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Reviewer: twirob13 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Nov 2014 11:58 PM Title: Chapter 29

it was too short!! ;) i think it would be great if you continued this story as a sequel ;) btw with what happened to bella is she unable to conceive a child? ;D

Reviewer: EdwardBella27 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Aug 2014 3:07 AM Title: Chapter 29

this was really good

Reviewer: Daggers Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 May 2013 10:04 PM Title: Chapter 29

Really really good *sniff* & as a fellow rape survivor thanks for not being too..descriptive. But most of all thank you for being brave enough to share

 

~Shawna

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Nov 2012 9:01 PM Title: Chapter 29

Go Charlie.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Nov 2012 8:48 PM Title: Chapter 28

lol for them messing with each other.   Charlie is funny.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Nov 2012 8:44 PM Title: Chapter 27

they are too cute together

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Nov 2012 8:43 PM Title: Chapter 26

fight bella fight

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Nov 2012 8:43 PM Title: Chapter 25

oh Mikey.... you f'ing moron

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Nov 2012 8:41 PM Title: Chapter 24

glad the kids are there for her

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Nov 2012 8:40 PM Title: Chapter 23

Girl needs help.   Whores sell themselves, not raped by an adult.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Nov 2012 8:39 PM Title: Chapter 22

Glad Charlie isnt giving up on her.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Nov 2012 8:38 PM Title: Chapter 21

he is so sweet

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Nov 2012 8:37 PM Title: Chapter 20

Renee and Phil both deserved to die.   Too bad she didnt castrate him first.

Reviewer: Lunarchild21 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Nov 2012 3:43 AM Title: Chapter 29

This was a good story. I would have liked it longer but I understand a story is as long as it needs to be. A continueation would be nice, I'd like to read that. 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Nov 2012 2:16 AM Title: Chapter 29

thanks great storie

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Nov 2012 1:11 AM Title: Chapter 29

:)

Reviewer: denali1918 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Nov 2012 12:20 AM Title: Chapter 29

you should it a good store i would love to read more 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Nov 2012 4:16 PM Title: Chapter 28

she has something to live for

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Nov 2012 4:14 PM Title: Chapter 28

:)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Nov 2012 8:13 AM Title: Chapter 27

:)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Nov 2012 8:11 AM Title: Chapter 26

:)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Nov 2012 4:01 AM Title: Chapter 27

how sweet

Reviewer: denali1918 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Nov 2012 1:10 AM Title: Chapter 27

keep this one going it one of the few right now getting updated and i like it 

Reviewer: denali1918 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Nov 2012 12:56 AM Title: Chapter 26

keep the story going your is real good 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Nov 2012 9:43 PM Title: Chapter 26

she needs his love

Reviewer: carebare1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Nov 2012 7:18 PM Title: Chapter 25

i love all of yuor storys i have you on my favorites here and on fan fiction thank you for your time to write thes story

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Nov 2012 7:04 PM Title: Chapter 25

:)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Nov 2012 5:34 PM Title: Chapter 25

Mike is fucked in the head.  Bella has to be OK and she has said she loves him

Reviewer: Lunarchild21 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Nov 2012 4:46 PM Title: Chapter 25

Wow, I thought that would go the other way. Mike after Bella & Edward gets shot instead. Wow

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Nov 2012 5:59 AM Title: Chapter 24

:)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Nov 2012 5:58 AM Title: Chapter 23

:)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Nov 2012 2:13 AM Title: Chapter 24

They are stronger together and she loves him.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2012 10:38 PM Title: Chapter 23

so much damage

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2012 6:43 PM Title: Chapter 22

So much pain.  Charlie is trying to be there for her

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2012 3:26 PM Title: Chapter 22

:)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2012 6:15 AM Title: Chapter 21

:)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2012 6:06 AM Title: Chapter 21

He is perfect for her

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2012 5:12 AM Title: Chapter 20

good they both died

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Nov 2012 8:07 PM Title: Chapter 20

:)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Nov 2012 7:39 PM Title: Chapter 19

I am sure Bella got what she deserved to bad she didnt kill Phil to

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Nov 2012 6:35 PM Title: Chapter 19

:)

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Nov 2012 5:19 PM Title: Chapter 19

Renee deserved to die.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Nov 2012 6:23 AM Title: Chapter 18

:)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Nov 2012 5:02 AM Title: Chapter 18

I think Renee was an evil Bitch and deserved to die.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Nov 2012 4:41 AM Title: Chapter 17

They need each other

Reviewer: aidabye Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Nov 2012 3:28 AM Title: Chapter 18

OMG, DID NOT SEE THAT COMING. CAN'T WAIT FOR NEXT UPDATE.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Nov 2012 1:28 AM Title: Chapter 18

Oh b. Guilt taking b

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2012 8:30 PM Title: Chapter 17

:)

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2012 7:56 PM Title: Chapter 17

poor hurt kids.

