Date: 24 Jan 2013 8:37 AM Title: Chapter 11
I love your story and I can't wait for the next chapter. Thank-you.
Author's Response:
No, thank you for the lovely review. I'm glad you like it so much, and I will try not to keep you waiting too long for the next installment.
Date: 24 Jan 2013 6:48 AM Title: Chapter 3
This is intriguing me :)
Date: 24 Jan 2013 6:33 AM Title: Chapter 2
I'm enjoying your story and keep thinking to myself what's next, so now I am going into chapter 3. Cheers, Wendy aka Selene Temple.
Date: 15 Dec 2012 11:49 PM Title: Chapter 5
YOu may be trying to be subtle, I am not sure. I don't know who this is talking. Who Kevin is and what is happening. I am rather lost here.
Author's Response:
The person telling the story is a new character named Crystal, and Kevin is her boyfriend (he is human). At the end of each of the first 5 chapters she had a different dream. The wolf in her dreams has been the same one from the end of Chapter 1. I can't reveal too much more without giving away more than I want to right now (I don't want to ruin the story). Hopefully the next few chapters will clear things up a bit.
Date: 15 Dec 2012 11:43 PM Title: Chapter 2
I am lost with this. Kevin, the wolf and who is talking? Okay she is dreaming again. She is that Bella?
Author's Response:
This story is being told from a new character's POV, her name is Crystal. Kevin is her boyfriend. Only the end of the chapter is her dream, the wolf is the gray with tan markings from Chapter 1. She only sees the wolf in her dreams, and in this particular one, she witnessed the wolf and Kevin about to attack eachother and she is the one who is screaming "NO" at the end of the chapter. Hope that clears up some of the confusion for now, further chapters will be more revealing, but I'm afraid I can't tell more without giving away too much.