[Report This]Date: 13 Nov 2013 1:59 AM Title: Chapter 32
Yup -- you seem to have a knack of making me addicted to your fics.
To the point where I woke up, looked at the clock, and instead of thinking "oh, I can sleep for another 20 minutes", thought "oh! I can read some more!"
Well done again :)
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading this one, I'm glad you enjoyed it so much :) Hope you will enjoy the final part of the trilogy ;)
[Report This]Date: 17 Apr 2013 11:57 PM Title: Chapter 32
thank goodness!!!!! I would miss you too much!!!!!!
Author's Response:
Aww, thanks :) Thank you for reading this one, and I'm aiming to have the first chapter for the final part done for the weekend :)
Date: 17 Apr 2013 11:26 AM Title: Chapter 32
Oh! I can't wait for part three... and to make the banner! you have my email, right? if there is any pic you want in the new banner, send it to me.
rivera.mia@gmail.com
CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT PART!
xoxo
Mina
Author's Response:
Awesome, thank you for the banner offer! I will look out some suitable pictures over the next couple of days and let you have them.
Glad you enjoyed this part of the story - I'm aiming to get the first chapter of the final part done for the weekend.
xx
[Report This]Date: 16 Apr 2013 8:39 PM Title: Chapter 31
Insatiable love birds... thanks for the update, can't wait to read what you have planned next. xoxo Mina
Author's Response:
Thank you for reviewing. Sadly they only get a one day honeymoon and then it's back to college. Next chapter should be up tomorrow or Thursday :)
[Report This]Date: 15 Apr 2013 11:58 PM Title: Chapter 31
awww what a beautiful honeymoon!
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading; glad you enjoyed it :)
[Report This]Date: 14 Apr 2013 12:12 PM Title: Chapter 30
YAY! THEY ARE MARRIED!
Now don't kill them... LOL
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading. Don't worry, they'll get their happy ever after this time ;)
[Report This]Date: 13 Apr 2013 3:34 PM Title: Chapter 29
Oh man, you made me cry.... But it was still a lovely chapter. Off to read the next update!
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading. I'm glad you enjoyed it even though it was a sad one :)
[Report This]Date: 13 Apr 2013 1:02 PM Title: Chapter 30
beautiful!
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading; I'm glad you enjoyed it ;)
[Report This]Date: 12 Apr 2013 12:17 AM Title: Chapter 29
sad............but beautiful
Author's Response:
Thank you for readng :)
Date: 11 Apr 2013 7:38 PM Title: Chapter 29
Awww...how sad.
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading. Next chapter will be happier :)
[Report This]Date: 10 Apr 2013 1:24 AM Title: Chapter 28
gotta love Emmett and Jasper........So glad that Jake's family is so accepting.
Interested to see where you are going to head with this now, everything seems to be going so smoothly........will it last?
Author's Response:
Thank you for reviewing again :) There is not actually much further to go with the story and although I'm going to upset the apple cart a bit, it won't be too horrible ;)
[Report This]Date: 10 Apr 2013 12:30 AM Title: Chapter 27
okay-I have to fess up-I cannot stand the wait and go peek at fanfiction if you have not updated here yet! So I read this a few days ago-and loved it!
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading, glad you enjoyed the chapter. I do always update on here at the same time as on Fanfic, but I think the alerts on this site have not worked properly a couple of times; another reader said they found the chapter by accident so it sounds like just a small error on the site. I am aiming to write 3 chapters a week now though, so if it would be unlikely to be longer than 2-3 days between them :)
[Report This]Date: 10 Apr 2013 12:24 AM Title: Chapter 28
Oh the hrony pair... Love the camping sexing trip! LOL
Something tells me the CUllens were not just hunting around, I think they were protecting them.
Can't wait for the next update!
xoxo
Mina
Author's Response:
Thank you for reviewing. Haha, they can't leave each other alone! Next update won't be long and I'm guessing the wedding will be around chapter 30 :)
[Report This]Date: 08 Apr 2013 7:48 AM Title: Chapter 27
Awwww... that was perfect! LOVED IT!
