Date: 06 Sep 2022 9:46 PM Title: Chapter 1
Beautiful! Thank you!
Date: 08 Aug 2014 5:00 PM Title: Chapter 1
I'm typing through tears! This was great. I wanted to hate Edward for lying, but it seemed as if he had enough self-hate for all of us. Thank you for redeeming him. Great job.
Date: 15 Oct 2012 9:32 PM Title: Chapter 1
Congrats on the awards and deservedly so. Very creative story. I do wonder when Jasper realized it was Edward, was it when he first sat down or shortly after? I'm happy they both found each other and were able to heal each other's wounds. I'm glad Edward was able to hear what happened to Jasper and not be so set in what he wanted to believe.
Date: 07 Sep 2012 12:48 PM Title: Chapter 1
I did love reading this one and so glad you won so many awards for it xxx
Date: 07 Sep 2012 12:19 PM Title: Chapter 1
fantastic story. very original. great job! thank you for sharing.
Date: 07 Sep 2012 11:58 AM Title: Chapter 1
This was well worth searching for! (Thank you for letting me know its alternate location(s).)
Beautiful and heart-wrenching. I was so glad Edward finally freed himself from the burden of his undeserved guilt. I was equally glad that Jasper already knew, and loved Edward, anyway.
All the best.
Date: 07 Sep 2012 3:41 AM Title: Chapter 1
I want more!!! I love this. So different from anything I have great! Great work. Congrats.
Date: 06 Sep 2012 11:42 PM Title: Chapter 1
Outstanding story! It really pulled at my heart -- so emotionally moving and so beautifully written.
Thank you.