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Reviewer: dreamkeeper1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2020 6:40 AM Title: Chapter 54: A Born Goddess

So good 

Reviewer: twilover24 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 May 2017 8:16 AM Title: Chapter 54: A Born Goddess

Awesome 😀 please update soon or write a sequel

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Sep 2014 11:42 PM Title: Chapter 54: A Born Goddess

woo hoo B's changing!!!   LOL for Peter and Char

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Sep 2014 11:25 PM Title: Chapter 53: Waking up

Glad Em got a neat gift.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Sep 2014 10:15 PM Title: Chapter 52: Sshh...I'm Huntin' Teddies.

Teddy Bear Picnic?  ROFL!!!!  

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Sep 2014 5:10 AM Title: Chapter 51: Indra and Indrani

Malice is going to get herself and poor Davey killed.  Hopefully NIcky will be able to tame emoward's arse.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Sep 2014 5:04 AM Title: Chapter 50: Who they are now?

ooh lots of cool info.  like Char's gift.  Feel sorry for Davey being stuck with Malice.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Sep 2014 12:30 AM Title: Chapter 49: Awakening

Glad Jazz is now merged.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Sep 2014 11:37 PM Title: Chapter 48: All About Bella part III

Yea the mind reading/answering thing could be annoying really quickly

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Sep 2014 11:19 PM Title: Chapter 47: Re-Burning or Rebirth?

hmmm wonder who Nikky is gonna hook up with.  Wow  Davey's hiding alot or just dazzled by Malice.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Sep 2014 9:15 PM Title: Chapter 46: Gods of War

ooooh meshing of the Major and Jasper.   Yumminess.  Go Bella.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Sep 2014 3:31 AM Title: Chapter 45: Bringing down the Major!

oooh  Naughty Jasper making B mad.  LOL   oooh hair and eye change.  interesting development.  Yummy lemon dance though

dl

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Sep 2014 2:48 AM Title: Chapter 44: All about Bella Part II

LOVE her putting emoward in his place. Esme/Carlisle really need to rein him in. 

Oh wow, he had the nerve to put his hands on her? !?!?!

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Sep 2014 2:20 AM Title: Chapter 43: Who let the cat out of the bag?

Go bad ass Bella.  Love how powerful she is.  ROFL for pouty puss.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Sep 2014 2:09 AM Title: Chapter 42: Home Sweet Home

Loved seeing the different POVs

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Sep 2014 1:58 AM Title: Chapter 41: All about Bella

Guess that'll teach  Peter to mess with Jasper/Major.    Alice needs to get over herself if she's pissed.  

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Sep 2014 10:58 PM Title: Chapter 40: So Simon Says?

Silly Petey pissing off the major.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Sep 2014 10:15 PM Title: Chapter 39: While Bella's Away

jerkin the gerkin----- Muhahahaha Gotta love Peter. He is hilarious

Author's Response:

you will find my snarky witty comments and hiliarity spread throughout most of my stories depending on the direction of the story. I'm not a big Edward fan so he will never be paired with Bella persay but will occassionally make apperances in my stories. I'm not a fan of Jacob either but he sometimes shows up as well. Alice i find annoying but once again she appears in my stories as well. usually long enough to be annoying and be killed off...lol i love Non cannons and hope you continue to love my stories. I hope to hear from you on the new site...as there are stories there that are not found here, and many new ones to come. you will also find that I have either Beta'd or have helped to write most of the other stories from the authors on the other site. Bella Macleod is very close to me as is Wizardtho. we all talk often on the phone and work together to give each other support and ideas. I hope you enjoy the stories there...the featured story on that site belongs to one of my favorite Authors Betterintexas. He (yes it is a man) is a phenominal writer. i love is other characters almost as much as I love the twilight ones. LOL. I think you would enjoy his writing as well.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Sep 2014 10:07 PM Title: Chapter 38: Volterra during daylight hours

Loving her and Simon's interactions.