Author's Response:
Aww, thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it. Now they have to tell their families - and the response will be rather different this time around ;)
[Report This]Date: 05 Apr 2013 3:42 AM Title: Chapter 25
They are adorable.
Author's Response:
Thank you for your reviews, I'm glad you enjoyed the latest chapters :)
[Report This]Date: 05 Apr 2013 3:40 AM Title: Chapter 22
Awwwwwwwwwwwwww poor Edward.so sad.
[Report This]Date: 05 Apr 2013 12:55 AM Title: Chapter 26
glad they are so relaxed with their past now
Author's Response:
Thank you for your reviews, I'm glad you enjoyed the updates :)
[Report This]Date: 05 Apr 2013 12:34 AM Title: Chapter 25
ahhhhhhhh love it
[Report This]Date: 04 Apr 2013 11:04 AM Title: Chapter 26
Loved this chapter, the boys are so in love... and horny. LOL
Thanks for the update, looking forward to reading the next one!
xoxox
Mina
Author's Response:
Thank you for your reviews, I'm glad you enjoyed the chapters.
Strange that there was no alert for the previous one but when I posted it, it said there was an error, even though the chapter was there so maybe that was why ;)
Next chapter should be up at the weekend :)
[Report This]Date: 04 Apr 2013 10:49 AM Title: Chapter 25
These two might not be mythical creatures anymore, but they sure have their libido! LOL
I don't know why I didn't get the email alert for THIS chapter, I was confused when I started reading the chapter I did get an email alert from... weird.
Anyways, I'll see it as a blessing since I will get to read two chapters today! HURRAH!
xoxo Mina
[Report This]Date: 30 Mar 2013 1:51 AM Title: Chapter 24
so glad that Carlisle and Esme are being so supportive and all of jacobs's family-and love the progression of Jacob and Edward's relationship!
Author's Response:
Thank you for reviewing, I'm glad you're enjoying the developments :)
[Report This]Date: 29 Mar 2013 7:03 PM Title: Chapter 24
Aw, what a lovely surprise! And these two are ready for more... Can't wait for that!
Thanks for the update!
xoxo
Mina
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading. It won't be long before they have their first time ;)
[Report This]Date: 25 Mar 2013 3:43 PM Title: Chapter 23
Holy shit, Edward is Bruce Wayne! LOL
Thanks for the update.
Author's Response:
Hehe, he's going to be seriously loaded - but he doesn't want it. He just wants to be with Jake and to be a history professor. Aww. ;)
Thank you for reading :)
[Report This]Date: 23 Mar 2013 12:36 AM Title: Chapter 22
beautiful! Feel so sorry for Edward and his parents though. Thank you so much for the nice Friday surprise!!!!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading, I'm glad you enjoyed the early update :)
[Report This]Date: 22 Mar 2013 5:15 PM Title: Chapter 22
Oh thank God Edward wasn't hurt, but I do feel sorry he lost his parents. It was so sudden and unexpected. Never saw that coming.
And yay! They met with Carlisle and Esme, though I'm not a big fan of this Daddy C, I'm happy they met. And the rings! That was beautiful.
How many more chapters are left? I somtimes feel like you are about to wrap this up, but then you threw another curve ball our way, not that I'm complaining, just curious.
Thanks for the update.
xoxo
Mina
Author's Response:
Thank you for reviewing. Carlisle will be very good to Edward and the others too. Glad you liked the part with the rings :)
There is a long way to go yet, I'm guessing it will be a similar length to United which was 35 chapters. Their relationship still has to progress physically and they need to get through college and plan their futures :)
[Report This]Date: 20 Mar 2013 10:56 PM Title: Chapter 21
nooooooooooo!!!!!!!! how could you do this to us!!!!!!!!!! Anxious to hear what is wrong.........these two are the best.
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading and sorry for the cliffie ;) Next chapter will be up at the weekend.
[Report This]Date: 20 Mar 2013 6:04 PM Title: Chapter 21
OH no! What happened to Edward?! Whys is he in PA?! Why is he crying?!
