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Reviewer: Arrowgirl2017 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Mar 2019 5:14 AM Title: Chapter 22

Amazing story. This one hit a little too close to home. I Am battling cancer for the second time. I love this story.

Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2016 4:51 PM Title: Chapter 20

I'm curious as to why he didn't shave his head at the same time he did Bella's. He's a guy, it's more acceptable and it grows back.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Feb 2014 10:24 AM Title: Chapter 22

Great way to wrap up this story! Fits in perfectly with the way their story played out. It looks like you never got around to that epilogue you mentioned, do youplan to do one, I hope?



Author's Response:

I do plan one, but they just aren't talking to me right now. It will be a future take (when I get it done). Thanks for reading. It seems like you are working your way through all of my stuff. Thanks so much!

Liz

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Feb 2014 10:11 AM Title: Chapter 21

I really hope Bella stays well and she and Edward marry, have kids and great careers That's not too much to ask, is it?

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Feb 2014 10:01 AM Title: Chapter 20

Great that Bella is in remission and Edward is back with her so she can tell him she loves him! That was a wonderful reunion scene!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Feb 2014 9:51 AM Title: Chapter 19

Not too smart, on anyone's part. Not Jake and Leah, nor Edward! They're all three in danger of going to jail.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Feb 2014 9:41 AM Title: Chapter 18

Poor Bella , it must be so hard to see the hair come out in clumps like that! Good thing she's going to see a therapist about how she's feeling during the treatments.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Feb 2014 9:31 AM Title: Chapter 17

I think it was smart of Bella to have her eggs harvested for future pregnancies, just in case. Now that her surdery is over, there's still some tough days ahead, what with radiation and chemotherapy. Thank heaven Edward will be there for her!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Feb 2014 9:12 AM Title: Chapter 16

It is so encouraging that they are talking and sharing things. This awful illness just may bring them closer, I hope! Now I just have to cross my mental fingers and hope she gets well!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Feb 2014 8:55 AM Title: Chapter 15

Sounds pretty damn scary, but I bet she gets through it. Now, if only some gorgeous green-eyed guy would come stay with her and help her through it all.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Feb 2014 8:43 AM Title: Chapter 14

I hope it isn't malignant, but am afraid that's what has been bothering her!  This could be really bad!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Feb 2014 8:32 AM Title: Chapter 13

It didn't take a crystal ball to figure out Kate's problem, but I'm still glad she 'fessed up! As for Bella's recurring illness, I'm afraid it may be something career ending!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Feb 2014 8:22 AM Title: Chapter 12

What the hell is Kate's problem? She deliberately starts a feud with her little sister and then blames her for it! Tickles me no end that Edward defended Bella to Kate. I can tell he still loves her, I wish she could!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Feb 2014 8:10 AM Title: Chapter 11

The lyrics you have each of them write are so fitting for where they are in their relationship. It's pretty telling that they communicate through their music. If he gets help with his problems and Bella believes him, maybe there's hope for them.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Feb 2014 7:53 AM Title: Chapter 10

If he could get so drunk he would fuck Lauren, I guess it's time to get some help for his drinking! Ewww!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Feb 2014 7:45 AM Title: Chapter 9

No idea who Bella sings the duet with, but hope it's someone great. Hopefully she talks to Edward, it is about time she listened to the truth. I too wonder who will win.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Feb 2014 7:35 AM Title: Chapter 8

I'm assigning equal blame here, half to each og them. Edward did what Bella accused him of doing, pushing her away all the time, and Bella let what Jacob did color her view of Edward's love. So there you have it, a lovely mess, with both hurting the other needlessly!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Feb 2014 5:34 AM Title: Chapter 7

The lyrics are all well suited to the person or subject, that's for sure! Can't say I blame Bella for being a little scared, I would be too! Hope everything goes well on the road!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Feb 2014 5:25 AM Title: Chapter 6

I'm glad to see them make up and get back together, but your author's noe tells me it won't last, damn it!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Feb 2014 5:17 AM Title: Chapter 5

How cool is that, them writing their love for each other in thos two songs? I love it!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Feb 2014 5:09 AM Title: Chapter 4

Kind of a shocker, but I suppose it could happen like that. If it means she and the guys tour together it just gives her and Edward more time to explore their feelings! Wonder what it will mean to her masters degree?

