Date: 21 Jun 2011 8:43 PM Title: Introduction to Desire
Very good!
Date: 21 Jun 2011 8:24 PM Title: Tantalizing
Very promising, and I'm impressed with your choice of words. Although, *grinning* I've had to look up a couple of the words, just to be sure! This story seems like it will be intellectually stimulating as well as in other regions! *hoping u got the meaning there*
Date: 13 Mar 2011 8:10 AM Title: Traitorous Nirvana
Hmmmm...I'd be really curious to see where you go with this. Hopefully someday you'll pick it back up and finish :)
XxOo ~ Fangs
Date: 28 Nov 2010 5:15 AM Title: Awakening to Desire
Despite your "thinly veiled attempt at a plot" hehehe, you've done a lovely job conveying B's sudden confusion and subsequent pain at her dream.
Date: 12 Oct 2010 12:25 PM Title: Traitorous Nirvana
BRAVA!
What a glorious chapter dosed heavily with the lemons we love to read from you Di. The poetry was such a lovely touch in the scenes with Carlisle and Esme. I love the line - "A burden becomes light when it is carried willingly." So beautiful - I am using this quotation!
Twiliteaddict's scene with Carlisle and Esme was picture perfect, and a genius way to plant the seed within Bella that monogamous love is possible and so much more satisfying.
Amazing job ladies!!!
xo
Mistress Moon
Author's Response:
Thank-you so much, Love!!!
I did have a lot of fun once the inspiration of him waking wrapped around her that way struck (we have camping with my hubs to thank for it)! *mwha*
I'll be sure to let TA know you loved the poetry and her line so very much. She'll be tickled!
I had orriginally asked TA to do it as an outtake, but then it fit in so brillliantly, I knew it had to go in the main story. I'm glad you found it as lovely a way to help Bella through her confusion.
Thanks ever so much, bb!!!
Date: 11 Oct 2010 5:43 PM Title: Traitorous Nirvana
great story please keep updating
Author's Response:
Thanks so much! I will, have no fear! :D
Thanks for reading and responding!!
Date: 11 Oct 2010 1:42 PM Title: Traitorous Nirvana
The scene between Carlisle and Esme was beautiful.
But oh, to wake up with Edward like that... guh.
So glad for the update!
Author's Response:
Thank-you! TA will be pleased to hear you thought so. She wrote the particulars and I just seasoned it with my touch in that section.
I'd rather love to wake that way myself (and I'm no Innocent!)! *MWAH* ;D
Thanks so much for continuing to read!!!
Date: 11 Oct 2010 10:26 AM Title: Traitorous Nirvana
please update soon :)
Author's Response:
That's my intention! :D
Thanks for reading!!
Date: 11 Oct 2010 7:29 AM Title: Traitorous Nirvana
poor kids. hope they can get together soon.
Author's Response:
Yeah, but at least they're on the right track now (as long as E doesn't go and get all angsty!) lol
Thanks for reading!!!
Date: 01 Aug 2010 9:14 PM Title: Tantalizing
I've been looking for this story for almost a year and today I stumbled on it!!! YAY!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
Glad you found it! Sorry there's not more to reward your search! :D
Thanks!
Date: 05 Jun 2010 9:22 PM Title: Chapter 7: Enlightenment
ugh Aro is just nasty
Author's Response:
Yes, he is a vile piece of work! :S
Date: 04 Jun 2010 2:58 AM Title: Chapter 7: Enlightenment
Good chapter, glad to see you haven't forgotten this story. Could Edward talk to Charlie about Bella?
Author's Response:
Thanks! No, definitely not! The sexytimes just got lost in the RL angst for a while.
Yes, he could...if his pig headed independance would allow the thought to occur to him! lol
So glad to hear your thoughts! Thanks for reading!!!
Date: 04 Jun 2010 1:54 AM Title: Chapter 7: Enlightenment
Wonderful chapter!
Author's Response:
Thank-you!!!
Date: 03 Jun 2010 11:12 PM Title: Chapter 7: Enlightenment
Yay! You bet I'm still reading this. Loved the update. :)
Author's Response:
So glad to hear it!!! Sorry I'm so glacial! More's up now! :D
Thanks for reading!!!
