Date: 10 Oct 2013 11:32 PM Title: Mortal Coil
wow... this was an intese chapter. the end definitely left me in tears and im glad they got that and happy with the way you wrote that. freaking alice is crazy. i hope that her mom can help her. cant wait for more!
Date: 09 Oct 2013 12:49 AM Title: Mortal Coil
Ah man, that was sad... But glad they both had some closure, left things on a positive note. Was so excited to see an update, can't wait for the next one.
I'll have to check out fictionpad. Haven't heard of that one but I know how ff.net like to pulls everyone stories for redic reasons.
Date: 06 Oct 2013 10:04 PM Title: Mortal Coil
So sad but I am so prod of Edward.
[Report This]Date: 06 Oct 2013 9:11 PM Title: Mortal Coil
Great Chapter! Update soon!
Date: 06 Oct 2013 9:09 PM Title: Viva Lost Wages
Great chapter. Alice and jasper though makes me sad.
[Report This]Date: 06 Oct 2013 6:02 PM Title: Mortal Coil
I really enjoyed this chapter. Will Owen and Edward really be miserable as long as they have the dog, though? Or only if they forget to take their pills? I hope its the latter...
Poor Jasper -- he kinda needs a hug. I hope lil Gianna will be alright. I also hope Alice can pull herself together and find something positive to use as an outlet. Something that makes her smile and allows her to focus lots of energy so she is not lashing out so much.
The end was sad but also, hmm, happy isn't the word but peaceful...yeah, peaceful works.
Date: 06 Oct 2013 3:53 PM Title: Mortal Coil
I am so glad that Edward went to see Emmett one last time and that he forgave him. And it was great that he spent hours with him, showing him pictures of the family and being there with him during the execution. I'm sure that really meant a lot to Emmett.
About Alice, yes she is being a spoiled bitch, but the first thing she needs to do once she gets back to being somewhat herself is apologize - to everyone. Gianna, first of all, and then Bella, her kids and then to Jasper. She has made a lot of enemies with her little problem and she has a long way to go for some forgiveness.
[Report This]Date: 06 Oct 2013 3:39 PM Title: Mortal Coil
Great chap. I cried at the end.
Date: 06 Oct 2013 1:02 PM Title: Mortal Coil
Alice does need some serious help! I'm glad Edward stayed with Emmett while he was dying. Thanks for the chapter!
Date: 06 Oct 2013 7:16 AM Title: Mortal Coil
LOOKING FORWARD TO THE NEXT CHAPTER.
[Report This]Date: 06 Oct 2013 6:15 AM Title: Mortal Coil
Can't wait for more loved it
Date: 28 Aug 2013 1:33 AM Title: Viva Lost Wages
Crap been a while so I have to go back and read what Emmett did. Jasper needs to talk. Affair could be happening, or it could be they have financial problems he is hiding from her. Men get this way over money.
[Report This]Date: 26 Aug 2013 11:22 AM Title: Viva Lost Wages
:) loved this
[Report This]Date: 14 Aug 2013 2:17 AM Title: Firsts
Thank you so much for making Kyra see how her actions hurt her family...so happy to see her grow up!! Love the whole story!!
Date: 05 Aug 2013 2:58 AM Title: Meet the Cullens...Again
OMG I totally love this triology!!! I am now cought up on all 3 stories!! Please update soon!! Love Bella and Edward!
Date: 25 Jul 2013 10:55 AM Title: A Christmas Anniversary to Remember
Great chapter. Loved the lemons but I am worried about the Steve/ keys thing.
[Report This]Date: 24 Jul 2013 6:38 AM Title: A Christmas Anniversary to Remember
wow, ass-lovin' from E!!!! So good.
[Report This]Date: 22 Jul 2013 9:48 AM Title: A Christmas Anniversary to Remember
:) loved this
Date: 16 Jun 2013 7:47 AM Title: Pontiac Prison Blues
Great chApter. You have made me love every bit of this coupke's life.
Date: 15 Jun 2013 2:42 AM Title: Pontiac Prison Blues
You can have the death penalty.
Good story.
[Report This]Date: 13 Jun 2013 3:27 PM Title: Pontiac Prison Blues
ALWAYS NOTHING BUT LOVIN FOR YOU!!! IT SADDENS ME TO THINK THIS IS THE END BUT FOR RIGHT NOW!! I'M ENJOYING IT. THANK YOU AND PLEASE UPDATE SOON.
[Report This]Date: 13 Jun 2013 11:00 AM Title: Pontiac Prison Blues
:) loved this
Date: 12 Jun 2013 8:53 AM Title: Job Hunts, Mongoloids, and Volleyball
Loved it!
Date: 12 Jun 2013 8:07 AM Title: Parties and Working Stiffs
Loved it!
