[Report This]Date: 27 Mar 2016 9:38 PM Title: Epilogue
:) loved this story
Date: 27 Mar 2016 5:43 PM Title: Epilogue
loved that everything worked out and they will have a new edition soon
[Report This]Date: 02 Feb 2014 1:01 AM Title: Reunion
i hope she says yes even if they have had a rought time so far with the relationship. also hope that they find out that nathan and savannah are really brother and sister and not just through marriage. keep up the good work
Date: 31 Jan 2014 5:56 PM Title: Reunion
I almost forgot about this story. I am so glad you are finishing it.
Date: 30 Jan 2014 12:27 PM Title: Reunion
Happy for the reunion. Great chapter. But I still want answers from Paul.
Date: 30 Jan 2014 12:21 PM Title: Saving
Great chapter. I am anxious to fnd out what happened and if Paul will tell that he is Savannah's bio daddy and what the big plan really was.
[Report This]Date: 30 Jan 2014 5:37 AM Title: Reunion
Omg, thank heaven!
Date: 29 Jan 2014 8:16 PM Title: Reunion
Looking forward to the next chapter
Date: 29 Jan 2014 8:04 PM Title: Reunion
Thank goodness. Now they can get on with their lives. I hope Paul because someones toy in jail...
Thank you for sharing with us.
Date: 28 Jan 2014 11:45 PM Title: Saving
Thanks for Updating !!! I hope their nightmare is almost over.
Date: 28 Jan 2014 8:34 PM Title: Saving
Looking forward to the next chapter
Date: 06 Nov 2013 8:28 PM Title: Support
Paul is so sick in the head. Edward should be able to over power him at some point.
[Report This]Date: 02 Nov 2013 7:47 PM Title: Support
WOW!! THIS WAS INTIENSE!! LOVE IT
[Report This]Date: 01 Nov 2013 10:36 PM Title: Support
they found the address?
Date: 01 Nov 2013 1:48 PM Title: Support
Mercy, Paul is crazy!!
[Report This]Date: 01 Nov 2013 1:21 PM Title: Support
OMG !!! my heart can;t stand much more. please get them all home alive and don't let paul get bellB
Date: 01 Nov 2013 1:09 PM Title: Support
I hope they find Edward and the kids quickly. I can't believe Paul didn't even care that he shot his own son. It doesn't get much more sadistic than that.
Date: 01 Nov 2013 10:46 AM Title: Support
Looking forward to more
[Report This]Date: 03 Oct 2013 11:55 PM Title: Cause and consequence
Oh my. Love this story!!
Date: 01 Oct 2013 5:31 PM Title: Cause and consequence
I hope Alice can help Bella think about information that could help the police. I can't believe Edward was so stupid. He should have known it was a trap.
Date: 30 Sep 2013 12:54 PM Title: Truths
I cant believe that this wonderful story only has 82 revviews ....it's so real to life the pain that some have to endure to..i am really enjoying this
[Report This]Date: 30 Sep 2013 3:23 AM Title: Cause and consequence
glad you're back - but you cannot make us wait for long with a cliffe like that!
[Report This]Date: 29 Sep 2013 9:50 PM Title: Cause and consequence
Please update soon
Date: 03 Jul 2013 7:54 PM Title: The Kidnapper
I can't believe Edward was so stupid to go there alone. Edward is smarter than that. He would have had back up.
[Report This]Date: 28 Jun 2013 6:14 PM Title: The Kidnapper
how long till the next update????????????? i'm dying here like seriously!!!!!!!!! and how stupid can you be to notnotice someone missing for 30 hours like seriously!!!!!!!!!!!!!! and hopefully nothing happens to the kids or edward!!!!!!!!! and how long till we get answers on how lauren and paul found eachother and how just everything fucking happened!!!!!!!!!!!!!! update soon!!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 28 Jun 2013 9:35 AM Title: The Kidnapper
loving this story
[Report This]Date: 03 Jun 2013 4:20 AM Title: A New Start
It looks like both Bella and Edward are making some hard choices here.