Date: 03 Jun 2010 10:22 PM Title: Chapter 7: Enlightenment
:)
Author's Response:
:D
Date: 16 Apr 2010 11:04 PM Title: Chapter 6: Collision of Worlds: Part II
yaayyyyy you're back!! i've missed you :) i could just picture you sitting at your desk, laptop screen blank, finger tapping your lower lip as you imagine these obscene games for this story. that sexual "three legged race" (lol) just about killed me. tell jasper i'd love to help him win that one ;) awesome chapter honey, cant wait for more!
Author's Response:
Yeah! I missed you too! Sorry it was so long. :S
I got the idea for the the Stick Riding Game from Lady Gaga's "Love Game" one day when I was driving out to feed our horse. I was giggling up a storm! I thought about having one of them be a "wheelbarrow race" but if it were me the sensation would make my arms too weak. ;D I have no idea if it's even possible to pull off, but a friend whose hubs is storng enough and they're adventurous enough, says they'll give it a try some time and let me know! *mwaaha* (lucky girl!)
Your comment certainly captured Jas's notice. ;)
One more game next chap and we get to meet Aro at last.
Thanks for reading!! I adore your reviews!!!
Date: 14 Apr 2010 1:47 PM Title: Chapter 6: Collision of Worlds: Part II
poor eddie.
Author's Response:
Yes, poor baby! Good times with Aro is up next!
Thanks for reading!!!
Date: 23 Mar 2010 9:43 PM Title: When Worlds Collide, part I
Awesome story, keep up the good work!
Author's Response:
Thanks so much!! More soon. :D
Date: 09 Mar 2010 1:47 AM Title: When Worlds Collide, part I
I'm really enjoying this. I also admire your writing style. I'm looking forward to the rest of the story unfolding. :)
Author's Response:
I'm so glad to hear you're enjoying my little Lemon Ball!
Thank-you so much for the high praise. I am highly flattered. :D
More will be up soon. I have some fun things planned.
Thanks for reading and sharing your thoughts with me!!!
Date: 08 Mar 2010 9:24 PM Title: When Worlds Collide, part I
Love it and honestly i cant wait for some forbidden bella and edward action lol
Author's Response:
Thanks! And I honestly am having a hard time following the orriginal plan. I want to get them together too!
Glad you're enjoying!
Thanks for reading and responding!!!
Date: 08 Mar 2010 5:20 PM Title: When Worlds Collide, part I
lol runaway chariot
Author's Response:
I thought it was pretty funny too! ;D
Thanks for reading and responding!!
Date: 08 Mar 2010 2:54 PM Title: When Worlds Collide, part I
awesome update as always honey :) sorry to hear about your loss and being sick! what an awful combination. i know exactly what you mean about it being next to impossible to write sexytimes while in that mind frame - its freaking horrible.
cant wait for the next half! i want to see bella's reaction to being plowed over by that damn green eyed mindfucker!
Author's Response:
I'm on the mend, now if I can just replace my employee who just quit with no notice soon, I'll be doing tons better! *crosses fingers* Sorry to hear you have personal experience with the block grief brings with it! We got our first entry for the Cougar Revolution today. And it has helped perk me up a bit. I know it will be a process. It gets a bit better every day, even on the bad days.
Glad you liked it! I had a lot of fun writing it. I thought of the chariot as the perfect way to have them meet, touch, and be seperated again, as well as tie in canon when i was driving out to feed my horse. I giggled the whole way! :D
Ill have the next half out soon. Can't wait to see what you think of her reaction too. ;D
Thanks for the love and for the awesome response as always, bb!!!
Date: 08 Mar 2010 11:48 AM Title: It's Not Just A River In Egypt
WTF! I missed reviewing this chapter *shrugs sheepishly* I prostrate myself before you (errm is that the right word?? OMG prob not oh well I do anyway)!
And what a chapter! Jeysus! Don't worry about the cockblock sometimes it's nice to almost explode from frustration well my hubby loves it ;-D heh heh!!!!
Togi mentally talking himself in circles until he's a fizzing heap of confustastic emo is a joy to read!
I love it!
Mwah
Cat
xx
Author's Response:
Yeah, that's the right word (makes me feel like a Godess, lol) Togi likes the idea of you prone hands stretched out in suplication...so he can admire you're fine tush. (He's smirking)
*mwahaha* Tell the hubs, he's welcome. ;D
Delighted you liked the Toga wearing Angstward!
Thanks for the grin on my face and for reading and leaving such lovely reviews, bb!!!