Author's Response:
Thank you for reviewing. Edward has just come to PA because he needs Jacob. The reason for his upset will be in the next chapter at the weekend :)
[Report This]Date: 17 Mar 2013 10:21 PM Title: Chapter 20
I loved the end of this chapter.... can't wait to read what happens next.
xoxo
Mina
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading; glad you enjoyed the update :)
[Report This]Date: 17 Mar 2013 3:17 PM Title: Chapter 20
ahhhhhhh of course it is............the Carlisle update was good, but am anxious to have them get together with the Cullens and find out more. Also to learn more about Edwards connection. You just keep us wanting more, a sure sign of a great story!
Author's Response:
Thank you for reviewing; glad to know I'm keeping people eager for more :) Edward will find out his connection to the past one before long ;)
[Report This]Date: 14 Mar 2013 1:08 AM Title: Chapter 19
love the love...............great start with the lemons!!!!!!! but now you leave us hanging with a call from Carlisle............and who are Jasper and Emmett married to? You just keep us dying for more!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading. Glad you enjoyed the lemons. I couldn't resist the cliffhanger, but Carlisle's chat with the boys will be in the next chapter along with a brief mention of Jasper and Emmett's wives.
[Report This]Date: 13 Mar 2013 11:23 PM Title: Chapter 19
omg Can't wait for the next chapter. I just love all your storie's.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much, glad you're enjoying :)
[Report This]Date: 13 Mar 2013 11:56 AM Title: Chapter 19
Noooooooooooo what a mean cliffie! But the little lemon zest at the begining was HOT so I'm not mad... frustrated, but not mad. :)
Author's Response:
Hehe, glad you enjoyed the zesty scenes, even though there was a mean cliffie! I should have the outcome of the phonecall up at the weekend ;)
[Report This]Date: 10 Mar 2013 5:11 AM Title: Chapter 18
so glad their relationship is going well.......love the story!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading, I'm glad you're enjoying the story :)
[Report This]Date: 09 Mar 2013 4:18 PM Title: Chapter 18
They are so adorable. Love the story.
Author's Response:
Thank you, glad you're enjoying :)
[Report This]Date: 09 Mar 2013 7:54 AM Title: Chapter 18
*SQUEAL* Dpes this mean we will get a lemon next chapter?
Author's Response:
Hehehe. I love the graphic :D Yes, there is a lemony scene next, it's already written - I just need to finish the chapter ;)
[Report This]Date: 07 Mar 2013 1:39 AM Title: Chapter 17
wow-please do not have Tanya with Jasper! You keep us guessing and trying to figure out how this is headed. Just what a good story should do!
Author's Response:
Thank you for reviewing! Glad I am managing to throw in a few surprised :)
[Report This]Date: 06 Mar 2013 6:58 PM Title: Chapter 17
Maybe Jasper was afraid to hurt Edward? I hope that was the reason... Fucking Tanya... Grrr...
Can't wait for the next update!
xoxo
Mina
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading. Jasper was too shocked by the boys' impossible appearance to do anything except keep his mind on making Tanya behave. He'll be fine as soon as they return :)
[Report This]Date: 03 Mar 2013 7:54 PM Title: Chapter 16
So the Cullens are there and Edward is afraid to meet them.
But, JACOB IS IN LOOOOVE!!! Weeeeeeeeeeeee
Loved the update, can't wait for the next one.
xoxo
Mina
Author's Response:
Thank you for reviewing, glad you enjoyed this one. Now he just has to let Edward know how he feels! :) They will get to meet the Cullens soon too, Edward's just worried about what he will find out.
[Report This]Date: 03 Mar 2013 12:37 PM Title: Chapter 16
You officially have me hooked! I anxiously wait for every Wed and Sunday for your update! I love how their feelings are progressing. You are doing such a wonderful job with it. Now what will happen if they meet the Cullens?????????