I'm glad Bella seeing Paul with another woman made her realize that she had to leave him.Tanya is a really good friend. She gave Bella a safe place to land and some sage advice. I look forward to Bella's discussion with her parents.
Wow! Lauren tried to gain sympathy by going to Edward's mom about him leaving? It's good that Edward called his mother after he got settled with Savannah in the hotel and that he plans to stay with his parents until he decides what to do.
[Report This]Date: 03 Jun 2013 1:43 AM Title: Truths
Oh man! I can't believe how much Edward's life has changed. Lauren should be out on her ear. There is no way she should not be helping out with their daughter and around the house. She's taking advantage of Edward's good nature. I'm glad he called her on her behavior and chose to spend some time away from her, so he could think about their marriage after her declaration about not loving their daughter.
Bella's situation is just as bad if even worse. I cannot believe Paul came in drunk and hit her so brutally like that and she forgave him. He's a jerk and things just got worse after that. I am glad she spoke up at dinner in front of her parents when Paul presumed that she give up her education and later in the hotel room. That way at least she's on the record as against this move.
It was great that Bella and Edward bumped into each other again at the zoo. I wonder what Bella saw that effected her so greatly.
[Report This]Date: 03 Jun 2013 12:18 AM Title: Hard Lives
I'm starting to suspect Alice may be right about Lauren cheating on Edward, but that's no excuse for her severing ties with her brother and niece to make her point.
It's great that Paul got a promotion to partner at work and that he was excited about the baby, but I wonder how much Bella will have to go through this pregnancy alone because of the job. It was nice that Tanya took the time to offer her the advice on balancing school and her pregnancy.
[Report This]Date: 02 Jun 2013 11:28 PM Title: Graduation Day
It looks like Edward and Bella's lives are going in two different directions as their relationships move to the next level. It's just too bad Edward has to give up his dream of Julliard in order to do the responsible thing by marrying Lauren now that she's pregnant. Bella seems happy with Paul, even though she has reservations about marrying so soon. It was nice that he asked Bella's parents for their blessing first.
[Report This]Date: 02 Jun 2013 11:15 PM Title: Different Worlds
It's a shame Bella allowed Lauren to intimidate her and keep her from being friends with Edward. I am glad Bella was able to help Edward avoid driving under the influence. I'm surprised Lauren left him alone to fend for himself.
Date: 30 May 2013 2:29 AM Title: Desperation
it's paul isnt it
[Report This]Date: 25 May 2013 6:06 AM Title: Desperation
Really like this story
[Report This]Date: 23 May 2013 5:55 PM Title: Desperation
This is a good chapter!
I'm sure they will find the culprits.
Thank you.
Date: 23 May 2013 1:09 PM Title: Desperation
I feel bad for the 3 of them. I know it has to be Paul. He has lost everything. I hope he is taking care of those babies. Good luck on your exams.
Date: 23 May 2013 11:58 AM Title: Desperation
Ohhh what prison doesnt check photo ids?
Good luck on exams!
[Report This]Date: 23 May 2013 7:38 AM Title: Desperation
Come on! you left us hanging and then drop a bomb that we wont get the next chapter for 3 weeks or longer....
[Report This]Date: 22 May 2013 5:14 PM Title: Desperation
first a cliffie and now i have to deal with the terribleness of having to wait till june 21 for another chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!!! thats almost a month!!!!!!!!!!!!! ugh the pain!!!!!!!!!!! and the fact that someone is usng edwards identtity to see lauren mallory but it's not actually edward is just plain wrong and weird!!!!!!!! why couldn't you have just put the name of the person in this chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!! i would have loved you if you had but no!!!!!!!!!!! you makith me wait!!!!!!!!! whyyyyyyyyy???????? but good luck on your exams!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i'll bear with the wait and hopefully the chapter is extra long so that we can find out who the person using edwards identity is cause it'd be weir if it was bella's ex getting with edward's ex trying to get their kids back!!!!!!!!!!!!! ohhhhhhh the mystery deepens!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 22 May 2013 10:58 AM Title: Desperation
:) Good luck with your exams
[Report This]Date: 20 May 2013 8:42 AM Title: Returning to old friends
Hmmm, he is not mystery man anymore... Paul... is going to get into trouble.
