[Report This]Date: 31 Jan 2016 2:41 PM Title: Chapter 31
thanks for sharing this great story with us ;D
Date: 10 May 2013 11:36 PM Title: Chapter 21
I can't help it but I don't feel sorry for Bella, it was her decision. She has been untruthful and all this drama could have been solved with a single conversation. On the other hand I really hope they get the chance to met again and reconnect.
PS: hope she does not take the money from Carlisle. Seems to me that with that money, he is cleaning his conscience. And he doesn't deserve it after what he has done
Author's Response:
I think they're all trying to do the right thing but it would make all the difference if they'd only talk to each other
Date: 10 May 2013 11:21 PM Title: Chapter 20
If only they would talk to each other...
Author's Response:
Both are guilty of second guessing what the other is thinking and usually getting it wrong
Date: 10 May 2013 5:40 AM Title: Chapter 6
Awww! What a perfect first kkiss it's great that Edward is keeping the nightmares at bay but it would be even better if Bella opened up to someone. I feel for her because her friendship are too new and it feels like she doesn't truly have anyone that she really trust
Author's Response:
You're right
Date: 09 May 2013 10:41 PM Title: Chapter 5
Sweet :)
Author's Response:
Thanks and thanks for reviewing
Date: 09 May 2013 10:15 PM Title: Chapter 3
Maybe I got it all wrong. So she was a willing participant. In any case I'm sorry that Bella feels dirty. I hope she would open up to someone, maybe Angela when she comes back?
glad to know she at least has Jacob, he seems like a good kid, even if he might want to be more than friends, I get the feeling he could help her out
Author's Response:
She wasn't a willing participant, your instincts were right the first time. It's difficult for Bella, she hasn't known any of her friends for long and. because she has always moved home so often, she tends not to allow herself to get too attached to people
Date: 09 May 2013 10:01 PM Title: Chapter 2
Was she drugged and raped at the party? Hope not, poor thing
this is so not what I was expecting, I thought she would sleep with Edward and then regret it or something like that.
So, does she knows who did it? She should have told the doctor to check on her.
Author's Response:
Sorry, all is revealed later. I don't think she's thinking too clearly after the party
[Report This]Date: 27 Apr 2013 8:22 PM Title: Chapter 31
ohhh beautiful, will there be an Epi?
Author's Response:
Thanks, glad you enjoyed it. I want to write one but RL has got in the way at the mo. I hope to get back to it soon
Date: 25 Dec 2012 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 1
Loved this story, would love to read a sequel too!!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you. I'm certainly considering one. Thanks for reviewing
Have a super Christmas
[Report This]Date: 24 Dec 2012 9:30 AM Title: Chapter 31
If this was your first story, I can't wait for your next one. I really enjoyed this one. I liked the way you ended the James story line. Just goes to prove that true love could not be destroyed that easily. Thanks for a great story and I look forward to your next one.
Merry Christmas! Maria
Author's Response:
Thanks Maria, I'm really glad you enjoyed it and thanks for reviewing.
Very Merry Christmas to you too
Date: 23 Dec 2012 6:49 PM Title: Chapter 31
Love the story! Could there be some future outake? Please!
Author's Response:
Thank you. really kind. I'm considering doing either a sequel or epilogue but haven't decided how it will go yet. Thanks for reviewing. Have a great Christmas
Date: 23 Dec 2012 1:10 PM Title: Chapter 31
I've loved this story, but have been awful at reviewing, so for that I apologize. This story has been amazing. I am glad to hear James will not be able to make a comeback and that our lovers have had their stars align and they're able to enjoy being together with both families supporting them. Thank you for sharing your story.
Author's Response:
No problem - really glad to hear you've enjoyed it. Thanks for this review and hope you have a lovely Christmas
Date: 14 Dec 2012 9:59 PM Title: Chapter 1
Bella needs to come clean. Edward has no idea what happened. He professed his love to her. The least she can do is be staight with him so he can either move on or try to get her back!
Author's Response:
I'm not sure what chapter this is a reponse to - if it's chapter 25 - I think they'll both have learned that they cocked things up by not being honest so will be a lot more honest with each other in the future
Thanks for the review
Date: 13 Dec 2012 4:09 PM Title: Chapter 25
Yep he really needs to clean up his act. Tanya obviously thinks she has some hold of him.
Author's Response:
Not sure why Edward needs to clean up his act. He has no idea Tanya's been leading people astray behind his back and thinks Bella has moved on. I think he'll be honest with people from now on and he and Bella obviously still have feelings for each other
[Report This]Date: 25 Nov 2012 9:59 PM Title: Chapter 23
Well,Well This is truely another captivating & intriging story that has been amazingly BEAUTIFULLY wll written. I am loving reading this wonderfully well written story, which truly is captiating at every twis & turn. U hae done a ery good job as a writter in capturing the intrest of your readers!!! Thank 4 all ur hard work & dedication in writting this story!!! Trust me me I understand how difficult a task it can be to write a good story such as this. Thanks again 4 all ur hard work. I try to review as often as possible and trust me I review often since I am currently reading 254 stories at once.
