Date: 22 Feb 2023 1:34 PM Title: Chapter 19: Wound Up
More chapters please 🥺 add more
Date: 10 Apr 2019 5:47 AM Title: Chapter 19: Wound Up
Love your stories update soon
Date: 15 May 2018 1:38 AM Title: Chapter 19: Wound Up
Please come back and continue this story please
Date: 05 Dec 2014 8:10 PM Title: Chapter 19: Wound Up
Possessive Bella is peeping out from behind her hair, it seems those girls were just the push she needed to make up her mind. I thought she was going to get caught in the toilet cubicle.
So happy to see this update. :)
Jane x
Date: 11 Nov 2014 12:04 AM Title: Chapter 19: Wound Up
Hope you post again soon
Date: 09 Nov 2014 4:52 AM Title: Chapter 19: Wound Up
Glad to see an update! Can't wait for more! ;)
Date: 06 Jul 2014 11:17 AM Title: Chapter 7: Dangerous Line
Loved it!
Date: 06 Jul 2014 11:05 AM Title: Chapter 6: Help Me
Loved it!
Date: 06 Jul 2014 10:54 AM Title: Chapter 5: Pretending
Loved it! Poor Emmett!
Date: 06 Jul 2014 10:47 AM Title: Chapter 4: Natural
Loved it! Poor Bella!
Date: 06 Jul 2014 10:42 AM Title: Chapter 3: Don't Be Like Me
Loved it!
Date: 06 Jul 2014 10:36 AM Title: Chapter 2: Daddy's Dinky
Loved it!
Date: 06 Jul 2014 10:32 AM Title: Chapter 1: Connected
Loved it!
Date: 25 Jun 2014 10:17 PM Title: Chapter 18: Morning
Ansioso para o próximo capítulo!
Date: 23 Jun 2014 11:59 AM Title: Chapter 18: Morning
Renee has been absent from her children's lives for so long, even when she was there she wasn't much of a parent. I'm wondering if she'll suspect that Emmett and Bella's relationship has changed in that way or whether she just thinks that Emmett has turned into Bella's parent.
I'm glad to see you're back. :)
Jane x
Date: 16 Jun 2014 1:30 AM Title: Chapter 1: Connected
Just read your story hope you post soon
Date: 14 Jun 2014 7:33 AM Title: Chapter 18: Morning
Glad to see this update. Can't wait for more! ;)
Date: 14 Jun 2014 3:43 AM Title: Chapter 18: Morning
Thanks for getting back to this story. Things are getting pretty interesting. Did Renee see them in bed together?
Date: 12 Jun 2014 6:31 AM Title: Chapter 17: Accept It
nice story
Date: 23 Apr 2014 9:56 PM Title: Chapter 17: Accept It
Oh my! Things are moving on and dreams are becoming reality. I wonder how long they'll be able to keep this secret before someone gets suspicious or jealousies rear their heads again.
Thank you for continuing to write this, as taboo a subject as it is this is a brilliant story.
Jane x
Date: 24 Mar 2014 11:18 PM Title: Chapter 17: Accept It
hot. so hot. but too short:(
Date: 21 Mar 2014 6:48 PM Title: Chapter 17: Accept It
Loved it. So glad you were motivated to write it. Looking forward to more. Have a great weekend.
Date: 21 Mar 2014 7:02 AM Title: Chapter 17: Accept It
Can't wait for more chapters to come
I was starting to wounder if this story was ever going to be continued to be written so glad it wasn't abandon
Date: 11 Feb 2014 11:25 PM Title: Chapter 16: Dreams
Uh oh...
Date: 11 Feb 2014 9:05 PM Title: Chapter 9: Popularity
Uh h
Date: 11 Feb 2014 9:00 PM Title: Chapter 5: Pretending
...she has no idea
Date: 11 Feb 2014 8:55 PM Title: Chapter 3: Don't Be Like Me
:/ confusing for them
Date: 11 Feb 2014 8:49 PM Title: Chapter 1: Connected
Kids..lol
Date: 02 Dec 2013 10:17 AM Title: Chapter 1: Connected
Nice start.
