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Reviewer: PrincessNerra75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Sep 2014 6:07 AM Title: Chapter 1

Awesome!!

Reviewer: sarasue Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Aug 2013 4:00 AM Title: Chapter 1

enjoyed very much wish there was more:[

Reviewer: pianogirl05 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Dec 2012 2:49 PM Title: Chapter 1

I love a happy ending!

Reviewer: lilysmily Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2012 7:05 PM Title: Chapter 1

hey

great OS

I rally liked is..

but what does Edward do now??

he has resigned his job, so...

bye

Lil

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2012 10:38 PM Title: Chapter 1

cool great story thanks

Reviewer: goldseadragon Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2012 2:45 AM Title: Chapter 1

I'ce never been in the FBI, but I think a good rule of thumb might be that when choosing a fake name with which to fly under the radar, don't use one that's of a famous musician. :p



Author's Response:

You know, you're the first person to even notice that, but I changed his last name slightly because it is a good point.  I was just thinking that it is a common last name and didn't put it together.  Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: littlelizruth Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Oct 2012 7:43 AM Title: Chapter 1

That was bad ass!

Reviewer: amhall1977 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Oct 2012 1:51 AM Title: Chapter 1

I love that it was a one-shot but would love to know more it was great

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Oct 2012 11:46 PM Title: Chapter 1

really good so far..

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Oct 2012 7:45 PM Title: Chapter 1

That was a fun, exciting read! Edward and Bella always find each other, don't they? Being a life-long resident of the Pacific Northwest, I loved the road trip they took together.

Reviewer: tlwatkins36 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Oct 2012 5:03 PM Title: Chapter 1

I just found your story here and I thoroughly enjoyed reading it.  very well put together. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Oct 2012 3:14 PM Title: Chapter 1

:)

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