Date: 13 Sep 2017 3:25 PM Title: Chapter 7
My personal bias is against canon Jerkob. To me he is a sociopath. It's all about him . His wants, needs and wishes. He is an abuser in training. I think you captured his essence quite nicely. Thank you for writing
Date: 13 Sep 2017 3:07 PM Title: Chapter 6: Rolling in the Deep
I wondered if Jerkob would make an appearance. Good chapter. Thanks
Date: 13 Sep 2017 3:01 PM Title: Chapter 5: Wonderwall
Again, wonderful. Thank you
Date: 13 Sep 2017 2:49 PM Title: Chapter 4: Breathless
Wow! Wonderful. thanks
Date: 13 Sep 2017 2:41 PM Title: Chapter 3: In a Little While
Well written but oops...a dream. Thank you for writing
Date: 13 Sep 2017 2:30 PM Title: Chapter 2: All Fall Down
Heartbreaking. Never ceases to move me.
Date: 13 Sep 2017 2:05 PM Title: Chapter 1: Everything
Wow. This is brilliant. Thank you
Date: 01 Dec 2012 6:36 AM Title: Chapter 7
I'm glad jake is gone, question though: the scene with Victoria, was that real or a dream?
The whole Jake scene, much more believable then in the book. I gotta say, I don't think this is the last they see of Jake, I think he'll be back.
Date: 29 Nov 2012 12:16 AM Title: Chapter 7
Good hope the dog is gone for good
Date: 29 Nov 2012 12:07 AM Title: Chapter 6: Rolling in the Deep
Exciting.
Date: 28 Nov 2012 2:14 PM Title: Chapter 5: Wonderwall
LOL me too
Date: 28 Nov 2012 2:07 PM Title: Chapter 4: Breathless
Good chapter
Date: 28 Nov 2012 2:01 PM Title: Chapter 3: In a Little While
I like it
Date: 27 Nov 2012 7:54 PM Title: Chapter 7
looking forward to more
Date: 27 Nov 2012 9:51 AM Title: Chapter 7
nice story.. looking forward to the next chapter.. i like where this is heading..you have piqued my curiosity
Date: 27 Nov 2012 5:02 AM Title: Chapter 7
Don't be anxious, you have a good story. After having sex those two will not part. So please don't do that. It is time for her to leave her daddy and start her life. Best just do it because staying there with Jake will only add to problems. Tell Charlie you guys have much to discuss and are going on a road trip before going to college. Then you need to talk.
Date: 27 Nov 2012 4:49 AM Title: Chapter 5: Wonderwall
poor thing she thinks she is nuts. Well who can blame her?
Date: 27 Nov 2012 4:32 AM Title: Chapter 3: In a Little While
shower time. if that rat leaves her now..well you know.
Date: 27 Nov 2012 3:58 AM Title: Chapter 1: Everything
oh what can you say? Edward you selfish fool. Carlisle you are the leader that does not lead.
Date: 26 Nov 2012 2:37 PM Title: Chapter 7
Merci pour ces bons chapitres.
Author's Response:
aelita48,
Okay - I give up. ;-) I tried Googling this (as I don't speak French) and I've just gotta ask - what's it mean?
Thank you for the review!
~anyanka jenkins~
Date: 26 Nov 2012 6:54 AM Title: Chapter 7
I think the more understanding was always Edward, putting up (in Eclipse) with things he should have not. Here he is coldly angry in a very satisfying way.
Author's Response:
Camilla11,
You know, I do agree with you. Maybe my husband is rubbing off on me. Don't tell him I told anyone - but he watches the movies with me and he'll yell at Jacob, "Ahhh don't put up with that man! C'mon!" But I am in agreement with you Edward was way too understanding in Eclipse. I rather liked that he pulled the whole "Mrs. Cullen" thing at the campsite. Jacob needed to know. Anyways, while I do try to keep my Edward truer to cannon - I for sure felt that after nine months away he wouldn't be in the mood to be overly accomidating. He gave them space, allowed them to talk, but when she said "no" he came barreling in like a Terminator. Haha!
Thank you for the review and hope you had a wonderful Thanksgiving!
~anyanka jenkins~
Date: 26 Nov 2012 2:19 AM Title: Chapter 4: Breathless
Poor Bella!
Date: 26 Nov 2012 2:17 AM Title: Chapter 3: In a Little While
WOW! THAT WAS BEAUTIFUL, SEXY AND ROMANTIC!!!
