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Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2012 5:56 PM Title: Chapter 11

OMGosh can I just say I love Jason and Gail....I was so anxious for this chapter and what dear Jason was thinking about Dr G's arrival that morning...OMG that was hiliarious....he is so freak'n cute Big bad Marine's can be intimated into a different sort of submission, Yes!!!!   Poor horror for Gail with those sheets, can't wait as the drama of Ana and Christian really heat up, from this point...oh this is good...



Author's Response:

Thanks, Twifan. Taylor is really fun to write - but he has a few weak spots! Heh heh!

Reviewer: MDtwiwriter Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 25 Jun 2012 9:23 PM Title: Chapter 10

I always wondered how Taylor did the things he did at a moments notice.  I have now idea how much he is paid but he is worth every penny.

Reviewer: Curious12 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jun 2012 4:13 PM Title: Chapter 10

It's great to get inside Taylor's head. You are doing an awesome job! You have some pretty funny lines that keep me smiling throughout the chapter. Can't wait for more :)

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Jun 2012 3:40 PM Title: Chapter 10

C'est un bon chapitre.

J'aime beaucoup cette fiction.

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Jun 2012 9:27 PM Title: Chapter 10

Loving this...

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Jun 2012 9:01 PM Title: Chapter 10

Taylor's thoughts are hilarious and he is just as sexually frustrated it would seem, having to cancel out on his and Gail's date....Poor dude....I hope you carry thus on for sometime....very good...

Reviewer: ahamalainen Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jun 2012 6:00 PM Title: Chapter 1

Having fun, sort of, chasing you over the net for my next 'fix'! Enjoying it immensley! Thank you for your talent and taking the time and effort to create these stories.

Reviewer: Spancer Signed starstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Jun 2012 4:47 PM Title: Chapter 10

Wow you are great writer . Really it's so capturing.please continue soon.

Reviewer: canyaceme Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jun 2012 1:51 PM Title: Chapter 1

Wow!  Taylor's view!  This is going to be exciting to see his POV of Christian and Anastasia.  Thanks for sharing it!

Reviewer: nincyh Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jun 2012 3:12 AM Title: Chapter 1

What an enjoyable read! Keep going!

Reviewer: MDtwiwriter Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2012 5:56 AM Title: Chapter 6

I like Mrs. Jones.  I'm not sure I would have stayed.  Christian is a lot to take in.

Reviewer: MDtwiwriter Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2012 5:10 AM Title: Chapter 4

Mia is funny!  The fact that she flirts with Taylor is hilarious.  I absolutely HATE Mrs. Lincoln...enough said.  Taylor is very smart.  I don't know how he keeps a neutral face with some othe things he is discovering.

Reviewer: MDtwiwriter Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2012 4:45 AM Title: Chapter 3

When you think about it this must be a lot to take in...and at 23. Wow.  I can't tell if Taylor is impressed or just shocked.  Probably both.  But Christian seems kind.



Author's Response:

No wonder Christian is so emotionally at sea - it's just work, work, work with him. That's his coping mechanism for life.

Reviewer: MDtwiwriter Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2012 4:21 AM Title: Chapter 2

I sort of stumbled on to this story.  Of course I've read the trilogy and MOTU, so I wasn't sure what I would find in this story.  It is really, really good.  I don't know why I never considered what Taylor would think of Christian and his life style.  You seem to have captured the feel of those characters.  I look forward to reading more.

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2012 10:32 PM Title: Chapter 9

Bonjour !

J'aime beaucoup cette fiction  !

La rencontre de Christian et Anastasia.

Taylor est très amusant.

Merci.

Reviewer: Curious12 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2012 6:57 PM Title: Chapter 1

Wow, you have me hooked with the first chapter! This is GREAT. I will read fast so I can catch up with your current chapter and read and review as you post. :)

Reviewer: Darcygirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2012 10:38 AM Title: Chapter 9

Loved reading the events from Taylor's POV, hope this carrys on.

Reviewer: drasticdee Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2012 9:15 PM Title: Chapter 1

very good

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2012 7:17 PM Title: Chapter 9

this is so very good...please keep going!!!

Reviewer: FunFish2222 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2012 5:42 PM Title: Chapter 9

Loving this! Can't wait for next update!

Reviewer: Jamoca Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2012 4:14 PM Title: Chapter 1

Another fill of Taylor's POV....enjoyed to the ma....i hate that i have to exercise delayed gratificaiton......its almost unbearable to have to wait but for you sunandsurf i will.....only for you!...lol!

Reviewer: Claire-CA Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2012 3:39 PM Title: Chapter 9

another great chapter!!!  I love your stories for Jason's POV!!  you have done an excellent job!!

Reviewer: lisalilac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2012 3:33 PM Title: Chapter 9

Keep writing on Taylor's POV. I love it!

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