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Reviewer: twirob13 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 May 2015 7:44 PM Title: Chapter 31- Tale As Old As Time

awesome story;) it was weird that bella had to have a prostestic leg though i liked how you made the hybid lore different ;) thanks so much for completing and posting you rewritten works of the 4 books on here for us ;D

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2015 3:15 PM Title: Chapter 7- Snap Snap Snap

wow

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Mar 2015 9:40 PM Title: Chapter 31- Tale As Old As Time

Yea outliving your family/friends would have to be the hardest part.  Glad Jake and Rory made a wonderful lives for themselves.  LOl for Rory trying to ground her daughter. 

TY for writing and sharing with us all.  You will be missed.  

ty

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Mar 2015 9:30 PM Title: Chapter 30- Waiting For This

oh wow.  No putting humpty dumpty's back together again? no fixing lost limbs... that sucks. hmm interesting story of Xara.  Never read a story with some of the twists you've come up with.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Mar 2015 9:18 PM Title: Chapter 29- We Don't Have To Take This, We Can End It All

Rpov: Glad her and Jake are doing so well.  They need to go back though.  awww for the proposal. 

BPOV: oooh the kids brought help.  coolness. ugh V have crappy timing.   Glad Kate et al came to join the party.  Go Rory and Xara!!!! 

JPOV:  NOOOOO Rory!!!!   Wait???  jake bit her?

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Mar 2015 8:35 PM Title: Chapter 28- Can't Stop Now, I've Traveled So Far

BPOV:  Love the imprints.  They are too cool. 

Ah the new vampires appear.  oooh the Quens.... I like it!!! 

 

 

noooo I don't want you to be done writing FF.  :-(

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Mar 2015 8:17 PM Title: Chapter 27- 10,000 Miles

JPOV:  I'm with Jake.  Its not safe her being out there alone. At least Jake is being honest with her.  

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Mar 2015 8:07 PM Title: Chapter 26- Where As A Child I'd Hide

RPOV:  Glad R feels good about being there and doing normal girl stuff.  Aww for her knowing something is off about her and Jake.  lol for breaking hte doorknob though.  Don't blame her for being pissed though. ok her going off on her own is NOT smart though.  The V could get her and blackmail the rest of the family.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Mar 2015 7:49 PM Title: Chapter 25- Across My Memory

JPOV:  Well at least he and Quil are trying to make the best of things.  awww for meeting Aurora in the store.  

BPOV:  Glad they are all back together finally.  

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Mar 2015 7:39 PM Title: Chapter 24- Back To The Start

Glad they are honing skills and planning and not just going off half cocked against the V.  Oh wow, Jake barely talking to them?  thats not good.  

APOV:  Sooooo Can't wait to take Aro and co all out.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Mar 2015 7:35 PM Title: Chapter 23- Mama

Poor B.  Mother or Child....of course she chose her child.  (personally I don't think she really loved Bella; but I'm cynical).  Glad Charlie was able to come to her and got through to Bella.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Mar 2015 7:26 PM Title: Chapter 22- The Death of Comfort

Rpov: lol for her scheming to get her first kiss.  Oh wow  Renee showing up and stealing Rory....ACK!!!! 

EPOV:  I can see Edward as a teacher.  Glad they have allies.  The V overstep alot it seems.  They should serve the constituents, not the other way around.  

BPOV:  Wonder if someone will be able to get through to Renee.  oh no.  Bella is going to take a long time to forgive herself. Hope they take out the anger on the V.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Mar 2015 7:18 PM Title: Chapter 21- The Werewolf Side, The Vampire Side

lol for Morgan channelling Forest Gump.  Jake dating??? I don't like that.  Why do I get the feeling that the V changed Renee to try and get her to voluntarily come to them?

BPOV:  lol for the typical dad/kid fight over music.  Rory is a smart kid.  Glad she talked to her mom.

APOV:  Ugh I knew they had changed that POS that was her egg donor. (Yeah I don't like Renee; pfft)

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Mar 2015 6:37 PM Title: Chapter 20- I'm Gonna Make This Place Your Home

Poor Jake. Sucks that he and Rory have to be split like thing because of a greedy wanker.  Hope B can keep herself together through all this.  Meeting Kitty was a help to her I think.  

APOV:  They are defying them by not joining I suppose?  Sactamonious pricks.  Well I usually like Marcus, but sounds like he a a prick too.  Well at least they are leaving Charlie alone.   They know way too much as it is.  Ugh Renee....  