Date: 12 Jun 2013 7:09 AM Title: Meet the Cullens...Again
Loved it!
Date: 19 May 2013 1:36 AM Title: Meet the Cullens...Again
Please finish the story
[Report This]Date: 14 May 2013 4:31 PM Title: Firsts
Good chapter. Update soon
[Report This]Date: 14 Apr 2013 6:55 PM Title: Burnt Birds and Broken Bones
:)
Date: 11 Mar 2013 3:41 AM Title: Disneyland
I am interested in both kyra and Owen. Great chapter. I liked the fluff it made me have more faith in the bodyguards.
Date: 10 Mar 2013 8:14 PM Title: Disneyland
It would be nice to see what us going on in Kyra's mind. Find out why she is so bratty/bitchy.
Date: 06 Feb 2013 3:05 AM Title: Lunch, Security Guards and the City of Angels
Great chapter. Can't wait for the next update!
Date: 05 Feb 2013 4:28 PM Title: Lunch, Security Guards and the City of Angels
until we meet again.. good chapter
Date: 05 Feb 2013 3:43 PM Title: Parties and Working Stiffs
well we have one too. One of our grandchildren. His father never taught him to work and now that he is 16 he has got to start earning money to pay for gas and insurance we all wonder. Our 11 year old grandson is a worker. His daddy has had him helping him since he was 5. Their daughter dusts and helps around the house she is 5. It is good for kids to learn early they are proud of their accomplishments and if they earn money all the better.
[Report This]Date: 03 Feb 2013 2:33 PM Title: Lunch, Security Guards and the City of Angels
:)
Date: 14 Jan 2013 7:30 PM Title: Job Hunts, Mongoloids, and Volleyball
great chpater. update soon!
[Report This]Date: 14 Jan 2013 8:06 AM Title: Job Hunts, Mongoloids, and Volleyball
:)
Date: 14 Jan 2013 4:36 AM Title: Job Hunts, Mongoloids, and Volleyball
Great chapter. Kyra is so up and down. She is a very manipulative girl. And she obviously has a low opinion of her parents. Did she not participate with any foundation stuff growing up? Wow. Jacob - how delusional. Love the other siblings.
[Report This]Date: 14 Jan 2013 1:49 AM Title: Job Hunts, Mongoloids, and Volleyball
Thanks for the update!
[Report This]Date: 29 Dec 2012 2:28 AM Title: Parties and Working Stiffs
That girl definitely needs to get in touch with reality. I think it's good they are making her get a job and having her pay her way. Where does she think the money comes from anyway? If she is on her own she wouldn't have any money because it belongs to her parents.
Date: 27 Dec 2012 5:35 AM Title: Parties and Working Stiffs
I AM A MOTHER OF 7 AND YOU ARE DOING GREAT AT TELLING EXACTLY HOW SOME TEENAGERS CAN ACT. GOOD JOB AND GREAT STORY. LOOKING FORWARD TO THE NEXT UPDATE.
Date: 27 Dec 2012 4:53 AM Title: Meet the Cullens...Again
YES!!! YES!!!! YES!!!!! F I N A L L Y !!!!!!!!!! I'VE BEEN WAITING FOR THIS STORY. IT'S OFF TO A GREAT START.
[Report This]Date: 26 Dec 2012 1:24 PM Title: Parties and Working Stiffs
What the heck is her problem! Great chapter! Update soon
Date: 25 Dec 2012 8:38 PM Title: Parties and Working Stiffs
Thanks for the update, Merry Christmas!!
[Report This]Date: 25 Dec 2012 7:38 PM Title: Parties and Working Stiffs
:)
[Report This]Date: 02 Dec 2012 8:19 PM Title: Meet the Cullens...Again
EEEEEEEPPPPPPPPPP YAY TOTALLY LOVED THE FIRST TWO STORIES AND NOW THIS FUCK YES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 27 Nov 2012 3:55 PM Title: Meet the Cullens...Again
Mmmmmm what a way to start the day! I can't wait to see where you're gone bring them next. :)
Date: 26 Nov 2012 3:20 PM Title: Meet the Cullens...Again
I have so enjoyed this journey with this Edward And Bella so please bring us more thanks.
[Report This]Date: 26 Nov 2012 10:24 AM Title: Meet the Cullens...Again
:) loved this
Date: 26 Nov 2012 8:09 AM Title: Meet the Cullens...Again
I love it. Was so excited to see it had started. I hope kyra does change.
Date: 26 Nov 2012 4:27 AM Title: Meet the Cullens...Again
YAY!! I LOVE where this is going! I just don't want to let these guys go. It's one of my favorite stories and ANSOL was like the first story of yours I read. It's so hard to find a good Geekward story and you rock! Thanks for sharing!
[Report This]Date: 26 Nov 2012 3:48 AM Title: Meet the Cullens...Again
I've missed them so much!