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Reviewer: heralder Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Dec 2020 6:10 AM Title: Chapter 30

I loved the story! Did Jasper and the family ever tell Bella that Edward lied and told them that she never wanted to see them ever again? Of course, it was always their own decision to leave without saying goodbye, but they were trying to respect her decision. It was false, but she should know.

Reviewer: LBD Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Apr 2017 12:45 AM Title: Chapter 30

I'll sound redundant but it can't be helped. This story was an incredible one and I love how original your plot was!!!! it made for a page turner I couldn't put down until it was finished!!!!!

I do hope you do a sequel and I will keep an eye out for it!!!!!

Thank you!!!!

Reviewer: Astred Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Sep 2016 10:32 PM Title: Chapter 30

Absolutely amazing story.  Read it all in one day.  LOVED IT! 

Reviewer: andrew_pine Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Feb 2016 5:06 AM Title: Chapter 14

Bella/Garrett would be nice.Bella/Peter also.

Reviewer: andrew_pine Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Feb 2016 1:11 AM Title: Chapter 8

It is hung out with them. she needs to get Jasper and Em toplay tug of war with Eddie and see which arm comes off first.don't hate me just trying to help you write better.;) kevin

Reviewer: zanath Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Oct 2015 4:11 AM Title: Chapter 6

You made a small error thatjust buggs me.  Hunters stand downwind from the pray they don't want to smell or hear them not upwind. Air is a fluid like water, think of it like a stream of water with two people standing in it.  Whatever the person up stream drops into the water, will flow down to the person down stream.  The same thing happens with a scent or sound carried on the wind.  I will now get off of my soapbox and say I like the chapter very much, THANKS!

Reviewer: Vampirelady13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Apr 2015 3:14 PM Title: Chapter 11

I was going to wait till the end of this story for my review but i read yoour rant. I think you are doing a fine job so far. Thank you

Reviewer: Dutchess Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2015 12:12 PM Title: Chapter 30

What a good story. I love all things J/B. Thanks for sharing, I'm so glad I found it complete. I hope we do get the sequel, I will enjoy as well as your first two stories... I am now a fan.

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2013 1:33 PM Title: Chapter 15

Interesting

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2013 1:27 PM Title: Chapter 14

What is up with Cassie?

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2013 1:22 PM Title: Chapter 13

Not sure...

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2013 1:17 PM Title: Chapter 12

Love Peter....

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2013 12:55 PM Title: Chapter 11

How terrible for Bella!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2013 12:49 PM Title: Chapter 10

Give it to her Bella!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2013 12:42 PM Title: Chapter 9

And so  the drama begins!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2013 12:35 PM Title: Chapter 8

Love Peter 

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2013 12:29 PM Title: Chapter 7

Oh boy...can't  wait for the talk

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2013 4:47 AM Title: Chapter 6

Ed the douche bag!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2013 4:41 AM Title: Chapter 5

I <3 jasper

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2013 4:36 AM Title: Chapter 4

Fast divorce!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2013 4:31 AM Title: Chapter 3

Oookay...who did esme cheat with?

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2013 4:27 AM Title: Chapter 2

Like your Bella!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2013 4:23 AM Title: Chapter 1

Interesting...

Reviewer: loventherussian17 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Feb 2013 4:47 AM Title: Chapter 30

Love it

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jan 2013 3:17 AM Title: Chapter 30

Marvelous!  By the way, I thought the end very fitting.  It ends, so to speak, at the beginning.  I'm looking forward to a sequel - no matter how long between.  Thank you for all the hard work you put in here.  It always showed.  Bravo!

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jan 2013 5:16 AM Title: Chapter 30

LOVED IT!!! :) excited for the sequel when you post it! :)

 

-Kate

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jan 2013 9:48 PM Title: Chapter 30

Glad E and Anna got what was coming to them

 

TY for writing and sharing.

ty

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jan 2013 11:28 AM Title: Chapter 30

Looking forward to the sequel

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jan 2013 4:34 AM Title: Chapter 29

I do love this Bella.  She is sure and firm in her actions.  Her relationship with Jasper is marvelous - and just what he needs to keep him on his toes.  I loved this piece and look forward to the epi!

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jan 2013 10:49 PM Title: Chapter 29

Looking forward to more 

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jan 2013 6:04 PM Title: Chapter 29

Cant wait to see what happens to Fuckward by the V.    Yey for mini lemon

Reviewer: denali1918 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jan 2013 1:44 PM Title: Chapter 29

Add if jasper changes Bella and what happens to Eddie and the othe girl and Bella cuzin 

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2013 9:45 PM Title: Chapter 28

Love the "improved Bella" so much.  She is strong, sure of herself and her guy and she is determined.  Nice touch with the tracking device!  I'm looking forward to Edward getting his butt kicked!

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2013 6:40 PM Title: Chapter 28

Great chapter!! Looking forward to all these new stories!!

