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Reviewer: Emo4 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jul 2020 8:06 PM Title: Chapter 7

Such a good story. You really write well.

Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2018 9:36 AM Title: Chapter 7

Is this story completed?

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2014 3:29 PM Title: Chapter 7

The analogy of her feeling like the waters were only getting deeper and the struggle for the surface is so accurate. The darkness is blending into the light of a new dawn for Bella.
I hope Benny doesn't hang on too long in hope of reuniting with his lost girlfriend. Bella is not that girl any longer.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2014 3:19 PM Title: Chapter 6

Edward has competition!
Poor Benny was left hanging in the balance while Bella's life spun out of control. Will he be a thorn in Edward's side or will he be the friend that Bella needs to push her through the tough practices needed to achieve her new goals?

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2014 3:09 PM Title: Chapter 5

She finally figured out what she needed to move forward in life.
Interesting how Edward felt it from the very first meeting after Renee and Charlie's funeral.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2014 3:00 PM Title: Chapter 4

Is it a 'failure to thrive' situation that is causing Bella to have blackouts? The loss of being loved that has her so confused as to wandering aimlessly?
Edward didn't confess to loving her though.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2014 2:51 PM Title: Chapter 3

The therapy did spark her return to life. In more ways than one!

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2014 2:44 PM Title: Chapter 2

A turning point possibly in Bella's mind? How long has Edward harbored feeling for Bella?

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2014 2:35 PM Title: Chapter 1

I found this story through a web search. Interesting what types of words will lead to undiscovered reading!
Looking forward to the rest of this tale.

Reviewer: audreyhm Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Aug 2013 10:22 AM Title: Chapter 1

The story could technically be finished right where you left it. In fact, I almost think it should be. They decided to stay together, she's awake... maybe an epilogue to tie up loose ends? Either way, I really enjoyed this. I love olderward stories! Thanks for posting. A

Reviewer: acechica Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 May 2013 5:06 PM Title: Chapter 7

Please continue this!!!! I love it!!!

Reviewer: karencullen2007 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2013 5:50 AM Title: Chapter 7

When will u update again???

Reviewer: LIZZ104 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Feb 2013 2:08 AM Title: Chapter 7

what a great story! i hope you continue writting it!!

Reviewer: Rodger4 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jan 2013 5:31 PM Title: Chapter 7

UPDATE PLEASEEEEEEEEEE

Reviewer: twilightlover127 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2013 7:08 PM Title: Chapter 7

AAAAAAAHHHHHHHHH SOOOOO GOOD!!!!!!!!!!! EVEN IF IT WAS ONLY 7 CHAPTERS!!!!!!!! YOU MUST UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: crazygirl2929 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Dec 2012 4:28 AM Title: Chapter 7

love it

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Dec 2012 2:09 AM Title: Chapter 7

Oooo love it

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Dec 2012 4:57 PM Title: Chapter 7

Loved it can't wait for more :)

Reviewer: romycullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Dec 2012 2:17 AM Title: Chapter 6

Oh my god, this is sooo good, it's breaking my heart

Reviewer: seeker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Dec 2012 12:46 AM Title: Chapter 7

Thanks good chapter

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Dec 2012 4:07 PM Title: Chapter 7

Good chapter!
I like their explanation.
Thank you.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Dec 2012 1:48 PM Title: Chapter 7

:)

Reviewer: Skyclouds Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Dec 2012 12:43 PM Title: Chapter 7

Finally they are giving in.

Reviewer: beachlover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Dec 2012 5:48 AM Title: Chapter 7

!!!!!!

Reviewer: boo1414 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Dec 2012 5:41 AM Title: Chapter 7

Wonderful!  What a great update!  Can't wait to see what happens now that they have declared themselves...

Reviewer: tff000 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Dec 2012 5:07 AM Title: Chapter 7

:)

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Dec 2012 4:29 AM Title: Chapter 7

glad they talked

Reviewer: bri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Dec 2012 4:22 AM Title: Chapter 7

great story truly loved it can't wait for more.

