Date: 10 Jul 2017 2:36 AM Title: Chapter 34
Amazing! You sure as hell know how to write a good story! Well done!
Date: 09 Jul 2017 10:42 PM Title: Chapter 21
That scene was.... Wow. I'm actually at a loss of words.
Date: 09 Jul 2017 5:13 PM Title: Prologue
Intriguing and well written!
Date: 29 Jan 2014 8:03 PM Title: Chapter 34
C'est tellement beau
[Report This]Date: 02 Nov 2012 4:52 AM Title: Chapter 34
Fantastic ending to a fantastic story!
Date: 31 Oct 2012 11:41 PM Title: Chapter 25
Speechless, amazing and oh my gosh!!
[Report This]Date: 27 Oct 2012 9:00 PM Title: Chapter 33
Just one more chapter?! I can't wait to see how you end this fantastic little fic.
[Report This]Date: 25 Oct 2012 3:42 PM Title: Prologue
Interesting beginning. I can't wait to see where you take this.
Date: 29 Sep 2012 6:22 PM Title: Chapter 32
poor adele, no one should have to go through that and then to lose the baby too?!? horrible....
Date: 23 Sep 2012 1:40 AM Title: Chapter 31
just when it looked like they were done with this whole deal. what happened to adele?
Date: 23 Sep 2012 12:17 AM Title: Chapter 30
wow adele i am shocked! she did the right thing and put herself out of the picture while ensuring jack and josette had eachother and the hope of catching hawk so this can be over.
good on you chickie!
Date: 22 Sep 2012 11:59 PM Title: Chapter 28
well back on the pearl - good.
adele as a stow away - bad.
jack giving away her dress - bad.
john and gibbs and the crew ok - good.
jack being stuck between two girls - bad.
not sure what is gonna win out here before the fireworks hit...
Date: 22 Sep 2012 11:41 PM Title: Chapter 27
aww does jack have a pic of josette in his compass? so cute! jack has made it clear that he loves her and will do whatever he has to to keep her safe...
time to hunt a hawk...
Date: 22 Sep 2012 11:24 PM Title: Chapter 26
well shit! jack is gonna flip shit when he hears her screaming.
Date: 22 Sep 2012 9:30 PM Title: Chapter 25
is adele lying? she definately got a reaction but probably not the one she hoped for. lol
they finally did it and now jack wants to keep her all to himself. pretty sure she's ok with that but will this change thngs for the better or the worse?
Date: 22 Sep 2012 8:31 PM Title: Chapter 24
haha! he finally admitted he wanted her back.
Date: 22 Sep 2012 8:04 PM Title: Chapter 23
jack is so torn, he wants her but he is trying to turn her into a whore for him because that's what he knows... what is safe....
Date: 22 Sep 2012 5:55 PM Title: Chapter 22
oh he can't let her just leave!
Date: 22 Sep 2012 5:17 PM Title: Chapter 21
wow jack kept it a secretlonger than i thought. kinda cute how he kept tryingto give her an out, too bad she didn't know that was what he was doing.
Date: 22 Sep 2012 4:59 PM Title: Chapter 20
well shit! looks like the cat is out of the bag. what is jack gonna do now?
Date: 22 Sep 2012 4:32 PM Title: Chapter 19
oh jack has it bad. so does josette. these two need to have the trueth come out so they can move forward...
Date: 22 Sep 2012 4:06 PM Title: Chapter 18
it has to be close to the time of the great descovery! it just has to be!!!
jack is pushing things further and further and i don't know how much longer josette will be able to be the strong one....
Date: 22 Sep 2012 3:37 PM Title: Chapter 17
poor jack. poor josette. he wants her safe and he thinks she is after john...
Date: 22 Sep 2012 2:49 PM Title: Chapter 16
oh boy! at least jack is leaving it open for her to make the next move...
wonder how he will feel when he learns he is a she...
Date: 22 Sep 2012 2:28 PM Title: Chapter 15
oh jack you are an ass. playing with john, playing with the girl, playing with josh.....
Date: 22 Sep 2012 2:10 PM Title: Chapter 14
oh boy this is so not gonna be good when he finds out the trueth....
Date: 22 Sep 2012 1:55 PM Title: Chapter 13
uh oh i think jack is mad that josh didn't want to kiss him but is ok with bringing john into his room for a talk when the ship is empty.... and of course adele knows this and a little more...
is it time for the descovery of what josh really is?
Date: 22 Sep 2012 6:55 AM Title: Chapter 12
wow the first kiss and she is more freaked out then he is.