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Feb 2014 5:01 AM Title: Chapter 3

Hopefully Edward was paying attention to what was really said, when Bella told him all he had to do was ask!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Feb 2014 8:15 AM Title: Chapter 2

Sounds like Bella and Edward have the same problem, exes who won't let go! This is starting out real well!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Feb 2014 5:59 AM Title: Chapter 1

Makes me wish I was there to listen to them! Sounds like a match made in music heaven!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Feb 2014 5:45 AM Title: Prologue

Tantalizing beginning, flashback to follow!

Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Oct 2013 7:42 AM Title: Chapter 22

Wonderful!

Reviewer: KtPro819 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 31 Jul 2013 6:56 AM Title: Chapter 22

This was a fantastic story.  You're very well written and your editing was spot on for the most part.  I loved the concept and your characters.  Great job and I look forward to future works from you.

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jul 2013 6:07 AM Title: Chapter 22

EXCELLENT!

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2013 6:25 PM Title: Chapter 22

Loved it! And I knew that song would be PERFECT for them :) Can't wait to read the epilogue :)

 

-Kate

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2013 5:49 PM Title: Chapter 22

sweet chapter.  wonderful surprise proposal.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2013 5:38 PM Title: Chapter 22

:) loved this story

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2013 10:12 AM Title: Chapter 21

:)

Reviewer: aussieKayz Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2013 9:31 AM Title: Chapter 21

I hope that Bella stays in remission. It would be terrible if she got sick again

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2013 4:42 AM Title: Chapter 21

lol for B catching him sneaking in.  I agree that they do need to make time for themselves.

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2013 2:52 AM Title: Chapter 21

Love it! :) Can't wait for more!

 

-Kate

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2013 11:25 PM Title: Chapter 20

LOVED it!! So happy that her cancer is gone :)

(oh and the song he sang is mine and my husband's wedding song!) LOVE IT!

 

Can't wait to read more!

I think a great song for them to do as a duet would be If I didn't have you by Thompson Square, it is just a beautiful song! and fits them too!

-Kate

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2013 9:25 PM Title: Chapter 20

Woo Hoo.  Glad Cancer is gone.   Happy the boy apologized they were being jerks.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2013 7:45 AM Title: Chapter 20

:) loved this

Reviewer: Melany333 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2013 2:05 AM Title: Chapter 20

love it

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2013 3:17 AM Title: Chapter 19

Jake is such a pussy.  Of course that move by Em, Jazz, and Garrett was one too. 

 

Poor B.   

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2013 5:06 AM Title: Chapter 19

:) loving this

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2013 11:22 PM Title: Chapter 19

Wow Poor Edward and Bella just having a really crappy week.....I can't believe the guys said that to him, but at least Kate went to handle it! :) Can't wait to read more! 

Reviewer: edlovesme Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2013 3:37 AM Title: Chapter 18

So sad. I had to shave my dads head when he started losing his hair :(

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2013 6:56 PM Title: Chapter 18

So I just have to say that I have been making my way through all of your stories over the last few days!! WOW! You are an amazing writer! I have loved every story I have read.  This one is just amazing and heartbreaking! :) Can't wait to read more!

 

-Kate



Author's Response:

Thank you. I am so glad that you're enjoying my little tales. All of them...

Thanks for reading.

Liz

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2013 10:05 PM Title: Chapter 18

Silly girl trying to do it herself.  Glad E is there for her.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2013 10:01 PM Title: Chapter 17

Cant blame her for wanting to do the harvest.