Date: 08 Mar 2010 11:29 AM Title: When Worlds Collide, part I
Hi,
Sorry to hear you have had a bad time of late I hope you are feeling at least a little better today :-)
Once again an amazing chapter, don't ever worry about chapter length, if you managed to insert the Twilight characters into a restaurant menu I'd read it :-D
Many oodles of love and a polite request for a place to sit my ass in the baths for a shameless ogle of Togaward :-P
Mwah
Cat
xx
Author's Response:
Thanks for your empathetic words.
lol Mmmm, menu. That has hiserical potential!! ;D
Glad you're still liking my little Lemon Gellato of a fic! And just look for your tile when you come on down -- towel optional! :D
teehee
Thanks for the rockawesome support!!!
Diane
Date: 08 Mar 2010 10:48 AM Title: When Worlds Collide, part I
Interesting Roman Twilight :)
Author's Response:
Thanks!! Welcome to the Villa!
Date: 08 Mar 2010 9:47 AM Title: Introduction to Desire
Interesting story so far
Author's Response:
Thanks! Glad you are enjoying!
Welcome to the Villa!!
Date: 08 Mar 2010 8:13 AM Title: When Worlds Collide, part I
:)
Author's Response:
;D
Date: 08 Mar 2010 8:09 AM Title: When Worlds Collide, part I
He is my hero it is about time they got together not sure if this was the best you the whole almost being crushed thing LOL Loving this story. Edward is overanilizing everything to much as usual. I am waiting for more
Author's Response:
He does fit the role of galant rescuer to a T, doesn't he! I giggled so hard when I thought of this tact to get them to not only meet, but touch. :D
He is an angsty little devil. At least now I think he's got his focus corrected. More soon.
Thanks for reading and responding!!!
Date: 08 Mar 2010 7:56 AM Title: When Worlds Collide, part I
Beautiful!! I love the universe you've created for the storyline!!!
Author's Response:
Thanks so much! Glad you're enjoying! Welcome to the Villa! ;D
Date: 03 Mar 2010 3:51 AM Title: It's Not Just A River In Egypt
really, I love how you managed to draw a romanesque parallell of a tortured edward. he's such a drama king.
Author's Response:
Yes, he is, isn't he!? :D
Thank-you so very much for the high praise and huge smile splitting my face. Such fabulous motivation!
Thanks for reading!!!
Date: 02 Mar 2010 8:35 PM Title: Awakening to Desire
I am in fookin awe!
Written beautifully, fabulously echoing the original but with this amazing twist that has me aching to don a white bedsheet expertly draped around me and a natty pair of laced sandals to go in search of my hubby and (when he finally stops laughing at what I'm wearing) tell him to take me I'm his :-D
FYI it could take a while, I anticipate the laughter would be spectacular I would look fucking ridiculous!!!!!
Love it many oodles
Mwah xx
Author's Response:
I just love your reviews!! Never fail to make me grin from ear to ear!
I feel your pain. If only the Interdimentional Transporter weren't also a figment of my imaginiation, I'd be there right next to you, bb!!!
Thanks for all the Love and high words of praise!!!
Date: 02 Mar 2010 5:53 PM Title: Introduction to Desire
Here's what I thought...... Ugh ahhh mmmm wow woohoo ung hmm!
Holy eyefuck an innocent! Tell you what...there is nothing..absolutely nothing innocent about me so Togaward! you feel free to bring your blue balls over here and hump us both into oblivion bb *ahum* sorry got a lil distracted there :-P
Completely frigging brilliant!
Still loving it in all it's naughtytastic glory!
Mwah xx
Author's Response:
BAHAHAHA! I just LOVE illiciting a good old fashioned Lust Haze!! :D
Looks like Togi is seriously considering your offer after those lovely reviews. He's getting tired of suffering in silence, poor baby.
Loves ya, bb!
Thanks for reading and leaving fuckawesome reviews!!!
Date: 02 Mar 2010 5:00 PM Title: Tantalizing
How utterly captivating! How splendidly decadent! Oh fuck being polite I can't do it! How completely fucking hot as a hot thing on a hot plate in a really fucking hot place!!!!
I'm here on the rec of the ever amazingly awesome Fragile Human, clever bb!!
I love it ya hear LOVE IT!! and the best thing is I'm going straight on to chapter 2 for some more hedonistic smexaliciousness!!
Wooohoooooo!!
Mwah xx
Author's Response:
Fragile Human said she'd be sending you over. Delighted she did!
LOL Love your lack of propriety, bb! Tell me how ya really feel!! *mwhahaha* AND YOU DID, NICE!!!
Thank-you for the fuckawesome review and for putting a huge grin on my face during an otherwise crappy day!!!
