[Report This]Date: 20 Jun 2014 4:06 AM Title: Chapter 7
That was awesome!!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 04 Mar 2013 10:54 AM Title: Chapter 7
Omg... Those two... *sigh* and how completely hot was this fic?! Just all kinds of wow! Consider my mind officially blown! Brava
Author's Response:
Thank you! I am so glad you liked this story. :) Kricket
Date: 07 Dec 2012 7:35 PM Title: Chapter 7
Really i love you,every story leaves me with a smile on his face and loving more and more to this beautiful couple, thanks fo giving us this bit of happines.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much, Isabella. Your words touch my heart. I really appreciate the review. Kricket
Date: 07 Dec 2012 5:55 PM Title: Chapter 7
Aw! What a sweet ending! I loved this story every bit as much as your other one, Kricket. You write these two together so very well!
Author's Response:
Thank you, Steph. I am so glad you liked this. All that heat needed a little bit of emotion to temper it. ;) kricket
Date: 07 Dec 2012 5:51 PM Title: Chapter 6
I loved the strip tease scene and how she trusts him so completely to do something like that for him. On to the last chapter...
Author's Response:
Thank you, hon. Ultimate trust is what true, loving D/s is all about. Kricket
Date: 07 Dec 2012 5:48 PM Title: Chapter 5
Now that was really hot! I love how attentive he is being to her and showing her how a lover really treats their beloved!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! That's the key--he treats her as she wishes to be treated. Kinda the Golden Rule in bed. LOL Kricket
Date: 07 Dec 2012 4:54 PM Title: Chapter 4
:) I love the steamy scenes that you write, Kricket. This is such an amazing story so far!
Author's Response:
Thanks, hon. This one was so fun to research. Hee hee! Kricket
Date: 07 Dec 2012 4:49 PM Title: Chapter 3
What a perfect chapter. I can feel Penelope's protestations, since I sometimes feel the same way myself with friends. Cannot wait to get on to the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Thanks so much, Steph. That's what I am hoping for. That we can experience through Penelope what she is feeling. Kricket
Date: 07 Dec 2012 4:39 PM Title: Chapter 2
I like reading about this side of Morgan. Cannot wait to see where you're taking this!
Author's Response:
Thank you! He's fed up in this one, and frankly, I can't help but think Hallelujah! Kricket
Date: 07 Dec 2012 4:34 PM Title: Chapter 1
Ooh, dom!Morgan! Cannot wait to read the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Thank you! I think my version of Dominance really fits Derek. Kricket
[Report This]Date: 05 Dec 2012 4:23 PM Title: Chapter 7
really beautiful. I'm glad she set him straight about what she was feeling five years before.
Author's Response:
Thank you, Sara. That is the one thing that breaks my heart. I truly believe he meant those words, even if she didn't understand them that way. This way, they could remedy any past hurts. Kricket
[Report This]Date: 05 Dec 2012 4:19 PM Title: Chapter 6
very well written, you packed a lot of emotion into that
Author's Response:
Thank you, Sara. That's my wish, that the emotion tempers the smut. There is a lot of love in there. Kricket
Date: 05 Dec 2012 12:53 AM Title: Chapter 7
Awww, what a sweet ending. I loved it. Wonderful story as always.
Author's Response:
Thank you, Alicia-Nicole. Tempered the heat with sweet. Kricket
Date: 04 Dec 2012 9:13 PM Title: Chapter 7
I lovedddddd theseeeeee last twoo chaptersssss they are awesomeeee I hope there are moree chapters on the wayyyyy
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! Sorry, that's the end of this story. But there are always more coming from me. I love these two so much...they're meant to be. Kricket
Date: 04 Dec 2012 6:36 PM Title: Chapter 7
i read the last three chapters all together and WOW !! you really can write smut !! LOL
but this chapter is soooooooo sweet..
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! LOL...I love smut. I think it is a natural expression of true love. Kricket
Date: 04 Dec 2012 1:36 PM Title: Chapter 7
So sweet! You, my dear, never fail to give me warm fuzzies! :) I'm sad to see this end.
Author's Response:
Thank you, honey. I am glad you liked this. More stories are on their way. Kricket
Date: 04 Dec 2012 11:11 AM Title: Chapter 7
Thank you so much for this story it has been fantastic and what a lovely ending.
Author's Response:
Thank you, Gravey. I tried to temper the heat with some sweet. Kricket
[Report This]Date: 04 Dec 2012 5:26 AM Title: Chapter 7
This was completely awesome!