 

-Kate

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2013 5:19 AM Title: Chapter 28

looking forward to more

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2013 5:17 AM Title: Chapter 28

Cassie is bad ass.   Hope Rose doesnt try to do something stupid.    Hmmm which make is at Calvin's location.  His mom really is a delusional bitch.

OOOOh Fight Fight Fight.  Cant wait.

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Dec 2012 12:22 PM Title: Chapter 27

Go Cassie!  Nice,very nice.  This Bella is not the old one Edward is used to.  She has grown, matured, and is not that girl anymore.  She also has Jasper.  Loving it!

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Dec 2012 2:57 AM Title: Chapter 27

looking forward to more 

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Dec 2012 12:27 AM Title: Chapter 27

B is being smart.  Gotta love Cassie for the tracking device.

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Dec 2012 11:49 PM Title: Chapter 27

LOVED IT... hopefully they find her quickly! :)

 

-Kate

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2012 10:37 PM Title: Chapter 26

Excellent chapter with a great ending!  God help Edward when Jasper catches up to him!

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2012 4:45 AM Title: Chapter 26

looking forward to more 

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2012 4:31 AM Title: Chapter 26

oh grandma needs to die along with Fuckward and Colin.

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2012 1:42 AM Title: Chapter 26

uh oh! 

 

-Kate

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2012 6:40 PM Title: Chapter 25

I knew she'd forgive Emmett, but I think Rosalie is about to meet a new Bella Swan!  Edward just can't seem to stay away from Bella's family.  Great chapter!

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Dec 2012 12:55 AM Title: Chapter 25

looking forward to more

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Dec 2012 7:56 PM Title: Chapter 25

glad Cas took it well.    Rose is sooooo annoying.

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Dec 2012 3:41 PM Title: Chapter 25

Great chapter! Can't wait to read the next one! :)

 

-Kate

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Nov 2012 7:57 PM Title: Chapter 24

Great chapter... can't wait to see Cassie's reaction to everything and see what happens with Edward and Ashley and Anna! :)

 

-Kate

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Nov 2012 6:27 PM Title: Chapter 24

Marvelous stuff.  I can't see Cassie being upset at Bella - her Dad maybe a bit - but not Bella.  She was in a difficult situation and survived how she needed to.  Also, her bond with Carlisle is bound to flavor things.  A detail I love in here is that Jasper cooks for Bella.  It screams his love and concern in a loud, unmistakable voice.  Edward's involvement here is a puzzle I'm looking forward to figuring out.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Nov 2012 5:30 PM Title: Chapter 24

oooh Eddie involved with Anna huh?  hmmm so not good.

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Nov 2012 11:44 AM Title: Chapter 24

looking forward to mroe 

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2012 12:24 AM Title: Chapter 23

Love the Major...and the whole chapter!  More please?!

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Nov 2012 4:07 PM Title: Chapter 23

Great chapter!! Can't wait to read more!

 

-Kate

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Nov 2012 5:44 PM Title: Chapter 23

looking forward to more 

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Nov 2012 4:12 PM Title: Chapter 23

oooh yummy claiming time.

Reviewer: denali1918 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Nov 2012 12:48 PM Title: Chapter 23

love keep it up have a good day 

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2012 2:07 AM Title: Chapter 22

hmm  Time for Eddie to die...

Reviewer: denali1918 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Nov 2012 10:54 AM Title: Chapter 22

i love the story sorry i am more of the reading not reviewing type

Reviewer: genuinef250 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Nov 2012 9:39 AM Title: Chapter 22

:-). Is this Collin Bella spoke to the same Collin in Edwards pov?  So that would make him her cousin?



Author's Response:

Oops typo lol it should be Calvin. I'll go fix it. Collin is the friend with benefits Bella had at the beginning if the story. Thanks for reading and reviewing :)

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Nov 2012 5:26 AM Title: Chapter 22

Great chapter!!! Can't wait to read more! :) With Esme, who I am gonna guess that her mate is maybe Marcus? and then with Edward!

 

-Kate

Reviewer: ded Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Nov 2012 3:07 AM Title: Chapter 22

thankyou for updating. i enjoy your writing.

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Nov 2012 2:53 AM Title: Chapter 22

looking forward to more 

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Oct 2012 5:10 AM Title: Chapter 21

yummy beginning.

dl

 

poor calvin and kids

dl

dl

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Oct 2012 3:12 AM Title: Chapter 21

Great chapter.... poor kids :( that just breaks my heart... hopefully they can not only get him full custody, but get her some jail time for child abuse.

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Oct 2012 1:30 AM Title: Chapter 21

looking forward to more 

Reviewer: denali1918 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Oct 2012 12:02 AM Title: Chapter 21

i love your story and head up short or long to me is good as long as it not month before a update or any notes as to why no update thow type of story get me a bit upset 

 

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2012 2:20 PM Title: Chapter 20

You have a good story. The chapters are short but then that is fine. I hope you are good at updating. Of course Garrett wanted her for a mate. Beauty, smart and sweet who would not?  Edward.  Well that little guy is still to be sorted out.