Author's Response:
Thank you for your kind words. 254 stories!! How do you keep track?
Anyway - I much appreciate you taking the time to review and hope you continue to enjoy
Date: 25 Nov 2012 8:38 AM Title: Chapter 23
grr
Author's Response:
Absolutely!
Date: 17 Nov 2012 9:25 PM Title: Chapter 21
:)
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Thanks
Date: 12 Nov 2012 7:42 PM Title: Chapter 21
I'm so hooked on this story that i couldn't stop reading until I caught up! Tanya....ugh. Excited to see what happens next.
Author's Response:
Now "hooked" is really good - thanks. Just about to upload another chapter.
Date: 12 Nov 2012 3:05 PM Title: Chapter 8
Edward's pissing me off and Bella sitting back and accepting his treatment of her is pissing me off also! Just had to get that out. LOL She really needs to report the stuff she's finding at her front door. Creepy.
Author's Response:
I'm taking the fact that they're pissing you off as a compliment - lol. I'm assuming I've brought the characters to life for you - thanks for reviewing
Date: 12 Nov 2012 1:27 PM Title: Chapter 2
I'm dying to know the forgotten details of the party! Who would put that note in her bag? So many questions. Ha!
Author's Response:
Answers eventually I promise - thanks for reviewing
Date: 11 Nov 2012 7:37 PM Title: Chapter 21
hey
great chapters..
but my gosh..
poor bella and poor Edward!
hopefully they get together at Oxford!
I'm sure Bella goes there, too!
bye
Lil
Author's Response:
You'll find out soon but Bella has another year of school yet and Edward is going away
Thanks for the review
Date: 11 Nov 2012 6:44 PM Title: Chapter 21
I don't really care about them parting. The thing is his family will not accept her. His father is paying to get rid of her. I don't blame her for not wanting his money. I want to make this on my own even if I have less and work extra to do it. Then when it is all said and done I don't owe him for anything. Edward plays in a nasty crowd. He is all about himself. Money etc.
Bella needs to move on.
Author's Response:
Can she, though? The heart wants what it wants. Thanks for the review
Date: 04 Nov 2012 8:23 AM Title: Chapter 19
:)
Author's Response:
Cheers
Date: 31 Oct 2012 9:35 PM Title: Chapter 19
Well at this point this chapter is just dragging this out. I get what you are doing. A whole chapter. Why not be truthful? His parents are getting her away from the "chosen one". She goes on with her life. Go to Oxbride get a legal degree. Make a good life for yourself. Please don't have her pregnant and he doesn't know and she doesn't tell him. That has been done to death.
Author's Response:
I hope it doesn't seem like I'm dragging this out unnecessarily. I wanted to show how she's getting it wrong from good intentions - trying to protect him. I promise not to take the "done to death" path.
Thanks for the review
Date: 31 Oct 2012 7:49 PM Title: Chapter 14
Poor baby.
Author's Response:
Sorry - got my chapters in a muddle - my response to chapter 13 should have been for chapter 14 - apologies
Thanks for the review
Date: 31 Oct 2012 7:42 PM Title: Chapter 13
kids.
Author's Response:
She's popped his rose coloured bubble - he's reacted like an unthinking douche and it feels like the end of the world - you're right - kids
Thanks for the review
[Report This]Date: 31 Oct 2012 10:22 AM Title: Chapter 19
Beautifully written. Are the going to remain estranged, depressed and sad forever? I really want somehope to show up soon.
Author's Response:
Oh dear, now I feel really bad about chapter 20 but it will all be worth it in the end. Hope you don't give up on them
Thanks for the review
Date: 26 Oct 2012 1:07 AM Title: Chapter 11
she is the daughter of the help. Daddy has already made that clear.
Author's Response:
Daddy is going to be the bigger problem
Thanks for the review
Date: 21 Oct 2012 12:52 PM Title: Chapter 18
:)
Author's Response:
Brill
Date: 21 Oct 2012 12:34 PM Title: Chapter 17
:)
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Ta
Date: 21 Oct 2012 12:15 PM Title: Chapter 16
:)
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Thanks
[Report This]Date: 01 Oct 2012 4:15 AM Title: Chapter 10
Yay! She's okay!
Author's Response:
Close call though, wasn't it? Hope that wasn't too dark for you.
Thanks for the review
[Report This]Date: 01 Oct 2012 3:49 AM Title: Chapter 8
*sniff*
Author's Response:
Bella's so inexperienced, she's making this up as she goes along but isn't always sure she's doing the right thing.
[Report This]Date: 01 Oct 2012 3:27 AM Title: Chapter 7
What's up with the yucky messes while she's gone on her walks? Seems someone's up to no good... :(
And as for Edward's about-face, I'm stumped there, too. Certainly he can talk to his parents about how he feels for Bella?
[Report This]Date: 01 Oct 2012 2:56 AM Title: Chapter 6
Oh my, that kiss...
Author's Response:
Did you like that? I enjoyed imagining it.
[Report This]Date: 30 Sep 2012 7:59 PM Title: Chapter 4
*swoon*
Author's Response:
lol!