 

Alot of the authors here have left FFn for that reason.  Not to mention that while they'll dump a story for sex in a second, stories that are plagiarized and/or have copyright violations are left up in perpetuity.   We've been reporting this one story since 9 aug and its still up and the author is copying from a published book.  Its utterly ridiculous.  

I've got your other website on my TBR.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Sep 2014 9:14 PM Title: Chapter 37: Bella's Letter

Gotta love Char.  Glad B called him finally.  I love me a sexy southern accent too.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Sep 2014 9:04 PM Title: Chapter 36: The Brothers Three

Glad the initial meeting went well.    Wonder how long till Aro comes looking for them.

Saw your message on my other review.  I'll keep the website in mind.  I'll read anywhere except FFn, but most of my time is here on TWCS.



Author's Response:

I no longer post on FFn because of the restrictions on my smutty writing. if i can't post the story as it is meant to be written then I'm not posting it. I'm actually in the process of writing two new O/S. one is a Bella/Carlisle the other is a Bella/Felix. I hope to see you on the other site! thanx for your reviews.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Sep 2014 8:50 PM Title: Chapter 35: Bella Italia (Beautiful Italy)

aww he got her portrait done.



Author's Response:

Glad ur enjoying the story...It was my first and when you get to the end you will probably feel like everyone else and feel like it is incomplete...in a way it is..i have to write a second part to this particular story but have yet to start it..I have many others that i am working on but am no longer posting them on this site. I have a permenant home where all my old/new/a up and coming stories will be posted. you are welcome to check it out. bellamacleod . net(without the spaces) fell free to browse the other authors there as well..my pen name is the same so no worries..you will know it when you see me. LOL thanks for the love and reviews.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Sep 2014 8:32 PM Title: Chapter 34: Steps to the Future

I love me some Peter.    Carlisle is too funny sometimes.  we need to find a mate for Eddie so he'll stop being so broody.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Sep 2014 5:51 PM Title: Chapter 33: Long lost Family

Glad Peter got him to calm a bit

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Sep 2014 5:19 PM Title: Chapter 32: Tough Decisions

Well at least Simon helped Jazz enough that he didn't try to kill Davey.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Sep 2014 5:15 PM Title: Chapter 31: Un passo piu vicino allo sorte (one step closer to fate)

Well at least she'll get to keep Davey in her life. LOL

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Sep 2014 5:10 PM Title: Chapter 30: What do I do now?

Glad Bella told Simon all her thoughts.  Hope he stays

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Sep 2014 3:17 AM Title: Chapter 29: For the Love of Jasper!

hmmm surprised Alice hasn't seen anything.  Simon's got some mad powers.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Sep 2014 2:12 AM Title: Chapter 28: What secrets do they hold?

SOunds like edward is throwing a temper tantrum.   Glad Simon pushed her to talk to J

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Sep 2014 1:51 AM Title: Chapter 27: Who is your Friend?

Ah so going to be a J/B after all maybe?  Still cant get over simon's name.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Sep 2014 11:12 PM Title: Chapter 26: Teaming up with the Enemy

Woo hoo we meet Simon.   LOL  Simon, really?  LOL

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Sep 2014 10:52 PM Title: Chapter 25: Where's Bella

Oh riley... you are going to pay.  Wonder if Skankya had something to do with helping him?

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Sep 2014 10:45 PM Title: Chapter 24: The Grand Scheme of Things

ugh Skankya is going to be real trouble I think.  Wonder if she'll end up teaming up with Riley?