 

Jasper made his status clear so Yippie.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2012 8:45 AM Title: Chapter 14

thank you for no Jake. I wont say I can not stand him. I am just not really into wolves.  It seems to me Edward and Alice played a bad game and were trying to kill off Bella.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2012 8:16 AM Title: Chapter 10

Perfect so far..

 

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2012 7:38 AM Title: Chapter 6

Punish Eddie. Well isn't prudish Eddie spending eternity with Tanya the Ho of the vampire fandom enough? LOL

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2012 7:32 AM Title: Chapter 5

:-)

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2012 7:22 AM Title: Chapter 2

YEA your breakup scene was perfect. Rewrite New Moon..

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2012 4:09 AM Title: Chapter 20

ha ha  garrett got put into his place!!!

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Oct 2012 12:19 AM Title: Chapter 20

Great chapter! Loved how she saw through Garrett's plan :) Can't wait to read more!

-Kate

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2012 11:32 PM Title: Chapter 20

looking forward to more 

Reviewer: OposKneg Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Oct 2012 9:11 PM Title: Chapter 19

Why there might be a fight, and Garrett and Caius would lose their heads... ha ha

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Oct 2012 1:55 PM Title: Chapter 19

Oh, Jasper will take tis well...not!!  This should be interesting!  

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2012 5:35 AM Title: Chapter 19

hmmm wonder who's idea it was?  Garrett's I bet.  Naughty Naughty.



Author's Response:

Thanks for all the lovely reviews and thanks for reading... I'll ask my beta is she has a page here if she doesnt then she at the other site, I post there too.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2012 5:31 AM Title: Chapter 18

ah so it was Garrett huh?   Thats cool  Oooh she's met the V too in person.  Interesting twist.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2012 5:27 AM Title: Chapter 17

Thinking now that the original Jenks vamp was one of the V brothers.  Hmm now what is Garrett up to.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2012 5:23 AM Title: Chapter 16

glad they talked and set some things straight between them

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2012 5:19 AM Title: Chapter 15

ROFL for your disclaimer note.  

 

I think Cassie probably already knows.   Think she snooped in Daddy's stuff and found out.   Ah well.   Hope she gets better soon now that she has Dr Hottie.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2012 5:14 AM Title: Chapter 14

glad Peter decided to tell her.  Aww poor Cas

Reviewer: theladykt Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2012 5:10 AM Title: Chapter 13

hmmm the original vamp was probably one of the V maybe?   Or was is Carlisle?  ah well

Tried to look up your Beta but she doesnt seem to be on the site with that name.  And I dont read on the "site that shall not be named" anymore.   Too much censorship and bullying going on.  TY for posting here.  I'm enjoying it.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2012 5:04 AM Title: Chapter 12

I LOVE peter's relationship to B.  Malice is evil.  She knew what Fuckward did I bet.  And I wonder if Esme wasnt in on it too

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Oct 2012 9:12 PM Title: Chapter 11

Ooh Victoria is playing games...id go nuts too

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Oct 2012 8:38 PM Title: Chapter 10

Abso LOVE her standing up for herself. Peter and char are the best.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Oct 2012 8:37 PM Title: Chapter 9

Rose needs to worry about rose. Love em. Cant wait to see what they all come up with as revenge on Eddie.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Oct 2012 8:15 PM Title: Chapter 8

Love Peter. Glad she is not being a doormat.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Oct 2012 7:50 PM Title: Chapter 7

Glad they got to talk a little

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Oct 2012 7:33 PM Title: Chapter 6

Glad b still likes em. Lol for tub time. Yeah Eddie needs to pay.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Oct 2012 7:20 PM Title: Chapter 5

Fuckward and skankya deserve each other. Oh lying Eddie, its gonna come back to bite you.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Oct 2012 6:53 PM Title: Chapter 4

Ah b is doing Colin huh? That's gonna go over well with Jazz.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Oct 2012 6:46 PM Title: Chapter 3

Good chapter. Ah Eddie lied about the dumping huh? Not a surprise.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Oct 2012 6:42 PM Title: Chapter 2

I love this more bad ass bella. No wolves to protect Charlie?

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Oct 2012 6:34 PM Title: Chapter 1

Interesting start. Cant wait to see how it goes.

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Oct 2012 3:56 PM Title: Chapter 19

loooking forward to mroe 

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Oct 2012 1:35 AM Title: Chapter 19

oh! LOVE IT!!! ;)

 

Can't wait to read more!

 

-Kate

Reviewer: Edwards_Love_101 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Oct 2012 9:42 PM Title: Chapter 18

I am seriously hooked on this story...please tell me you're going to update soon. I love it! Thank you sooooo much for sharing. I look forward to reading more, until then, Take Care,

~ Helen.

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