Date: 21 May 2018 10:07 PM Title: Love you, Mean it.
Love your story and can't wait for the next chapter. Keep it going.
[Report This]Date: 15 Jul 2014 3:01 AM Title: Moving Day
Awe fantastic the best chapter!!!
[Report This]Date: 14 Jul 2014 4:01 AM Title: Coming Home Early
Oh surprises!!!
[Report This]Date: 14 Jul 2014 3:58 AM Title: Cranky in Seattle
Loved the emails!
[Report This]Date: 14 Jul 2014 3:45 AM Title: Love you, Mean it.
Reading again!!!!
[Report This]Date: 20 Apr 2014 6:12 AM Title: High School Ana
The Green Gealous Giant roars
[Report This]Date: 20 Apr 2014 3:04 AM Title: Yellow Trench Coat
So nice to see a plan well exicuted
Date: 20 Apr 2014 2:49 AM Title: Coming Home Early
Sneeky...sneeky Ana!
[Report This]Date: 20 Apr 2014 2:46 AM Title: Cranky in Seattle
Anna has learned some skills
Date: 20 Apr 2014 2:35 AM Title: Love you, Mean it.
So sweet!
[Report This]Date: 01 May 2013 3:27 PM Title: Love you, Mean it.
Love these chapters. Wish you write more. Thank you.
[Report This]Date: 25 Mar 2013 1:11 AM Title: Worst Week Ever
LOVE! LOVE! LOVE it!
[Report This]Date: 25 Mar 2013 12:31 AM Title: Love you, Mean it.
A new way for 'discussions' between spouces!
[Report This]Date: 25 Mar 2013 12:29 AM Title: Nolan Reed
Hilarious!
Date: 18 Feb 2013 11:41 AM Title: Love you, Mean it.
Awww, I think I'm going to like your writing. I found your penname from someone else's favorites.
Date: 12 Dec 2012 4:01 PM Title: Worst Week Ever
Wow. The six degrees of separation can be very cruel sometimes.
Date: 12 Dec 2012 1:38 PM Title: Nolan Reed
OMG! Nolan is as obnoxious as the real deal....gotta love it!
[Report This]Date: 25 Nov 2012 12:02 AM Title: Love you, Mean it.
out of all the other fanfiction of fifty shades, am loving this best, hope the rest of the chapters is as intresting as this, few typing error but awesome start :)
Date: 01 Oct 2012 3:05 AM Title: Nolan Reed
This is different take at FSOG, but it is hilarious. I laughed my but off... Absolutely loved it!
Date: 01 Oct 2012 2:23 AM Title: Cranky in Seattle
I'm glad to have found this story of yours on here being that I have read your other stories on fanfiction. You are a great writer and I enjoy reading your work. However, I'm annoyed that your Ana seems reluctant to tell Christian something that seems so minor compared to what he shared with her. After that scare with Hyde didnt they agree to be open and honest with each other by communicating better? Ana really need to get it together, she's the one making a big deal of this, if she want Christian to think its nothing.
[Report This]Date: 06 Sep 2012 10:11 AM Title: Worst Week Ever
hilarous chapter. looove it. ROTFL
Date: 28 Aug 2012 10:53 PM Title: Moving Day
Awesome story.. Please update soon
Date: 23 Aug 2012 11:13 PM Title: Moving Day
Excellent job!!
Date: 08 Aug 2012 6:27 AM Title: Love you, Mean it.
love this story. thank you for moving it to another site where we can still read it.
Date: 31 Jul 2012 1:48 AM Title: Moving Day
I'm a FSOG fanatic,read the original on FF. I enjoyed your interpretation very much. Really would have enjoyed a few mre chapters, at least up tp the birth.
Date: 26 Jul 2012 12:30 PM Title: Love you, Mean it.
I was oing to say to change up the way they sign their emails, but you started to do it...like Blssful Editor. Great start.
Date: 26 Jul 2012 6:56 AM Title: Love you, Mean it.