Love you guys!!
Thanks for reading!!!
Date: 02 Mar 2010 12:04 AM Title: Tantalizing
i like that it is definately different than the same ole same ole. look forward to more
Author's Response:
That's what I was trying for! Glad to hear it was working for you so well. Thanks for reading and sharing your thoughts!!!
Date: 01 Mar 2010 9:23 PM Title: It's Not Just A River In Egypt
another crotchsploding chapter, lovey :) fabulous job! i sent my friend Cat over here, hopefully she's leaving you reviews. I'll make sure she does! love this story so much, its so different and original and sexy as fuck lol
cant wait for another chapter! i'll be so sad once the updates slow down.
Author's Response:
You really are winning my heart as my favorite reviewer! :D Still lmao at the word crotchsploting! Very nice! *waggles eyebrows* Glad to hear you continue to enjoy, and that you've rec'd my little Lemon Ball.
Thanks for reading, rec'ing, and making my day with your lovely words of encouragement!!!
I'll do my best not to keep you waiting too tortuously long. ;D
Date: 01 Mar 2010 6:38 PM Title: It's Not Just A River In Egypt
great chapter!!
Author's Response:
Thank-you!! :D
Date: 01 Mar 2010 4:30 PM Title: It's Not Just A River In Egypt
:)
Author's Response:
;D *smooches*
Date: 01 Mar 2010 3:26 PM Title: Awakening to Desire
:)
Author's Response:
;D Thanks!
Date: 01 Mar 2010 2:55 PM Title: Introduction to Desire
:)
Author's Response:
;D Thanks!
Date: 01 Mar 2010 2:27 PM Title: Tantalizing
:) very well writhen. intressting.....unike.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and even more for sharing your thoughts with me! Glad you are enjoying the musings of my twisted imagination.
Date: 01 Mar 2010 9:29 AM Title: It's Not Just A River In Egypt
When are they going to see each other up close and personal? Can she just go to her dad to have herself relesed or does she also have to go infront of Aro? I cant wait for more Love Alice as always.
Author's Response:
All will be revealed in good time! ;D Her release is contingent upon both Aro and Charlie's approval...and Aro has strings attached to his approval. I just love Alice too! Glad you're enjoying my little Lemon Ball!
Thanks for reading and sharing your thoughts!!!
Date: 01 Mar 2010 6:48 AM Title: It's Not Just A River In Egypt
poor bella. afraid of what aro has cooked up
Author's Response:
It does seem rather ominous! ;D
Thanks for reading and responding!!!
Date: 28 Feb 2010 4:11 AM Title: Awakening to Desire
thanks thanks, can't wait to see what happens next
(sorry for lame 'review'), will be more fair next time.
Author's Response:
I apprecitate you speaking up at all! ;D
More soon and look forward to hearing more of what you think of our intrepid lovers.
Thanks for reading!!
Date: 27 Feb 2010 9:06 AM Title: Awakening to Desire
Thank you, I really enjoyed this chap. Favourite line has to be:
"Faced with the realization that I was holding out for what could very well be impossible to ever find.."
Look forward to the next one!
Author's Response:
Thanks so very much for taking the time to share your thoughts with me!
That line is one of my favs for me too, and sums up a lot about what will direct Bella's persepective.
So glad you are liking it! Thanks for the encouragement!
Date: 26 Feb 2010 11:22 PM Title: Awakening to Desire
Her dream was soo vivid that I thought Jacob had snuck in her room!
I loved how you played the rejection and emotion of bond.
This is a really great fic and I'm glad I found it.
Author's Response:
I'm so glad to hear the dream worked the way I was hoping (or that people would think E really was there, and vamp-like with the speed, since he's human in the waking world here). I'm trying to maintain the canon traits as much as possible, but in their human analogues.
I'm glad you found it too and really apprecitate you taking the time to share your thoughts on it with me!
Thanks for reading!!
Date: 26 Feb 2010 11:04 PM Title: Awakening to Desire
Very hot story!
Author's Response:
Thank-you! And thanks for reading and taking the time to drop a note with your thoughts!
More soon. :D
Date: 26 Feb 2010 10:00 PM Title: Introduction to Desire
This is truly A MASTERPIECE!!!!!
I can't get enough!!!
Here I'm thinking Edward was couragous battling his blood lust, but this depiction makes his struggle magnanamous!!
Author's Response:
Wow! Thank-you so much for the hight praise!!
