Login
Register a New Account


Follow Us
      

You must login (register a new account) to review.
Reviewer: aabc Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2014 1:30 AM Title: Chapter 141

Lots to think about.  

I was funny them getting caught in the act.

Reviewer: Josephinesmith Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2014 12:13 AM Title: Chapter 141

Such a great chapter.

Reviewer: akuastrek Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2014 6:20 PM Title: Chapter 86

The story is very, very good, and I'm not sure if this is a late review, but Ana referred to the pilot as Stephen and he said his name was Robert.  Later in the story, you refer again to Stephen.  Which is it?

Reviewer: ladysoprano Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2014 5:02 PM Title: Chapter 1

Absolutely loved your story!  I had a hard time putting it down!  Please keep writing about my favorite couple and you definitely will be added as one of my favorite authors!!!!

Reviewer: ddennis41 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2014 1:17 AM Title: Chapter 140

Yikes, that us a lot to think about.  Grace is awesome, I love how she set  Christian up to hold the baby.  Lovely chapter!

Reviewer: Fefe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2014 4:22 AM Title: Chapter 137

Thank you for the update :)

Reviewer: Ell-mari Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2014 7:37 PM Title: Chapter 140

hi, this is Ell-mari, I'm from South Africa

love the story, but where's the rest? you've got me hooked!

if you can, please send me a mail @ ellmari.keyter@yahoo.com

thank you and good luck



Author's Response:

I add a chapter every week to the story. It is not over. I usually update it on Saturday here in the U.S.  I'm happy you're enjoying it. 

Thanks

Reviewer: katwoman Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2014 6:11 PM Title: Chapter 1

Nice research on the medical issues. So well written.  I'm torn whether or not I want them to take her....I really liked their family with the three they have.   I think they are torn, too.  At least Christian is...think they had Ana at the word "baby". 

Reviewer: Gwenb Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2014 4:03 AM Title: Chapter 140

Cannot wait for the next chapter!!!

Reviewer: TNC2005 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2014 12:45 AM Title: Chapter 140

Yeah! Excellent info on premise and their health conditions, well done!

Reviewer: bri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2014 3:55 PM Title: Chapter 140

Love your story can't wait for more.

Reviewer: Nedbella Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2014 11:28 AM Title: Chapter 140

Excellent chapter.  Lots of info about Bo Peep.  That's was good because it gave us a more clear look at what is in store for her future.  I could see Christian warming to her more than he would admit.  She'll be a Daddy's girl for sure. Can't wait for more.

Reviewer: SHump Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2014 6:15 AM Title: Chapter 140

I have to Google the car to see what it looks like ... hot!

I really hope Ana, Christian and the kids are willing and able to add Bo Peep to their family ... everyone needs a HEA.  :)

Reviewer: Fefe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2014 12:43 AM Title: Chapter 134

I hope he's really going to Taiwan, but have a feeling he's not. Thank you for the update :)

Reviewer: bracken Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2014 11:12 PM Title: Chapter 140

Excellent and so spot on !!! As I have told you before , my daughter was 11 weeks early and I was told about the mile stones and also that she would never be good at maths but hey she is in the top English class at school . Reads all the time and her school work is like Russian to me lol. I still had to work extra hard with mile stones etc and chronic lung disease as well . We had our fair share lung conditions and visited the hospital often. Also when she started school at 4 the teacher noticed Remy always needed a little more push because of my constant one to one which we do as mothers . I just wanted her to be normal as the doctors told me at the begining that they didn't know if she would be brain damaged or not and would know when she hits her mile stones ...like walking etc. Also they told me that the girls are better than the boys and have a higher survival rate . Thanks again Nuwriter xxxxxxxxxxxxxx

Reviewer: aabc Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2014 11:03 PM Title: Chapter 140

Hmmmm yes a lot to think about.  Will they talk to the other kids about it?  I can't wait to find out.

Reviewer: gigi9598 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2014 10:42 PM Title: Chapter 140

awww! you knew once Christian held Bo Peep it was all over. Another child to love.
Thank you so much for doing this, I look forward to the update every week.
Hugs!

Reviewer: coulierb Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2014 8:39 PM Title: Chapter 140

Another baby. Sweet.

Reviewer: JKFlowers1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2014 7:23 PM Title: Chapter 140

Oh, Bo Peep already loves CG, just like us all! Nice chapter thank you!

 

Reviewer: CMD Signed starstar [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2014 7:22 PM Title: Chapter 3

Didn't they cream ate Sam in Clarity?  Why the head stone? Great Mom and daughter day.  

