Date: 27 Mar 2015 5:38 PM Title: Chapter 23
Hope all will pick up for you.
I have said it before, if the story is good (and this one very much is)we will wait. LOL, sometimes not patiently but we will be here!
Date: 27 Mar 2015 12:57 PM Title: Chapter 23
I will never give up on this story, simply because it's so amazing... It was worth waiting for and now you came back with the big BOOM! It's good that Andrea has thought of so many things before they left the house, but now the question is if anyone will think of Tahoe...
What about the envelopes Darryl has left? Shouldn't anybody have found them by now?! Even if it does not help to find the kids right now, they will surely want to know what has been going on! If only Darryl had had the guts to go to Edward earlier... this won't save him and probably he will not survive this if he will stand against Larry once more.
I sincerely hope that neither Max nor Andrea will be hurt and that the family and cops will be in time...!!
I'll keep my fingers crossed for the next chapter to be finished soon! :)
[Report This]Date: 26 Mar 2015 6:03 PM Title: Chapter 23
Love your story .I would not give up on your story it's wonderful story can not wait for your next post hope soon,hope all is well in
RL.
Date: 26 Mar 2015 2:54 PM Title: Chapter 23
OMGosh! !!!! I was so excited to get this update. I did not want this chapter to end. I feel sorry for Sam. I know he had to feel awful about not locking the door back. I am gladthat Bella and Edward are turning to each other and not away from each other. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON! LOVERY THIS STORY.
Date: 26 Mar 2015 9:51 AM Title: Chapter 23
Great chapter.
Keep fighting
Date: 25 Mar 2015 11:14 PM Title: Chapter 23
Sending you big hugs.
Thanks for the fanastic update, really enjoying this story.
Date: 25 Mar 2015 8:24 PM Title: Chapter 23
GLad you are ok. Loved the update
[Report This]Date: 25 Mar 2015 7:06 PM Title: Chapter 23
Never giving up!!
Date: 25 Mar 2015 5:22 PM Title: Chapter 23
Knowing this was goingwas happen doesn't make reading it any easier. I so hope that nothing will actually happen to the kids or that the Chief will succeed in driving a where between Edward and Bella.
Please you don't make us wait to sing again now that we'now in the middle of the mess.
Date: 25 Mar 2015 4:20 PM Title: Chapter 23
great to have a update love this story worth the wait
hope your doing better in yourself
looking forward to more
well done
Date: 25 Mar 2015 3:48 PM Title: Chapter 23
ok I'm lost. In the beginning you said "crumpled body of Darryl White" making me think Chief killed him. But now Darryl is in the car with Chief? Where is Peter?
Date: 25 Mar 2015 3:30 PM Title: Chapter 23
thanks for the update :)
[Report This]Date: 25 Mar 2015 3:02 PM Title: Chapter 23
Thank you for updating. Love this story
Date: 25 Mar 2015 1:59 PM Title: Chapter 23
So happy to see this update!! Great chapter and they are always worth the wait!
[Report This]Date: 25 Mar 2015 1:56 PM Title: Chapter 23
I'm going to have to read this chapter later but I wanted you to know how happy I am just to know You are fine Michelle Definitely miss not just the story but You
Date: 22 Mar 2015 7:43 PM Title: Chapter 22
I sure miss this story...hope you haven't given up on it...
Date: 18 Feb 2015 2:49 PM Title: Chapter 1
Love this story, hopefully will update again 😊
Date: 18 Dec 2014 12:41 PM Title: Chapter 22
Happy holidays! It was nice to see how the Cullens holiday went... can't wait to read more and the Larry drama that will ensue.
[Report This]Date: 01 Oct 2014 3:26 PM Title: Chapter 22
I love this family and am so glad that they are back. Seth and Jesse need a good butt kicking. I could never leave my children. Edward and Bella feel the same way. They have such big hearts.
Date: 01 Oct 2014 10:54 AM Title: Chapter 22
M if you find an island, please let me know. Thanks for the chapter. I am always drawn back in with this family. Great chapter. Love that Daryl is seeing the light but will he speak up? Take care. See you next time.
Date: 27 Sep 2014 12:45 PM Title: Chapter 22
Thanks for the update, loving this story.