Author's Response:
Thank you for your review, I'm glad you're enjoying it so much. They will see the Cullens soon although I'm not quite sure how soon just yet ;)
[Report This]Date: 28 Feb 2013 2:08 AM Title: Chapter 15
wow-this was a big chapter with lots of information as things are moving along. Always loved the idea of Leah and Embry. Only Embry could soften her hard heart....Really enjoyed this one-especially the shower!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you for reviewing. Glad you enjoyed the update - and the shower scene! :)
[Report This]Date: 27 Feb 2013 9:54 PM Title: Chapter 15
OH. MY. GAWD! BEST CHAPTER SO FAR! I'M SO EXCITED THEY GOT TO MEET SOMEONE FROM THEIR PAST LIVES! *SQUEAL*
Author's Response:
Thank you, glad you enjoyed it so much! More discoveries are awaiting the boys yet ;)
[Report This]Date: 24 Feb 2013 9:49 PM Title: Chapter 14
Oh god,when Jacob was rembering the fight and the death scene. I was crying so hard. Just like when I read United we fall. I just love you're storie's.
Author's Response:
Thank you for reviewing; I'm glad you're enjoying it so much and the boys' emotion is obviously coming through well :)
[Report This]Date: 24 Feb 2013 4:14 PM Title: Chapter 4
love your story.....
[Report This]Date: 24 Feb 2013 4:11 PM Title: Chapter 14
I am so glad that you did not make it easy for them....this seems so much more real. I love the developing relationship-you are doing a fantastic job! I love this story and look forward to the updates. I am going to go back and make sure I have reviews for each chapter-you deserve a higher review count!
Author's Response:
Thank you for reviewing, I'm glad you're enjoying - and thank you for the extra reviews :)
[Report This]Date: 24 Feb 2013 1:56 PM Title: Chapter 14
What horrible parents were Carmen and Jerry! I can't believe them!
Poor Jacob, he relived Edward's dead, that was awful. I wonder who planted the tree...
I'm glad he is going back to talk to the elders, maybe he'll find Billy's diary?
Thanks for the update, can't wait to read the next one.
xoxo
Mina
Author's Response:
Thank you for reviewing. Jacob will be given Billy's diary soon and will find out all about his past :)
[Report This]Date: 21 Feb 2013 12:11 AM Title: Chapter 13
awwwwwww I just love your story........You are not rushing things but making it so much more real. You just have us hooked to keep coming back for more. Very well done!
Author's Response:
Thanks so much glad you're enjoying :)
[Report This]Date: 20 Feb 2013 5:07 PM Title: Chapter 13
They are so adorable.
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading :)
[Report This]Date: 20 Feb 2013 10:16 AM Title: Chapter 13
Yay! He kissed him! I know Jacob is confused, but it made me so happy! *sighs*
So, I suspect the next chapter will be about Jacob's mom? I wonder if Sam or any other member of the pack will recognize him...
Can't wait to read what happens next!
xoxo
Mina
Author's Response:
Thank you for reviewing, glad you enjoyed the kiss ;)
They are going to look for Jacob's Mom in the next chapter, but Sam won't be there - most of the pack members have died of old age by now ;)
[Report This]Date: 18 Feb 2013 5:41 AM Title: Chapter 12
They are just to adorable for words. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading and reviewing :)
[Report This]Date: 18 Feb 2013 1:54 AM Title: Chapter 12
love it! they are remembering piece by piece.......perfect!
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading, glad you enjoyed :)
[Report This]Date: 17 Feb 2013 10:19 AM Title: Chapter 12
I don't think I have ever squealed so much for a hand holding as I did with this chapter. LOVED IT! Can't wait to read what happens next. xoxo ~Mina
Author's Response:
Aww, glad you enjoyed. Wait until they get to New Year's Eve...there might be slightly more than hand holding ;)
[Report This]Date: 14 Feb 2013 2:01 AM Title: Chapter 11
poor Edward........but now that he has Jacob and his family.......loving the story!
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading, I'm glad you like it! :)
[Report This]Date: 13 Feb 2013 8:36 PM Title: Chapter 11
Oh yeah... Edward is in love.