Date: 28 Nov 2013 5:33 AM Title: Chapter 7: Dangerous Line
love it!
Date: 28 Nov 2013 12:32 AM Title: Chapter 6: Help Me
Awesome chapter!
Date: 27 Nov 2013 11:27 PM Title: Chapter 5: Pretending
loved it¡
Date: 27 Nov 2013 11:06 PM Title: Chapter 4: Natural
love it!
Date: 07 Oct 2013 4:52 PM Title: Chapter 16: Dreams
Please up date soon I love to read more
Date: 17 Sep 2013 12:16 PM Title: Chapter 3: Don't Be Like Me
loved it!
Date: 17 Sep 2013 12:08 PM Title: Chapter 2: Daddy's Dinky
loved it!
Date: 17 Sep 2013 12:03 PM Title: Chapter 1: Connected
loved it!
Date: 11 Aug 2013 8:49 PM Title: Chapter 16: Dreams
Good
Date: 03 Aug 2013 9:48 AM Title: Chapter 16: Dreams
Very intersting dilemma! Cant wait to read more
Date: 22 Jul 2013 11:37 PM Title: Chapter 16: Dreams
Continue!
Date: 16 Jul 2013 9:47 PM Title: Chapter 16: Dreams
Oh my, that was some dream, but was it really a dream? Bella's subconscious is screaming at her, was Emmett helping it along? Surely she can't deny how she feels about Emmett any longer, can she? I can't wait for the next chapter.
Jane x
Date: 12 Jul 2013 4:26 PM Title: Chapter 16: Dreams
love it
Date: 27 Jun 2013 6:24 PM Title: Chapter 15: Heartbeats
Continue please!!
Date: 20 Jun 2013 10:47 AM Title: Chapter 15: Heartbeats
You're back, woohoo!!! Please don't forget about us, we may not be many but we love this story.
So, Emmett finally cracked. It was bound to happen and I'm glad that it has. Emmett's laid his cards on the table and voiced what Bella's been thinking about their feelings being wrong for each other. I wonder how Bella will react once she's had time to process what Emmett has said. Their circumstances, growing up, were so different from the norm, it's not surprising that they find themselves in this situation.
Please update again soon.
Jane x
Date: 10 Jun 2013 9:51 PM Title: Chapter 14: Euphoria
how come you don't update aymore!?!?!?!?!?!!
Date: 05 Mar 2013 6:03 PM Title: Chapter 14: Euphoria
Continue!!
Date: 28 Nov 2012 2:21 AM Title: Chapter 7: Dangerous Line
:-)
Date: 28 Nov 2012 1:57 AM Title: Chapter 1: Connected
=)
Date: 26 Nov 2012 8:39 PM Title: Chapter 14: Euphoria
powerful chapter
Date: 26 Nov 2012 4:51 AM Title: Chapter 14: Euphoria
Thank you for updating. Can't wait to see what will happen after the kiss.
Date: 26 Nov 2012 3:55 AM Title: Chapter 14: Euphoria
Loved it!
Date: 26 Nov 2012 3:27 AM Title: Chapter 14: Euphoria
very interesting, please udate soon!
Date: 25 Nov 2012 6:54 PM Title: Chapter 14: Euphoria
Oh poor Bella, she ran and that was only natural. It seem she did a better job of convincing herself that Emmett wouldn't want her that way than I thought and now all of that's been blown out of the water. I've said it before and I'll say it again, they really need to talk. I think it's time for Emmett to man up and tell her how he feels but, of course, he's going to be sat downstairs hating himself and thinking that Bella will think he's some kind of sick monster whilst Bella is upstairs thinking that she's sick and twisted.
Please update soon, I really love this story it's most definitely fascinating.
Jane x
Date: 25 Nov 2012 6:38 PM Title: Chapter 13: Believe In Me
Wow! Will Bella run scared or will she embrace this? They both know this is wrong and they've tried not to give in but when you feel love this deeply and you've had no guidance from being small, well what can I say, I hope she embraces it, they deserve to be happy and loved. What they feel for each other is far beyond familial love. This is such a sensitive topic but you write it so well.