Reviewer: mommabear0206 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Dec 2012 3:47 AM Title: Chapter 7

he is her home

Reviewer: EdwardBella27 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Dec 2012 1:36 AM Title: Chapter 7

loved it

Reviewer: akemp17 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Dec 2012 4:15 AM Title: Chapter 6

:)

Reviewer: cjrich Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Dec 2012 7:37 AM Title: Chapter 3

I will never understand why people can't be nice.  The fandom has lost so many wonderful writers to people being nasty. It is so simple, if you don't like a story, DONT READ IT.  Like I said simple.  Please remember that there are so many of us out here that do enjoy all the hard work and imagination that are given to all of us for FREE to enjoy.  Ok, will get off my high horse and just say I am enjoying your story and looking forward to more.  lol, Cheri 

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2012 5:54 PM Title: Chapter 6

glad Ben was there to help and be the friend she needs.

Reviewer: fleur50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2012 11:46 PM Title: Chapter 6

wow!

Reviewer: fleur50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2012 11:33 PM Title: Chapter 5

wow!

Reviewer: EdwardBella27 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2012 9:07 PM Title: Chapter 6

great chapter

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2012 10:23 AM Title: Chapter 6

:)

Reviewer: seeker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2012 9:12 AM Title: Chapter 6

Thanks good chapter

Reviewer: tff000 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2012 7:15 AM Title: Chapter 6

hoping he's not worried/freaking out b/c she's late 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2012 5:54 AM Title: Chapter 6

Im so glad she is swiming but I think Edward is freaking out not knowing where she was.

Reviewer: beachlover Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2012 5:11 AM Title: Chapter 6

Will be be jealous?

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2012 4:28 AM Title: Chapter 6

Loved it :)

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Dec 2012 8:05 AM Title: Chapter 5

oh so a bunch of time has elapsed (was thinking Irina was talking to her like that within months of the deaths).  Still dont like her talking to a minor that way.

 

Lauren is pathetic.  ah well.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Dec 2012 8:01 AM Title: Chapter 4

ok the blackouts are unnerving.   At least she is trying swimming again.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Dec 2012 7:58 AM Title: Chapter 3

ok I do NOT like Irina.  Jeez its only been, what, a month or so since their deaths?   Being a teen is hard enough without therapists like her.  ugh

 

PS  If you get flamer and/or personally attacked here, let us know ASAP.  That is not tolerated here.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Dec 2012 7:54 AM Title: Chapter 2

Poor b.   Hard thing to lose everything 

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Dec 2012 7:13 AM Title: Chapter 1

interesting start.  Is this a BDSM or daddykink kinda story???



Author's Response:

No, it's neither. 

Thanks! <3

Reviewer: xiolaperry Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Dec 2012 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 5

I'm really enjoying your story.  Please don't take what mean people have to say to heart, like that FB person you were talking about a few chapters back. I think you're fantastic !

Reviewer: Skyclouds Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Nov 2012 12:14 PM Title: Chapter 5

Loved the end bit so beautiful.

Reviewer: EdwardBella27 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2012 8:57 PM Title: Chapter 5

sweet

Reviewer: seeker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2012 4:16 AM Title: Chapter 5

Thanks good chapter

Reviewer: Alabastdelf Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Nov 2012 10:54 PM Title: Chapter 5

You have described Bella`s suffering very thorough.I`ve hesitated before I decided to write this little message.I think you`ve got a great talent that you should not allow waisting.I hope Bella will be happier and will find her place near Edward.Ever since I read first about Edward and Bella I hope that every Edward and Bella are together in the happily ever after;thank you for writing.

Reviewer: ddiva Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Nov 2012 4:06 PM Title: Chapter 5

Loved the backstory here. It helps knowing that Edward understands what Bella is going through. I didn't comprehend just how deep his attraction to Bella goes. Can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: mamarobsten Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Nov 2012 1:00 PM Title: Chapter 1

:)

Reviewer: katemarlin Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 22 Nov 2012 8:46 AM Title: Chapter 5

Great story.. I'm interested to see where this goes.. please update soon!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Nov 2012 4:08 AM Title: Chapter 5

She is coming back to life

Reviewer: Kitacullen89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2012 10:23 PM Title: Chapter 5

Oh cat how i love you and your creative mind lol xx

Reviewer: tff000 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2012 10:17 PM Title: Chapter 5

good to get epov. interesting to see what has been going on

Reviewer: mommabear0206 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2012 9:54 PM Title: Chapter 5

home it is

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2012 9:43 PM Title: Chapter 5

:)

Reviewer: Amazone3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2012 8:51 PM Title: Chapter 5

Awesome!

Reviewer: akemp17 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2012 8:37 PM Title: Chapter 5

Loved it!!

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2012 7:11 PM Title: Chapter 5

Loved it :)

Reviewer: CrazyMazie Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2012 6:56 PM Title: Chapter 5

Really good so far.