Author's Response:
Thank you! I am so glad you liked it. :) Kricket
Date: 04 Dec 2012 5:12 AM Title: Chapter 2
Another sweet chapter. Loved this line: “This is stupid. You are stupid. Stop the truck.”
I could totally see Garcia saying that to him.
Author's Response:
Thank you! I try to keep them on the money character wise. :) Kricket
[Report This]Date: 04 Dec 2012 5:07 AM Title: Chapter 1
Such a cute first chapter! :)
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! Glad you enjoy this. Kricket
Date: 04 Dec 2012 3:26 AM Title: Chapter 7
Brilliant chapter! Both showed their insecurities as well as their love for one another, in true Kricket style! Christmas hugs to you, my friend!!
Author's Response:
Thank you, Peanut! Merry Christmas to you, too! Kricket
Date: 04 Dec 2012 1:24 AM Title: Chapter 6
Whew! *collapses boneless in chair* That was amazing. I need me a Morgan somethin' fierce! I loved it. Wonderful, wonderful job.
Author's Response:
LMBO! I would give you a Morgan in your stocking if I could, sweetheart. Thanks so much for reviewing. Kricket
Date: 04 Dec 2012 12:08 AM Title: Chapter 6
WOAH. This is awesome. I am not a huge DM/PG fan, but this is incredible. I hope you have some getting back at Lynch in order.
GJ
Author's Response:
Thank you so much. Sorry, this one doesn't have any striking back at Lynch, but he's already lost everything when he lost/ignored her. :) Now, she can have a lot more fun! Kricket
Date: 03 Dec 2012 9:05 AM Title: Chapter 6
Another great chapter - thank you so much
Author's Response:
Thank you so much, Gravey. Spicy and fun. :) Kricket
Date: 03 Dec 2012 7:06 AM Title: Chapter 6
I¨m Isabel Maria del Facebook.
As alwais l write stories take your breath away ,this is beautiful, and the episode a joy, beautiful, spectacular and very very hot.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much, Isabel. You are such a doll for reviewing for me. I am glad you are enjoying the story. :) Kricket
Date: 03 Dec 2012 1:04 AM Title: Chapter 5
HOT!
Author's Response:
Thank you! A little heat is always good. :) Kricket
[Report This]Date: 02 Dec 2012 9:43 PM Title: Chapter 5
Oh. Wow. I'm gonna need several cold showers after this one. Morgan is just... oh, I don't have the words for his awesomeness!
Author's Response:
Thank you, Jek. He's a passionate soul, that Derek. :) Kricket
[Report This]Date: 02 Dec 2012 9:40 PM Title: Chapter 4
Oh, hot damn! That was fantastic! And there's even more to come! Hee (that's what he said)
Author's Response:
Thank you! That was fun to write. :) Kricket
[Report This]Date: 02 Dec 2012 9:39 PM Title: Chapter 3
Love this line: “I want you,” he said, making her gasp instead of respond. He looked directly at her and continued, saying with certainty, “And you want me, too.”
Love Morgan's cool, calm, unyielding manner. Who could say no to that???
Author's Response:
Thanks, Jek! I know I couldn't! Kricket
[Report This]Date: 02 Dec 2012 9:37 PM Title: Chapter 2
Derek has an uphill battle on his hands. Love that he told everyone what he doing and love Garcia's fiestiness!
Author's Response:
Thank you, Jekkah. He does have an uphill battle. Some women are taught to aim low so that they are not disappointed, and I think Penelope is one of those folks. :) Kricket
Date: 02 Dec 2012 6:22 PM Title: Chapter 2
----Good. He was fine that she was a little irritated with the whole thing. The whole four years she was with Kevin Lynch had irritated the fuck out of him, too.
Best line ever! I can absolutely see him thinking/feeling that!
Author's Response:
Thank you, Dcatt! LOL..He does look irritated by Lynch on the show... Kricket
Date: 02 Dec 2012 1:26 AM Title: Chapter 5
Very nicely done cant wait for updates
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! I am really glad you liked this one. :) Kricket
Date: 02 Dec 2012 12:03 AM Title: Chapter 5
Round three! My god, I barely survived round 2! I loved this. Awesome to the 10th degree! I loved it.
Author's Response:
Thank you, Alicia_Nicole. Hang in there...lots more fun to come. :) Kricket
Date: 01 Dec 2012 11:07 PM Title: Chapter 5
Whimper!!! Sigh, now as I blush, I need a cool shower!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much, Jane. LOL...Blushing is adorable. ;) Kricket
Date: 01 Dec 2012 10:54 PM Title: Chapter 5
I feel faint.