Date: 25 Sep 2014 3:00 AM Title: Chapter 22
Those crazy people have Seth & Jesse. I'm shocked that Bella and Sue, Edward for that matter, believe Seth & Jesse would allow this to happen to their kids. Even after seeing their house... And Seth being nasty to both E & B. The clues are glaring!!! I believe S & J did what they had to do to protect the kids knowing E & B would take care of them. Now I'm worried they may die before someone figures it out. Where is their security?
Really great to have another chapter from you. Love this series!!!
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[Report This]Date: 24 Sep 2014 5:38 PM Title: Chapter 22
Michele~
I've missed you my friend. I really loved this chapter so much and I am sorry you've had some writers block. Real life always comes first and I hope all is well on the home front for you. Love this story and I almost find myself feeling bad for Daryl, I really hope he comes clean and helps the Cullen's before there is an issue or damage. I am concerned about Seth, and I wonder if he hasn't taken to the bottle. So very worried about them all and I'm on pins and needles worrying about everyone, and now Alexis to that as well is making me worry more. Excited to see more. Don't forget, anytime you want to talk over things you can contact me, I will help anyway I can. xoxo, my friend, look forward to hearing from you.
Kasi~
Author's Response:
Date: 24 Sep 2014 3:28 PM Title: Chapter 22
if you find that island I am coming with you. What is going on with Seth and Jesse, don't like it one bit. Good thing all the family is around to rally around those kids. Glad one of the bad guys is seeing the error of his ways. Hopefully he will realize he can stop the madness just by telling someone what is up.
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[Report This]Date: 24 Sep 2014 9:42 AM Title: Chapter 22
Love your story can't wait for more.
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[Report This]Date: 24 Sep 2014 8:41 AM Title: Chapter 22
:)
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Date: 24 Sep 2014 8:24 AM Title: Chapter 22
Hi Michele,
I'm so glad to find the new chapter on here!! It took a litte to remember the latest happenings, but this one was really great and I hope that your block has now left ;-)
I really hope that Darryl will soon let the cat out of the bag and reveal his knowledge to Edward and his crew! Nothing bad must happen to this family and, fortunately, Darryl has realised that!
This thing with Seth and jesse is really strange and I have the feeling that there is more behind this, because Bella is right that Seth normally would never abandon his family like this!
Read you soon :-)
Author's Response:
Date: 24 Sep 2014 6:12 AM Title: Chapter 22
Michele, yes have missed this story, but for your words I will wait as long as I have to. When I get to missing this story I go back and re-read PLU. It is alwasy a favorite no matter how many times I read it.
Sad about Seth & Jesse, can't quite figure that one out yet. Missed the bigger kids, tough when the grow up and away. B&E handled it well tho. Would love to figure out how to become one of their children (or I guess the kids Grandma with my age being what it is). Always look forward to the next installment (no pressure, honestly) just enjoy the heck out of them when the notice comes through. XOXO, Cheri
Author's Response:
Date: 24 Sep 2014 5:11 AM Title: Chapter 22
Thank you for updating. I wonder what happened with Seth.
I hope Darryl will come clean and tell Edward what's going on.
Author's Response:
Date: 24 Sep 2014 3:35 AM Title: Chapter 22
As always, a pleasure to read and worth the wait. Thanks for sharing!
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[Report This]Date: 24 Sep 2014 3:20 AM Title: Chapter 22
what the heck happened to Seth and Jess??? it's just so sad, and the poor kids :( I wish Darryl would just come clean and let the Cullens in on what that psycho is planning. Missed you, hope all is well and that things calm down for you and fall into place ((hugs))
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[Report This]Date: 24 Sep 2014 2:04 AM Title: Chapter 22
Oh wow So much going on. I hope Darryl comes clean soon before someone gets really hurt. So happy B&E stepped up for those two poor children. Seth and Jesse....wow, just wow.
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Date: 23 Sep 2014 10:35 PM Title: Chapter 22
worth the wait
mmm a sexy older edward yes please
well done
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[Report This]Date: 23 Sep 2014 9:21 PM Title: Chapter 22
Thank you so much for the update. I was really worried for this story. I love your characters so much that I was scared to never hear from them again.