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Sep 2014 10:40 PM Title: Chapter 23: Back Home Again

Cool kinda soothing power she has. 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Sep 2014 10:24 PM Title: Chapter 22: Welcome Home Surprise

E needs to learn to communicate with B a little better.  Hasn't he learned anything with the women he lives with.  Ugh Skankya is annoying.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Sep 2014 10:12 PM Title: Chapter 21: Visitor

hmm wonder what Riley is going to do?  Volturi?   Victoria?   some other evil V word?  lol

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Sep 2014 9:54 PM Title: Chapter 20: Why Me?

aww glad they talked it out, mostly

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Sep 2014 9:52 PM Title: Chapter 19: Vacationing with Vampires

kind of a cruel trick though.  Good acting, mostly, lol

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Sep 2014 9:46 PM Title: Chapter 18: Q & A.

Wonder if she's going to give Edward a chance or not.   House sounds nice.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Sep 2014 9:40 PM Title: Chapter 17: Shopping with Alice and Goodbyes at the Airport.

lol  Alice is a shopping freak of nature

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Sep 2014 9:30 PM Title: Chapter 16: One's Will

lol for creepy James' thoughts.

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Date: 10 Sep 2014 9:21 PM Title: Chapter 15: Drowning in Darkness

Oh Bella. Poor thing   Are they 18 or under?  If they aren't 18, you'd think the state would come a'knockin.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Sep 2014 9:19 PM Title: Chapter 14: The Vampire Stories

Wonder what Rose's issue with Bella is since she obviously wants Emmett.

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Date: 10 Sep 2014 8:59 PM Title: Chapter 13: Sorry Charlie

Oh no  Charlie too????  Those girls are going to be even nastier to B now I bet.    Cullens take them in as fosters maybe?

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Sep 2014 8:52 PM Title: Chapter 12: Time Passes

hmmm Jessica is a real piece of work.   Minions indeed.    Wonder if E will tell her how he feels soon.  

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Sep 2014 8:23 PM Title: Chapter 11: Mood Music

aww nice visit.

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Date: 10 Sep 2014 7:36 PM Title: Chapter 10: Getting to know you.

ROFL for the Rose/Em confrontation

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Sep 2014 7:22 PM Title: Chapter 9: Fortunes for a Quater!

Poor B.  A month really isn't long to grieve.

Alice is def a little gremlin. lol

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Sep 2014 7:15 PM Title: Chapter 8: WTF?

Rose is such a selfish biatch.   Way too formal in the language department Eddie.

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Date: 10 Sep 2014 7:11 PM Title: Chapter 7: OMG!

I'm confused.  Is this a Bella/Edward story or a Bella/Jasper one?

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Sep 2014 7:06 PM Title: Chapter 6: End of Day One.

Kinda like that she isn't clutzy like in the books and most other FFs.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Sep 2014 6:11 PM Title: Chapter 5: The New Kids

Go Bella.  Love her telling him off.

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Date: 10 Sep 2014 5:51 PM Title: Chapter 4: Forks, Washington

Hopefully Bella gives the move a try.   Reminds me that I need to paint some of my house.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Sep 2014 5:34 PM Title: Chapter 3: The End or the Beginning?

Someone should have gotten counselling for her.   Parent dying is such a traumatic thing

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Sep 2014 5:23 PM Title: Chapter 2: Dances, Dates, and Accidents

Nice of Bella to go with Davey.   Drunk Drivers are scum of the earth.  He probably walked away without a scratch

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Sep 2014 5:15 PM Title: Chapter 1: School

mom sounds like a real flake.

Reviewer: ageise02 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Sep 2014 3:10 AM Title: Chapter 54: A Born Goddess

loved the story but it feels unfinished to me



Author's Response:

It is unfinished...to a point anyway...i have not yet started on the second half of this particular story as i have many other to finish...However they will no longer be posted on here...I have found a permenant home at another website. you can now find all my new and old stories as bellamacleod . net (minus the spaces of course) I will eventually finish this particular story one i get the rest of them finished. I'm actually working on two different O/S at the moment for the new website. feel free to look the site over and read the other writers works as well. they are truely wonderful ladies. Tell them i sent you. LOL

Reviewer: sassy973 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Nov 2013 1:40 PM Title: Chapter 54: A Born Goddess

I loved it... Are you going to finish this story I would love if you did



Author's Response:

i do plan to finish it but not here on TWCS. I have a new home on a different Website..you are welcome to browse the site as the other wonderful ladies who run the site are wonderful authors as well.. bellamacleod . net ( minus the spaces) is where you can find all my old and new stories. I'm currently working on two new O/S that will be posted there. Thank you for your review and support.

