Date: 14 Dec 2014 8:12 PM Title: Chapter 155
I'm hoping for a Christmas gift from you in the form of another chapter in your wonderful tale. Hope that all is well with you.
Date: 12 Dec 2014 3:44 AM Title: Chapter 155
Are you coming back....you're missed!!!
Date: 01 Dec 2014 8:26 PM Title: Chapter 155
I really enjoy reading your story. I am happy they decided to adopt peep. Please update soon!!!!
Date: 12 Nov 2014 7:33 PM Title: Chapter 155
Brilliant!!
Date: 12 Nov 2014 2:18 AM Title: Chapter 155
Love it!! Keep it coming :)
Date: 11 Nov 2014 4:31 PM Title: Chapter 155
Sweet. Now where will you take us on this ride?
[Report This]Date: 11 Nov 2014 1:34 PM Title: Chapter 155
That was great. I had a laugh at Christian's eagerness to take her home. Can't wait for the kids reaction, especially Grace. She will probably try and play dress ups like she's a new doll. LOL
Date: 11 Nov 2014 5:50 AM Title: Chapter 155
Always love the chapters.
Date: 11 Nov 2014 3:18 AM Title: Chapter 155
Why wait! LOL. They don't even have a bed for the little lamb!
Date: 10 Nov 2014 2:59 AM Title: Chapter 154
So appreciative of your update.
Date: 09 Nov 2014 11:20 PM Title: Chapter 154
Oh my gosh, I didn't see that coming. I'm so happy they changed their minds. :)
[Report This]Date: 08 Nov 2014 8:29 PM Title: Chapter 154
Awwww thank you thank thank you for changing yr mind, I was hoping so bad that they would take her, I love it and I love yr wring, or if all the stories I have read (and that's alot) yrs are the best, I hope you never stop writing cause you are sooo talented, you make me laugh, you make me cry, your just wonderful. Xoxo good job can't wait for more of yr stories xo
[Report This]Date: 08 Nov 2014 2:38 AM Title: Chapter 1
OH MY GOD! Lol. First i was crying because he said no…then i was crying because he changed his mind…Im a hot mess. I love how even after all this time your story is far from predictable! Love, love, love it! I rarely comment, but i just had to let you know how much i loved this update :)
[Report This]Date: 08 Nov 2014 2:37 AM Title: Chapter 154
OH MY GOD! Lol. First i was crying because he said no…then i was crying because he changed his mind…Im a hot mess. I love how even after all this time your story is far from predictable! Love, love, love it! I rarely comment, but i just had to let you know how much i loved this update :)
Date: 07 Nov 2014 9:08 PM Title: Chapter 154
That was just beautiful! Little Ella is joining the Grey family! I am so excited!
Date: 06 Nov 2014 1:59 AM Title: Chapter 154
What a beautiful, emotional chapter! it has been worth the wait! Please write more often, I miss the updates! Your writing is fantastic!!!!
Date: 05 Nov 2014 10:44 PM Title: Chapter 154
Loved it , brilliant x Thanks
[Report This]Date: 04 Nov 2014 10:54 PM Title: Chapter 154
OMG, I am crying from this chapter it was beautiful heart warming.Can not wait for next chapter.Love your story .
Date: 04 Nov 2014 7:24 AM Title: Chapter 154
That was beautiful! I love your writing!
Date: 04 Nov 2014 4:08 AM Title: Chapter 154
Awww... tears on my eyes! Amazing chapter!xoxo
Date: 04 Nov 2014 3:38 AM Title: Chapter 154
This was a BEAUTIFUL chapter....another baby!!!! You are an awesome writer.....I look forward to new chapters every week!!!
Date: 03 Nov 2014 8:02 PM Title: Chapter 154
Yay for the mouse. I think I was as torn on the decision as they were. They said they weren't going to take her....and I thought, yes, I agree. Your family is perfect as it is. Then they said yes...and I thought...I'm so glad. Mouse belongs with you. And Ella was my mother's name....so doubly glad she will get all the Christian Grey family love. Wow. You do take us for an amazing ride.
Date: 03 Nov 2014 7:57 PM Title: Chapter 154
Beautiful, loving, and well written. My heart is with them.
Date: 03 Nov 2014 5:37 PM Title: Chapter 154
They changed their minds... I'm happy... I hope it works out. I love the name and the sentiment. I got quite teary reading this chapter.