Anyway, the whole thing with Seth and Jesse is very mysterious. Can't wait to find out what's going on with them.
The short mention of Lexi's mood has me curious too. There are so many wonderful and intersting characters in this stoy.
I'm really looking forward to next chapter.
Author's Response:
[Report This]Date: 23 Sep 2014 8:54 PM Title: Chapter 22
Michele, If you ever need a beta, or a pre-reader, please let me know. I would be happy to help you out. I love your story and look forward to the next chapter.
Take care,
Elaine
Author's Response:
Date: 12 Sep 2014 3:43 AM Title: Chapter 21
Hi is there a new chapter going to be up soon?
Date: 27 Jul 2014 8:46 PM Title: Chapter 10
I realise you made a mistake with Tiffany Anne's age in chapter 1 which you later corrected, but I still feel sure that you have made a mistake with Steven Nomad's age. The reason for this is because when Edward and Bella had talked about starting a family soon after they were married, they went to a retreat with Kate and Garrett, and when they got there they found out that several of the couples attending we're already pregnant, including Kate and Garrett, who had been together a long time and we're expecting their first baby, so when Bella and Edward found out shortly after that they were also pregnant with twins, it worked out Kate was 7 weeks ahead of Bella, so that means that Stephen is 19 and not 18. But also if the twins were born a few days after Bella and Edward's 1st wedding anniversary and now they are celebrating their 20th anniversary, Jackson and Alexis would be 19 after their anniversary and not already 19, but in the story you talk of them being nearly 20, which can't be right.
I have loved this story so far and don't want it to end, thanks so much for writing it.
Date: 27 Jul 2014 4:56 AM Title: Chapter 21
I was afraid of this chapter. I don't want the crazies to kidnap one of the kids. I loved the update.
Date: 05 Jun 2014 5:40 PM Title: Chapter 21
Glad to have you back! Writers block or not. It was another great chapter.
[Report This]Date: 05 Jun 2014 3:05 PM Title: Chapter 21
Loved the chapter. I hope Seth and Jesse work everything out. They don't want to face an angry Bella, Charlie, and Sue. I feel bad for Bella. It is hard when your babies grow up. She is just lucky that she has the 3 little ones. Once they grow up there will be grandchildren to spoil.
Date: 05 Jun 2014 3:56 AM Title: Chapter 21
Loved the update... Poor Bella... My heart ached for her when one by one the older children told her they weren't coming home for Christmas. I sure hope Phillip doesn't end up being a bad guy! Thank you for the update
[Report This]Date: 03 Jun 2014 8:20 AM Title: Chapter 21
I feel this is the calm before the storm.
Date: 03 Jun 2014 2:17 AM Title: Chapter 21
lol, you do realize Ginger how long we have been following this story? No matter how long it takes we will be here. Dang, what is going on with Seth, he is not like this so it must be pretty bad. Why do I feel like things are going pretty nicely for the family and it is about to not be so nice?
The kids and Christmas thing...I know how that feels, this last Christmas was the very first one ever that the kids were gone for it. Sigh, I cried.
Date: 02 Jun 2014 3:52 PM Title: Chapter 21
I am sorry that you are having writers blocks. Hope it doesn't last long. You did an amazing job with this chapter, with the whole story. You are a really good writer.
Date: 02 Jun 2014 4:18 AM Title: Chapter 21
Ginger, have said this before and will say it again. For your stories I would wait forever. Will admit I had a couple of small panics that maybe you weren't going to post anymore and I am sorry for my lack of faith. Love the way you wrap me into your stories and your characters. XOXO, Cheri
[Report This]Date: 02 Jun 2014 3:01 AM Title: Chapter 21
What is wrong with Seth???!! and who's the creep taking pictures for??? I hope Anderson keeps staying alert, it's all gonna explode soon......