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Date: 22 Sep 2012 6:39 AM Title: Chapter 11
she saved him! and now it is time to party! woohoo, hopefully she can keep up the act while under the influence....
Date: 22 Sep 2012 6:05 AM Title: Chapter 10
well the greg problem is selt with but i think jack is mad about what he's feeling for this 'boy' and it just came out a little here...
Date: 22 Sep 2012 5:48 AM Title: Chapter 9
shit! she had to be found out by that ass. but what is she gonna ask john to do to help her?
Date: 22 Sep 2012 5:31 AM Title: Chapter 8
was that a setup by greg or a real accident? looks like our girl is gonna be laid up for a bit...
Date: 22 Sep 2012 5:10 AM Title: Chapter 7
heehee jack is probably not gonna be too happy thinking he likes a boy...
Date: 21 Sep 2012 10:42 PM Title: Chapter 6
jake is so cute how he is trying to make her feel welcome and happy, but that was a close one!
Date: 21 Sep 2012 10:27 PM Title: Chapter 5
wow that was close! looks like she has an ally? or is it an enemy?
and jake wow eloquent! lol
Date: 21 Sep 2012 12:20 PM Title: Chapter 4
aww capn' jack has a soft spot for her.
Date: 21 Sep 2012 12:08 PM Title: Chapter 3
oh wow awkward! especially way bak then.lol
Date: 21 Sep 2012 4:42 AM Title: Chapter 2
oh boy she is sticking her nose were it doesn't belong, she better listen to jack and stop that... not a good way to make friends.
Date: 21 Sep 2012 4:21 AM Title: Chapter 1
oh she sure is in for a quick lesson in how a ship runs...lol
Date: 21 Sep 2012 3:49 AM Title: Prologue
holy shit! she stayed on the ship for a year and a half before being found out?!?!?! wow she is good!
[Report This]Date: 13 Sep 2012 2:58 AM Title: Chapter 30
Love the chapter yet again. Please keep the new chapters coming
Date: 02 Sep 2012 4:40 PM Title: Chapter 28
hey lina, i love the story....n jack's character in it, jossette s pretty mature n is handling herself well, in the circumstances. i cant wait for the next chapter,pls update soon.xo,lavanya.
Date: 01 Sep 2012 2:34 AM Title: Chapter 28
So I ususally don't review but I saw how many you have and decided that you need more:) So here it is!! Lol love this story so much! Keep up the good work!
[Report This]Date: 01 Sep 2012 2:04 AM Title: Chapter 28
Throw Adele off in the middle of the sea, evil skank deserves it. >:(
[Report This]Date: 23 Aug 2012 11:56 AM Title: Chapter 26
Ahhhh cliffie! I think the source is Adele - that woman is no good. Excellent chapter can't wait for more!
Date: 23 Aug 2012 10:14 AM Title: Chapter 26
loved it! waitin for the next..dunno, greg, hope so.... in the order to your qs.
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[Report This]Date: 22 Aug 2012 11:07 AM Title: Chapter 26
I hope it's not John, maybe Adele? Would explain why she Always want to be around
Date: 17 Aug 2012 6:13 PM Title: Chapter 25
lile is definitely an understatement, i loved it so far. so much that i did not stop to review.....sorry.. ;-P jack is fascinating, n so is joossette.... pls update soon, eagerly waiting, xoxo, lavanya...
[Report This]Date: 14 Aug 2012 3:03 PM Title: Chapter 24
How does this story not have more reviews? What a great story, I'm loving it so far. I even put off my morning walk to sit and read it. Can't wait for more. :-) Is there an update schedule?
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Date: 06 Aug 2012 7:06 AM Title: Prologue
Great story! Wanting to see what's next :D
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[Report This]Date: 05 Aug 2012 8:19 PM Title: Chapter 22
Read it all in one shot. Terrific job on Jack Sparrow character!! Great story but how can she be any where close to him with all those women he has!! I would have a hard time believing he would give them up. I'm sitting here ready for the next chapters!! This the 1st story of yours I read but I will be watching for more of your stuff.
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Date: 05 Aug 2012 8:00 PM Title: Chapter 22
:) arrrrrggg please update soon
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[Report This]Date: 05 Aug 2012 7:04 PM Title: Chapter 22
I was somehow hoping that maybe there would be more chapters here then on fan fiction :(. What can I say, I'm desperate for the next chapter!! Best story ever, and I'm going to review on fan fiction as well so hopefully you update soon :)
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Date: 05 Aug 2012 8:02 AM Title: Chapter 21
:)
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Date: 03 Aug 2012 4:02 PM Title: Chapter 7
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Date: 01 Aug 2012 7:17 PM Title: Prologue
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