Grabbed me right from the beginning. Really like the reconciliation with Sawyer. That is one thing Mrs. James was lacking in the original story.
Date: 19 Jul 2012 12:47 AM Title: Nolan Reed
I love your style of writing. However, the only thing that I did find a little difficult was the historical differences in your story from the original. Ana tells Christian in the original FSOG that the Portland bar is her first time being drunk. She is referenced to have had "too much to drink" on several occasions after that throughout the trilogy. I found the explanation of this Carter Jenkins or whatever to be just too contrary to the original series and therefore not as believable. Other than that, I've really enjoyed everything I've read. As I said on FF to one of your FSOG stories, you are one of my favorite authors and I really find your Christian to be more believable than the original. The original FSOG Christian is way too formal and uses language that is much too stuffy for a typical American, even one that was educated at Harvard. I think the writing style really shows that E.L. James is british and not american. I really like your more Americanized Christian who speaks like the average person.
Author's Response:
Yeah.... this was my first FSOG fan fic so on 2nd look, I wasnt honestly fond of how the whole "Carter Jenkins" story line was written either lol. I tried to change it to have it make a little bit of sense but I guess it didnt really work. I was just over James making her out as this "boring" girl who didnt have much of a life before Christian Grey.... so I tried something different. The best laid plans! lol. But thank you so much for your eloquent review! It means a lot!
Date: 10 Jul 2012 12:27 PM Title: The Duke and Duchess of Cambridge
love it
Date: 10 Jul 2012 2:23 AM Title: Love you, Mean it.
like it!!!
[Report This]Date: 08 Jul 2012 8:26 PM Title: Love you, Mean it.
You're writing is good. It's hard to find authors who can really mimick the feel of a book, but you did a really good job of making it seem like it was Ana and Christian. Enjoying reading this! Keep it up.
Date: 08 Jul 2012 4:31 PM Title: Love you, Mean it.
Ooh, nice. Am sitting on the beach excited that I have many more chapters of this excellent read ahead of me today.
Thank you for providing me with reading pleasure!
Date: 03 Jul 2012 9:53 PM Title: Love you, Mean it.
I love this story already! I really enjoyed the fifty shades books and was so sorry when they were done. You have done a wonderful job continuing it. Can't wait to read more...
Date: 01 Jul 2012 4:21 AM Title: Love you, Mean it.
So happy to have found once again this story, too bad it took me so long to notice the change from fanfiction to here xP Keep on the good work with your stories
[Report This]Date: 28 Jun 2012 11:46 AM Title: Moving Day
I followed you of FF. I love your story! Are you going to continue it?
Date: 28 Jun 2012 5:25 AM Title: Moving Day
thanks for the fic it's fun to read and an interesting fill in of one of my favorite stories... it's interesting that this story has such an amazing following and is now being fictionated as it were...talk about coming full circle...
Hope you keep this fic going this story never can have enough about these 2 wonderful characters and the love they share!!!!!!
Date: 28 Jun 2012 12:37 AM Title: Mystery Party
Honey, it is obvious that you need a beta reader. I am very anal about reading stories containing spelling/grammatical errors. It distracts me from my enjoyment of the story. This chapter contained many errors, but aside from them, I am looking forward to more.
[Report This]Date: 28 Jun 2012 12:28 AM Title: Love you, Mean it.
I am SO glad that I have been led to this site. "Fifty Shades" is one of my top 5 fave novels of all time, and I am SO glad to find an author who has continued it. This is just my first chapter and somehow I am going to restrain myself from reading the whole kittenkaboodle, but so far..an excellent beginning.
Date: 28 Jun 2012 12:12 AM Title: The Duke and Duchess of Cambridge
so enjoying your story -I am looking forward to your next chapter!!!
Date: 27 Jun 2012 10:22 PM Title: Love you, Mean it.
This is my very first comment ever ...LOVE the story..please continue..thx patty
Date: 27 Jun 2012 10:08 PM Title: Love you, Mean it.
Love the story. Please update soon :-)