Date: 27 Dec 2015 1:41 AM Title: Chapter 4
Hellooo I thought Edward didn't know about the pregnancy before he took the DNA test? Okay, Bella make the connection between her students and Edward's sons. BUT... How could she not asks any question about the twin's mom ?
Date: 27 Dec 2015 1:24 AM Title: Chapter 2
Great story but a little bit strange : first with the way you wrote Mackynzie, then with your characters's careers. How could a singer in a successfull band become a doctor ? And Emmet was supposed to quit, than come back, and he finally have another job?? It's a little bit confusing...
Date: 23 Dec 2015 2:42 PM Title: Chapter 19
Welcome back. I really like this family.
Date: 14 Dec 2015 9:55 PM Title: Chapter 6
So she was the love of his life, Lets hope when Bella and Edward get together he won't say she is the love he missed out of, It would be a lie, because he knew what he did with Bella and knew there was a possibility that her baby was his...I would never forgive him for that, I would let him in on the child's life but I would not get into a phydical relationship with him
Date: 14 Dec 2015 9:10 PM Title: Chapter 1
He played in the band with Emmett, how does he not know the Swan name and was he that drunk and messed with 18 yr old Bella and got her pregnant.
Date: 02 Dec 2012 6:35 PM Title: Chapter 6
Ok it take a bit longer than a week to figure out you are pregnant, most women don't find out until they are 6-8 weeks along due to when your last cycle was and when your next one would start.
Other than that awesome story so far
Author's Response:
I've never been pregnant, and I was only a kid when my mom got pregnant again! Thanks for the review and enjoy the rest :)
[Report This]Date: 28 Nov 2012 5:21 PM Title: Chapter 17
Good chapter!
Children are unbearable
Sometimes hard for parents to be firm with punishment.
thank you
[Report This]Date: 28 Nov 2012 7:26 AM Title: Chapter 17
I thought the kids were joking when they first started carrying on... well I am sure there are many more moment like that to come for them
Author's Response:
I was going to make it as a joke, but then I wanted it to have some 'real' moments in it. No child is perfect, and they have at least one bad day where they act out. So I figured I through in a temper tantrum. :P Thanks for the review :)
Date: 08 Nov 2012 10:42 PM Title: Chapter 16
lol so not what I was expecting, but it never is. Love it
[Report This]Date: 08 Nov 2012 8:34 AM Title: Chapter 16
C'est un beau chapitre !
Tanya a faillit gâcher la fête mais en fin de compte tout c'est bien passé.
Merci.
Date: 08 Nov 2012 12:59 AM Title: Chapter 16
Can't wait for the next chapter
Date: 01 Nov 2012 6:46 PM Title: Chapter 15
Loved it, I wasn't able to read them last night with halloween and all, but Loved both of them!
[Report This]Date: 01 Nov 2012 5:08 PM Title: Chapter 15
Great chapter! I can't wait to read more :)
Date: 01 Nov 2012 2:24 PM Title: Chapter 15
i love this story
[Report This]Date: 01 Nov 2012 1:33 PM Title: Chapter 15
C'est un très bon chapitre ! J'aime beaucoup cet Edward maintenant.
[Report This]Date: 01 Nov 2012 6:35 AM Title: Chapter 15
Sweet chapter. I really enjoyed it.
Date: 01 Nov 2012 4:39 AM Title: Chapter 15
i`m so happy for them i hope she likes the ring?
[Report This]Date: 01 Nov 2012 2:40 AM Title: Chapter 15
LOL I have a christmas video with my then 2 year old son screaming at the window as a firetruck was going down the street. Be his speech was a lot worse than those to books, Fire truck came out as Fucked up. LOL I found it really funny, hubby didn't. LOL
Date: 01 Nov 2012 1:58 AM Title: Chapter 15
Yippie engaged! Im happy!
Date: 01 Nov 2012 1:51 AM Title: Chapter 15
Sorry...I was knee deep in trick or treat stuff!
I love the whole family dynamics coming together...I believe there will definitely be some drama to come.
Thanks for the update.
Date: 01 Nov 2012 12:58 AM Title: Chapter 14
Lol I remember I brought home wen was gave it to my baby who was one at the time and my two cousin that was a fun couple of weeks great chapter
[Report This]Date: 31 Oct 2012 12:36 PM Title: Chapter 14
Mon Dieu, heureusement qu'Edward est là !
Enfin ils sont malade mais ils sont ensemble.
Merci, j'adore ce chapitre.
[Report This]Date: 31 Oct 2012 4:30 AM Title: Chapter 14
Hmm, a cast with chicken pox... where is the ruler!!!