Reviewer: ddennis41 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 May 2014 1:16 AM Title: Chapter 139

Love CG's ring speech!  So cute!

Reviewer: Nedbella Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 May 2014 2:25 PM Title: Chapter 139

Another great chapter.  I've probably said this a tonne of times, but I really love the way you write the kids when they talk.  Especially Grace.  When she was asking for her presant while on Christian's lap I couldn't stop laughing, it was so adorable.  I can't wait to read when they go and see the little girl. I am sure they will adopt her.  Being a Grey will be the best thing to happen to her.  Plus, I bet Grace would love a baby sister. Can't wait for more. 

Reviewer: aabc Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 May 2014 11:48 PM Title: Chapter 139

Excellent! No drama while he was away.  Fun and lovely chapter!

Reviewer: Josephinesmith Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2014 5:52 PM Title: Chapter 139

Hi. You have brought these characters to life. What is happening with Virginia, Ray and Myra with the pregnancy?

Thank you so much for your great story.

Reviewer: SHump Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2014 6:55 AM Title: Chapter 139

Christian and Grace moments are the best.

Reviewer: TNC2005 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2014 1:37 AM Title: Chapter 139

I love Christian! 

Reviewer: gigi9598 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 May 2014 11:30 PM Title: Chapter 139

As always, fantastic chapter! thank you so much for taking the time to write this for our enjoyment.

Reviewer: mrsshropshire Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 May 2014 9:21 PM Title: Chapter 139

Christian is such a great dad! Great job on chapter 139. I always love reading your story! 

Reviewer: JKFlowers1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 May 2014 6:58 PM Title: Chapter 139

So sweet to hear CG with Grace, that little ring how nice.  I need to stop reading and save 2 chapters at a time to read, one just is not enough. But thank you it is great I cannot wait to see them visiting Sarah.

 

Reviewer: JKFlowers1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 May 2014 10:28 PM Title: Chapter 138

Nice chapter I can't wait for hubby to retun to see what happens next. 

Reviewer: Nedbella Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 May 2014 10:08 PM Title: Chapter 138

Yaaaay, Ana. I'm glad you came to the conclusion that yes, you can love another child.  I think the baby will turn out fine health wise.  None of the issues mentioned here.......hint hint LOL.  Great moment there between Ana and Grace.  She's so cute.  Can't wait for more. 

Reviewer: gigi9598 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 May 2014 10:07 AM Title: Chapter 138

Fantastic chapter as always, well worth the wait. Thank you for doing this for us each week.

Reviewer: bracken Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 May 2014 6:55 AM Title: Chapter 138

Briilliant and so sweet. Will they adopt ? Will it be one too many ? Oh the possibilities ! Thanks for the update . xxxxxxxxxxxx

Reviewer: reader tiff Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 May 2014 10:45 PM Title: Chapter 138

Very SWEET!

Reviewer: Country kitchen Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 May 2014 10:42 PM Title: Chapter 1

Thank you.  I've been checking for an update for days.  Glad that you posted.  Adoption??? Probably with her soft heart and Christian willing to give her what she wants - in so many ways!

Reviewer: coulierb Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 May 2014 8:58 PM Title: Chapter 138

:)

Reviewer: mrsshropshire Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 May 2014 5:02 PM Title: Chapter 1

I hope everything is okay! You haven't posted in a few weeks, and I'm missing your story! Hope to see a new chapter soon :)

Reviewer: reader tiff Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Apr 2014 12:33 AM Title: Chapter 2

Where r u!!....Seriously....hope you're okay:)

Reviewer: BabyBea Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Apr 2014 8:37 PM Title: Chapter 136

I miss your writing. I hope you're okay. Take care.

Reviewer: carmenlorettalesar Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Apr 2014 11:56 AM Title: Chapter 1

Been checking everyday for my weekly dose of Full Circle ...I'm like an addict!

Reviewer: Josephinesmith Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Apr 2014 4:01 PM Title: Chapter 136

I hope you are well and just busy. I hope you aren't struggling or having any difficulties.

Take care. Thank you for great stories.

Reviewer: Milly84 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Apr 2014 11:08 PM Title: Chapter 136

I'm a little concerned. I don't think I have ever seen you miss a week and I've been reading your stories for like a year. Would hate to see them end. Please write more.

Reviewer: Gillian Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Apr 2014 9:07 AM Title: Chapter 136

Please write more. I love the story, I would hate to see it end. Pls wright more chapters per week??? pretty please

Reviewer: Eva Masen-Pattinson Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Apr 2014 6:03 AM Title: Chapter 136

Each chapter amazes me. I hope you keep writing after you finish this trilogy.

