Date: 08 Mar 2015 3:31 AM Title: Chapter 7- Tying you to me
I hope you are still writing this story . Bella is going to go ape shit on Aro cant wait. When is she going to tell Edward she is not gay? Emmett is to cute.
Date: 21 Feb 2014 8:29 PM Title: Chapter 7- Tying you to me
wow, Bella está tão zangado @:
Date: 10 Feb 2014 10:22 PM Title: Chapter 7- Tying you to me
Oh things are just so messed up. I hope they can pull Esme out of her funk soon. The poor little girl has lost much I would hate for her to lose herself too.
Date: 04 Feb 2014 7:12 AM Title: Chapter 7- Tying you to me
i loved the chapter(:
Date: 01 Feb 2014 5:51 PM Title: Chapter 7- Tying you to me
Oh my its getting good
Date: 01 Feb 2014 3:30 PM Title: Chapter 7- Tying you to me
I was so excited to get this update. I do not blame Bella for being scared of Edward I would be too. I am glad that Bella told Jacob everything. I am wondering what Bella "owes" Jacob now. lol. As always you leave me wanting more and more.
Date: 01 Feb 2014 2:29 PM Title: Chapter 7- Tying you to me
excellent. waiting for more.
Date: 01 Aug 2013 8:29 AM Title: Chapter 10
Love the story! I think Bella is going wayyy too far with the whole acting like a guy thing. && darn Edward for not keeping his promise. I really hope that Bella can get through to him and Esmeralda!
Can't wait for the next update!
Date: 29 Apr 2013 10:53 PM Title: Chapter 10
Well come on you saw that coming from a mile away. Edward is still firmly in bachelor mode. Hopefully he will smarten up before its to late. And hopefully he will learn to never make promises he can't keep.
On a personal note. Good luck with finals.
Date: 29 Apr 2013 10:26 PM Title: Chapter 9
Omg! Bella's word vomit was legendary.
[Report This]Date: 28 Apr 2013 6:40 PM Title: Chapter 10
O poor Esme!
Date: 28 Apr 2013 8:20 AM Title: Chapter 10
Just when you think he can see the light at the end of his ass he shoves his head back in it again. How long will Bella be able to pull of the gay thing??
Date: 27 Apr 2013 11:58 PM Title: Chapter 10
Bella is killing me in the chapter. lol. Acting like a dude. lol. I can not believe that Edward is leaving the kids. Really, if he is such a great lawyer does he not have some little people under him to take care of things.
For Edward and Rose to be friends, they kill me calling each other Mr. Cullen and Ms. Swan.
[Report This]Date: 27 Apr 2013 3:54 PM Title: Chapter 10
Hey I'm really in love with your writing style. The plot is awesome, this is a very unique plot and I am enjoying it thoroughly. Continue in with the hood work. I look forward to your next update.
Date: 27 Apr 2013 9:16 AM Title: Chapter 9
Tanya has some big balls and she is stupid lol. Bella is to funny. I am so glad Edward is pulling his head out of his ass
Date: 27 Apr 2013 8:44 AM Title: Outtake 2 - Esme's Diary
That made me want to cry poor little thing.
Date: 27 Apr 2013 8:36 AM Title: Chapter 5 - Break The Bottles
What a big day for her. He would never guess why is she not telling him she is not gay.
Date: 27 Apr 2013 7:51 AM Title: Outtake 1 : I Promise
So sad so much pain his and the kids.
Date: 27 Apr 2013 3:48 AM Title: Chapter 5 - Break The Bottles
I am glad that Bella is making some headway with Esme. I am glad that Bella is not afraid to stand up to Edward. I am really enjoying reading your story. Great job.
Date: 27 Apr 2013 3:43 AM Title: Chapter 9
Laughed at Bella and Edward. lol. What in the world is Tanya's deal???? Glad that Edward is spending time with his niece and nephew. I have a feeling that Bella is going to have to come to Edward's rescue.