[Report This]Date: 30 Sep 2012 7:46 PM Title: Chapter 3
Aww, Jacob's such a good friend. :)
Loved Bella and Edward's interaction in the kitchen, LOL. Cute!
Author's Response:
You gotta feel a little bit sorry for Jake - he is a good friend but wishes he were more. I like the fact that Edward is a little bit naughty.
[Report This]Date: 30 Sep 2012 7:32 PM Title: Chapter 2
*gasp*
Oh my! No, no, no! Poor Bella!
Was she given something in her drink at the party, then?
Author's Response:
Fraid so...
[Report This]Date: 30 Sep 2012 6:54 PM Title: Chapter 1
Perhaps I should leave an official review here, rather than comment on facebook? ;)
Loved Bella's definition of her friendship with Jacob. LOL
And I really like this Bella. She reminds me of myself when I was a teen. Bookworm, and not experienced with boys or parties. Totally been in her shoes.
Great first chapter. Glad this was mentioned on facebook and that I found it here on TWCS.
Author's Response:
Thank you and thanks for reviewing
[Report This]Date: 30 Sep 2012 5:33 PM Title: Chapter 15
I can't believe you've only gotten 19 reviews. This story has angst, love a mystery and romance. It is well written and I'm really enjoying it. I hope it is a HEA. Keep up the good work.
Author's Response:
Thank you, that's really kind and thanks for reviewing. Not sure what HEA is? Maybe it's because I'm a newbie at all of this and not very good at promoting myself. This is my first attempt at writing a work of fiction, so the feedback really helps.
Date: 30 Sep 2012 5:00 PM Title: Chapter 15
:)
Author's Response:
Ta
[Report This]Date: 23 Sep 2012 6:37 PM Title: Chapter 14
Thanks for responding to my review. I feel a lot better knowing she is not pregnant. And I just assumed that would have taken blood at the hospital. To bad they didn't. Oh well anyway, I'm glad she finally told Edward about what happened that night of the party. Hopefully he will understand why she didn't tell him sooner. Is Edward's father going to be a problem? Thanks for the quick updates. This really a great story!
Maria
Author's Response:
Thank you for reviewing. It's such a big help to get feedback. And thanks for the compliment. I don't like to give too much of the game away but Edward's father does have an issue with Edward staying with Bella to keep watch over her now that she seems to have recovered - you'll find out why soon.
Date: 23 Sep 2012 3:27 PM Title: Chapter 14
:)
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Ta
Date: 23 Sep 2012 3:12 PM Title: Chapter 13
:)
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Thanks
[Report This]Date: 22 Sep 2012 9:43 PM Title: Chapter 12
I have a very bad feeling that Bella is going to be pregnant with I'm guessing is going to Laurent's baby. Please don't do that to her. And when she went to the doctor the day after the party, didn't they take a blood test? That would show the date rape drug in it, wouldn't it? Enjoying the story. Can't wait for the next update.
Maria
Author's Response:
Ok, I'll put your mind at ease, Bella is not pregnant but I'm afraid didn't have a blood test so has nothing on Laurent so he's got away with it. I've had cystitus myself and just described my symptoms and came away with a prescription for anti-biotics. Bella was too embarrassed to tell the doctor the full story so won't have automatically been given a blood test.
But Laurent is not going to come after her - the bigger problem will be the one that got away - James!
Date: 09 Sep 2012 9:08 AM Title: Chapter 11
:)
Author's Response:
Glad I can still make you smile
Date: 09 Sep 2012 8:58 AM Title: Chapter 10
:)
Author's Response:
:) again
Date: 02 Sep 2012 9:27 AM Title: Chapter 10
I don't really leave reviews normally but I'm intrigued by this story. I really hate the way he's treating Bella and it kinda rubs me the wrong way that she's just letting him but I remember being a teen.
Update soon :)
Author's Response:
Hi Thanks for reviewing. It is really helpful. I think she's besotted. He is, after all, absolutely gorgeous and that's hard to resist when you're a teenager. I also think the fact that he's so much above her in social status makes her feel at a disadvantage. The attack on her is going to have a big impact on the way he behaves towards her but he still has a lot to learn.
I usually update on Sundays - sorry about the wait but I write really slowly and don't want to catch up on myself and keep people waiting for longer than a week.
Date: 26 Aug 2012 10:04 AM Title: Chapter 9
:)
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:)
Date: 19 Aug 2012 10:29 AM Title: Chapter 8
:)
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Cool!
Date: 12 Aug 2012 6:22 PM Title: Chapter 7
:)
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:) back atcha
Date: 05 Aug 2012 10:41 AM Title: Chapter 6
:)
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Hope I can keep you smiling!
Date: 22 Jul 2012 7:02 PM Title: Chapter 4
:)
Author's Response:
Thanks for all the smilies - appreciate it. Hope Chapter 5 makes you smile too.
Date: 22 Jul 2012 2:25 PM Title: Chapter 4
I love this story, please keep writing.
Author's Response:
Thank you. Sorry not to have responded sooner. I plan to upload chapter 5 on Sunday, an EPOV, and will generally put up one chapter a week. Sorry it's not more frequent, I'm really slow!!
But thanks for the support and glad you're enjoying it.