Date: 02 Jun 2014 1:47 AM Title: Chapter 21
Looking forward to the next chapter
[Report This]Date: 01 Jun 2014 11:48 PM Title: Chapter 21
Michele~ I have nothign btu the utmost faith in you. You know if you need to you can message me, we can skype or whatever and I will ALWAYS be willing to swap and discuss ideas with you. Sometimes simply talking with someone helps. Loved this update, and I am really looking forward to more. XOXO, Kasi~
Date: 01 Jun 2014 10:57 PM Title: Chapter 21
Glad the guards are staying vigilant. Hope Seth gets his act together.
[Report This]Date: 01 Jun 2014 10:44 PM Title: Chapter 21
Totally understand Ginger, just so glad to hear your okay though! Sometimes your fans worry about you! Hope you stay busy with work but not overly so! Writer's block will come and go, hopefully it will stay away! Loved this chapter very much!
I rreally like Phillip. Hopefully all will work out with Seth, and Jesse!
[Report This]Date: 01 Jun 2014 8:07 PM Title: Chapter 21
I'm glad that, for once, it's not Edward and Bella having problems. I'm curious though if it's just a normal fight between Jesse and Seth or if something else is going on.
I can so relate to Bella being sad that her children won't come home for Christmas. I guess every mother can. But that's the way it is.
Looking forward to next chapter.
Date: 01 Jun 2014 4:19 PM Title: Chapter 21
great chapter
glad your block has cleared love your stories
well done
[Report This]Date: 08 May 2014 10:47 PM Title: Chapter 18
OK!! FIRST AND FOREMOST I'D LIKE TO SAY YOU ARE AMAZING WITHOUT A DOUBT. I STARTED READING THIS STORY OVER THE WEEKEND BECAUSE I JUST COULD'NT WAIT ANY LONGER. SEE I READ "PEOPLE LIKE US" SEVERAL TIMES ACTUALLY AND WAS OVER EXCITED ABOUT THE SEQUEL BUT I TEND TO GET IMPATIENT SO I WAS TRYING TO WAIT FOR IT TO BE COMPLETE CAUSE I KNEW ONCE I STARTED READING I WOULD'NT WANT TO WAIT FO AN UPDATE BUT I JUST COULD'NT WAIT ANY LONGER SO NOW!!! I BEG YOU PLEASE!!! UPDATE SOON. (LOL) READ YOU SOON.
Date: 27 Apr 2014 4:39 AM Title: Chapter 20
Glad to have you back!
Date: 09 Apr 2014 12:39 AM Title: Chapter 19
I hope you're ok it's been awhile since you updated...I miss this story...
Date: 13 Mar 2014 9:45 PM Title: Chapter 20
Loved the update.
Dont you worry. Writer's block is just a thing that happens. Looking foward to more.
Date: 28 Feb 2014 6:37 PM Title: Chapter 20
You are not justginger..... You are an amazing writer. Loved the update. I sure wish Darryl would come to edwad and they could set a trap for Peter and the crazy doctor.
Date: 25 Feb 2014 9:15 AM Title: Chapter 20
Apologies accepted :) A good story like this sometimes needs its time - so take it and we will happily wait to read such good chapters like this!
The reuinion in the playroom was perfect - not only for Bella with being in sub space again, but also to see the two of them interact with all their passion and love for one another! They really need their couple time and Edward is right in planning to book the room more often.
Do I have to worry about the new security guy on the ranch?! I hope that he is an honest guy and does his job properly!
We really have the calm before the storm now and I hope that the team doesn't give up on finding out what's going on behind the scenes! Darryl should really have the guts to step up and tell the Cullens what Peter and Larry plan! If he does it right, nobody will harm him, but of course he's frightened by the article he received... I wonder whether Bella has told the guys that she may have seen something at night? The details are alsways the most important facts, so I hope she didn't forget about it! Maybe she and Edward will talk about that the next day?
Looking forward to the next chapter!
Date: 21 Feb 2014 7:27 PM Title: Chapter 20
I loved the chapter. I love how caring they are for each other. I also like learning more about Sam, as well as the other children. This is such a wonderful family that we need to learn about all of them.
Date: 19 Feb 2014 2:12 AM Title: Chapter 20
Always excited to see you update!