Author's Response:
Thank you, kim! *hands smelling salts* Hang in there, more to come! Kricket
Date: 01 Dec 2012 9:38 PM Title: Chapter 5
Oh my dang!!! That was just...WHOA!
Author's Response:
Thank you! I had fun writing this one. :) Kricket
Date: 01 Dec 2012 9:31 PM Title: Chapter 5
it's beautiful how he is helping her explore her sensual side
Author's Response:
Thanks so much, Sara. There is a lot of love there and both of their sides. Now if they just can realize it. :) Kricket
Date: 01 Dec 2012 9:23 PM Title: Chapter 4
that was incrediably hot. Glad to see she finally let herself go in his capable hands
Author's Response:
There is a whole lot of love there. He's got her, he won't let her down. Thanks so much! Kricket
[Report This]Date: 01 Dec 2012 9:01 PM Title: Chapter 3
I think that the reasons behind Pen's thinking in this chapter fits well with what has been shown on CM. she really does seem more comfortable getting naked with an 'imperfect nerd' than an "adonis', even if she may love her adonis more.
well done chapter. very sexy yet thought provoking.
Author's Response:
Thank you. I think a lot of women have an issue with hoping for too much. Aim low, you won't be disappointed kind of thinking. That's sad, because I think a lot of women aim TOO low. Penelope in particular. Kricket
Date: 01 Dec 2012 8:32 PM Title: Chapter 5
I am running out of ways to say how great this is and how close I am to begging for the next chapter! Ding Ding - round three - bring it on!
Author's Response:
Thank you, Gravey. LOL...what a nice thing to say! You rock! Kricket
Date: 01 Dec 2012 8:03 PM Title: Chapter 5
Alrighty then.... excuse me while I go jump naked in a pile of snow.. oh darn we don't have any... Daaaaaaaaaaaang!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you, Anomalyblue! LOL...A bit of heat never hurt anyone. ;) Kricket
Date: 01 Dec 2012 6:12 PM Title: Chapter 4
so wonderful honey! great updates!
Author's Response:
Thank you, Rach! I'm on a time constraint, so I have to whip these out quickly. :) Kricket
Date: 01 Dec 2012 9:54 AM Title: Chapter 4
Do you know how excited I was to see an update - you really leave each chapter with us wanting more. Damn you are just too good at this.
Author's Response:
Thank you! I love writing this stuff. Passion is my forte. :) Kricket
Date: 01 Dec 2012 7:09 AM Title: Chapter 4
Frack! There's the Derek I love so much! *fans self*
Author's Response:
Oh, yeah. He knows what he's doing. :) Thanks! Kricket
Date: 01 Dec 2012 5:25 AM Title: Chapter 4
Oh my god! That was smokin' hot, and they haven't even taken their clothes off yet. I cannot wait for more if this amazing story.
Author's Response:
Thank you! No need to strip...at least right away...haha Kricket
Date: 30 Nov 2012 11:01 PM Title: Chapter 4
whimpers
Author's Response:
Thank you, Kim! LOL this review made me smile. :) Kricket
Date: 30 Nov 2012 8:22 PM Title: Chapter 3
ALLELUJA !!!
update soon
Author's Response:
Thank you! LOL..New chapter is up. :D Kricket
Date: 29 Nov 2012 10:14 AM Title: Chapter 3
Wow - please don't keep us waiting too long for the next update or I will start begging!! The emotion in this is sooooo intense - well done.
Author's Response:
Thank you! I like a good emotional scene. :) Kricket
[Report This]Date: 29 Nov 2012 6:19 AM Title: Chapter 3
I cannot wait for another update!
Author's Response:
Thank you! A new chapter is now up! Kricket
Date: 29 Nov 2012 5:23 AM Title: Chapter 3
I love this. It's so sexy and awesome. I love Derek and Penelope together, and I am so disappointed that the show may be putting Penelope and Kevin back together. Oh well. I have your wonderful stories to console me.
Author's Response:
Thank you! I don't know about the show putting them back together. I think P made a rash decision to go back where it was safe, but it didn't work. I'm hangin' in there. :) Kricket
Date: 29 Nov 2012 3:51 AM Title: Chapter 1
LOL!!!! Morgan kidnaps Garcia?? LOVE IT!!!