Date: 31 Oct 2012 3:51 AM Title: Chapter 14
Looking Forward to The next chapter
Date: 31 Oct 2012 2:03 AM Title: Chapter 14
Awe chicken pox, i caught them in 2nd grade from my communion partner and my little brother did not catch them till years later
Date: 30 Oct 2012 11:45 PM Title: Chapter 14
I was enjoying this story, and then, the last 2 chapters, I only got half way thru 14 and decided it had turned to pure rubbish, such a shame. Pamela
Author's Response:
I'm sorry you have taken a disliking for it. But I don't appciate being flamed. Thank you for the review, but please keep you rude opinion to yourself. I wrote this story just for the sake of it, yes, my writing has changed towards the end, but that's because I stopped writing it for over 7 months and then picked it up again. I lost interest in it for a while, which is why the story shifted. Please keep you opinion to yourself if you have nothing nice to say.
Date: 30 Oct 2012 7:26 PM Title: Chapter 13
Wow love this story,i have read all 14 chapters and they were brilliant..
[Report This]Date: 30 Oct 2012 1:32 PM Title: Chapter 13
C'était un beau chapitre ! Il s'y passe beaucoup de bonnes et de mauvaises choses.
J'espère que Mackynzie ne va pas être blessée ou enlevée.
Vite la suite ! Merci.
Date: 30 Oct 2012 12:25 PM Title: Chapter 13
Jeeze really, common
Date: 30 Oct 2012 12:16 AM Title: Chapter 12
Loving it...Can't wait to see what her freak out is over.
Date: 29 Oct 2012 10:38 PM Title: Chapter 12
oh no the dead wife is back lol
Date: 29 Oct 2012 8:58 PM Title: Chapter 12
what did he do this time or is bella jumping to conclusions.
[Report This]Date: 29 Oct 2012 8:46 PM Title: Chapter 12
Bon chapitre sauf la fin évidemment.
Merci.
[Report This]Date: 29 Oct 2012 6:09 PM Title: Chapter 12
Ididn't see that one coming. Great chapter.
Date: 29 Oct 2012 5:55 PM Title: Prologue
Ha i was 5th, so why is he a liar?
Date: 29 Oct 2012 5:53 PM Title: Chapter 12
WTF HAPPENED NOW?
Date: 29 Oct 2012 4:16 PM Title: Chapter 12
The Bella mood swings are driving me nuts.
Date: 29 Oct 2012 3:44 PM Title: Chapter 12
What the heck did he lie about?
Date: 29 Oct 2012 3:38 PM Title: Chapter 12
Ok count this as one of the five reviews.. i wanna know what happens
[Report This]Date: 29 Oct 2012 3:19 PM Title: Chapter 12
Not fair......this is really good. Keep it coming.
Date: 28 Oct 2012 12:47 AM Title: Chapter 11
No no no after hee dream is this a kidnappingor an edward napping?
Cruel cliffie!
[Report This]Date: 27 Oct 2012 4:06 PM Title: Chapter 1
Great start!
[Report This]Date: 27 Oct 2012 2:36 AM Title: Chapter 11
"I absorbed everything Carlisle had said and I realized just how immature I really was Friday night." Ya think Bella? I really thought after the date she really did not want to be with Edward.
Hmmm, I am unsure where this is coming from, why would someone take Bella? This is strange!
[Report This]Date: 27 Oct 2012 2:26 AM Title: Chapter 11
okay so is the stalker making his move
i am a little puzzled why bella is having nightmares/dreams of edward harming her and wanting his daughter for himself??? i am a little fuzzy on what is going on
[Report This]Date: 26 Oct 2012 10:02 PM Title: Chapter 11
That dream was trippy! And who the hell is this person with Bella? Hot damn?
[Report This]Date: 26 Oct 2012 9:59 PM Title: Chapter 11
Alors amis ou ennemis ?
J'espère que c'est Edward car si c'est un autre, c'est un ennemi ! Non ?
La suite s'il vous plaît.
Merci.
[Report This]Date: 26 Oct 2012 8:33 PM Title: Chapter 10
Hmmm, I am not sure if Bella wants her relationship with Edward or not. I under she wants it for the kids, but I am not sure if she wants it for her.
[Report This]Date: 26 Oct 2012 4:02 PM Title: Chapter 11
Fun and interesting chapter. It is true love when a Dad plays dressup and does makup, hair and painted nails. Nice cliff hanger, too.
Date: 26 Oct 2012 3:28 PM Title: Chapter 11
Great chapter a bet it's Edward
Date: 26 Oct 2012 3:21 PM Title: Chapter 11
Half the battle is trying to sit and listen to the other side of the story. I'm glad she had a talk with Carlisle, he seems to be the most - separated from the situation. Thanks for the update.
Date: 26 Oct 2012 3:11 PM Title: Chapter 11
ok so should we be concerned of someone taking Bella or is is Edward that grabbed her????
[Report This]Date: 26 Oct 2012 2:15 PM Title: Chapter 10
This story is very sweet although it sounds like things are about to get scary and exciting. I mst began reading and I wipptry to review often. Thanks for writing.
[Report This]Date: 26 Oct 2012 6:57 AM Title: Chapter 9
It is good to see these two families mix well together, I am just wondering if Bella is really happy about this. Some times she comes across as so 'Yeah' if you know what I mean. I hope she gets a little more excited about it soon.