Date: 03 Nov 2014 2:08 PM Title: Chapter 154
I knew it!!!! Not really.
Date: 03 Nov 2014 12:30 PM Title: Chapter 154
I just love this Christian, he makes me cry!
[Report This]Date: 03 Nov 2014 10:55 AM Title: Chapter 154
oh my!!! this chapter puts me on tears.. it is unexpected for Christian to do it..
[Report This]Date: 03 Nov 2014 9:49 AM Title: Chapter 154
OMG I'm soaked with tears while reading this. I was so sure they wouldn't adopt her after the previous chapter. It must have been Ana breaking down on the plane that bought his emotions to the surface more. I think he realised just how attached he'd become to the baby and how much of a hole it would leave in his heart. I'm so happy they changed their minds. You write the emotional parts so beautifully and believably. I can see Grace trying to dress her up like a doll already. LOL Can't wait for more.
Date: 27 Oct 2014 6:34 PM Title: Chapter 153
Love each and every one of your chapters...anxiously awaiting the next!!!
Date: 18 Oct 2014 1:04 PM Title: Chapter 153
Not surprised at his answer.
[Report This]Date: 16 Oct 2014 11:06 AM Title: Chapter 153
Have read all 3 of these stories and love them. Keep writing, can't wait to see were this is going.
Date: 13 Oct 2014 6:15 PM Title: Chapter 153
Kinda sad about grace not getting her baby but understand
Date: 13 Oct 2014 5:14 AM Title: Chapter 153
Awwwww, no mouse to join the Grey clan. I was certain they would adopt her. Oh well. I wonder what Christian is about to tell Ana on the jet. Can't wait for more.
Date: 13 Oct 2014 4:58 AM Title: Chapter 153
Loved it! Once again! Thanks for making them such a fun, loving couple!
Date: 12 Oct 2014 9:54 PM Title: Chapter 153
Thanks! It will be interesting to see how Grace reacts. She is such a drama queen!
Date: 12 Oct 2014 9:18 PM Title: Chapter 153
I expected the decision about Mouse... I kind of agree. I hope they can help find a lovely family and home for her. I'm sure they will see fit that she never goes without and gets a terrific education.
Date: 30 Sep 2014 10:06 PM Title: Chapter 152
If you didn't realize 152 is duplicated at the bottom of 152. Thought I let you know if others haven't already.
[Report This]Date: 30 Sep 2014 11:15 AM Title: Chapter 152
Will there be another chapter to this one?
[Report This]Date: 30 Sep 2014 2:18 AM Title: Chapter 152
This story is awesome.
[Report This]Date: 30 Sep 2014 1:27 AM Title: Chapter 150
That babygirl is so going to be a part of their family.
[Report This]Date: 30 Sep 2014 1:01 AM Title: Chapter 149
I love how he got himself out of that one.
Date: 29 Sep 2014 11:20 PM Title: Chapter 1
Love this story and look forward to the next chapters. I can see there is so much more to come. Well done. Karen.
[Report This]Date: 29 Sep 2014 9:59 PM Title: Chapter 144
Ta,k about being inventive!
[Report This]Date: 29 Sep 2014 6:05 AM Title: Chapter 142
I know I've said itbefore but they are incredible together.
[Report This]Date: 29 Sep 2014 5:21 AM Title: Chapter 141
Boy can you write and you put in a bit of humor in just at the right time.
[Report This]Date: 29 Sep 2014 1:40 AM Title: Chapter 133
I love jealous Christian. Tommy is absolutely precious.
[Report This]Date: 29 Sep 2014 12:47 AM Title: Chapter 132
Great chapter. Sometimes she really is naive.
[Report This]Date: 28 Sep 2014 7:19 PM Title: Chapter 125
He is too much. Love it.
[Report This]Date: 28 Sep 2014 3:14 AM Title: Chapter 111
They really are made for one another.
[Report This]Date: 28 Sep 2014 2:18 AM Title: Chapter 110
That explanation was priceless.
[Report This]Date: 28 Sep 2014 12:51 AM Title: Chapter 107
Gotta loves. I remember my son doing that to me.
[Report This]Date: 27 Sep 2014 11:15 PM Title: Chapter 104
That's dirty pool!