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Mar 2015 6:19 PM Title: Chapter 19- Running Away

Ugh Jane and D got away.  I was hoping that bella melted them or something.   Sucks that they didn't know about Betta's ability. knew Jake wouldn't take them leaving very well.   

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Mar 2015 5:17 PM Title: Chapter 18- I Wonder What The Poor People Are Doing

Poor Quil.  Sucks that Claire went away. Glad they are all getting along so well.  Did Betta know about the wolves?  Hope she rips Jane's head off.  Biatch


Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Mar 2015 5:10 PM Title: Chapter 17- Adjusting

Yea still not really caring about Renee at all.  Glad her hunts and visits from the pack/imprints is going well.  oooh interesting new power.   I'd be worried about the V too, esp since they don't want to see her. Carlisle is gonna feel bad for speaking well of Betta the traitor.  lol for the ogling og Damon/Ian.      

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Mar 2015 4:57 PM Title: Chapter 16- The View

Wow Aro is a devious little prick ain't he.  Betta got what was coming to her for her part in it all. Guessing Betta knew how to get around Alice huh? 

Wow not sure if Charlie is being brave or just stupid.  I was wondering if you were going to do the cottage or not.  

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Mar 2015 4:45 PM Title: Chapter 15- She Is Breaking Dawn

Great job with her transition and first "feed".   Well at least you didnt give her R as a first name.  aww for Grandma

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Mar 2015 4:32 PM Title: Chapter 14- A Father's Instinct

Glad E's taking the imprinting ok.  I kinda agree with the bonding with B first part.  Glad the others didn't push it. 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2015 7:07 PM Title: Chapter 13- C'est La Vie

Glad the pack is standing behind them as well as Sue and Charlie.  Dear God, please dont use Renesmee.  That was the stupidest thing I'd ever hear/read. Sleeping Beauty reference huh?

lol for B seeing him imprint.     

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2015 7:00 PM Title: Chapter 12- Afraid of Changes

Glad B & J kinda "make up" in a way.  Everyone is scared and can't blame them for that.  

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2015 6:51 PM Title: Chapter 11- That's The Word

oooh so Edward's telling Charlie. that's different.  Surprised Alice didn't try to stop him.  Ah Charlie.  I love that you've allowed him to be observatant and not clueless like other stories.  

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2015 6:42 PM Title: Chapter 10- Blind Spot

Poor B.  Can understand her being sad, angry, frustrated, Etc.

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Date: 09 Mar 2015 6:38 PM Title: Chapter 9- Bela Lugosi

Well Having Doctors living in house can def make it safer with a c-section and all that. Well the extended family took it well too.  

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2015 6:28 PM Title: Chapter 8- That's What You Get Kids For Making Whoopee

Love B's reactions and talk with E.  

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2015 6:24 PM Title: Chapter 7- Snap Snap Snap

EPOV:  Glad E is enjoying his honeymoon. oooh  Ms Laki really wants to die huh? Don't blame E for reacting that way.  Pfft Edward.  B loves you.  

Hmm Now I'm wondering if this is why Aro wanted her for the volturi?

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2015 6:14 PM Title: Chapter 6- Under The Honeymoon Spell

I would have tested out of school if I had the option.  hmm  now i have to go look up what she said.  Well google translate was useless.  Guess I'll have to wait and see..

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2015 6:05 PM Title: Chapter 5- Together is Where We Both Belong

Glad no mopey, emo Edward after their first time. LOL for sneaky vampire not telling where she's going.  The house and all sounds wonderful.  

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2015 5:58 PM Title: Chapter 4- Traditionally Untraditional

ooh interesting new backstory to the Denali's.  Nice Jake speech. ROFL for Leah's parting gift.

hmm a Bella Bucket list huh?  interesting.     

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2015 5:51 PM Title: Chapter 3- After All This Time

BPOV: I'm with B.  Way too many hours before ceremony.  Aww for Dad making breakfast.  he really does need to get with Sue.

EPOV: short but sweet ceremony.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2015 5:43 PM Title: Chapter 2- A Long Night

LOL  Glad she is standing firm with no heels.  I'm with Charlie....Renee is like a child most of the time.  Glad she got to talk a little to E though

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2015 5:35 PM Title: Chapter 1- I'm Gonna Marry That Boy

Don't blame her for taking me time.  She deserves quiet alone time.  ROFL for kidnapping her to a strip club.  An even bigger ROFL for the strippers.  

