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Reviewer: DanaLynn Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Dec 2012 1:05 PM Title: Chapter 1

I really liked this one shot! Any chance for a sequel?? Dana

Reviewer: monkeymom Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Sep 2012 7:43 AM Title: Chapter 1

Fascinating story!   I like the idea of pairing Jane up with someone who gets off on pain.  Truly a match made in heaven!

Reviewer: shenaniwhatagans Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Sep 2012 3:22 AM Title: Chapter 1

Jane as a Mistress...yeah I totally see that happening!  Did you write this for the mash up contest...the pairing made me think so.  I really liked Harry with Jane...I'm not sure why, but yeah it worked.

I love that you made him love pain...and the perfect mate for Jane. Plus her not caring about the age difference put a diffferent spin on it...not so focused on the body itself.  It was about his need for pain and the pleasure it brought.  I really liked it.

I wouldn't normally have read something that included different pairings but since you wrote it I was intrigued.  You have a amazing way with words and it draws you in.  Thanks!!!!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Sep 2012 1:49 AM Title: Chapter 1

I have come over from Midnight Caller. This is a really good story. I love how you have had them connect to each other. I have read and re-read the end here. I just have to ask.......Where did she bite him at????? Please let me know if you are going to continue this.



Author's Response:

no, im not going to continue. I wrote it in line at Disney. She bit his ass of course. :)~~

Reviewer: Edwardskeilo75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Sep 2012 9:16 PM Title: Chapter 1

I really ljked it.. It was nice to see a softer Jane..

E/k

Reviewer: denali1918 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Sep 2012 7:51 PM Title: Chapter 1

Lol I like it

Reviewer: vamp_luvor Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Sep 2012 7:10 AM Title: Chapter 1

I lov e this are you going to continue

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