Date: 04 Mar 2022 7:52 AM Title: Original Publishing
I loved the original story so much and am really sad that I have no way to reread it I sought out and read both this rewrite/book and its sequel and they don't compare at all. Not meant to be mean but I'm having trouble in my day to day life and I use books to escape and I am sad to see that one of my favorite worlds got repalced by something that holds no joy for me.
Date: 03 Dec 2019 9:28 PM Title: Chapter 1: The Departure
Does anyone have the full story before it was removed?
Date: 03 Nov 2019 12:37 AM Title: Original Publishing
It's sad to see this story go, but congratulations on making a book. I wish you the best on your new journey. Thank you for the story.
[Report This]Date: 16 Oct 2019 12:38 PM Title: Original Publishing
Love your story
[Report This]Date: 16 Oct 2019 12:37 PM Title: Original Publishing
Love your story
Date: 13 Oct 2019 2:35 AM Title: Chapter 1: The Departure
Good luck on your book! I wish you could've finished this story and I could download it for all the rereading. I may totally buy your book either way! It looks really good if it's Pack Imperative rewritten! Shame you didn't upload this story on A03! I could still download Pack Imperative for reading sake after you take it down.
Date: 08 Oct 2019 12:39 AM Title: Original Publishing
Best of luck in this new adventure!!! Congratulations!
Date: 09 May 2018 7:39 PM Title: Chapter 1: The Departure
Just wanted to let you know your story is amazing! I first started reading it when you first published it on Fanfiction.net and recently started reading it again. Pleeaasseee update soon, I can't wait to find out what happens next!
Date: 02 Aug 2017 10:58 PM Title: Chapter 1: The Departure
I've read the fan fiction version reading this one now... Loved it
Date: 07 May 2017 11:49 PM Title: Chapter 1: The Departure
my favorite story!
[Report This]Date: 26 Oct 2016 8:27 AM Title: Chapter 1: The Departure
Forgot to rate, lol
Date: 06 Sep 2016 3:16 AM Title: Chapter 1: The Departure
Are you ever going to update the story you have a lot of readers waiting to finish it
Date: 05 Feb 2016 5:30 PM Title: Chapter 1: The Departure
Oh, please update this soon. I know it has been a while but this is too good of a story to leave like this. If you do come back to it, can you please write more Embry and/or Wuil please? They seem to be the ones left out most.
Date: 04 Nov 2015 1:35 PM Title: Chapter 1: The Departure
I really liked the story, it's definetly one of the more unique twilight fanfics out there. The only thing I noticed that you have not written about Quil almost at all interacting with Bella. All the others are more or less equilly presented. Anyway, the story is very good, and I hope you will update it soon.
[Report This]Date: 15 Aug 2015 11:02 PM Title: Chapter 1: The Departure
I found this story late, but I am intrigued. How often do you update? Please update soon.
[Report This]Date: 07 Aug 2015 11:12 PM Title: Chapter 1: The Departure
Hey!!!! Who wants to blow up fanfiction.net for their rules and tiptoeing.... Me!!!
Oh well... i guess I'll have to read this horrid story from the beginning (pssst I didnt mean that. Sarcasm)... now if I'd just remember this new site lol
Date: 14 May 2015 7:17 PM Title: Chapter 1: The Departure
I like the idea, can't wait to see where this goes
Date: 17 Feb 2015 5:33 AM Title: Chapter 1: The Departure
I started this story on FF, and was disappointed when I finished it. Hungry for more! Apparently there is more on here? If so I'm so ready to get to re-reading!
Date: 06 Nov 2014 12:52 AM Title: Chapter 1: The Departure
I read this story on FF.net and i loved it then and i love it now :) I would love to this continue and i hope you do as it's a really good story :)
Date: 27 Sep 2014 11:57 PM Title: Chapter 1: The Departure
I like that Bella and Charlie are close, just makes the story that much better.
Date: 23 Jun 2014 1:35 AM Title: Chapter 1: The Departure
Brilliant, I've really been sucked into this story and I do hope to eventually see more!
Wish you well.
Bella x
[Report This]Date: 25 Dec 2013 11:30 AM Title: Chapter 1: The Departure
I started to read this on ff but decided to come here:) I made it up to chapter 15 on ff and am excited to read the "dirty" version of it haha.
Date: 24 Dec 2013 8:21 AM Title: Chapter 1: The Departure
Yay! I'm so glad you posted! Thank you!
Oh, and Merry Christmas!
Date: 20 Sep 2013 11:33 AM Title: Chapter 1: The Departure
Fabulous story! It has been my guilty pleasure reading all week. Can't wait to see where the story goes.
You have a great ability to tell stories, great character development and thought has gone to each aspect of this storie. Can't imagine how long each chapter takes you to think through and write.
Date: 16 Jul 2013 11:28 PM Title: Chapter 1: The Departure
please tell me you are not done with this story....it has been a guilty pleasure for the past week and I can't get enough.....you are a fantastic writer
Date: 18 Jun 2013 1:18 AM Title: Chapter 1: The Departure
And the story begins!!!!!!!
Date: 14 Mar 2013 10:39 PM Title: Chapter 1: The Departure
omg!! i cant believe your here! when ffn reworked the site i could no longer review on my not so smart phone and my computer crashed so now i can review! this is so great! im gonna reread it here and reveiw yay! thanks for writing.
[Report This]Date: 30 Nov 2012 5:21 AM Title: Chapter 1: The Departure
Love it! Read it on ff and jbnp...can't wait for more
Date: 17 Nov 2012 6:30 PM Title: Chapter 1: The Departure
Please update soon!
Date: 07 Nov 2012 11:19 PM Title: Chapter 1: The Departure
please, please , please update soon! i NEED MORE!!!!
Date: 09 Oct 2012 3:17 AM Title: Chapter 1: The Departure
Poor B. Always made me cry when I read in NM.
[Report This]Date: 08 Oct 2012 6:24 AM Title: Chapter 1: The Departure
Bella mating with seven hotties. Lucky!
Date: 08 Oct 2012 3:38 AM Title: Chapter 1: The Departure
Love this fic!!! Had to follow over here since the ff purge.......
Date: 24 Sep 2012 4:07 AM Title: Chapter 1: The Departure
Still waiting for more!!
Date: 21 Jul 2012 3:03 AM Title: Chapter 1: The Departure
Awesome
[Report This]Date: 09 Jul 2012 10:43 PM Title: Chapter 1: The Departure
AAhhh! I hate cliff hangers! Love this story :) You're an amazing writer!