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Reviewer: twirob13 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 May 2014 1:30 PM Title: The End and The Beginning

what an awesome version of the book! and how you incorpoated some of the lines its as if that was what happened ;)

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Dec 2011 9:15 AM Title: The End and The Beginning

Edward had to have one last fit of angst, I guess. Lucky for him his love gave him the best wedding present I ever heard of. It probably meant more to Edward than anything else Bella could have given him. There will be problems ahead for them and the rest of the family, but that's just life. Being vampires, they just have more interesting problems. On to Polar Night!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Dec 2011 8:57 AM Title: Bachelor Hunting Party

The guys can see clearly how much Edward has changed, so their sacrifice was not a wasted effort. Edward's reception of that tale was probably a shock to both of them. Alice was correct in all she set in motion, even though it was so dangerous. Emmett's declaration really touched Edward mostly because you don't expect that kind of thoughtfulness. On the other hand, Emmett loves his family as much as any of them do. I think the training with the dragon fighters changed a lot in his mind.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Dec 2011 8:31 AM Title: Reunion

I'll bet Emmett got a shock and an eyeful, looking in Bella's window. Nearly as big a one as Edward is about to get when his brothers tell him the truth about where they've been.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Dec 2011 8:15 AM Title: The Long Night Redux

Those pesky brothers! Wait until Edward finds out where they have been and what they've been doing. He is going to have a major cow! Danger from the Volturi is just what a guy wants the day before the wedding. Poor baby, he just had to ask one last time, if Bella really wanted to marry him and become a vampre. I knew he couldn't resist.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Dec 2011 7:52 AM Title: Confessions

Good Grief! Alices's work is never done, so it's a good thing she's a vampire because she's got more stuff in the air than a juggler at a circus.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Dec 2011 6:45 AM Title: The Last Night Part III

What a voyage of discovery, for Bella and Edward! All I can say is how he loves her is beyond description, and it's exactly the same for her. Wonderful, wonderful,as in full of wonder! You do such a great job!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Dec 2011 6:23 AM Title: The Last Night Part II

It was kind of cute when Carlisle told Edward to be safe and his thoughts went to babies. He wishes such a thing was possible for himself and Bella. The wedding looms ever nearer.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Dec 2011 6:00 AM Title: The Last NIght Part I

How astute of you, Edward, to notice you've been a bit distracted lately! Now that the visions have turned out right, Alice is euphoric. I'm pretty glad they made it back too.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Dec 2011 5:48 AM Title: Payment

Thank God for good friends! I really had my doubts about the outcome of that battle. It sure didn't end the way Aro intended it to! I'm so glad the're on their way home and the wedding is in three days. Now they just have to figure how to stay away from Volterra.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Dec 2011 5:22 AM Title: Why

Alice is so strong, mentally and emotionally, it's scary. She has so much faith in Jasper, in her visions, it's amazing. Not to mention the faith Carlisle and Esme have in her. I wonder if Edward will ever find out what a gift his sister has given him and Bella?

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Dec 2011 5:10 AM Title: Reversal

This was the epitome of lust, love and romance! You wrote a hell of a chapter here, and I loved it! Edward and Bella forever!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Dec 2011 4:52 AM Title: Discovery

The lying, cheating, miserable bastard, Aro must have known there were twice as many newborns. How the hell can the three Cullens fight fifteen vampires?

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Dec 2011 4:35 AM Title: Arabian Nights

I'm not bothering with a long review, just telling you how absolutely beautiful those words were, from Edward's heart to Bella's. I'm in awe!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Dec 2011 4:18 AM Title: Penance

It amazes me that Edward can't see what a truly good man he is. Just going down the list and trying to make things right for the heirs of his victims, that's not what an evil person would do.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Dec 2011 4:08 AM Title: Arabian Days

The Cullens can make friends anywhere, and it sure pisses off Jane! That evil little bitch can't stand goodness, I guess. It was very good of Chun-tao and Dong-mei to teach them all some new techniques and to make friends. Too bad it got them in trouble. Poor Jasper, he needs his Alice-fix, bad! I wish they could fight the newborns, win and get back home.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Dec 2011 3:49 AM Title: Faith

This is what every engaged couple does, or should do, anyway. Get to know each other, their hopes, dreams, fears and foibles. The more you know each other, the easier it is to live with another person.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Dec 2011 3:41 AM Title: Sunset

I definitely want to go on a picnic with Edward! That was lovely to read. Alice knew just what to have Bella wear. It tickled me to hear her talk about Bella looking like a Vargas girl, as I'm well old enough to know what that is! I wonder how much longer Alice can contain her misery over Jasper. She must be able to see the hard time he's having, resisting Sehkmet. Maybe he won't be able to?