Date: 18 Feb 2014 3:43 PM Title: Chapter 20
Squeeeeeeeeeeal! A chapter. I'm so excite. Had to stop and sit and read!
excellently done. I am enjoying each and every member of the family. I think I am loving the moments like the one in this chapter where one of the children interact with Bella and Edward on an emotional level. Your portrayal of Sam is fabulous.
thank you for giving this story to us to read. I so very much appreciate it.
Date: 18 Feb 2014 6:48 AM Title: Chapter 20
Don't appologize for something out of your control. OK, yes I jump up and down whopping and hollaring when I see an update from you. Yes I savor every word. Set aside time when I can read without being disturbed. So what I am saying is I will wait however long it takes to reap the benefits of your words. Best moment... Bella telling Edward how amazed she is with him 'at his age'!
Love this family, love your story. Thank you. XOXO, Cheri
Date: 18 Feb 2014 2:00 AM Title: Chapter 20
Hot chapter!!! Great to have ya back. I cant get enough of this family
[Report This]Date: 17 Feb 2014 8:35 PM Title: Chapter 20
Great chapter! I've been missing those two. I love how they are with their children and I'd really like to read more about Jackson and Alexis soon.
I think Bella and Edward should rent the playroom more often, at least once each chapter ;).
Can't wait to read the next chapter although I'm sure there's a lot of angst coming our way and I'm not good with handling that. See you next chapter.
Date: 17 Feb 2014 5:24 PM Title: Chapter 20
Looking forward to the next chapter
Date: 17 Feb 2014 4:17 PM Title: Chapter 20
I hate that you were experiencing writer's block but this is an excellent chapter. I think you are doing a great job. I love your stories. Love that Edward and Bella are back in the playroom. Glad that Sam's secrect is out in the open. Can't wait for more action but I am glad that you said that none of the family will be killed. Can't wait.
Date: 17 Feb 2014 12:36 PM Title: Chapter 20
I love that Sam is so much like Bella. I wish I had parents that were so supportive. Great job with the chapter. Calvino is taking a huge risk setting up the kidnapping pattern. I find it hard to believe that he is smart enough to cover his tracks so thoroughly though. Scary. Great chapter. Nice to see you.
Date: 17 Feb 2014 10:39 AM Title: Chapter 20
This chapter covered a lot if characters. You never disappoint. Thanks for this lovely story. It has the greatest combination of love, passion, family & fun. Loved hearing about Sam and Edward feeling bad he may have let him down by not being there. Can't wait for the next chapt.
Date: 17 Feb 2014 5:59 AM Title: Chapter 20
LOL I think you are luring us into a false sense of security and then bam! something bad is going to happen. Better not get a manicure anytime soon, 'cause I feel like a lot of nailbiting is coming my way.
[Report This]Date: 17 Feb 2014 4:42 AM Title: Chapter 20
ThankYou,
For Updating this beautifully captivating story & with such dedicaton to all of ur leaders... Ur truely an amaingly gifted witter & I absolutely love this story with all my heart.. I definatly give this a 10 star rating...
[Report This]Date: 17 Feb 2014 3:44 AM Title: Chapter 20
Darryl better hurry up and sing like a freaking canary! if anyone in that family is touched, there will be a massacre of epic proportions ( and i don't know who will strike 1st, the Cullen's or their loyal security team). and who's this Morgan dude, one of Larry's sick followers??? Love the time with Sam, it's gotta be a great weight off his shoulders now that his parents know and are supporting him.
Date: 16 Feb 2014 11:12 PM Title: Chapter 20
Great interlude. Definitely the calm before the storm.
[Report This]Date: 16 Feb 2014 9:01 PM Title: Chapter 20
Awesome chapter, glad to know you're fine, other than the writer's block! Love this story. This Edward is perfection, he's perfect and perfectly imperfect! Bella is just like him! She too is perfectly imperfect! The children are wonderful. Sam said it best, hoe blessed he is to be born into his family and to his parents! What fierce protectors they are. Love Anderson and Brian! Great chapter
[Report This]Date: 16 Feb 2014 8:55 PM Title: Chapter 20
Michele, As always this chapter was perfect. I love this family and this ongoing continuation of their lives tale. Thanks for sharing and if you ever need to brush something by someone or hammer out a thought, you have me on Facebook, please don;t be afraid to hit me up. HUGS, love this story so much. XOXO, Kasi~
Date: 16 Feb 2014 8:30 PM Title: Chapter 20
Glad Sam has something to be passionate about with school. Ugh Hope they catch out Peter et all, before something happens to one of the kids.