Reviewer: sherylbaby Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2013 7:28 PM Title: Chapter 18

So sad.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2013 2:30 PM Title: Chapter 18

loved this chapter.  Poor Bella

Reviewer: Melany333 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2013 1:51 PM Title: Chapter 18

can't wait for more

Reviewer: Mireads Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2013 1:44 PM Title: Chapter 18

Great update. You are pretty much spot on with the way you feel going through chemo. Each treatment the chemo just builds up in your system and makes you feel worse. It kills your taste buds.
The radiation doesn't make you sick it makes you ready tired. And as far your hair, they told me when my hair would fall out.i ran my fingers threw my hair one day and it started falling out and I had someone shave my head, you loose every hair on your body that was very traumatic .

Reviewer: edlovesme Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2013 6:41 PM Title: Chapter 17

Well that's a good sing I hope. Just started reading and read straight through, can't wait for more.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2013 5:13 AM Title: Chapter 17

loved this

Reviewer: Melany333 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2013 2:23 AM Title: Chapter 17

love it

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2013 5:40 PM Title: Chapter 16

glad that she is fianlly talking to him.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2013 8:22 AM Title: Chapter 16

:)

Reviewer: sherylbaby Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2013 5:48 PM Title: Chapter 15

I'm glad she is fighting it, but this i so sad

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 May 2013 7:57 PM Title: Chapter 15

oh wow.  Didnt see that coming.   Cancer sucks

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 May 2013 2:35 PM Title: Chapter 15

:)

Reviewer: Mireads Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 May 2013 1:11 PM Title: Chapter 15

So sad

Reviewer: gajujubee Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 May 2013 9:47 PM Title: Chapter 14

please don't leave us hanging too long. update soon.

Reviewer: sherylbaby Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 May 2013 5:47 PM Title: Chapter 14

Hey! That is evil! Please tell me it isn't serious!

Reviewer: Melany333 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 May 2013 5:46 PM Title: Chapter 14

can't wait for more

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 May 2013 5:18 PM Title: Chapter 14

glad she finally went to Carlisle.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 May 2013 5:09 PM Title: Chapter 14

:):)

Reviewer: momof2jcs Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 May 2013 4:56 PM Title: Chapter 13

OK just read it all up to this point. I really enjoyed it. Please get Bella and Edward back together soon.

Reviewer: kgunter34 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 May 2013 10:32 AM Title: Chapter 13

Great chapter.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 May 2013 5:24 AM Title: Chapter 13

:)

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 May 2013 3:07 AM Title: Chapter 13

Kate really is pathetic.   At least she is getting some closure with her sisters.  

Reviewer: gajujubee Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 May 2013 11:36 PM Title: Chapter 12

I am really surprised Kate would arrange her wedding that way. Is she jealous of Bella? I hope we find out more behind Kate's intentions.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 May 2013 7:40 PM Title: Chapter 12

Love E and Garrett ripping into Kate the Biatch!!!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 May 2013 1:51 PM Title: Chapter 12

:)

Reviewer: Melany333 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 May 2013 1:28 PM Title: Chapter 12

can't wait for more

Reviewer: rmcrms5 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Apr 2013 2:08 PM Title: Chapter 11

AAre their songs actual work we can listen to or just your words?



Author's Response:

Links to the songs used can be found in my FB Group. Look for them at Momma's BookCase, https://www.facebook.com/groups/424670544287510/

Liz

Reviewer: PattinsonsDiscoStickIsMine Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Apr 2013 6:54 AM Title: Chapter 11

OK I'VE READ ALL OF YOUR CHAPTERS TO THIS STORY ( SOMETHING THAT MATTERS ) AND I LOVE IT I WAS JUST WONDERING HOW LONG IT'S GOING TO BE BEFORE YOU PUT UP A NEW CHAPTER I FEEL SO BAD FOR BOTH BELLA AND EDWARD BUT I HAVE TO SAY I FEEL THAT BELLA SHOULD HAVE GIVEN EDWARD A CHANCE TO EXPLAIN WHAT HAPPENED IN THE BUS WITH THE GIRL BUT ALSO FLIX SHOULD HAVE SPOKEN UP RIGHT AWAY TO DEFEIND EDWARD SINCE HE SAW THE GIRL FALL IN THE MUP PUDDLE. PLEASE DON'T GIVE UP ON THIS STORY I HATE TO BE LEFT HANGING FROM AND STORY I LOVE WITH NO ENDING TO COME IF YOU KNOW WHAT I MEAN.