Author's Response:
LOL! Thanks, Leila. Yep, he kidnaps her and has his wicked way with her. Wicked, oh, so good way... :) Kricket
Date: 29 Nov 2012 12:43 AM Title: Chapter 3
EEEEK YAY More Please
Author's Response:
Thank you! Eeeep! Next chap is here. ;) Kricket
Date: 28 Nov 2012 9:43 PM Title: Chapter 2
cannot think a better way to spend a weekend, handcuffed to derek' bed....
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! I have to agree! :) Kricket
Date: 28 Nov 2012 7:56 AM Title: Chapter 2
I hope he can get her to understand.
Author's Response:
Thank you, Cindy. Harder than it may seem. :) Kricket
Date: 28 Nov 2012 7:51 AM Title: Chapter 1
That's one way to get her to listen lol.
Author's Response:
LOL! He had to do something! Kricket
Date: 27 Nov 2012 6:41 PM Title: Chapter 2
i like the twist of him having his own cabin
Author's Response:
Thank you, Sara. I thought that might be kind of fun. He owns a lot of properties, we have no idea what it could be. (I'm sort of hoping there's a boat home in his past!) Kricket
Date: 27 Nov 2012 6:37 PM Title: Chapter 1
interesting start
Author's Response:
Thank you, Sara! I got frustrated with Pen, and I thought, Hmm...Derek must be, too. Kricket
Date: 27 Nov 2012 10:24 AM Title: Chapter 2
WOW - really looking forward to some more of this - so heated.
Author's Response:
Thank you, Gravey. She's scared, and he's fed up. A kind of explosive combo. Kricket
Date: 27 Nov 2012 4:33 AM Title: Chapter 2
Oh my god! I am so excited for this story. I want more more more! I can't wait to see dominant Derek in action. It's going to be so hawt! Love it, love it, love it.
Author's Response:
Thank you, Alicia_Nicole! Dominant Derek is one of my favorite things. A true Dom really knows how to take care of their girl... Kricket
[Report This]Date: 27 Nov 2012 2:28 AM Title: Chapter 2
there is definitely something to be said for the gentleman neanderthal approach :)
by the time Morgan's had his 'say', teehee! :D
Author's Response:
Thank you, Dragon. LOL...I don't know many women that would fuss in her situation, either! Kricket
Date: 27 Nov 2012 2:18 AM Title: Chapter 2
Ooh dominant Derek! I love him. Perfect mix of demanding and sweet.
Author's Response:
Thank you, Evangeline. That's our boy! Kricket
Date: 27 Nov 2012 2:12 AM Title: Chapter 2
OOOh, now there's a sexy idea!!! Update soon
Author's Response:
Thanks so much, hon! There's going to be a lot of fun ideas in this story. Kricket
[Report This]Date: 27 Nov 2012 1:00 AM Title: Chapter 1
Woo! Go Derek!
And yay for JJ in the know!
Author's Response:
That smart cookie JJ! :) Thanks, sweetie. Kricket
Date: 26 Nov 2012 7:02 PM Title: Chapter 1
oh dios mio continua!
Author's Response:
Gracias, Lenika! Me coninua! :) Con Amor. Kricket
Date: 26 Nov 2012 12:06 PM Title: Chapter 1
Really enjoying this and looking forward to more after your FB preview
Author's Response:
Thank you, Gravey. This one is a lot of fun, and surprisingly emotional too. Kricket
Date: 25 Nov 2012 10:11 PM Title: Chapter 1
oh how much do i love this?! fantastic hun! More asap!!
Author's Response:
Thank you, Rach! I am so glad you are liking this! Whee! Kricket
Date: 25 Nov 2012 7:39 PM Title: Chapter 1
I am intrigued. Of course I want more.
Author's Response:
Thank you, nimue! Planning on posting about a chapter a day, so, have fun! Kricket
Date: 25 Nov 2012 7:17 PM Title: Chapter 1
Get your girl, Derek! This is going to be good!
Author's Response:
It's about dang time, right? :) Kricket
Date: 24 Nov 2012 8:21 PM Title: Chapter 1
oh yessssss, derek, go and get her !!
the lion is roaring, at last !!
Author's Response:
Hurray! LOL...The lion on his deltoid just nodded in approval. ! It's about time. :) Kricket
Date: 24 Nov 2012 6:31 PM Title: Chapter 1
Omg! I freaking died laughing. This is going to rock. I can't wait for more.
Author's Response:
Thank you! I am hoping for humor, heart, and sex. Good combo! LOL Kricket
Date: 24 Nov 2012 5:40 PM Title: Chapter 1
AhHHHH!!!, i can`t wait, please update soon >.< :D
Author's Response:
Thank you! I hope you love it! Kricket