Reviewer: mamaesme Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Sep 2013 8:45 PM Title: Chapter 2: Dances, Dates, and Accidents

Good start, I just started to read this story.

Author's Response:

Hope you continued to read and review this story...but as I have been posting to all my reviewers I have found a new home and will no longer be posting on TWCS you can now find all my new and old stories at bellamacleod . net ( minus the spaces of course.) Thank you for your support and reviews.

Reviewer: karemay Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Feb 2013 11:17 PM Title: Chapter 54: A Born Goddess

Ok, I liked this story. BUT I didn't like the partners in this story. Bella and Jasper NO WAY! Edward needed to be in Jasper's place. I've never liked the character of Bella, Alice eighter for that matter. But Edward with another character would have been good. I just don't like Edward showing in a bad light. For that matter I don't like Jake eighter (I know he's not in this story so far but just say'in lololololol). But I love the story. 

Reviewer: mamaesme Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Nov 2012 5:57 AM Title: Chapter 54: A Born Goddess

Great story, except the ending. I really wanted to know what Alice and Davey were up to and how Jasper and Bella handled Aro. Hopefully you will either do outtakes or maybe a sequel

Author's Response:

there is a sequel planned to finish up the story. but not for a while..i wish to finish up a few of my other stories before i post anything new. thanx for the review

Reviewer: rpm2010 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2012 10:29 PM Title: Chapter 19: Vacationing with Vampires

that was pretty messed up, I'm all for practical jokes but making peole believe youre dead just isn't funny under any circumstance, but i'm glad Edward told her how he felt about her.

Reviewer: Pixie8401 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Oct 2012 10:19 AM Title: Chapter 54: A Born Goddess

Please say that this story isn't finished!!!! Lots of questions still left unanswered. Like what happens to Alice and davey? What happens with the volturi?

the story is marked as completed it it doesn't feel that way. Is there a sequel?????



Author's Response:

there will be a sequel, once i get some of my other stories finished i will start on the sequel to this one. lots of good stuff to happen in this story. thank you for ur review. glad ur that interested in it..it was my first. thanx again.

Reviewer: loventherussian17 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Sep 2012 4:52 AM Title: Chapter 54: A Born Goddess

Great story so far can't wait to see wat happens next update soon

Author's Response:

next update will be in the form of the sequel..but that is still in the brainstorming stage. thanx for the review.

Reviewer: felix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Sep 2012 8:56 PM Title: Chapter 1: School

Ooooh loved this story.Is there going to be a sequel for Bella and Jasper to kick ass xx

Author's Response:

There is a sequel in the works..but not until i get some of my other stories finished off. thanx for the love and review.

Reviewer: kitkatr Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Sep 2012 4:49 AM Title: Chapter 5: The New Kids

I love the fiesty Bella!



Author's Response:

Bella is definitely fiesty! it only gets better. thanks for the Reviews!

Reviewer: kitkatr Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Sep 2012 4:46 AM Title: Chapter 4: Forks, Washington

Love it!

Reviewer: kitkatr Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Sep 2012 4:45 AM Title: Chapter 3: The End or the Beginning?

I hope Forks brings a fresh start!

Reviewer: kitkatr Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Sep 2012 4:44 AM Title: Chapter 2: Dances, Dates, and Accidents

Awwww...so sad!  I am glad she has Emmett!

Reviewer: kitkatr Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Sep 2012 4:42 AM Title: Chapter 1: School

Nice story!



Author's Response:

thank you.

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