Reviewer: aidabye Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2012 5:53 PM Title: Chapter 17

OMG SO SAD

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2012 3:50 PM Title: Chapter 16

:)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2012 3:02 PM Title: Chapter 16

so glad he was there

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2012 1:48 PM Title: Chapter 16

go eddie.  make her listen

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2012 7:31 AM Title: Chapter 15

guilt trip for Charlie I think he has enough of his own with out hers to poor guy he only wants to help.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2012 7:26 AM Title: Chapter 14

so sad

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2012 7:24 AM Title: Chapter 13

wow 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2012 6:21 AM Title: Chapter 15

:)

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2012 5:23 AM Title: Chapter 15

oooh hes starting to pull it out of her.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2012 5:22 AM Title: Chapter 14

poor confused B

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2012 6:52 PM Title: Chapter 14

:)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2012 3:37 PM Title: Chapter 13

:)

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2012 2:07 PM Title: Chapter 13

oh boy.  MOm prob blames him

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2012 7:55 AM Title: Chapter 12

It is good they scared the shit out of Mike but poor Bella was scared shitless to.  I hope she understands what Edward is saying

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2012 7:49 AM Title: Chapter 11

Everyones pain is different it doesnt mean it hurts any different.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2012 6:28 AM Title: Chapter 12

:)

Reviewer: aidabye Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2012 4:01 AM Title: Chapter 12

LOVE THIS STORY. JUST SO SAD.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2012 3:49 AM Title: Chapter 12

poor b.  damn newton

Reviewer: CrazyMazie Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2012 12:46 AM Title: Chapter 11

Loving it so far.  BTW - you mean admission not omission.

Admit - to confess

Omit - to leave out.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Nov 2012 10:39 PM Title: Chapter 11

Hope she lets them into her head and heart

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Nov 2012 10:37 PM Title: Chapter 10

oooh we learn a bit more about eddie

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Nov 2012 9:32 PM Title: Chapter 11

:)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Nov 2012 6:34 PM Title: Chapter 10

So much pain in such young lives

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Nov 2012 1:45 PM Title: Chapter 10

:)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Nov 2012 6:20 AM Title: Chapter 9

:)

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Nov 2012 5:16 AM Title: Chapter 9

awww for eddie taking her there

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Nov 2012 2:48 AM Title: Chapter 9

She is not alone :)

Reviewer: aidabye Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Nov 2012 11:29 PM Title: Chapter 7

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Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Nov 2012 7:40 PM Title: Chapter 8

thank god he is there

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Nov 2012 7:36 PM Title: Chapter 7

my heart just breaks for her

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Nov 2012 6:06 PM Title: Chapter 8

:)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Nov 2012 6:04 PM Title: Chapter 7

:)

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Nov 2012 5:48 PM Title: Chapter 8

poor thing

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Nov 2012 5:46 PM Title: Chapter 7

oh Bella  You have really been messed with huh?

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Nov 2012 8:29 AM Title: Chapter 6

:)

Reviewer: aidabye Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Nov 2012 5:24 AM Title: Chapter 6

AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Nov 2012 5:22 AM Title: Chapter 6

WOW a conversation this time.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Nov 2012 4:39 AM Title: Chapter 6

Thank god he isnt giving up.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Nov 2012 4:36 AM Title: Chapter 5

It makes my heart hurt i could use more updates :)

Reviewer: aidabye Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Nov 2012 8:28 PM Title: Chapter 5

SO SO SAD.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Nov 2012 6:18 PM Title: Chapter 5

Charlie is so sweet and patient

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Nov 2012 4:32 PM Title: Chapter 5

:)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Nov 2012 6:50 AM Title: Chapter 4

He is watching her good thing she is so sad.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Nov 2012 6:45 AM Title: Chapter 4

Bella certainly sounds broken huh

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Nov 2012 6:15 AM Title: Chapter 4

:)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Nov 2012 9:26 PM Title: Chapter 3

OMFG what happened to this poor girl????

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Nov 2012 9:23 PM Title: Chapter 2

At least she gets Charlie back but what happened to her to get her there.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Nov 2012 9:19 PM Title: Chapter 1

It sounds so sad and I hate Renee.

Reviewer: EdwardBella27 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Nov 2012 7:00 PM Title: Chapter 3

sweet

Reviewer: aidabye Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Nov 2012 6:42 PM Title: Chapter 3

awwww he is so sweet

Reviewer: EdwardBella27 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Nov 2012 6:34 PM Title: Chapter 2

poor bella

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