystanroten Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2012 1:09 AM Title: Chapter 3

i am so in love with this story!!!!! i love soa ans love the'idea of jax ans bella!!! cant wait for more!!!!



Author's Response:

I just posted chapter 4 because I love when someone enjoys reading me. Thank you!!!!!

Reviewer: mymonkeyman12 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2012 7:23 PM Title: Chapter 3

That was funny when Bella tried to shoot Jaxs. I love this story.

Reviewer: mymonkeyman12 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2012 5:14 PM Title: Chapter 2

It has been soo long since I read this. I forgot about how close Jaxs and Bella was. Love ya!

Reviewer: mymonkeyman12 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2012 5:13 PM Title: Chapter 1

I am here sister. I love you and Emmett too much to stay away for too long. Anywho I am rereading this story. I have a little spot in my heart for Jackson too.



Author's Response:

You are a trip sister. I posted that shirtless picture just for you!!!!!!!! I love you tooooo!

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