I'm wondering if you are writing an EPOV for this story, I would love to hear form him.
Thanks for the update, can't wait for the next one.
xoxo
Mina
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading and reviewing :) I would like to write some of EPOV, but I'm going to stick with Jake so it's in keeping with United We Fall. Edward will start to be much more open with his thoughts and feelings, at least with Jake anyway.
[Report This]Date: 13 Feb 2013 6:46 PM Title: Chapter 11
I just love this story. They are so adorable.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much, glad you're enjoying it :)
[Report This]Date: 12 Feb 2013 10:52 AM Title: Chapter 10
OH YEAH! THE BRONZE HAIR IS BACK! Can't wait to read what comes next!
xoxo
Mina
Author's Response:
Thank you for reviewing :) Glad you enjoyed the update.
[Report This]Date: 12 Feb 2013 2:12 AM Title: Chapter 10
awwwwwwww-this is great!!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed :)
Date: 12 Feb 2013 1:17 AM Title: Chapter 10
That was nice of Jake's parents to let Edward stay with them for the holidays.
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading - Edward is about to find out what loving parents are supposed to be like :D
[Report This]Date: 10 Feb 2013 1:11 AM Title: Chapter 9
wow-the story unfolds! You are doing a wonderful job with this-cannot wait for more!
Author's Response:
Thank you for reviewing, I'm glad you're enjoying it :)
[Report This]Date: 08 Feb 2013 10:47 PM Title: Chapter 9
OMG, this story is getting so good. You're so tricky,just sleeping pills, HaHa.Will they find they find the Cullen's? Can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much, glad you're enjoying it - even with the horrible cliffhanger and the pills, haha! They will eventually see the remaining Cullens :)
[Report This]Date: 08 Feb 2013 10:34 AM Title: Chapter 9
*punches you on the shoulder* Don't you EVER scare me like that again! God, I think I aged ten years... *clutches chest*
So, they are now digging more into things, can't wait to see where it takes them.
Thanks for the update, even though the last cliffy almost gave me a heart attack.
xoxo
Mina
Author's Response:
Thank you for your review and sorry for the horrible scare! :D
They'll gradually uncover more things and will gradually get closer to each other at the same time ;)
[Report This]Date: 06 Feb 2013 7:33 PM Title: Chapter 8
Oh my god,I hope Edward will be alright. I think it was to much for him after the Baz incident, and the vampire thing. Also his parents are so cold towards him.
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading. At least Jacob is there for him. Hopefully the next chapter will be up tomorrow :)
[Report This]Date: 06 Feb 2013 1:13 AM Title: Chapter 8
wow-so many memories! They are getting close now, so interested to find out how you are going to take this. Cannot wait for more! PLEASE do not have Edward really trying to kill himself........
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading - at least they are talking now. Next update will probably be at the weekend :)
[Report This]Date: 05 Feb 2013 3:38 PM Title: Chapter 8
OH NO! NO NO NO!!!! *pulls hair and runs aronud in panic*
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading and sorry for the awful cliffhanger :( I'll try not to be long with the next one! :)
[Report This]Date: 02 Feb 2013 9:46 PM Title: Chapter 7
thank goodness for Jacob.....so many young adults take safety for granted.....now maybe jacob and Edward will talk!
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading. They will finally start talking in the next chapter :)
[Report This]Date: 31 Jan 2013 1:22 AM Title: Chapter 6
love following your stories! Keep up the good work!
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading, I'm glad you enjoy them :)
[Report This]Date: 30 Jan 2013 11:57 AM Title: Chapter 6
Oh man, oh man.... I bet his dreams are gonna turn dirty from no on, eh?
I'm glad Jake didn't take his ex back, she was stupid and selfish, and Jake has moved on. He deserves better, someone like Edward ;)
Can't wait to read what happens next! He now knows he is a Black! Squeeee...
xoxo
Mina
Author's Response:
Hehe, he won't have dirty dreams quite yet, but at least he's heading in the right direction! There will be some drama when he gets back to college a day early and finally he can talk to Edward. Thank you for reviewing :)
[Report This]Date: 27 Jan 2013 9:55 AM Title: Chapter 5
YAY! HE FOUND THE LEGENDS! One step closer...