 

Aro: Ugh for Sleezy Aro and his "wife".  Sigh someone else who feels 'entitled' to claim Bella. 

Reviewer: sarah38 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jan 2014 4:13 AM Title: Chapter 23- Mama

OMG that has to be the hardest chapete I have read so far, poor bella having to kill her own mother, I knew that she would come out of it in the end but ti still has to be hard for, I know now that bella will fight even harder now to keep her family, the volturi will not win now.



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading Sarah! I hope you enjoy the rest of the story :) JB

Reviewer: Damsel w Dreams Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Dec 2013 5:36 AM Title: Chapter 31- Tale As Old As Time

I enjoyed your re-write of the Twilight Saga. The only request I would make is please, don't use the name of Jesus Christ as an expletive. If you must curse, please use your own name. Thank you.
Keep up the writing, you're good at it.

Author's Response:

I'm glad to hear you enjoyed the rewrite, and thank you for taking the time to review, and with a compliment at that. However while I recognize your right to make the request for me to not use Jesus Christ as an expletive; I would hope you would recognize my right to not amend my writing on yours, or anyones behalf. The characters speak as their personalities suggest they would. I apologize if you take offense to that, or the language in this story; but that is the way I do things. Thank you for being a reader. -JB

Reviewer: Eternal TwilightFan Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2013 1:32 PM Title: Chapter 31- Tale As Old As Time

Abousolutly amazing, really enjoyed the whole series but this story most of all. I'll enjoy reading it over and over again, and letting my friends know where to find an fantastic read. 



Author's Response:

That's wonderful to hear! I'm glad you enjoyed it and hope your friends do as well! Thank you for reading.

Reviewer: Purple Passion Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Dec 2012 10:29 PM Title: Chapter 31- Tale As Old As Time

So sorry to see this story end........I loved ever single chapter. Thank you so much for writing it  :-)



Author's Response:

it was my pleasure!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Dec 2012 8:33 PM Title: Chapter 31- Tale As Old As Time

Sorry, JB, it makes me sad to say goodbye! I have so very much enjoyed reading all your stories, and it was fun sending little thoughts about  all the chapters. I'm so impressed that you have accomplished all this at such a young age! I wish you a wonderful career and a great 2013! You wrapped up all the Twilight  rewrite  just perfectly, right back where it all began!



Author's Response:

Thanks K! I've loved every insight from your reviews, and they've meant the world to me. It's going to be very strange now to write a chapter and not hear from you after its done! Definitely keep in touch, you're one of my best fans.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Dec 2012 8:17 PM Title: Chapter 30- Waiting For This

Thank heaven for your creative mind! That was a really cool way to win the battle, save the Cullens and Quileutes and insure Rory's immortality! Scared hell out of everyone who loved her, but truly, all's well that ends well. Carlisle's pendants sound lovely, by the way!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Dec 2012 3:21 AM Title: Chapter 29- We Don't Have To Take This, We Can End It All

What in the world is Jacob doing biting Rory? Or did I misread, and it's her father? I'm confused, as that battle was horrifying, and I'm almost dreading the casualty list! The only blessing is that the unholy trio are gone, never to return! Hallelujah, and amen! Pardon me while I grit my teeth and try not to think about how soon you will be finished with this and gone from fan fiction.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Dec 2012 2:57 AM Title: Chapter 28- Can't Stop Now, I've Traveled So Far

Your author's note really made me laugh, minus the part where you only have two more chapters left and then are outta' here! The notion of Jacob being racist must come from a terminal case of political correctness! As for the chapter contents, Carlisle has a winner with that combo name. Quen sounds just right, and sure says it like it is. Alice's idea of a party might not be so outlandish. Maybe Jake and Rory could even come home for that! I loved it when the girls came over to raise hell about the airline tickets. Carlisle should have consulted with Edward before doing that!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Dec 2012 4:44 AM Title: Chapter 27- 10,000 Miles

I'm happy Jake let himself be talked into following Rory, and by her father, no less! They need this time together, to make up for lost time and to get to know each other. I'm also hoping those two doves were just doves, and not vampire shape shifters from Volterra!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Dec 2012 6:02 AM Title: Chapter 26- Where As A Child I'd Hide