Date: 27 Apr 2013 3:43 AM Title: Outtake 2 - Esme's Diary
That is so sad. Her daddy died on her birthday. That is awful. You know she has to be so scared. Bless her heart and Carlisle's.
Date: 27 Apr 2013 3:42 AM Title: Outtake 1 : I Promise
I feel so sorry for Edward.
Date: 27 Apr 2013 1:47 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Not Only About You
I can't believe that Edward did not fire Bella. I am thinking that Bella is going to grow up for these kids and that she is going to be good for them. Can't wait to read more.
Date: 27 Apr 2013 1:47 AM Title: Chapter 3 - I Remember
Ok, I laughed at Bella and Edward in this chapter. Loved Edward's reaction to her in his office. Why are the conditions of her contract so different than the other nannys. It seems kind of
Date: 27 Apr 2013 1:47 AM Title: Chapter 2 - I Know You!
Lot of questions. Yes, what is the deal with Tanya? with Charlie? If Rosalie has been working for Edward all this time, shouldn't she be making lots of money, since he is one hot shot lawyer??? What is the deal with Jacob and Edward? Is Jacob gay? If he is, does he have crush on Edward? Just wondering.
Date: 27 Apr 2013 1:47 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Born This Way
Bella seems dizzy in this story. Maybe she is ADHD!!!!! If Edward has his niece and nephew then where are they right now. Who is watching them?Love that you named them Esme and Carlisle. Cute!!!!!!!!
Date: 26 Apr 2013 5:15 AM Title: Chapter 10
This is an awesome story and so funny! Keep em coming!
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[Report This]Date: 26 Apr 2013 1:16 AM Title: Chapter 10
oh edward. i wish you make the kids a priority like your work
or at least you should call them or finish your job early and get home with pizza and movies.
ahhh heartbreaking
Date: 26 Apr 2013 12:48 AM Title: Chapter 10
looking forward to more
Date: 25 Apr 2013 10:10 PM Title: Chapter 10
I really loved this story!! Car is such a cutie...
Date: 25 Apr 2013 10:01 PM Title: Chapter 10
It's never too early for a new chapter :)
I can't believe that Edward went to work!
I can't wait to read more.
Date: 25 Apr 2013 9:34 PM Title: Chapter 10
Thanks for another great chapter. And don't let other people get you down. Just because they are to lazy to read the AN. You are doing a great job and can't wait for the next chapter. Bella makes me want to dress up and act like a dude for a day. That shit was hiliarious. My kids would probably try to check me in a mental hospital. And then I would tell them they already kicked me out ..lol
Date: 22 Apr 2013 10:16 PM Title: Chapter 9
I just found this story & I LOVE IT!!!!! Your Bella cracks me up! I can't wait to watch E&B's relationship unfold in your little tale. I do believe their attraction for one another will get them in a hero of trouble! The kids are adorable & I think Bella really actually cares about them instead of their uncle, which will make her a great nanny. I can't wait for more; I'm just so hooked! :)
Author's Response:
Hey! Thank you for reviewing :) I agree with you, Bella's interest is on the children for now, Edward is not her favorite person at the moment XD I am so happy you like it that much! I wanted to send you the preview but when I searched you pen name on FFn two person came up and I didn't know if you were one of them >< If you are on FFn, it would be great if you could send me a PM so I can have you and send you things easily ;)
Date: 22 Apr 2013 3:11 AM Title: Chapter 9
AGHH this story is so cute. I wish there was more!!
Date: 21 Apr 2013 3:18 AM Title: Chapter 9
love it
Author's Response:
Hi Thanks for the review! Sadly I can't find you on FFn to send you the preview >< If you are over there too could you send me a PM so I can have your pen name from now on? Thanks!