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Dec 2011 3:24 AM Title: Arrival

That Aro is a sneaky bastard for sure. Sahkmet has hit the nail on the head, Aro wants to break the bonds of the Cullen clan. He knew how Sahkmet would covet Jasper and try to draw him to her. No wonder Alice asked him if he loved her and would come back to her. She must have seen what was to happen. Poor Alice, and poor Jasper. The only happy one is Emmett, he can't wait to fight.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Dec 2011 1:38 AM Title: Temperature

The truth is there are hot springs all over that area, so Edward knowing of one far from humans is perfectly believable. They had a great day and Bella never had to worry about being too cold. Of course, now he knows where to take Bella for their honeymoon.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Dec 2011 1:24 AM Title: Italy

So, the Cullens are off for Arabian Nights!  Oh joy! I'm not surprised Emmett lost his cool and ripped Valentino's head from his body. It was a close thing, but hopefully all will be well! Too bad the escorts have to be  Jane, Alec and Valentino. At least he may be a bit leary of Emmett's muscles and temper now.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Dec 2011 1:02 AM Title: Acquiescence

Charlie is a typical, loving father, worried that no one is good enough for his daughter. His caring extends to Billy's son as well. He's got the search all organized, not knowing how little it will matter. Jake will come back when he wants to.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Dec 2011 12:46 AM Title: The Stuff of Legends

Looks like Alice will get away with hiding where Jasper, Emmett and Rosalie are going and what they are doing. At least Edward has made up his mind to go along with Bella's plan, to become accustomed to each other. Smart boy!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Dec 2011 12:28 AM Title: Alone

Bella might as well take a deep breath and wait for Charlie to get his mind wrapped around the fact of her approaching nuptials. He loves his little girl, he'll come around. Bella has so much on her mind right now, she might give thought to yoga or meditation. Just in case Edward can't be there 24/7, you know.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Dec 2011 12:17 AM Title: Offense

Here's hoping this mission, as Emmett refers to it,  will go well. Jasper can manipulate emotions, alright, but who knows what the three of them will encounter in Volterra? This may be a bit tricky, as they say.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Dec 2011 11:50 PM Title: Considerations

That was quite a nice, brotherly conversation between Emmett and Edward. Em does have his surprisingly commonsense, caring moments. Edward is perhaps too aware of what he doesn't know and needs to. I'm curious, too, about what is upsetting Alice enough that she wants Jasper and Emmett's help, right now!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Dec 2011 11:28 PM Title: Happy Place

Bella always felt inferior to Tanya, which was so silly. Why didn't she remember who Edward proposed to and get over her worries? Alice being Alice has got preparations underway and Bella a bit calmer. That go to your happy place deal really works for Bella. Alice should try it on Edward and soothe some of his fears as well.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Dec 2011 11:09 PM Title: Restraint

Very well thought out and quite possible dialog, for this part of the saga. Always wondered why this time frame wasn't expanded upon a bit more. The last book was so long anyway, what would a few more chapters matter?

Reviewer: Mary Mary Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Dec 2011 4:08 AM Title: Arrival

ahh she is trying to seduce him.  Poor Alice

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Dec 2010 2:23 PM Title: The End and The Beginning

this is just amazing, I have totally enjoyed it and am flying to the sequels

yo did an excellent job

Reviewer: Cullen16 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Mar 2010 8:18 AM Title: Reunion

Poor Emmett! lmao!  He is so funny when he is supposed to not think of things!



Author's Response:

Hi Cullen16!  Thanks for reading and for all of your comments.  This was my first fan fic, and it's always nice to see new readers comment and enjoy it! m

Reviewer: Cullen16 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Mar 2010 6:24 AM Title: The Long Night Redux

"Oh, for the love of all that's holy!" lmfao

Reviewer: Cullen16 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Mar 2010 4:23 AM Title: Reversal

:) Great chapter.

Reviewer: Cullen16 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Mar 2010 2:57 AM Title: Discovery

Aro is such an ass!  They will still kick there newborn ass! I'm so happy for Jasper!!

Reviewer: Cullen16 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Mar 2010 2:40 AM Title: Arabian Nights

*tear*

Reviewer: Cullen16 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Mar 2010 2:22 AM Title: Penance

This is a really touching side to Edward, it's so sad that he did something for each person's loved one on his list(having to go over it again), but I can totally see him doing something like that and I really liked it.