I can't believe I missed this update but the good news for me is that I still have another chapter to read, woohoo!!
Jane x
Date: 23 Sep 2012 12:23 AM Title: Chapter 13: Believe In Me
Oh please tell me you plan to continue this story! You have me completely hooked! :-)
Date: 06 Sep 2012 9:05 AM Title: Chapter 12: Gentlemen
Emmett and Bella really need to talk. One of them is going to have to be brave and explain what they're feeling. I know Emmett's jealous and angry but still I don't know how he could let Rose talk about Bella like that, she might be beautiful on the outside but she's ugly on the inside.
Jane x
Date: 05 Sep 2012 8:42 PM Title: Chapter 13: Believe In Me
Cant wait to see Bella's reaction. Please dont make us wait too long. You have me completely hooked on this story.
Date: 05 Sep 2012 8:28 PM Title: Chapter 13: Believe In Me
:)
Date: 05 Sep 2012 8:05 PM Title: Chapter 13: Believe In Me
they kissed!
Date: 05 Sep 2012 12:04 PM Title: Chapter 12: Gentlemen
Wow these 2 really need to do a lot of talking.
Date: 05 Sep 2012 7:04 AM Title: Chapter 12: Gentlemen
:)
Date: 05 Sep 2012 6:55 AM Title: Chapter 9: Popularity
:)
Date: 05 Sep 2012 6:53 AM Title: Chapter 8: Heady Aroma
:)
Date: 05 Sep 2012 6:50 AM Title: Chapter 7: Dangerous Line
:)
Date: 05 Sep 2012 6:43 AM Title: Chapter 5: Pretending
:)
Date: 05 Sep 2012 6:34 AM Title: Chapter 3: Don't Be Like Me
;)
Date: 05 Sep 2012 6:28 AM Title: Chapter 2: Daddy's Dinky
:)
Date: 05 Sep 2012 6:25 AM Title: Chapter 1: Connected
:)
Date: 25 Aug 2012 3:57 AM Title: Chapter 11: Visitor
Oh so not a good move, a payback date. Then again, maybe this is what it takes for one of them to confess their feelings. God, I can't believe a wrote that but there it is. They can't go on like this much longer, no matter what happens something has to be said.
I know this must be hard to write, I wouldn't even know where to begin but I'd love it if you could make your chapters a bit longer.
Jane x
Date: 25 Aug 2012 3:36 AM Title: Chapter 10: Lying
Oh yes, jealous and possessive Emmett is in the building. Is it Bella's own feelings for him that's stopping her from telling him about the date or the fact that she know's he going to be all possessive and protective? Maybe it's both.
Jane x
Date: 25 Aug 2012 3:25 AM Title: Chapter 9: Popularity
Oh dear God, Bella's going on a date. I get the feeling Emmett's going to get all possessive, jealous and protective of her. In a way that's what Bella's been with him by keeping all the 'sluts' away.
Jane x
Date: 25 Aug 2012 3:06 AM Title: Chapter 8: Heady Aroma
So I got my answer, she was oblivious until Emmett had his face buried in her panties. Now she's having the same feelings as Emmett but she doesn't feel quite so guilty about imagining it's Emmett that's touching her. How long will it take Emmett to realise that things have changed?
Jane x
Date: 25 Aug 2012 2:56 AM Title: Chapter 7: Dangerous Line
Their relationship has developed in such a way that for Emmett it almost seems like he's dating but without any kissing or sex. I'm still wondering whether Bella's as oblivious as Emmett thinks she is.
Jane x
Date: 25 Aug 2012 2:38 AM Title: Chapter 6: Help Me
Listening to her brother though those thin walls must be unbearable for Bella knowing that he doesn't want her to be like him. Has she started to have feelings for Emmett like he does for her? I can't work out whether she's still feeling her normal close sisterly love for him or whether things have started to move on.
Jane x
Date: 25 Aug 2012 2:26 AM Title: Chapter 5: Pretending
Emmett's really struggling and trying to ignore his feelings for Bella. Pretending that the girls he takes to bed are Bella is probably not the best idea he's had, but then he's a hormone riddled teenager who's just trying to make sense of everything. How would you ever be able to tell anyone about this? He's so alone.