[Report This]Date: 20 Apr 2013 2:54 PM Title: Chapter 9
man tanya took sometime to covince to go away
she is a pain and i am glad edward got her to leave. esme was too cute in be happy her uncle was still there and got him to stay
i hope he doesn't purposly let them down. bella has alot to work out with her sister but there is love there rose just needs to give bella a break
loving it
[Report This]Date: 20 Apr 2013 11:39 AM Title: Chapter 9
That was funny!! And the kids are so sweet :)
I can't wait to read the next chapter.
[Report This]Date: 20 Apr 2013 7:23 AM Title: Chapter 9
I hope it will continue like that, it's more fun to read!
The banner is wonderful with children.
Thank you.
[Report This]Date: 09 Apr 2013 2:30 PM Title: Outtake 2 - Esme's Diary
I am so loving this story thnak you
Date: 08 Apr 2013 8:15 PM Title: Outtake 2 - Esme's Diary
love it
Author's Response:
Hi! Thank you for the review ;) I can't send you th preview since I can't find you on FFn but I put a version of it in the Facebook group if you really want it.
[Report This]Date: 08 Apr 2013 5:59 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Not Only About You
love it
[Report This]Date: 08 Apr 2013 5:47 AM Title: Chapter 3 - I Remember
i feel so bad for these little devil kids
bella will be good for them i hope they give her a chance
[Report This]Date: 08 Apr 2013 5:21 AM Title: Chapter 2 - I Know You!
bella has so much to deal with, i feel bad for her what a crappy night
i hope things look up for her
loving it
Date: 07 Apr 2013 10:04 AM Title: Outtake 2 - Esme's Diary
Whow that must have been hard to write. Its so good o see how she thinks d so bad that she thinks her uncle will leave s well. Hopefully Bella will be able to help.
Date: 06 Apr 2013 2:05 PM Title: Outtake 2 - Esme's Diary
looking forward to more
Date: 06 Apr 2013 6:06 AM Title: Outtake 2 - Esme's Diary
I LOVE THIS! THANK YOU!
Date: 06 Apr 2013 2:18 AM Title: Outtake 2 - Esme's Diary
I'm so glad that your wrote this. I knew it wouldn't be easy when i asked for it, she is such a complicated little girl. It is so heartbreaking to think that everyone is going to leave. I hope that Bella will wake Edward up to the damage that can be done if he doesn't move past his own grief to help the children with theirs. Hopefully they can all grieve together and then put the worst Of the pain behind them.
Date: 06 Apr 2013 2:08 AM Title: Chapter 5 - Break The Bottles
I can't believe they got drunk. Esme has little cracks in her exterior already, I'm sure he will be pissed about it and make up for it later.
Date: 06 Apr 2013 12:52 AM Title: Outtake 2 - Esme's Diary
aaw, Esme's POV is heartbreaking! Thanks for the outtake!
Date: 05 Apr 2013 11:40 PM Title: Outtake 2 - Esme's Diary
That was so sad :'(
[Report This]Date: 05 Apr 2013 11:24 PM Title: Outtake 2 - Esme's Diary
My heart hurts for her. I can't wait to see where this story goes.
Date: 02 Apr 2013 10:30 PM Title: Chapter 5 - Break The Bottles
Hmmm so who is Tanya again
[Report This]Date: 30 Mar 2013 2:11 PM Title: Chapter 5 - Break The Bottles
I was so happy to see this update.. Can't wait for more...Love it!!
Date: 30 Mar 2013 4:04 AM Title: Chapter 5 - Break The Bottles
Aww so they didnt have sex....i hope this drunk pass out together doesnt set the children back
Date: 29 Mar 2013 11:49 PM Title: Chapter 5 - Break The Bottles
More please!
Date: 29 Mar 2013 10:04 PM Title: Chapter 5 - Break The Bottles
Don't take so long next time! :(
[Report This]Date: 29 Mar 2013 9:00 PM Title: Chapter 5 - Break The Bottles
Oh my God, how I missed this story!!!!