What a time for Rory ro experience teenage rebellion! This will be the perfect time for Aro to take her and that thought just about makes me sick! How can they let her go now? Isn't anyone going to watch out for her? I can't stand it!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Dec 2012 7:57 AM Title: Chapter 25- Across My Memory

Thank you so much for this happy, joyous chapter! Just the thing right before Christmas! I kinow bad stuff will follow, but for this moment it's good times with family, as it should be this time of year. Be seeing you!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Dec 2012 9:03 AM Title: Chapter 24- Back To The Start

So, Aro is pleased that the Cullens are prepared to defend themselves against attack. Well isn't that sweet! All he has to do is kidnap Bella and Edward's child and kill the ones he doesn't want! Pretty cut and dried, he thinks. Guess he forgot that old saying, catching comes before hanging. I can't wait for this clash that's coming. Only wish Jacob would get back on board, one way or the other.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Dec 2012 12:07 AM Title: Chapter 23- Mama

Well now, seems as if Aro's vicious plan may have backfired on him! Instead of breaking Bella's heart and spirit, her mother's death, as what Aro made her, has steeled her daughter to what must be done to regain all their lives. I'm glad she will fight on their own ground, so to speak. So, back to Forks and preparing. I feel bad, for Charlie, for Bella, for Rory and for Edward. May they all have revenge on the Volturi!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Dec 2012 8:05 AM Title: Chapter 22- The Death of Comfort

Dear God in Heaven, Bella had to kill her own mother, to save her child!.How will she ever get over that? I vote that Caius, Marcus and especially Aro, be sent to Hell by the quickest route available! Now they have to retaliate somehow.  It just makes me so sad that those evil monsters did that to Renee and thus to Bella. There needs to be payback, and I hope it's a major bitch!

Reviewer: edwards_girl_4_ever2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Dec 2012 2:12 PM Title: Chapter 21- The Werewolf Side, The Vampire Side

As long as B/E/A and C/E are okay I'm fine with any ending. I can't stand to see Carlisle or Esme hurt.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Dec 2012 7:54 AM Title: Chapter 21- The Werewolf Side, The Vampire Side

I should have known that Aro would pull some evil bullshit like this! Poor Renee, not only turned against her will, but vampire brainwashed to boot! He thinks he has the perfect weapon to destroy the Cullens. It may cause a lot of pain and misery, but I still vote for Bella and all her family, vampire and wolf alike!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Dec 2012 3:33 AM Title: Chapter 20- I'm Gonna Make This Place Your Home

Look out, Renee, something wicked this way comes! So, Aro thinks he can break Bella with threatening her mother, or some such bull-shit! I think he has no real idea with whom he's dealing! The meeting between Bella and Kitty was very touching, and just the boost Bella needed at that moment.There just has to be a way for the Cullens to win against Aro! I'm not smart enough to know what it is, but it's out there!

Reviewer: IThinkINeededThat Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2012 11:33 PM Title: Chapter 18- I Wonder What The Poor People Are Doing

Either Jane is a total idiot, which I doubt - or she was deliberately goading her.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2012 3:52 AM Title: Chapter 19- Running Away

Being aware that this is fiction and all still didn't keep the tears at bay. I don't blame Bella one bit for her bone-deep sadness. It's damn discouraging to keep having to fight for what's yours, because some meglomaniacal  monster wants to take it from you! Keeping my fingers crossed until next time, take care!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Nov 2012 8:04 AM Title: Chapter 18- I Wonder What The Poor People Are Doing

Thanks for the chapter, and the cliffhanger, it gives me something to think about while stuffung the turkey and peeling potaoes. Please give us a little gift and let Bella kill Jane. If not kill, then at least maim, okay? Have a lovely day, eat lots and look out, here comes Christmas!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Nov 2012 6:55 AM Title: Chapter 17- Adjusting

Your teacher was spoton about your talent. You write a really good story, my dear. I'm crossing my fingers that you won't let Aro get his filthy hands on Aurora, and that Alice will see them coming soon enough to give them all time to prepare a defense.  I trust you to write us all a happy ever after ending, before you ride off into the sunset!