Date: 10 May 2013 4:04 AM Title: A Kidnapping
Paul their father and he kidnapped.them but why does.he need money?
[Report This]Date: 08 May 2013 10:28 PM Title: A Kidnapping
This is a very good chapter.
It's horrible what happens.
Thank you.
Date: 08 May 2013 5:43 PM Title: A Kidnapping
looking forward to more
Date: 08 May 2013 3:25 PM Title: A Kidnapping
I can't believe Bella didn't think of Paul right away.
Date: 08 May 2013 2:49 PM Title: Taking Small Steps
I thought Edward's parents lived in Forks, 4 hours away from Seattle.
Author's Response:
Yeah, I know... A mistake I overlooked, somebody already told me ;) Thank you!
Date: 08 May 2013 2:34 PM Title: A Kidnapping
Sooooo wrong.....what does he want with his kids? Just to hurt b and e?
[Report This]Date: 07 May 2013 6:40 PM Title: A Kidnapping
loving this story. Poor Bella and Edward
Date: 07 May 2013 5:56 PM Title: A Kidnapping
ilove this story
Date: 22 Apr 2013 8:56 PM Title: Leaving!?
Man what is pauls deal? And why was he with lauren?
Date: 12 Apr 2013 5:41 PM Title: Leaving!?
I'm pissed off at Bella!
Date: 12 Apr 2013 2:27 PM Title: Leaving!?
looking forward to more
Date: 08 Apr 2013 5:01 PM Title: Returning to old friends
looking forward to more
[Report This]Date: 05 Apr 2013 4:51 PM Title: Returning to old friends
Love ths story!!! Keep up the good work!
Date: 03 Apr 2013 9:56 PM Title: Returning to old friends
Ok, I'm in total agreement with Edward, Bella definitely needs to talk with a psychologist. With what she went through, she needs to have an outlet and learn how to move on. Thanks for the update, I'm can't wait for more! :)
[Report This]Date: 03 Apr 2013 3:23 AM Title: Returning to old friends
well its obvious that the mystery person has known edward and bella for a while and they might not know it and then we know that he knows about the kids and has obviously kept tabs on them. i do wonder if hes after bella or trying to get lauen back and did the mystery person steal edwards identity or is he just using a fake id?
[Report This]Date: 02 Apr 2013 12:28 AM Title: Returning to old friends
:)
[Report This]Date: 03 Mar 2013 3:36 AM Title: Taking Small Steps
i hope to read more soon
[Report This]Date: 03 Mar 2013 12:06 AM Title: Friendship
Finally we will see action with this two
[Report This]Date: 01 Mar 2013 6:54 PM Title: Taking Small Steps
Rendez-vous avec toutr la famille.
Merci.
[Report This]Date: 01 Mar 2013 3:13 PM Title: Making Decisions
Bon chapitre.
[Report This]Date: 01 Mar 2013 2:25 PM Title: Truths
Qu'est ce qu'elle voit ?
[Report This]Date: 01 Mar 2013 1:44 PM Title: Hard Lives
Tanya est très sympathique.
[Report This]Date: 01 Mar 2013 12:14 PM Title: Graduation Day
J'aime bien ce chapitre.
[Report This]Date: 01 Mar 2013 11:45 AM Title: First Meeting
j'aime ce chapitre.
[Report This]Date: 24 Feb 2013 5:43 PM Title: Taking Small Steps
:) love this story
[Report This]Date: 10 Feb 2013 1:56 PM Title: The date and confessions
:)
Date: 28 Jan 2013 11:18 PM Title: First Kiss
YAY!!! They kissed!!!! Finally! Haha!! Thank you for giving so much to this story. It's is great! I look forward to your next update! ;)
Date: 28 Jan 2013 12:50 AM Title: First Kiss
Great work!