Yummy play time.
Date: 16 Feb 2014 8:23 PM Title: Chapter 20
wow fantastic chapter
this story is one of my fav iv followed it right from the start
love the sexy times you give edward and bella but also the banter between the family
well done
[Report This]Date: 02 Feb 2014 8:20 PM Title: Chapter 19
I've been reading PLU and AFLO for the last couple of weeks and I just love both stories. I really enjoy the chapters about the children but I also love to see how much Edward and Bella still love each other. Can't wait to see how the big plan will go. I hope it will be an epic failure.
[Report This]Date: 15 Jan 2014 5:55 AM Title: Chapter 19
Please update!
Date: 10 Jan 2014 9:29 PM Title: Chapter 19
Yum yum yum! I love your stour and the relationships you have created between them all. I think I've said this before. You really need to do this as a living. Point me in the direction your book and I'll be in line to buy.
i especially love Alice and Jasper interacting front of Bonnie. Such a lovely scene!
Date: 08 Jan 2014 2:02 AM Title: Chapter 19
Loved it... Just what I needed after the hectic holidays and having pneumonia at the same time. Here's to 2014!
[Report This]Date: 07 Jan 2014 12:05 AM Title: Chapter 19
Love your story can;t for more
Date: 06 Jan 2014 4:35 AM Title: Chapter 19
Loved it and so happy for this update!
Date: 05 Jan 2014 7:34 AM Title: Chapter 19
Nice way to welcome the new year!
Date: 04 Jan 2014 3:01 AM Title: Chapter 19
LOVE LOVE LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!!!! I am loving Jackson and Bonnie!!!!!! Always love reading about Edward and Bella. I am glad that right now everything is going great for them.
Date: 02 Jan 2014 3:46 PM Title: Chapter 19
Love Jackson and Bonnie. XOXO,Cheri
[Report This]Date: 02 Jan 2014 3:32 PM Title: Chapter 19
This was a great chapter. I love hearing from all the different characters. It was nice to check in with Alice and Jasper. It is must be comforting, as well as hard, to see that your oldest two babies have found their soulmates and are growing up.
[Report This]Date: 02 Jan 2014 3:19 PM Title: Chapter 19
Great chapter. Good to know a little more about Jackson and Bonnie
Date: 02 Jan 2014 5:47 AM Title: Chapter 19
Thanks for the update. It was amazing as always.
[Report This]Date: 01 Jan 2014 11:11 AM Title: Chapter 19
Happy New Year Ginger! Thank you for taking the time to post this for us, and for finding the the inspiration and drive to write this story! Bonnie reminds me of a young Bella in lots of ways! Love this story! Till next time all the best!
[Report This]Date: 01 Jan 2014 6:06 AM Title: Chapter 19
love Bonnie and Jack :) he'll make a great Dom, and he's got great mentors! Happy New Year!!!
Date: 01 Jan 2014 2:55 AM Title: Chapter 19
Loved seeing things from Bonnie and Jacksons perspective. Cant wait for the building drama.
Date: 01 Jan 2014 1:05 AM Title: Chapter 19
Jaskson is just too cute. Loved see his and Bonnie's interactions.
[Report This]Date: 31 Dec 2013 10:27 PM Title: Chapter 19
Michele, I just love you to death. Happy new Year! I am so excited to see and read more more more of this. HUGS, Kasi~
Date: 31 Dec 2013 10:04 PM Title: Chapter 19
I likes this chapter. It was great to get a lot of Jack & Bonnie and see how their relationship was going and where it was leading to. It was also nice to get a small glimpse of Jasper & Alice. I'm hoping next year will show more of Edward & Bella asthey work on repairing their relationship and if course the drama ahead. I only fear one or more if the kids will die and I so hope that doesn't happen
i look forward to reading more from you next year.
[Report This]Date: 31 Dec 2013 9:55 PM Title: Chapter 19
loved this. Happy New Year to you too