Will you ever get back to Conventioneers?

Reviewer: Findjulia Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2012 6:37 PM Title: Chapter 5

I love getting Edward's perspective!

Reviewer: EdwardBella27 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Nov 2012 10:33 PM Title: Chapter 4

great chapter

Reviewer: EdwardBella27 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Nov 2012 10:23 PM Title: Chapter 3

sweet

Reviewer: EdwardBella27 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Nov 2012 9:54 PM Title: Chapter 2

poor bella

Reviewer: EdwardBella27 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Nov 2012 9:27 PM Title: Chapter 1

this is really good

Reviewer: seeker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Nov 2012 7:49 AM Title: Chapter 4

Thanks good chapter

Reviewer: beachlover Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Nov 2012 2:33 PM Title: Chapter 4

Mmmmm

Reviewer: Skyclouds Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Nov 2012 1:43 PM Title: Chapter 1

Just started to read this fic and love it.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Nov 2012 7:30 AM Title: Chapter 4

She is so lost she needs to find herself and if she lets Edward in I think she will.

Reviewer: mariamorgan Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Nov 2012 2:07 AM Title: Chapter 4

Can't wait for the next chapter

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Nov 2012 11:08 PM Title: Chapter 4

Loved it :)

Reviewer: Findjulia Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Nov 2012 4:33 PM Title: Chapter 4

getting so good!

Reviewer: tff000 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Nov 2012 3:51 PM Title: Chapter 4

good :)

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Nov 2012 3:04 PM Title: Chapter 4

Bon chapitre !

Est ce que Bella va aller mieux ?

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Nov 2012 2:02 PM Title: Chapter 4

:)

Reviewer: Cinaxoxo99 Signed starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 01 Nov 2012 9:21 AM Title: Chapter 3

I loved the story, i hope you will update soon.

Reviewer: seeker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Oct 2012 1:34 AM Title: Chapter 3

Thanks good chapter

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2012 8:23 AM Title: Chapter 3

:)

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2012 2:56 AM Title: Chapter 3

Love it so far can't wait for more :)

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2012 2:55 AM Title: Chapter 2

Love it :)

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2012 2:55 AM Title: Chapter 1

Love it :)

Reviewer: beachlover Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2012 2:02 AM Title: Chapter 3

Please keep posting

Reviewer: hughug Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2012 12:24 AM Title: Chapter 3

Love the story catastrophia. If someone doesnt like it then maybe they should read other stories instead. People choose to read the stories you gals as the authors don't force us. so this person can yap all she wants to rile you guys up at the end of the day it was her choice to "read" the stories you guys have posted.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2012 12:23 AM Title: Chapter 3

She is coming up for air 

Reviewer: SMG_Marie Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Oct 2012 11:09 PM Title: Chapter 3

I look forward to watching Edward bring Bella around. Great chapter!

Reviewer: tff000 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Oct 2012 11:02 PM Title: Chapter 3

wonder how e will handle the relationship

Reviewer: Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Oct 2012 8:44 PM Title: Chapter 3

Very interesting!

Reviewer: jukie Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Oct 2012 7:49 PM Title: Chapter 1

I absolutely love your writing and your stories are awesome.  I hope this jerk does not stop you from writing.  I hope you continue  your wonderful work. 

Love Jukie

Reviewer: mommabear0206 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Oct 2012 6:16 PM Title: Chapter 3

that girl is terrible she sent me one to :(......  looking forward to reading more

Reviewer: seeker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2012 3:28 PM Title: Chapter 2

Thanks good chapters

Reviewer: monkey22marie Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2012 1:00 AM Title: Chapter 2

Aww they both don't know where they stand about how they feel about each other or what will happen in the future with them 

Hope you update REALLY soon

Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Oct 2012 7:23 PM Title: Chapter 2

great chapter! wow she is really in a dark place.

Reviewer: Findjulia Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Oct 2012 6:06 PM Title: Chapter 2

yay it's back!

Reviewer: valeriecullen7 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Oct 2012 4:57 PM Title: Chapter 1

Really good keep going!!!!!!!

Reviewer: ddiva Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Oct 2012 2:55 PM Title: Chapter 2

Poor Bella, so lost,so lonely! My heart aches for her and for Edward who is only trying to help,(I think). Waiting oh so impatiently for the next chapter! :)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Oct 2012 2:30 PM Title: Chapter 2

:)

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