Reviewer: edwards_girl_4_ever2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Nov 2012 6:12 AM Title: Chapter 17- Adjusting

Very good

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Date: 14 Nov 2012 5:29 PM Title: Chapter 16- The View

This was sweet

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Nov 2012 8:31 AM Title: Chapter 16- The View

Life is so perfect now for Bella and Edward, everything has turned out so well, it was inevitable that trouble would follow. I just didn't realize how far that evil son-of-a-bitch, Aro would go to ruin everything! I just hope Alice will see what's coming and they will hatch a plan to defeat him! I couldn't stand for him to take Rory and kill her parents, just to use her as a lab rat! Not after all they have endured to get to this happy place! That would be hideous! Please tell me you won't do that, please!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Nov 2012 8:06 AM Title: Chapter 15- She Is Breaking Dawn

Careful, girl, you'll make me blush! It's not my fault your stories are so good I have to review every chapter, it's yours! Bella's awakening was excellent, not to mention amazing. She was so ready for this, so strong. No wonder Edward had such confidence in her reactions, it came from his faith in her, and his great love for her. Everyone was so ready to see her, especially Jacob. By the way, that's a lot of name for a little baby! Good thing she's a human/vampire hybrid, and will be able to handle it! That was so sweet that Bella's first sight was her Edward, rocking Rory's cradle. Good daddy! Loved it all, and see you soon, right?    xoxo, Kathleen

Reviewer: edwards_girl_4_ever2 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Nov 2012 12:56 PM Title: Chapter 14- A Father's Instinct

  1. Awwww this was amazing. 

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Nov 2012 12:29 AM Title: Chapter 14- A Father's Instinct

While I'm loving these chapters, that nagging little voice in my head keeps reminding me, it's almost over. When this is done, I'm really going to miss you writing fanfic about Edward and Bella, and the wolves! This transformational episode was perfect, the way Edward handled Jacob, and his family. It makes sense to me to wait for Bella to see Aurora before anyone besides her father does! Just lovely, my dear!

Reviewer: edwards_girl_4_ever2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Nov 2012 1:21 AM Title: Chapter 13- C'est La Vie

great

Reviewer: Camilla11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Nov 2012 12:02 AM Title: Chapter 13- C'est La Vie

Very emotional and very good.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Nov 2012 10:54 PM Title: Chapter 13- C'est La Vie

You did a great job on Aurora's birth, and Jake's imprinting on her. Now we just have to cross our fingers and hope for the best as Bella goes through the change. Then all we have to worry about are the Volturi!

Reviewer: edwards_girl_4_ever2 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Oct 2012 8:24 PM Title: Chapter 12- Afraid of Changes

SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO good.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Oct 2012 7:04 PM Title: Chapter 12- Afraid of Changes

What a wonderful, complex conversation, between Bella and Jacob! It epitomizes their connection, somehow. This view of her pregnancy is a bit more like real life, I think. Time is almost upon us, I'm thinking. Can just barely wait! 

Reviewer: edwards_girl_4_ever2 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Oct 2012 1:49 AM Title: Chapter 11- That's The Word

Amazing. Love this Charlie. Oh and Edward is the best man ever... Brilliant. 

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2012 9:08 PM Title: Chapter 11- That's The Word

I loved this chapter so much! This is really how Charlie should have been informed, because we know he would always be there for his little girl! You have done such a good job with this story, Stephanie should have consulted with you! Just sayin'!

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Date: 26 Oct 2012 5:39 PM Title: Chapter 10- Blind Spot

thank you for the update

Reviewer: edwards_girl_4_ever2 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Oct 2012 3:48 AM Title: Chapter 10- Blind Spot

Amazing ch. I love this. 

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Oct 2012 2:49 AM Title: Chapter 10- Blind Spot

Not that I haven't read this,or similar stories, dozens of times, and it still grabvs me by the throat and I have to hold my breath! I want to help them all somehow and can't wait to see how it all turns out! See you soon!

Reviewer: IThinkINeededThat Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2012 11:35 PM Title: Chapter 10- Blind Spot

I've just started reading your saga, but thought I would skip ahead and see how you are dealing with Breaking Dawn. I just read this chapter, but I must say.

BRAVO! I never could understand how Bella refused in the books to look at how her decision affected everyone. She was so incredibly selfish. I look forward to seeing how they deal with this.

Reviewer: Camilla11 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2012 6:35 AM Title: Chapter 8- That's What You Get Kids For Making Whoopee

A great chapter this, if terrible. The deviation form Canon (the native woman is evil) is strangley satisfyiong as are Edward and Bella's reactions.