Reviewer: Nedbella Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Apr 2014 5:10 PM Title: Chapter 136

Great chapter.  YES! YES! YES! please have them adopt little bo peep. I like the names Olivia, Angela ( because she's a little angel )....and Angela is my name and I fit the description of the baby. if you are thinking of names that is. Hint hint. LOL. Can't wait for more of this awesome story. 

Reviewer: sasnakgirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2014 11:33 AM Title: Chapter 136

Great chapter, thank you.  I don't think it is a good idea for C&A to adopt her but maybe Gail and Jason would like to make her a member of their family?  Can't wait to see where you take us, NuWriter.

 

Reviewer: AngieM93 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2014 8:52 AM Title: Chapter 1

I may be in the minority here, but I don't think they should adopt that baby. I think it would set them back major time. Ana would probabbly have to give up her job again and I don't think it's fair for her to have to take care of an infant almost her whole adult life, since she became a mom at 22. she and Christian deserve more time just for the two of them with other children being older. Also I know this is fiction, but it's not a fairytale, and no matter how much money you have you can't adopt every orphan you run into. Children should be adopted out of love, not pity or guilt(which I read between the lines when adoption attorney called, like no one wants to adopt her, so because you can afford it you should).All in all, I think that it would take away the reality of the story.

Reviewer: coulierb Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2014 7:51 AM Title: Chapter 136

As much as I love this study, I don't wish another child on them. I hope someone else comes along and adopts the baby. 

Reviewer: bracken Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2014 7:48 AM Title: Chapter 136

Yip.........Brilliant !  Well I think as usual Christian will put up a fight only to back down ! BUT how bad a fight will this be ? Will it break them or make them stronger ? Oh well . Is Colten going to be a good boy this time ? Will every thing push Christian too far to breaking point ? Mmmmmmm ! Well thanks again my dear x.........love ya x

Reviewer: JKFlowers1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2014 5:41 AM Title: Chapter 136

Is the date night going to be ruined or will Mr CG be his sweet, oh my god drop dead gorgeous make your stomach turn self. Nice lead into the drama.

Reviewer: SHump Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2014 5:06 AM Title: Chapter 136

Little Bo Peep is so cute. I'm scared about Christian's reaction. But if anyone can help a less fortunate child, it's them.  

Epilogue??? EEKKKKK!!! I can't imagine my weekends without one of my favorite couples.  "...Please don't take my sunshine away."

Reviewer: reader tiff Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2014 3:15 AM Title: Chapter 136

I Love these stories.....please don't end them!!!  What is CG gonna say about this baby??????

Reviewer: Josephinesmith Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2014 9:03 PM Title: Chapter 135

i am a bit concerned. please don't abandon this story.

 

Reviewer: JKFlowers1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2014 4:33 PM Title: Chapter 135

Only just got chance to read this, good as ever but I feel uneasy with CG trip. You are so good at keeping us on the edge of our seats. Please continue looking forward to the next episode tomorrow!

 

Reviewer: Gillian Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Apr 2014 12:06 PM Title: Chapter 135

Pls dont ever stop writing, Im loving the story so much. Im actually an addict. Please continue

Reviewer: 30olives Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 08 Apr 2014 12:16 AM Title: Chapter 135

Maybe Anna can be a volunteer at hospital? Kids, kids, and more kids!

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2014 3:49 PM Title: Chapter 135

I knew the baby would be back....somehow she will be in the family. I am not sure with how but she will be there

Reviewer: bracken Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2014 1:24 PM Title: Chapter 135

Brilliant stuff ...just read it my lap top froze all weekend grrrrrrrrr ! Well what is going down will Colton or her hot boss ? Is Christian really where he says he is ? Or will he maybe have to go to Togo after all ? Oh the possibilities lol ! What is with the new maid ? Thanks again ! You never dissappoint ! NEXT !!!!!! x

Reviewer: Nedbella Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2014 1:02 AM Title: Chapter 135

Oh please please please have them adopt the little baby girl.  As soon as I read about her earlier in the story I had a gut feeling she was meant to be a Grey.  She had copper hair if I remember correctly. Maybe even the grey eyes too.  I'm BEGGING you.  Have them adopt her.....LOL.  I sound silly don't I.  Can't wait for more of this awesome story.

Reviewer: Smiley2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2014 12:13 AM Title: Chapter 1

Let Ana adopt the baby girl and also let her and Chridten bare another child this is fanfiction and besides all thing are possible great writing.

