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Reviewer: pinkdiamondsparkle Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Feb 2015 5:36 PM Title: Chapter 10

I love this story! Will you update it? :)

Reviewer: tyalieva Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Feb 2014 12:37 AM Title: Chapter 10

Oh no!

Another one I'll be waiting to rad about!

 

You're going to be the death of me!

:P

 

Reviewer: sarahjane0184 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Dec 2013 7:52 PM Title: Chapter 1

I actually had a doctor who's name was kevorkian when i was a little girl. Not the same guy, but yeah... still weird they had the same last name.

Reviewer: maja296 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2013 8:07 AM Title: Chapter 1

 I can't wait for the next update  Love this story

Reviewer: Iluvlil lion Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Apr 2013 11:52 AM Title: Chapter 10

Aww I'm loving it!! :)

Reviewer: Chloe Masen Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Apr 2013 12:50 AM Title: Chapter 10

Okay, HE DIDN'T KNOW she couldn't hear/understand his call. My apologies, Edward. And kudos for having a second call in place, too. And don't blame me, I have zero faith in men. And valid reasons for not. Unlike Angela, who I'm glad does, and was pushy and persisent for both of their sakes.

And so, I'm caught up now... 

Reviewer: Chloe Masen Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Apr 2013 12:29 AM Title: Chapter 9

Am I wrong in saying that if he truly cared about her, he would have called again or at least had someone else call her? It's all I can think about. Repeatedly. And that I'm glad she punched him, but frankly, I think he should have gotten that slap too.

Reviewer: Chloe Masen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2013 5:54 PM Title: Chapter 8

Have I ever told you that I'm in love with your brain? Seriously... IN LOVE. You are a clever, clever girl.

And Bella... sadly reminded me of myself in this chapter. My horribly uncoordinated, clumsy self. LMAO at her! And thank you for making me laugh, smile, and ride my imaginary bike (cuz I can't ride a real one) through my embarrassing but funny memory lane.

Reviewer: Chloe Masen Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Mar 2013 12:35 PM Title: Chapter 7

Still reading, and still loving. These two are funny. It's wonderfully refreshing. Can't say more than that now, going to be late. Have a great day!

Reviewer: Lliz Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Feb 2013 11:21 PM Title: Chapter 1

I love this story!!!! Honestly, I can't wait for the next update. This was just beautiful.

Reviewer: christine30974 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2013 9:11 PM Title: Chapter 10

Ahh finally got a chance to read this. Can't wait to read the next chapter.

Reviewer: Chloe Masen Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Feb 2013 3:52 PM Title: Chapter 6

I want a chaste Edward kiss. And a not chaste one. Or ten.

Reviewer: Chloe Masen Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Feb 2013 1:17 PM Title: Chapter 5

You did not say 'cooter'... ugh. Well, I'll spank you for that one later. And you'll like it. As for Bella... yes! Kill a bitch! Cockblocking is not cool! And punishable by painful death when it involves Edward! Grrrr!

 

Reviewer: justluey Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Feb 2013 5:50 AM Title: Chapter 10

I love this Rosalie 

Reviewer: SparkleSwan Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Feb 2013 4:47 PM Title: Chapter 3

Ok, you are one hilarious writer. If any of Bella's inner musings come from anything you do in real life, we're best twins because that's me to a T. How freaking funny is that shit!? Clicking next so I can hear what else Mr Hot Coma Guy has to say. 

Reviewer: Colena Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Feb 2013 5:56 PM Title: Chapter 10

That was cute !

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Feb 2013 4:40 PM Title: Chapter 10

Is charlie swan important in this fic?

Reviewer: PercyJacksonFan1997 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Feb 2013 3:36 PM Title: Chapter 10

Makes me feel so stupid  for doubting Edward. Loved the chapter!!

Reviewer: luvyateamedward Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Feb 2013 2:36 PM Title: Chapter 10

Yay! We got an update. I guess I will start reading from here since you said the FF one is edited. I don't want to miss anything. ;) Great chapter! Can't wait for more.

Reviewer: goldseadragon Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jan 2013 1:06 AM Title: Chapter 9

I hope Edward redeems himself next time, because he's kinda a dick in this chapter.

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jan 2013 10:50 PM Title: Chapter 9

I hope hes not a player....why didnt he call bella? Im dying here.

Reviewer: Findjulia Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jan 2013 10:10 PM Title: Chapter 8

aaw wasn't expecting him gone!