Date: 26 Nov 2012 1:57 AM Title: Chapter 7
this is such a good story, different twist... and wonderfully complicated, at least from Bellas mind, so it seems
Author's Response:
Twifan1228,
Thank you so much for the review! We have to remember that Bella doesn't accept Edward's love (without any doubts that is) until the end of Eclipse. Until then, everything is suspect in her mind - she's not pretty enough, was he off being distracted, why would he choose her over anyone else, etc. etc. While I'm not a fan of that (just take his love already and believe him when he says he loves you girl!) - I do understand the reasoning behind it and the fact that she has to draw these conclusions for herself. With that in mind, she's finding it difficult to believe Edward returned for any reason other than obligation OR that's he's not really there at all and it's just a delusion. See you next week and thank you again! :-)
Date: 26 Nov 2012 1:15 AM Title: Chapter 7
I answered your last message. Just in case u didnt get it i am on ff.net and my pen name is the same
Author's Response:
Ooops! I did get it, but I've been busy. I bet you'll never guess what I've been up to? **pretends to whistle nonchalantly** I'll be in touch today or tomorrow. Very excited! :-)
~anyanka jenkins~
Date: 25 Nov 2012 10:42 PM Title: Chapter 5: Wonderwall
Im on ff.net.. i use the same pen name
Date: 25 Nov 2012 4:02 AM Title: Chapter 6: Rolling in the Deep
looking forward to more
Date: 24 Nov 2012 8:39 PM Title: Chapter 6: Rolling in the Deep
Im so glad you are.posting again! Id be happy to help as a beta.. granted im new in the game but i can help as much as i can!
Author's Response:
That's awesome! I cannot seem to contact you on the website, are you on Twilighted or FF.net where I could send you a message? If not, would you prefer a FB message or email?
Date: 07 Aug 2012 9:24 PM Title: Chapter 2: All Fall Down
AMAZING SIMPLY AWSOME
Date: 07 Aug 2012 9:12 PM Title: Chapter 1: Everything
OH MY GOSH BVELLA HE CAME BACK WAKE UP
Date: 07 Aug 2012 8:06 PM Title: Chapter 5: Wonderwall
So so sad
Date: 07 Aug 2012 1:45 PM Title: Chapter 5: Wonderwall
OMG. Love it. Dream or not, It is wonderful!
Date: 07 Aug 2012 1:38 PM Title: Chapter 5: Wonderwall
looking forward to more
Date: 01 Aug 2012 5:40 AM Title: Chapter 3: In a Little While
:)
Author's Response:
:-)
Date: 01 Aug 2012 2:10 AM Title: Chapter 4: Breathless
looking forward to more
Date: 01 Aug 2012 12:09 AM Title: Chapter 4: Breathless
OMG!!! Edward has to show himself!!
Author's Response:
This chapter will become important a little later on, so make sure to keep it in mind. I don't want to give too much away! :)
Date: 25 Jul 2012 10:22 AM Title: Chapter 3: In a Little While
If only I had such pleasant and realistic dreams! Thank you for sharing. If Edward leaves after making love to a half-sleeping woman, I might just have to kill him myself!
Date: 25 Jul 2012 12:41 AM Title: Chapter 3: In a Little While
OMG..........that was ssooooo H o t !!!
Date: 24 Jul 2012 10:57 PM Title: Chapter 3: In a Little While
looking forward to more
Date: 24 Jul 2012 9:02 PM Title: Chapter 3: In a Little While
Loved it
Date: 24 Jul 2012 8:56 PM Title: Chapter 3: In a Little While
I'm loving this so far! Does she wake up and flip out? Or.. Will it be Bella's point of view of their tryst? Edward better man up and stay there!!
Date: 17 Jul 2012 10:36 PM Title: Chapter 2: All Fall Down
These lines broke my heart:". I knew this dream was more dangerous than any nightmare could be, I would surely pay for this dream when I awoke. The pain would be powerful, I may not be able to withstand the attack." I've always been an empathetic reader, getting so attatched to the characters that my heart breaks with theirs. New Moon made me cry so much that I even surprised myself! Your writing has done the same.
Date: 17 Jul 2012 10:31 PM Title: Chapter 1: Everything
Oh, poor Edward! He truly never had a chance, did he? Love.
Date: 17 Jul 2012 5:06 PM Title: Chapter 2: All Fall Down
looking forward to more
Date: 17 Jul 2012 9:55 AM Title: Chapter 2: All Fall Down
Wonderful job describing Bella's feelings.
Date: 12 Jul 2012 8:02 PM Title: Chapter 1: Everything
Loved the 1st chapter!!!!
Date: 12 Jul 2012 12:36 AM Title: Chapter 1: Everything
so I see, Edward is going to keep his stalker, creeper tendencies.... hehehe
Date: 11 Jul 2012 9:38 PM Title: Chapter 1: Everything
I think this will be a good story! I've never been a beta before but if you would like one I will be more than willing to try!!
Date: 11 Jul 2012 9:01 PM Title: Chapter 1: Everything
Loved it
Author's Response:
Yay! I'm so glad! I already have several chapters written and will publish another one next week! :)