Reviewer: sasnakgirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2014 11:05 PM Title: Chapter 135

Anna has such a big heart, can't wait to see where you take us.  Thank you for the update!

Reviewer: Nedbella Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2014 2:51 AM Title: Chapter 134

Fabulous chapter and oh what a juicy lemon.  My mouth is still tingling....LOL. Hmmmmm, I bet he will do both.  Taiwan then Togo on his way back.  He won't be able to resist checking things for himself.  If he is going to Togo, it's going to cause a massive fight.  But what's a FSOG story without Ana and Christian fighting over something like this......I know I enjoy it because of the mind blowing make up sex.  Hahaha. Can't wait for more. 

Reviewer: SHump Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2014 5:51 AM Title: Chapter 134

I wouldn't put any past Christian.  I am a little worried when Ana said something about being cocerned with what could happen when they are boyh outta town.   Hhhmmm ...

As always ... another fabulous and iintriguing chapter and looking forward to the next.

Reviewer: aabc Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2014 1:06 AM Title: Chapter 134

I hate when they are away from each other, something bad always happens!  I hope I'm Wrong.

Reviewer: coulierb Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2014 12:41 AM Title: Chapter 134

Yes, I think he will. 

 

Reviewer: C2L4E Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2014 12:30 AM Title: Chapter 134

Thank you for your time of writing these stories i hope there will be lots more to come. You have made me laugh, cry, worry and I just loved them all. Good luck with it all. Thank you.

Reviewer: KhadijaY95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Mar 2014 11:01 PM Title: Chapter 134

I love it.

Reviewer: sasnakgirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Mar 2014 10:25 PM Title: Chapter 134

Uh oh, I'm afraid he is considering a 'side' trip to Togo.  Thank you for keeping this story alive and fresh.  :)

Reviewer: JKFlowers1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Mar 2014 9:08 PM Title: Chapter 134

Something does not feel right, why and what is he up to. Togo bad bad bad.

 

Reviewer: Robsfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Mar 2014 8:33 PM Title: Chapter 134

If he goes to Togo he's in trouble!

Reviewer: cthreatt Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Mar 2014 7:45 PM Title: Chapter 134

oh Lord...Please don't let this be another Columbia experience!  I can see Christian going to Togo to negotiate with the pirates and being on the news and Ana finding out he is there...oh no....Ana said if he went to Togo she and the kids would not be at home when he got back...I sure hope there is no trouble erupting in paradise...Love the story!!!!!

Reviewer: bracken Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Mar 2014 7:35 PM Title: Chapter 134

Brilliant ! He better not be going to Togo or else lol ! Hope not .....he wouldn't tell porkies or would he ? Oh well and Ana is off again to ...to maybe do some work with her hot boss ! What happened to the carry on with Leila ? mmmmmmmmmm the many paths to take eh ? Will either of them take the wrong one lol Thanks Next lol xxxxxx 

Reviewer: TNC2005 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2014 10:30 PM Title: Chapter 133

I love C & A's relationship. Another great chapter!

Reviewer: Nedbella Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2014 11:40 AM Title: Chapter 133

OMG!  That scene with Tommy saying he wasn't part of the family and them showing them the photos.  I was flooded with tears.  You write with such real emotion, I feel it all as if it were me living these characters, not just reading about them.  I'm so happy for Jose and Amelia as well.  I can't wait for more. 

Reviewer: 30olives Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2014 1:39 AM Title: Chapter 133

Heart strings are being pulled!

Reviewer: coulierb Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2014 7:22 PM Title: Chapter 133

:) nice 

Reviewer: bracken Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2014 6:53 PM Title: Chapter 133

Fantastic....assth puckin lol.........Hey what has happened with his grandmother ? Worl relations with her boss ?.........AND the bitch Leila ????? What about the new maid ??.......Cannot wait until next week baby lol ....Love ya xxxxxThanks again

Reviewer: cthreatt Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2014 6:45 PM Title: Chapter 133

Poor little Tommy :-(  ...  that was just precious!!!  Love the story, always have, always will, it's my favortie!

 

Reviewer: sasnakgirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2014 6:39 PM Title: Chapter 133

You never fail to deliver...such a lovely story.   Thank you!

Reviewer: Nedbella Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2014 2:46 AM Title: Chapter 132

LMAO......love that end part.  I love your sense of humour.  I was eating my lunch while reading this chapter and I got a little worked up by the bedroom scene to the point I bit my tongue....LOL. Nothing bad though.  Haha. Can't wait for more. 