I can't wait to read more :)
Date: 05 Feb 2013 3:24 AM Title: Outtake 1 : I Promise
Oh this was perfect. I think that we really needed to see how it happened in order to understand a little better what everyone is going through.
There are a lot of outtakes I would like. But I think I would like to see what Esmeralda is thinking. She is such a complicated little girl and she seems so confused and I know she is in a lot of pain.
Date: 02 Feb 2013 2:37 AM Title: Outtake 1 : I Promise
I love outtakes
Date: 01 Feb 2013 11:35 PM Title: Outtake 1 : I Promise
I liked! Hope to read more soon :)
Date: 30 Jan 2013 12:56 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Not Only About You
I think Esmeralda meet her match. Little Carlisle has already softened, he really is cute.
Date: 30 Jan 2013 12:31 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Not Only About You
Loving this story can't wait to read more please.
Date: 29 Jan 2013 7:51 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Not Only About You
Love outtakes
Date: 29 Jan 2013 4:46 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Not Only About You
Bella will blow them all away I love how she told Edward off he set the nannys up to fail not to tell them about the kids. Rose needs her ass kicked I hope she feels like shit.
[Report This]Date: 28 Jan 2013 9:42 PM Title: Chapter 4 - Not Only About You
Wow, I didn't expected that!! Great chapter :) I can't wait to read more!!
Date: 07 Jan 2013 11:41 AM Title: IMPORTANT AN
I'm glad to know that you will update soon :)
Yes, I'm on FF, my author's name is renowadesign
xoxo
Date: 05 Jan 2013 11:53 PM Title: Chapter 3 - I Remember
This story is shaping up to be very interesting. I wonder what Bella will do to break down the children's walls.
Author's Response:
Hi! Thank you so much! Bella and the kids will find similarities in each other and get closer! I sent you the preview on FF!
Date: 30 Dec 2012 7:19 AM Title: Chapter 3 - I Remember
Them little shits Bella will hunt them down lol
Author's Response:
Hi! It won't be pretty when she find them!
Date: 28 Dec 2012 6:09 AM Title: Chapter 3 - I Remember
Love the humor in this story, makes it worth the read.
Author's Response:
Thank you I am glad you find it funny! For the preview please give me your FF account if you have one!
Date: 28 Dec 2012 2:10 AM Title: Chapter 3 - I Remember
Can't wait to read more. I just feel so sorry for those kids.
Author's Response:
Hi! I will update at the end of the month! Thank you for the review! I sent you the preview on FF!
Date: 28 Dec 2012 1:42 AM Title: Chapter 2 - I Know You!
I am really enjoying your story so far. The relationship between Rose and Bella is odd but i guess it works for them.....love it.
Date: 28 Dec 2012 1:12 AM Title: Chapter 3 - I Remember
I hope esme and carisle get close to bella and love her...so who breaks the no fallng in love rule 1st, edward or bella?
Author's Response:
That is for me to know and you to find out! Thank you for reviewing!! If you have FF please tell me for the previews!
Date: 28 Dec 2012 1:05 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Born This Way
I really enjoyed this first chapter....love Bella and Edward is a bit of a dick but i don't mind him that way :)
Date: 27 Dec 2012 11:55 PM Title: Chapter 3 - I Remember
She should catch on quick
Author's Response:
Maybe, maybe not :) Thanks for the review! Tell me if you have an account on FF so I can send you a preview!
[Report This]Date: 27 Dec 2012 11:18 PM Title: Chapter 3 - I Remember
Oh no, don't stop there!!! I can't wait to read more :) Please , post more soon.
Author's Response:
Sorry for the cliffy haha I couldn't resist! I will update after the finals, promise! Are you on FF? So I can send you the preview
Date: 27 Dec 2012 10:14 PM Title: Chapter 3 - I Remember
Oh boy. Can't wait for more.
Author's Response:
Hi! Thank you so much for the review! I couldn't find you on Fanfiction for the preview, I am sorry! I will update at the end of the month after the finals!