Author's Response:
Thank you for your review!! Here's a little teaser!
~~~Teaser Chapter 13 Rediscovering Love~~~
“I understand what you mean,” she eventually admits. “But it’s hard when she ignores me, she even ignores my friend request.”
“She doesn’t ignores it,” I murmur.
“How do you know?” she asks.
“Auntie Aly,” Savannah screams when she sees her aunt. I’m happy she interrupted us, because I don’t want to answer Alice’s question.
“Hi, Sweetheart.” Alice greets her niece. “How are you?”
“Super!” Savannah answers. “Daddy and I are going to see Bella and Nathan.” Alice looks up and pulls up an eyebrow questioningly. I just shake my head. Savannah comes to me.
“Savannah, here is your breakfast,” I tell her. “I’m going to get ready. Can you watch her, Alice?”
~~~Teaser Outtake Rediscovering Love~~~
“Can I help you?” I ask her wiping away. She looks up and smiles at me.
“Actually, you can,” she answers. “Me and maps aren’t actually good friends.”
“What class do you have?” I ask. Jasper comes to stand next to me and put his arm around me.
“History,” she answer.
“I have that class,” Jasper says. “My name is Jasper and this is my girlfriend, Alice.”
“Bella,” she tells us. “Nice to meet you.”
[Report This]Date: 27 Jan 2013 11:32 AM Title: First Kiss
:)
Author's Response:
Thank you for your review!! Here's a little teaser!
~~~Teaser Chapter 13 Rediscovering Love~~~
“I understand what you mean,” she eventually admits. “But it’s hard when she ignores me, she even ignores my friend request.”
“She doesn’t ignores it,” I murmur.
“How do you know?” she asks.
“Auntie Aly,” Savannah screams when she sees her aunt. I’m happy she interrupted us, because I don’t want to answer Alice’s question.
“Hi, Sweetheart.” Alice greets her niece. “How are you?”
“Super!” Savannah answers. “Daddy and I are going to see Bella and Nathan.” Alice looks up and pulls up an eyebrow questioningly. I just shake my head. Savannah comes to me.
“Savannah, here is your breakfast,” I tell her. “I’m going to get ready. Can you watch her, Alice?”
~~~Teaser Outtake Rediscovering Love~~~
“Can I help you?” I ask her wiping away. She looks up and smiles at me.
“Actually, you can,” she answers. “Me and maps aren’t actually good friends.”
“What class do you have?” I ask. Jasper comes to stand next to me and put his arm around me.
“History,” she answer.
“I have that class,” Jasper says. “My name is Jasper and this is my girlfriend, Alice.”
“Bella,” she tells us. “Nice to meet you.”
Date: 25 Dec 2012 7:51 PM Title: Friendship
I live the direction this story is headed! Things are looking up for these two. Thanks for the update. Merry Christmas! :)
Date: 24 Dec 2012 2:45 AM Title: Friendship
They meet again!!!
Date: 24 Dec 2012 12:00 AM Title: Another Meeting
Too late for surprise I think;-)
Date: 23 Dec 2012 3:07 PM Title: Friendship
Oh I will be waiting !
Date: 23 Dec 2012 12:40 PM Title: Friendship
Great chapter!!! Hopefully a start to a beautiful relationship.
Good luck on your exams. Can't wait for the next update.
Thanks for sharing with us.
Date: 09 Dec 2012 8:40 PM Title: Another Meeting
They finally see each other again! I can't wait to see how things will turn out at their first meeting in 4 years. Can Bella, Alice and Jasper repair their frienship? I hope so and can't wait for the next update!
Author's Response:
Thank you for your review! Here's a little teaser:
~~~ Teaser ~~~
“When I was sixteen, my parents decided to move to Forks,” I start to tell. “I literally bumped into Edward on my first day at the new school.” I look at Edward and I see a small smile appear on his face. I remember that day as if it happened yesterday. I already knew Paul, but those green eyes have haunted me my whole life.