Date: 25 Oct 2012 1:59 PM Title: Chapter 10
love this story!!!
Date: 25 Oct 2012 3:52 AM Title: Chapter 10
It seems that Bella is unfairly putting all the blame on Edward, he did ask Emmett about he and he lied. What did she expect to happen?
Date: 25 Oct 2012 2:23 AM Title: Chapter 10
Good chapter. Like to see what awaits them.
[Report This]Date: 25 Oct 2012 1:36 AM Title: Chapter 10
man the date was a bust
too much time so many questions
hopefully they can put the past behind and move forward
i do not know what is coming up but it does not seem good
Date: 24 Oct 2012 11:01 PM Title: Chapter 10
oh I bet it is his wife that he thought died.
Date: 24 Oct 2012 10:57 PM Title: Chapter 10
Oh no im worried, is someone getting hurt or sick?
[Report This]Date: 24 Oct 2012 9:55 PM Title: Chapter 10
Mon Dieu leur rendez vous a été horrible !
Edward a eu des paroles malheureuses et Bella a été en colère.
Tu nous promets quelque chose qui me fait peur !!!
Date: 24 Oct 2012 6:15 PM Title: Chapter 9
Kudos for crazy pizza night!
Bring on datenight!
Date: 24 Oct 2012 12:00 AM Title: Chapter 7
interesting thanks
Date: 23 Oct 2012 5:37 PM Title: Chapter 9
great chapter.. can not wait to see how date night goes
[Report This]Date: 23 Oct 2012 11:53 AM Title: Chapter 9
Wahou ! J'adore ! Nous sommes au pays des Bisounours et j'aime ça !!!!
Les jumeaux sont heureux, ils ont une grande soeur et une maman !
Bella est contente du sourire de sa fille et d'un Edward qui lui donne rendez-vous !
Edward a retrouvé Bella, une belle petite fille et peut-être une compagne s'il sait y faire avec elle...
Merci
Date: 23 Oct 2012 9:40 AM Title: Chapter 5
them boys know how to work it lol
Date: 23 Oct 2012 9:11 AM Title: Chapter 4
He got through that pretty easy
Date: 23 Oct 2012 8:50 AM Title: Chapter 3
Did he get the results and he is just thinking about it????? Daddy nothing better than daddy.
Date: 23 Oct 2012 8:35 AM Title: Chapter 2
He is going to man up good
Date: 23 Oct 2012 8:27 AM Title: Chapter 1
He just went around making babys ?????
Date: 23 Oct 2012 8:14 AM Title: Prologue
Love it sounds great. Poor girl suprise
Date: 23 Oct 2012 5:15 AM Title: Chapter 9
Wow, that's alot of info in that chapter. I like the way you don't drag things out ;).
Date: 23 Oct 2012 3:05 AM Title: Chapter 9
not good at reviewing. love your story
and enjoy "twins" everywhere. I enjoy all Bella/Edw. love stories, especially well thought out & well written ones. thank you for your efforts, Pamela
[Report This]Date: 23 Oct 2012 2:24 AM Title: Chapter 9
wow their family is getting bigger
weddings, additions and new beginings
i wish them all the best and i am glad edward is putting his best foot forward
Date: 23 Oct 2012 2:21 AM Title: Chapter 9
I didn't catch anything about a wedding...you were great. Looking forward to see what you have in store for us...everything is going smooth, and a date night? Thanks for the update.
Date: 23 Oct 2012 1:13 AM Title: Chapter 9
looking forward to mroe
Date: 21 Oct 2012 1:47 AM Title: Chapter 8
Another great and interesting chapter! Thanks!,
[Report This]Date: 20 Oct 2012 5:38 PM Title: Chapter 8
well i am glad alice went back to her family to see where it goes. family is everything.
edward it was great he came forward. every person should know if there parent wants to be apart og their lives. i hope it works out
looking forward to to mac meeting her brothers
love it
Date: 20 Oct 2012 4:03 PM Title: Chapter 8
Yeah, the review was meant to be funny. I just found the irony hilarious. I'm glad Alice made up with her family. Sweet chapter :)
[Report This]Date: 20 Oct 2012 11:17 AM Title: Chapter 8
I thought Edward's wife was the love of his life not Bella, so when he said he fell in love with Bella the night Mackynzie was conceived I find that a little hard to believe!
It was nice that she accepted Edward as her dad so quickly
[Report This]Date: 20 Oct 2012 9:13 AM Title: Chapter 8
Is this in Canada? Is that why thanksgiving in on a Sunday? I forget where the setting is.
[Report This]Date: 20 Oct 2012 8:14 AM Title: Chapter 8
C'est un beau chapitre !
Edward et Mackynzie ont l'air heureux ensemble.
Je pense qu'Edward souhaite aussi renouer avec Bella, ça fera une belle famille avec les jumeaux.
Merci
Date: 19 Oct 2012 8:30 PM Title: Chapter 7
loving this story.
Date: 19 Oct 2012 2:01 PM Title: Chapter 7
loved it and can't wait to see what will happen next!