Reviewer: edwards_girl_4_ever2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2012 5:55 PM Title: Chapter 9- Bela Lugosi

AMAZING

Reviewer: edwards_girl_4_ever2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2012 5:42 PM Title: Chapter 8- That's What You Get Kids For Making Whoopee

WOW they have grown so much.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2012 5:41 AM Title: Chapter 9- Bela Lugosi

I'm so pulling for Bella and Edward's child to be a product of their love and not a curse from a Ticuna witch. With the support group she has, the odds are definitely in Bellas favor. UI'm still crossing my fingers, just in case!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2012 6:06 PM Title: Chapter 8- That's What You Get Kids For Making Whoopee

That's my girl! No surprise to me that Bella stepped up the way she did. I totally get what she's telling Edward. In my own twisted way, I think Laki got just what she deserved! This is how their future was meant to be decided, by the two of them working it out together! The small amount of humour thrown in just makes it better.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Oct 2012 11:26 PM Title: Chapter 7- Snap Snap Snap

Edward will probably soon regret what he has done to Laki, but even more that he did it in front of Bella! Now that they know what the problem is, now the hunt begins for a solution, one they both can live with!

Reviewer: edwards_girl_4_ever2 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Oct 2012 11:22 PM Title: Chapter 7- Snap Snap Snap

WHAT. A. TWIST!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2012 10:44 PM Title: Chapter 6- Under The Honeymoon Spell

Poor Jake, he's suffering from the same thing Edward put up with for years, single -guy syndrome, among mated pairs. Bella probably sympathizes as much as Edward does. I think I caught a few words from Laki's incantation to Bella. Something about a baby and poor little girl, perhaps? Does this mean what I think it means, hmmm? Maybe Jake won't be alone much longer? Please let me know if I'm guessing correctly.

Reviewer: edwards_girl_4_ever2 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2012 6:05 PM Title: Chapter 6- Under The Honeymoon Spell

Can't wait for them to find out she's pregnant. 

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2012 9:26 AM Title: Chapter 5- Together is Where We Both Belong

The house in Brazil sounds like heaven, and the whole honeymoon just like a dream! You have outdone yourself, for sure!

Reviewer: edwards_girl_4_ever2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2012 12:42 AM Title: Chapter 5- Together is Where We Both Belong

another nice twist.

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Date: 01 Oct 2012 12:38 PM Title: Chapter 4- Traditionally Untraditional

Great wedding ch. 

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2012 7:31 AM Title: Chapter 4- Traditionally Untraditional

It was well worth the wait! The reception was great, and Bella's toast was quite lovely and heartfelt. This marriage was more than earned, it was fought for and won! Makes you want to raise a glass to the happy couple, and then pray that they make it through the dark stuff Aro has in store for them!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Sep 2012 2:11 AM Title: Chapter 3- After All This Time

Except for the part where Bella woke up to Alice pinching her face, this was a lovely wedding day. The silver ring Charlie gave her, made from his and Renee's wedding rings, blew me away! It is like he knows things subconciously, sometimes! Anyway, I'm glad Edward and  Bella are married and on their way to a honeymoon. Since they have no idea what Aro has planned, it's a perfect day! Ignorance really is bliss in this instance. Are you sure there's a happy ending for these two?

Reviewer: edwards_girl_4_ever2 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Sep 2012 12:14 AM Title: Chapter 3- After All This Time

Loved this

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Sep 2012 4:37 AM Title: Chapter 2- A Long Night

I'm really glad neither Bella nor Edward are aware of Aro's plans. They only know how happy the next day will make them, and all their families. Sure weddings are stressful, but wonderful as well!  This surely is what they both deserve, God knows they have worked and sacrificed enough for this !

Reviewer: edwards_girl_4_ever2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Sep 2012 6:00 PM Title: Chapter 2- A Long Night

Sweet

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Date: 11 Sep 2012 8:24 PM Title: Chapter 1- I'm Gonna Marry That Boy

This is awesome I love this series so much.

Reviewer: Purple Passion Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Sep 2012 5:59 AM Title: Chapter 1- I'm Gonna Marry That Boy

I loved this first chapter. Can't wait for the wedding and the honeymoon!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Sep 2012 3:42 AM Title: Chapter 1- I'm Gonna Marry That Boy

As soon as I read the words about all their troubles being behind them, I knew damn good and well there was a fly in the ointment! Of course, Aro and his evil plans are more like a poisonous spider than a fly. Whst's this about waiting eighteen years for Bella to be a vampire? And who is Aro's psychic? I'm so glad the wolves and vampires get along as family, because this looks like there will be another battle over Bella.

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