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Reviewer: Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Nov 2012 9:31 PM Title: Chapter 6

Hum! found to story and am enjoying it so far.

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Oct 2012 3:26 PM Title: Chapter 5

C'est un beau chapitre, j'aime bien la naissance de jumelles !

Merci.

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Oct 2012 3:17 PM Title: Chapter 4

Je me pose des questions !

Est ce que Mike à violé Bella ?



Author's Response:

oui, c'était Mike. Je vais l'éclaircir dans le chapitre suivant. J'espère que le français est bon, im en utilisant Google translate!


Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Oct 2012 2:59 PM Title: Chapter 3

J'aime bien !

Reviewer: Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Oct 2012 2:40 AM Title: Chapter 5

At least something beautiful came out of something that started out bad.



Author's Response:

That's the idea :). I dot like angst and I don't write it.. Though watch out for some depression next chapter !! Nothing *too* major.. Just don't hate me :) thank you for reviewing !!

Reviewer: Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Oct 2012 2:23 AM Title: Chapter 1

I commend you for your efforts writing on you IPOD.  This seems interesting.



Author's Response:

Thank you. Hopefully I can get it replaced in a few weeks. I'm not technically  suppost to be using this right now. THe whole screen is cracked and I have tape on it, but it's worth it. Every review makes me smile and want to post another chapter. I have to type it in Notes, and copy and paste to this site, change font, go back through to bold and italicize, etc. it's a pain in the butt, but oh well. XD. I'm focasing on this story right now, even though on ffn I have an **opinionized** reviewed who wants me to update some stories I started a year ago, but lossed passion for it, it sucks !! Anyway,, thanks for reviewing!! I really appreciate it !

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Oct 2012 7:47 PM Title: Chapter 2-- Moving In

Moi j'aime bien continues !

Ne t'inquiètes pas les lecteurs ne donnent pas d'avis mais ce n'est pas pour ça qu'ils n'aiment pas.

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Oct 2012 7:42 PM Title: Chapter 1

Je pense que ça va être bien !

Reviewer: imloki Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Oct 2012 12:44 PM Title: Chapter 2-- Moving In

How about  chapters 4-5-6 I like it so far I'm looking for this to turn into a ten keep up the good work! 



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review. Ch 3 will be up in a few hours !

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