Reviewer: coulierb Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2014 2:09 AM Title: Chapter 132

Too cute and sweet.

Reviewer: 30olives Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2014 1:02 AM Title: Chapter 132

Love! LOVE this Christian& Anna! The thank you note is hilarious!!!

Reviewer: mrsshropshire Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2014 2:26 AM Title: Chapter 132

You mke me giggle. "I'm going to make you come so hard that your dick will send me a thank you note tomorrow.." Then she gets a boquet and a note from "Dick" LOVE it. Keep up the good work. 

Reviewer: bracken Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Mar 2014 8:53 AM Title: Chapter 132

His dick lol ........Fandabby ......you get us all hot and bothered and then you stop ohhhhhhhhhhh brilliant !!!!!! What next please don't stop !!! Thanks again Nuwriter ..you are the best by far , love ya xxxNEXT

Reviewer: Nedbella Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Mar 2014 8:25 AM Title: Chapter 131

Excellent chapter.  Well the party had a few hiccups but all in all it went off well.  I can just imagine the scene with Grace and Tommy when they hit and pushed each other. Grace standing there holding a Piderman action figure and Tommy with a bleeding cut.  I thought Ana was going to cop it off Christian for shouting at him like that. LOL, he might get his kinky lemon payback in the next chapter for doing that in front if his family. Can't wait for more. 

Reviewer: aabc Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Mar 2014 3:59 AM Title: Chapter 132

I didn't catch that for a about 15 seconds.... Then I got it... Very funny!

Reviewer: reader tiff Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Mar 2014 3:03 AM Title: Chapter 132

LOL!  Great Chapter......as usual :)

Reviewer: SHump Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Mar 2014 2:20 AM Title: Chapter 132

Oh my gosh .... only Christian would send her flowers that are from his dick.  LOL That cracked me up.

Reviewer: nickygiu Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Mar 2014 10:25 PM Title: Chapter 132

ahahaha "Thank you. Dick" excellent, I love your sense of humor... but you know.... you're the number 1. Grazie

 

 

Reviewer: BabyBea Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Mar 2014 10:16 PM Title: Chapter 132

Great hot update... Loved it! Dick sending a thank you note was a brillant idea... I love your sense of humor...we're definetely in the same wavelength. Looking forward to more...

Reviewer: chrisbraddy Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Mar 2014 2:40 PM Title: Chapter 131

LOL!!!!!!  That was a good chapter I really like when Teddy asked if Grandpa forgot his condoms ....   Can't wait for a new chapter....

Reviewer: mrsshropshire Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Mar 2014 4:43 AM Title: Chapter 131

Great chapter! I love the ending where Teddy calls his aunts, uncles, and parents old. Great job. Keep up the good work!

Reviewer: Fefe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Mar 2014 2:46 AM Title: Chapter 131

Thank you for the update <3

Reviewer: ti_ana Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2014 4:36 PM Title: Chapter 131

Oh my goodness, Teddy's response about not using a condom was PRICELESS!! And hilarious! That's SO something a child that age would do. They have no filter and are so innocent. That was simply awesome. Loved it!

Reviewer: sue b Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2014 4:32 PM Title: Chapter 131

This chapter made me want to cry with laughter The way thet you have envisioned the kids is awesome and never fails to make me smile . And what is going on with Leila ?

 

Reviewer: aabc Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2014 1:35 PM Title: Chapter 131

That was a riot!  

Althought i think Elliott was very in appropriated and rude to open a note addressed to Christian.

Reviewer: Nedbella Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2014 10:09 AM Title: Chapter 130

Excellent update.  I love the way you write.  What a great surprise for Ray and Myra.  I know they will be awesome parents. I can just picture the whole Spider-Man themed party.  Little Tommy must be in heaven.  I wonder if Lorna sends him a gift or something.  Can't wait for more. 

Reviewer: SHump Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2014 3:22 AM Title: Chapter 131

I love the family gatherings.  I was laughing at that whole conversation where Christian was trying to avoid telling his famikynwjo Leila was.  LOL

Bring on the lemons!!!  :)

Reviewer: Josephinesmith Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2014 2:04 AM Title: Chapter 131

What a great chapter. Especially when Teddy asks about the condom. I loved this chapter as I have all the previous.

Reviewer: Arushi Dubey Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2014 9:34 PM Title: Chapter 130

Are you really trying to fucking kill us??? please take it as a request post your story twice a week!! else we all are going to die in young age because of coronary!!!

You must login (register a new account) to review.