Date: 19 Dec 2012 1:47 AM Title: IMPORTANT AN
I don't think I quite understand
Date: 19 Dec 2012 12:10 AM Title: IMPORTANT AN
send to me by pm on FF please.
Author's Response:
Done!
Date: 18 Dec 2012 11:41 PM Title: IMPORTANT AN
Im a little confused but I'd like a preview.
Author's Response:
Yeah I tried to send it but I can't send PM on TWCS. I don't know why...
Date: 18 Dec 2012 2:51 PM Title: Chapter 2 - I Know You!
Can't wait to read more please.
Author's Response:
Thank you for reviewing ^^ New chap soon!
[Report This]Date: 15 Dec 2012 3:13 PM Title: Chapter 2 - I Know You!
Great chapter.. I can't wait to see how the kids react to her being the nanny.. I think she will be great fun for the kids..Hope you have an awesome Birthday!!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! The first day as a nanny will be chap 4 so wait a little bit please! You won't be disappointed!
Date: 15 Dec 2012 5:06 AM Title: Chapter 2 - I Know You!
This is gonna be a slow burn huh?
Author's Response:
Huuuh I am not sure to understand what you mean?
Date: 15 Dec 2012 1:07 AM Title: Chapter 2 - I Know You!
Interesting take on the characters, I'll be waiting for another chapter.
Author's Response:
Thank you! The next chap will come soon... if I have time before the holidays!
Date: 14 Dec 2012 11:07 PM Title: Chapter 2 - I Know You!
Can't wait for next chapter!! Is Jacob gay??
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review ^^ That's for me to know and you to find out! You will know soon!
Date: 14 Dec 2012 11:06 PM Title: Chapter 2 - I Know You!
Lawd, this was funny.
Author's Response:
Haha thank you ! That was the goal!
[Report This]Date: 14 Dec 2012 8:35 PM Title: Chapter 2 - I Know You!
New chapter o/
I liked it, and I can't wait to read more!! :)
ps.: Happy Birthday!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much!
[Report This]Date: 05 Dec 2012 5:00 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Born This Way
I am looking forward to seeing where you are going to take these characters. The concept is intriguing and humorous - can't wait to read your updates.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! I will update soon :)
Date: 02 Dec 2012 6:58 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Born This Way
I'm loving your Bella! She cracks me up. Looking forward to more!
Author's Response:
I am relieved you like her ^^ Thank you for the review!
[Report This]Date: 30 Nov 2012 3:37 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Born This Way
I really liked this first chapter and can't wait to read more..
Author's Response:
Thank you! The second chapter will come ^^
Date: 30 Nov 2012 4:38 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Born This Way
This story could be great! Keep up the good work!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much!
Date: 30 Nov 2012 2:49 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Born This Way
Love it!
Author's Response:
Thank you =D
Date: 30 Nov 2012 2:41 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Born This Way
I.NEED.MORE! This is way too funny not to have another chapter :D
Author's Response:
Haha well aren't you determined =D The second chapter will come in the next weeks thank you for reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 30 Nov 2012 2:12 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Born This Way
Cute so far!
Author's Response:
Thank you ^^
Date: 30 Nov 2012 2:06 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Born This Way
I can't wait for the next chapter this is hilarious
Author's Response:
I am happy you thought it was funny ^^ Thank you for the review!
[Report This]Date: 30 Nov 2012 12:55 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Born This Way
I really enjoy the characters and can't wait to read more about them. :D
Author's Response:
Thank you for reviewing and rating! I will update within the end of the month!
Date: 29 Nov 2012 10:50 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Born This Way
please do a second chapter, iam liking the premesis o the book. thank you
Author's Response:
Thank you =D The second chapter is on process!
Date: 29 Nov 2012 9:45 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Born This Way
:)
Author's Response:
Haha Short and simple. Me like.