[Report This]Date: 27 Sep 2014 10:02 PM Title: Chapter 102
They sure do have a way with one another.
[Report This]Date: 27 Sep 2014 9:38 PM Title: Chapter 101
I just love this story.
[Report This]Date: 27 Sep 2014 5:42 PM Title: Chapter 93
Absolutely precious.
[Report This]Date: 27 Sep 2014 5:21 PM Title: Chapter 92
That woman has waited so long she's a saint in my book.
[Report This]Date: 27 Sep 2014 8:27 AM Title: Chapter 87
Boy can Christian say the most romantic things.
[Report This]Date: 26 Sep 2014 10:36 PM Title: Chapter 76
Have to love kids to them everything is extremely simple.
[Report This]Date: 26 Sep 2014 9:59 PM Title: Chapter 75
I think I feel just as sorry for Christian as I do for Tommy.
[Report This]Date: 26 Sep 2014 12:19 PM Title: Chapter 67
Sometimes I don't know who is more incredible you or the story. Excellent writing.
[Report This]Date: 26 Sep 2014 2:01 AM Title: Chapter 61
They really are so precious together.
[Report This]Date: 26 Sep 2014 1:30 AM Title: Chapter 60
Dumb de dumb dumb.
[Report This]Date: 26 Sep 2014 12:19 AM Title: Chapter 58
If more of the people in the world would be like them the world would be a beautiful place.
[Report This]Date: 25 Sep 2014 10:56 PM Title: Chapter 56
Christian no just got over ruled.
[Report This]Date: 25 Sep 2014 6:42 PM Title: Chapter 52
That was GREAT!!!
Date: 25 Sep 2014 2:24 PM Title: Chapter 124
I can't take it anymore. My internal proofreader is sick of seeing "discreet" being spelled incorrectly.
[Report This]Date: 25 Sep 2014 1:25 PM Title: Chapter 44
Thank fuck in Christians own words.
Date: 25 Sep 2014 9:24 AM Title: Chapter 113
Mama Grace is awesome!
[Report This]Date: 25 Sep 2014 3:11 AM Title: Chapter 32
WOW that was intense!
[Report This]Date: 25 Sep 2014 2:04 AM Title: Chapter 29
G-d bless Sawyer. Can't wait for Christian to find out everything. Poor Ana.
[Report This]Date: 24 Sep 2014 4:58 PM Title: Chapter 15
Beautiful chapter.
[Report This]Date: 24 Sep 2014 2:16 AM Title: Chapter 5
Beautifully written
[Report This]Date: 24 Sep 2014 1:30 AM Title: Chapter 4
G-d I
love this story.
Date: 23 Sep 2014 5:07 AM Title: Chapter 74
Love Dom Christian
Date: 22 Sep 2014 7:50 PM Title: Chapter 71
Silly. Little boys have erections. He would not be surprised by this. Believe me, I had 3 sons. They have them from the moment of birth onward.
Date: 22 Sep 2014 7:34 PM Title: Chapter 152
Yeah your back!!! Nothing is sexier than a man who loves his kids and wife and isn't afraid to show it. Sexy chapter ... loved it.
Date: 22 Sep 2014 2:45 AM Title: Chapter 152
So glad your back, missed you. Love the spa day!
Date: 21 Sep 2014 8:54 PM Title: Chapter 152
Is Phyllis a problem does he like her or was he with her????let me know!
Date: 21 Sep 2014 8:06 PM Title: Chapter 152
Glad your back.....Thx for the new chapters!
Date: 21 Sep 2014 7:31 PM Title: Chapter 152
Wow yeah he definitely shouldn't have asked her what Phyllis said about him while still inside her.. Not good. Can't wait till the next chapter.
Date: 21 Sep 2014 6:23 PM Title: Chapter 152
Oh Grey. What r u thinking?
Date: 21 Sep 2014 5:06 PM Title: Chapter 152
Wow. He sure isn't acting like himself. He is usually so focused on Ana and sex. Here he is talking about another woman while still inside Ana. This company upheaval has really rattled him.
Date: 21 Sep 2014 3:13 PM Title: Chapter 152
Not sure I like connatations associated with this Phylis, I hope there is no history / or situations between her sn and CG...
Date: 21 Sep 2014 12:53 PM Title: Chapter 152
For some reason there are 2 chapter 152's here.
Great chapter, I wonder why he wants to know?