Reviewer: PercyJacksonFan1997 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Jan 2013 9:05 PM Title: Chapter 9

Edward sure is cool about worrying Bella so much. I hope he gets a good yelling at !!! Can't wait for the next chapter. :)

Reviewer: PercyJacksonFan1997 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jan 2013 8:30 AM Title: Chapter 7

NOO! The chapter stops there?!?  Lol I'm living it and can't wait for the next one. Please hurry !! :)

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Dec 2012 7:47 PM Title: Chapter 7

That was a hot dry hump..edwards a horny guy even in the hospital lol

Reviewer: brighteyes22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Dec 2012 7:33 PM Title: Chapter 7

Bella kinda already knew he was single when they were talking about the cruise.. 

"He frowns a little, before he whispers, "Didn't want to be the seventh wheel.""

but anyways thanks for the update, and happy new year! 

Reviewer: crazykatwp Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Dec 2012 5:55 PM Title: Chapter 7

Love it.   More please!

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Dec 2012 5:23 PM Title: Chapter 7

thank you for the update.....I love your storyh.....I hope they don't get caught.....I'm happy he got what's - name -in trouble........lol.......I love where Edward and Bella relationship is going....................until you update again

Reviewer: roseblossome Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Dec 2012 5:06 PM Title: Chapter 7

That was good..but now to clean up with 2 broken legs LOL

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Dec 2012 2:51 PM Title: Chapter 6

*Giggles* I loved this chapter! It was funny, and sweet. Ha! I loved how Edward told off Tanya. :) I can't wait for your next chapter! Oh, and I hope you had a very Merry Christmas! xoxo Kelly

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Dec 2012 2:24 PM Title: Chapter 5

Oh crap! It had to be ummm, Tanya? I can't remember all the names of the volunteers, but I think it would be her or maybe Lauren. *Damn cockblocking skank* I hope Bella pays her back somehow. :) xoxo Kelly 

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Dec 2012 2:33 PM Title: Chapter 6

Love the fluff

Reviewer: bri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Dec 2012 2:21 AM Title: Chapter 6

LOVETHIS STORY,can't wait for more chapters

Reviewer: Cullensbabymama7 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Dec 2012 5:40 AM Title: Chapter 6

IM SO READING THIS! ITS GOING INTO MY FAV'S FOR SURE! YOU GO EDDIE! MAYBE BELLA COULD SUGGEST HIM COMING HOME WITH HER, YEA?

Reviewer: Findjulia Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Dec 2012 4:55 PM Title: Chapter 6

yay! they got a redo!

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Dec 2012 11:11 AM Title: Chapter 4

I love your story! It's awesome to just laugh outloud while reading a story. I can't wait for your next chapter! :) xo

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Dec 2012 11:00 AM Title: Chapter 3

*giggles* You're killing me! You are so funny! I love your Bella, she's great! I'm dying to see how things go between these two. xo

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Dec 2012 10:42 AM Title: Chapter 2

I was actually picturing Bella telling that story to coma guy, and I was laughing so hard that I almost peed my pants! I'm still laughing! Oh, and I think that coma guy might have been sorta laughing, not shivering from being cold. Just an idea. :) xo



Author's Response:

LOL.... you miiiggggghhhttt be right! hehe! 

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Dec 2012 10:27 AM Title: Chapter 1

I like it! I can't wait to read more! :) xo

Reviewer: goldseadragon Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Dec 2012 4:29 AM Title: Chapter 3

"my coma boo" is just dying to be made into a parody song, a la Weird Al.

Reviewer: My Angel Is Falling Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Dec 2012 4:05 AM Title: Chapter 3

Wow I love your story ...Please update soon..

Reviewer: goldseadragon Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Dec 2012 3:47 AM Title: Chapter 1

Regarding your glee at the naming...not sure if this is widely known or if it's only an East Coast thing, but there's a serial killing nurse named Cullen from New Jersey. When Twilight got big, at first I thought his case had come up again or something, because I hadn't realized the book used the same name.

Reviewer: jalee1118 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Dec 2012 9:08 PM Title: Chapter 3

So he is awake!  Does he remember all the things Bella has said to him?  Was it the last chapter that she stated that he was shaking and she put a blanket on him because she had told a funny story, I was wondering if maybe that was him laughing to cause his body to shake.  Love the story and can't wait for the next update!

Reviewer: noway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Dec 2012 8:14 AM Title: Chapter 2

This story is just too funny.i hope she has a couple of more visits before she realizes that he is not in a coma, because her stories are hilarious! And to be a fly on the wall when she figures it out would be priceless. Can't wait for the next update.

Thanks, Maria 

Reviewer: msmiki Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Dec 2012 8:31 AM Title: Chapter 1

Love this story already hurry and continue.

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