Author's Response:

This one updates every Friday. I have no plans to aboandon this story. Even if I wanted to, which I don't, my beta wouldn't let me...LOL! The next chapter is gonna jump in time a bit. We have about 3 more chapters until we get to the Prologue. Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Liz

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Apr 2013 3:39 AM Title: Chapter 11

glad E is going to work on his issues.

Reviewer: PattinsonsDiscoStickIsMine Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Apr 2013 7:33 PM Title: Chapter 1

well i have read all of your storys except glass you didn't finish that one so thats why i didn't even start reading it. i like the way you write i just started this story (something that matters) and i like it so far



Author's Response:

I'm glad that you are enjoying the story. Glass is complete so you should give that one a shot. Hope to read more reviews from you.

Liz

 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Apr 2013 5:17 AM Title: Chapter 11

:)

Reviewer: kgunter34 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Apr 2013 5:23 PM Title: Chapter 10

Dumbass, but so is she.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Apr 2013 5:44 AM Title: Chapter 10

E really needs to do some growing up fast

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Apr 2013 2:51 PM Title: Chapter 10

loving this story

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2013 6:13 PM Title: Chapter 9

:) loving this

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2013 5:32 PM Title: Chapter 9

Great chapter.  hope B finally listens to Felix.  stubborn girl.

Reviewer: Natsar Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2013 4:16 PM Title: Chapter 8

That was totally stupid on Edward's part. He had already been encouraging the groupies, then Bella sees that shit. He should have taken the girl to Kate, Rose or Alice if he wanted to be nice. Not been in a locked bus alone with her wearing his shirt. Some men just have no brains.... lol!

Reviewer: kgunter34 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2013 4:10 PM Title: Chapter 9

Great update.

Reviewer: gajujubee Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2013 2:55 PM Title: Chapter 9

update soon PLEASE!!!!

Reviewer: Melany333 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Apr 2013 2:59 PM Title: Chapter 8

LOVE IT

Reviewer: goldseadragon Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2013 2:41 AM Title: Chapter 8

Edward should not have put himself in that situation, innocent or not. You don't take an unknown underage person into private locations that lack witnesses. What if she was a fame whore and decided to cry rape? It would have been her word against his.

Reviewer: HotforE Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Apr 2013 6:48 PM Title: Chapter 7

just how old are Bella and Edward? twelve? They sure show the same amount of emotional maturity as a twelve year olds do...



Author's Response:

In chapter 1 I said that Bella was 22 and Edward 26. We haven't dived into the reasons behind Edward being emotionally stunted, but we will. How would you react if you walked in a room and saw what she did? Listening would not be the first thing on my mind, I can guarantee that.

Reviewer: kgunter34 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Apr 2013 3:32 PM Title: Chapter 8

Great update.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Apr 2013 2:25 PM Title: Chapter 8

He has been pushing her away, but glad he was innocent in this, but it did look bad.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Apr 2013 1:37 PM Title: Chapter 8

:)

Reviewer: monkey22marie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2013 10:49 PM Title: Chapter 7

Did Bella have a baby of Edwards that she didn't tell him about?

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2013 6:25 PM Title: Chapter 7

Sounds like B really doesnt want to do this singing thing.  ah well.   ROFL for Skankren's song.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2013 6:19 PM Title: Chapter 6

I don't see what he did wrong in the beginning when he heard the song?  Sounded like he was being supportive.....or did I miss something?

 

 

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2013 6:14 PM Title: Chapter 5

they are too cute.  Glad the guys called him out.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2013 6:11 PM Title: Chapter 4

They were wrong to mad at her when they asked her to sing.   Glad its working out so well.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2013 6:07 PM Title: Chapter 3

Sneaky Sisters.  LOL

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2013 6:03 PM Title: Chapter 2

Jake is gonna be trouble I bet along with Skankren,.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2013 5:57 PM Title: Chapter 1

I take it this was a flashback to before they dated?

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2013 5:54 PM Title: Prologue

Good start.  cant wait to see how it plays out.

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