“Everyone at school thought you were a boy,” he says. “Even my girlfriend at the time.”
“So, Edward helped me find my class room,” I tell. “His girlfriend was in the same class and she didn’t like the fact that I was talking to Edward. She actually threatened me and that was the first and last conversation of that year.”
“Are you telling us that Lauren said you couldn’t talk to me?” Edward asks. He looked shock at me. “I always thought Alice was the reason, you didn’t talk to me.”
“Alice, as in the girl from LA?” Tan asks. I look at her and only nod, than I look at Edward.
“Edward, did you ever ask yourself, why your sister didn’t speak to you?”
“Yes, of course. She hated Lauren,” he answers.
“Yes, but that was not all.”
Date: 09 Dec 2012 4:19 PM Title: Another Meeting
Good chapter, thank you.
Author's Response:
Thank you for your review
Here is a little teaser!
~~~ Teaser ~~~
“When I was sixteen, my parents decided to move to Forks,” I start to tell. “I literally bumped into Edward on my first day at the new school.” I look at Edward and I see a small smile appear on his face. I remember that day as if it happened yesterday. I already knew Paul, but those green eyes have haunted me my whole life.
“Everyone at school thought you were a boy,” he says. “Even my girlfriend at the time.”
“So, Edward helped me find my class room,” I tell. “His girlfriend was in the same class and she didn’t like the fact that I was talking to Edward. She actually threatened me and that was the first and last conversation of that year.”
“Are you telling us that Lauren said you couldn’t talk to me?” Edward asks. He looked shock at me. “I always thought Alice was the reason, you didn’t talk to me.”
“Alice, as in the girl from LA?” Tan asks. I look at her and only nod, than I look at Edward.
“Edward, did you ever ask yourself, why your sister didn’t speak to you?”
“Yes, of course. She hated Lauren,” he answers.
“Yes, but that was not all.”
[Report This]Date: 09 Dec 2012 1:28 PM Title: Another Meeting
:)
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Thank you for your review! :) Here is a little teaser:
~~~ Teaser ~~~
“When I was sixteen, my parents decided to move to Forks,” I start to tell. “I literally bumped into Edward on my first day at the new school.” I look at Edward and I see a small smile appear on his face. I remember that day as if it happened yesterday. I already knew Paul, but those green eyes have haunted me my whole life.
“Everyone at school thought you were a boy,” he says. “Even my girlfriend at the time.”
“So, Edward helped me find my class room,” I tell. “His girlfriend was in the same class and she didn’t like the fact that I was talking to Edward. She actually threatened me and that was the first and last conversation of that year.”
“Are you telling us that Lauren said you couldn’t talk to me?” Edward asks. He looked shock at me. “I always thought Alice was the reason, you didn’t talk to me.”
“Alice, as in the girl from LA?” Tan asks. I look at her and only nod, than I look at Edward.
“Edward, did you ever ask yourself, why your sister didn’t speak to you?”
“Yes, of course. She hated Lauren,” he answers.
“Yes, but that was not all.”
[Report This]Date: 28 Nov 2012 2:29 AM Title: Discoveries
Lauren is a complete bitch!!
[Report This]Date: 27 Nov 2012 2:30 AM Title: Moving on...
love your story can't wait for next chapters
Date: 26 Nov 2012 2:27 AM Title: Hard Lives
Always refreshing to have a nice Tanya
Date: 25 Nov 2012 10:46 PM Title: Moving on...
Great chapter! I loved getting to read how they are getting to, FINALLY, move forward. I'm looking forward to the next update! :)
[Report This]Date: 18 Nov 2012 1:09 AM Title: Discoveries
Love your story, cant wait for more.
Date: 12 Nov 2012 7:14 PM Title: Discoveries
Good for them!!!!! Looking forward to the next update.