Jane x
Date: 25 Aug 2012 2:14 AM Title: Chapter 4: Natural
Aww, poor Bella she's so confused, she just doesn't understand why her brother would pull away from her. She truly does not think that there was anything sexual happening to cause that reaction. She really is a product of her upbringing. Neither she nor Emmett are to blame for this, they have lacked parental guidance at a crucial time in their lives. It's good to be curious when you're young but there comes a time when those shared bath times should stop.
This is so confusing for them both.
Jane x
Date: 25 Aug 2012 2:00 AM Title: Chapter 3: Don't Be Like Me
Bit of a shock for Emmett there but given how close their relationship is, especially at that age, it was bound to happen. It sounds as though they have been left completely to their own devices and Renee hasn't been their to say that they shouldn't shower together. It's only now that Emmett has had a sexual reaction to his sister that the thought could be entering his head that this is wrong.
Have you read Flowers in the Attic? If you haven't you should, fantastic book and due to their circumstances they developed and incestuous relationship. Like you I don't condone this but it seemed right in that situation.
Jane x
Author's Response: Thank you for all the reviews - I'm glad someone else understands that, while wrong, this situation can happen under Bella and Emmett's circumstances. I haven't actually read Flowers in the Attic. I looked it up; it sounds slightly too gruesome for me, but it does have some very interesting concepts. That is why I like writing this story - and because it brings out rather funny reactions in some people ;] Happy reading xxx
Date: 25 Aug 2012 1:40 AM Title: Chapter 2: Daddy's Dinky
Lol, a skin coloured cucumber, hahahaha!! Oh my, that's one way of describing it. I almost expected her to say something but her curiosity got the better of her and she stayed quiet. I think most kids have seen their dad's dinky. *snort*
Jane x
Date: 25 Aug 2012 1:31 AM Title: Chapter 1: Connected
Poor Sue having to explain sex to a seven year old boy who's not even hers, lol. Emmett's pretty curious for such a young boy, mind you, I only have a daughter and if she was curious at seven she never said a word.
Jane x
Date: 25 Aug 2012 1:16 AM Title: Chapter 11: Visitor
.... update please.i like this story :)
Date: 23 Aug 2012 2:10 AM Title: Chapter 11: Visitor
What a bitch
Date: 22 Aug 2012 3:28 AM Title: Chapter 10: Lying
Poor date guy .... Emmett is not happy!
Date: 22 Aug 2012 3:27 AM Title: Chapter 9: Popularity
This date does not seem like something that Emmett will approve of!
Date: 22 Aug 2012 3:26 AM Title: Chapter 8: Heady Aroma
I think things may start moving faster for the siblings now! Especially with Emmett enjoying Bella's flower juice!
Date: 22 Aug 2012 3:23 AM Title: Chapter 7: Dangerous Line
Sweet!
Date: 22 Aug 2012 3:22 AM Title: Chapter 6: Help Me
Love that line... "Why don't you help me?"
Date: 22 Aug 2012 3:20 AM Title: Chapter 5: Pretending
What a realization! Awesome story!
Date: 22 Aug 2012 3:18 AM Title: Chapter 4: Natural
Poor bella! Loving the story!
Date: 22 Aug 2012 3:16 AM Title: Chapter 3: Don't Be Like Me
Interesting...
Date: 22 Aug 2012 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 2: Daddy's Dinky
What a way to learn about sex --- poor Bella!
Date: 22 Aug 2012 3:11 AM Title: Chapter 1: Connected
Dinky & flower --- love it! very cute!
Date: 21 Aug 2012 11:34 PM Title: Chapter 11: Visitor
write more
Date: 21 Aug 2012 9:16 PM Title: Chapter 11: Visitor
Wow what did Emmett see in that bitch?
Date: 20 Aug 2012 5:06 PM Title: Chapter 10: Lying
Is it really twisted that I love this story? I have read every story you posted so far and I love them all. They all currently reside in my favorite list and you are also one of my favorite fan fic authors as well. Cant wait for the next chapter. Hopefully real soon...