I'm so glad you are enjoying my little tale and the symetry I'm trying to maintain!
Thanks for reading and taking the time to share your thoughts!!!
Date: 26 Feb 2010 9:30 PM Title: Tantalizing
I love it!
This is such a smart fic.
The way you were able to replace the Bloodlust with "lust".
Spectacular!!
Bella, now I understand always the giver and her "familiar companion".
Can't wait to hear Edward's escapades though, I bet their scandalous!
Date: 26 Feb 2010 8:59 PM Title: Awakening to Desire
I thought for sure he found his way to her room until she wndered why no pain you really had me going well you still did *wink* very stimulating please tell me he is not going back home? more more more
Author's Response:
So glad to hear you're enjoying it! *mwaha*
No, he's not going back home...at least, not yet...I think. ;D Hang in there! More is definitely to come.
Thanks for taking the time to share your thoughts and for reading!!!
Date: 26 Feb 2010 8:19 PM Title: Awakening to Desire
for the love of all that is holy, please remind me not to read this at work. lmao thank GOD i only have an hour left here! that was... stimulating to say the least! holy hell woman, you can seriously write. have you written anything else!? christ i have to find it if you did, b/c this stuff is incredible!
Author's Response:
I typically invest in Cost-co quantities of panty liners myself. LOL And yeah, perhaps should include a NSFW warning! :D
Now you have me blushing to beat Bella and I didn't think I blushes!! I've written a o/s that I have posted here and there's some birthday round-robins I participated in listed on my profile.
Okay, you said earlier that you were falling in love with me, well the feeling is suddenly quite mutual!! ;D Thanks, bb!!!
Diane
Date: 26 Feb 2010 4:20 PM Title: Tantalizing
oh my god, more today!? i think i'm falling in love with you lol!
kill away, honey, i always love being slayed by a terrific story. i just finished giving my best friend the low down so she should be heading your way soon too :)
Author's Response:
LOL Glad to help out! The fast updates will only last so long and then it will be my typical update time, so enjoy!
Thanks for the rec!!!
Date: 26 Feb 2010 1:29 PM Title: Introduction to Desire
holy hell girl, you sure know how to crank up the intensity! the UST is killing me here :) absolutely love this story, cant wait for more.
thanks for making my friday morning at work exponentially more tolerable than i thought it would be ;)
Author's Response:
LOL Sorry to be killin' ya (even as it makes me giggle) ;) but I'm very pleased to hear you're enjoying the story!
So glad to help out! ;D There should be more up today.
Thanks for the delightful review and for reading!!!
Date: 26 Feb 2010 8:46 AM Title: Introduction to Desire
think it is good
Author's Response:
Thanks! :D
Date: 25 Feb 2010 11:06 PM Title: Introduction to Desire
Really interesting concept - I don't think I've read anything else quite like this. You have a really good writing style - nice and detailed. Look forward to reading more!
Author's Response:
Thank-you for the fabulous words of encouragement. I'm so glad you liked it.
Thanks for the rockin' review! You reallly made my day! :D
Date: 25 Feb 2010 8:12 PM Title: Introduction to Desire
Good Good very Good So she still has not seen him but she is sencing something I cant wait till they see each other up close and personal
Author's Response:
Yup. She's feeling the connection.
Thanks for reading and leaving such nice words of encouragement!!
Date: 25 Feb 2010 5:46 PM Title: Tantalizing
holy wow. thanks for not going tamer! going to hook all my friends up with your story - best wishes for quick writing!!! love it!
Author's Response:
Well, thank-you so very much! You have me grinning form ear to ear. (You're most welcome, btw.) :D
Just put more up now.
Thanks for reading (and rec'ing -- WOW!)!!
Date: 25 Feb 2010 8:37 AM Title: Tantalizing
Sounds very interesting cant wait for more
Author's Response:
I'm so glad you liked it. More will be up very soon.
Thanks for reading!!!
Date: 25 Feb 2010 5:55 AM Title: Tantalizing
Holy mother of God! *Waves hands in face* That was...HOT HOT HOT!!!!! and i thought my writing was erotic, i bow down to you and can't wait for more, please keep it coming ;D Oh God, Edward in a Toga...I go now
Morgs xxoo
Author's Response:
LOL Thanks, Morgs!! Sounds like I'll want to check out your stuff as soon as I'm caught up on my writing! ;D
Don't worry, there'll be more soon! tee hee.
Thanks for the review -- it has me grinning from ear to ear! :D