And I wonder if Edward has not only dreamed of Jacob, but also about his life as a vampire, maybe that's why isn't fothcoming about his dreams...
Thanks for the update! Can't wait for the next one!
xoxo
Mina
Author's Response:
Thank you for reviewing. Edward has had a couple more memories than he's letting on but he's scared and doesn't want to believe it which is why he won't talk. It'll all come out in the next couple of chapters :)
[Report This]Date: 24 Jan 2013 6:10 PM Title: Chapter 4
This is getting good. Love it.
Author's Response:
Thank you, I'm glad you're enjoying it :)
[Report This]Date: 23 Jan 2013 3:26 PM Title: Chapter 4
OH! HE DREAMS OF HIM TOO!!!
This chapter made me giddy.
Can't wait to read what happens next!
xoxo
Mina
Author's Response:
Thank you for reviewing :) Glad you enjoyed the chapter. Poor Edward is scared and doesn't want to think about what it might mean, but he'll get there :)
[Report This]Date: 22 Jan 2013 1:50 AM Title: Chapter 3
dying to hear if Edward has had any of these visions!?
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading. Jacob will talk to him about his own dreams soon as he's dying to know as well :) Thank you for reading.
[Report This]Date: 20 Jan 2013 10:01 AM Title: Chapter 3
Great update, I see more memories are starting to reappear. I wonder if the surviving Cullens are gonna make an appearence in this story... or maybe even one of the wolves?
Can't wait to read what happens next.
xoxo
Mina
Author's Response:
Thank you for reviewing, glad you enjoyed the latest. There will gradually be more and more things remembered and there will be a few of the original characters from United We Fall appearing later on :)
[Report This]Date: 17 Jan 2013 5:28 AM Title: Chapter 2
this is so good. love it.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much, glad you are enjoying it :)
[Report This]Date: 17 Jan 2013 2:14 AM Title: Chapter 2
was happy to see an update so soon! Now want more! love your story!
Author's Response:
Thank you, glad you enjoyed the update :)
[Report This]Date: 16 Jan 2013 1:42 PM Title: Chapter 2
oh, I would so love to hear what Edward is thinking!
thanks for the update, though I didn't get an email alert for it :/
xoxo
Mina
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading - strange you didn't get an alert. We'll get to hear Edward's thoughts and feelings eventually - not from his POV but when he opens up to Jake after much frustration on Jake's part! :)
[Report This]Date: 14 Jan 2013 4:30 AM Title: Chapter 1
you have peeked my interest for sure. Enjoyed your other story, but this one has me even more interested and curious!
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading, I hope you enjoy this one as much as its predecessor :)
Date: 13 Jan 2013 9:32 PM Title: Chapter 1
I'm looking forward to this story! I like this first chapter and was surprised by Edward. :)
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading, I'm glad you like it so far. Edward will change his image into the usual copper-haired one eventually :)
[Report This]Date: 13 Jan 2013 12:16 PM Title: Chapter 1
I loved it... Can't wait to read more of how they will get to know each other again and what they remember about their marriage...
Author's Response:
Thank you for reviewing, I'm glad you enjoyed the beginning. Their memories will start coming through in bits and pieces through dreams and deja vu moments at first :)
[Report This]Date: 13 Jan 2013 9:44 AM Title: Chapter 1
I just finished the banner and then ping! and email alert just got in telling me you updated. I debated if I should read this first before sending you what I had made, but then decided to just send it to you since you asked for those photos for a reason. Now that I have read the chapter, I'm glad I kept the banner simple!
Can't wait to read more, will this one be also only in Jpov? Or will we get to hear from Edward this time?
~Mina
Author's Response:
As I said in my email, I LOVE the banner, so thank you very much :)
I will probably stick with Jacob's POV in keeping with United, but I'm not totally decided yet - I'll see how it goes as the story progresses. Thank you for reading :)
Sarah