Author's Response:

Thanks... this might be my favorite chapter.  It really gave me insight into Edward's character, and I was able to hear his voice much clearer after I wrote this.  Oddly, this chapter gets probably the least traffic out of any of the chapters in the story. FUnny how that works.

Reviewer: Cullen16 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Mar 2010 9:41 PM Title: Arabian Days

wow! Your a great writer! I can't wait to read more!



Author's Response:

THanks!

Reviewer: Cullen16 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Mar 2010 8:17 PM Title: Arrival

Jasper better stay srong!!!! I love the adventure you have them going on!

Reviewer: Cullen16 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Mar 2010 7:51 PM Title: Temperature

That place sounds beautiful.



Author's Response:

It is... it's modeled on hot springs I've been to near Port Angeles!

Reviewer: Cullen16 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Mar 2010 7:37 AM Title: Considerations

Emmetts story was so sad.



Author's Response:

But it ends happily... there's more of his story in another story of mine that I haven't posted here yet.  Look out for The Newborn.  I'm working to get each of my stories transferred here. Thanks for reading and writing!

Reviewer: Cullen16 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Mar 2010 7:23 AM Title: Happy Place

I wonder where the boys really went??  Did they really go hunting?

Reviewer: Cullen16 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Mar 2010 7:12 AM Title: Restraint

Can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: SierraXR4i Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Mar 2010 8:18 PM Title: The End and The Beginning

so lovle, cant wait to the sequels.

 

Reviewer: jkcmama0307 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Mar 2010 2:34 PM Title: The End and The Beginning

I love this story. you did a great job. I can't wait to read the sequels!!



Author's Response:

Thanks!  I'll work on getting them posted soon. m

Reviewer: SierraXR4i Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Mar 2010 11:34 AM Title: Bachelor Hunting Party

I hops it coms more :-)

it realy good.



Author's Response:

Just posted the last chapter.  Keep an eye out for the sequels: The Necklace and Polar Night.

Reviewer: Cullenfest Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Mar 2010 3:06 AM Title: Bachelor Hunting Party

what a fabulous story - i've rushed to get through the chapters to this point.  sorry i've not reviewed on the way but I have only good things to say about your stuff.  I love the way you play out the dialogue. it is so natural.

awesome job!



Author's Response:

Thanks!  There's only one more chapter to go... but I've got two sequels in the works.  They'll be posted here as well. m

Reviewer: Mrs Edward B Cullen Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 13 Mar 2010 11:02 PM Title: The Long Night Redux

Hahaha cruel but nice play to end the chapter. Awesome work. Poor Edward wanting a child :( I love that touch in the story though. Keep it up :)



Author's Response:

Thanks!



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: Cullenfest Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Mar 2010 3:57 PM Title: Payment

amazing



Author's Response:

I appreciate each of your reviews.  Thank you for writing. m

Reviewer: Cullenfest Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Mar 2010 3:51 PM Title: Reversal

simply great!  i love the joshing that goes on between them at the end of the chapter and if I'd been writing this, it is exactly how I would want it to go.

Reviewer: Cullenfest Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Mar 2010 3:26 PM Title: Penance

fabulous, insightful, tender and chilling too. wonderfully written.

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Date: 13 Mar 2010 3:13 PM Title: Sunset

absolutely beautiful.

Reviewer: Cullenfest Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Mar 2010 3:06 PM Title: Temperature

lovely chapter. soft & gentle.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Mar 2010 6:00 PM Title: Confessions

That whole chapter was one big cliffy!  hehehe  You are truly evil!  LOL!  Update soon. :)



Author's Response:

I will.  Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: SierraXR4i Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Mar 2010 12:16 AM Title: The Last Night Part III

I kant waite to next chapter.

Love the story.



Author's Response:

Right now I'm posting the continuation of Edward & Bella's night together in The Last Night Outtake.  Once I get that all up, I'll continue with Prelude.  Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: les16 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2010 11:14 PM Title: Restraint

I love this story! I have read this and the accompanying The Necklace and Polar Night on the other site! I can't wait until they all come together!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading, wherever!  I can't wait for them to come together either.... I wish I could write faster or quit my job or something, lol.

Reviewer: Moonlit-Wishes Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2010 8:41 AM Title: Sunset

Wow! Just wow! W.O.W. hee hee update soon?



Author's Response:

It's already written.  I'm just transferring it from another site.  So updates should come quickly.  Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: westosobear Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Feb 2010 4:24 PM Title: Temperature

Read all nine chapters at once.  Enjoying the scenes between the Volturi and the Cullens.  Bella and Edward are going very slow, but its still ok. 



Author's Response:

They get the hang of it after a little while.  Edward's a quick study.

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