Date: 21 Mar 2019 5:14 AM Title: Chapter 22
Amazing story. This one hit a little too close to home. I Am battling cancer for the second time. I love this story.
Date: 27 Jul 2016 4:51 PM Title: Chapter 20
I'm curious as to why he didn't shave his head at the same time he did Bella's. He's a guy, it's more acceptable and it grows back.
Date: 21 Feb 2014 10:24 AM Title: Chapter 22
Great way to wrap up this story! Fits in perfectly with the way their story played out. It looks like you never got around to that epilogue you mentioned, do youplan to do one, I hope?
Author's Response:
I do plan one, but they just aren't talking to me right now. It will be a future take (when I get it done). Thanks for reading. It seems like you are working your way through all of my stuff. Thanks so much!
Liz
Date: 21 Feb 2014 10:11 AM Title: Chapter 21
I really hope Bella stays well and she and Edward marry, have kids and great careers That's not too much to ask, is it?
Date: 21 Feb 2014 10:01 AM Title: Chapter 20
Great that Bella is in remission and Edward is back with her so she can tell him she loves him! That was a wonderful reunion scene!
Date: 21 Feb 2014 9:51 AM Title: Chapter 19
Not too smart, on anyone's part. Not Jake and Leah, nor Edward! They're all three in danger of going to jail.
Date: 21 Feb 2014 9:41 AM Title: Chapter 18
Poor Bella , it must be so hard to see the hair come out in clumps like that! Good thing she's going to see a therapist about how she's feeling during the treatments.
Date: 21 Feb 2014 9:31 AM Title: Chapter 17
I think it was smart of Bella to have her eggs harvested for future pregnancies, just in case. Now that her surdery is over, there's still some tough days ahead, what with radiation and chemotherapy. Thank heaven Edward will be there for her!
Date: 21 Feb 2014 9:12 AM Title: Chapter 16
It is so encouraging that they are talking and sharing things. This awful illness just may bring them closer, I hope! Now I just have to cross my mental fingers and hope she gets well!
Date: 21 Feb 2014 8:55 AM Title: Chapter 15
Sounds pretty damn scary, but I bet she gets through it. Now, if only some gorgeous green-eyed guy would come stay with her and help her through it all.
Date: 21 Feb 2014 8:43 AM Title: Chapter 14
I hope it isn't malignant, but am afraid that's what has been bothering her! This could be really bad!
Date: 21 Feb 2014 8:32 AM Title: Chapter 13
It didn't take a crystal ball to figure out Kate's problem, but I'm still glad she 'fessed up! As for Bella's recurring illness, I'm afraid it may be something career ending!
Date: 21 Feb 2014 8:22 AM Title: Chapter 12
What the hell is Kate's problem? She deliberately starts a feud with her little sister and then blames her for it! Tickles me no end that Edward defended Bella to Kate. I can tell he still loves her, I wish she could!
Date: 21 Feb 2014 8:10 AM Title: Chapter 11
The lyrics you have each of them write are so fitting for where they are in their relationship. It's pretty telling that they communicate through their music. If he gets help with his problems and Bella believes him, maybe there's hope for them.
Date: 21 Feb 2014 7:53 AM Title: Chapter 10
If he could get so drunk he would fuck Lauren, I guess it's time to get some help for his drinking! Ewww!
Date: 21 Feb 2014 7:45 AM Title: Chapter 9
No idea who Bella sings the duet with, but hope it's someone great. Hopefully she talks to Edward, it is about time she listened to the truth. I too wonder who will win.
Date: 21 Feb 2014 7:35 AM Title: Chapter 8
I'm assigning equal blame here, half to each og them. Edward did what Bella accused him of doing, pushing her away all the time, and Bella let what Jacob did color her view of Edward's love. So there you have it, a lovely mess, with both hurting the other needlessly!
Date: 21 Feb 2014 5:34 AM Title: Chapter 7
The lyrics are all well suited to the person or subject, that's for sure! Can't say I blame Bella for being a little scared, I would be too! Hope everything goes well on the road!
Date: 21 Feb 2014 5:25 AM Title: Chapter 6
I'm glad to see them make up and get back together, but your author's noe tells me it won't last, damn it!
Date: 21 Feb 2014 5:17 AM Title: Chapter 5
How cool is that, them writing their love for each other in thos two songs? I love it!
Date: 21 Feb 2014 5:09 AM Title: Chapter 4
Kind of a shocker, but I suppose it could happen like that. If it means she and the guys tour together it just gives her and Edward more time to explore their feelings! Wonder what it will mean to her masters degree?
Date: 21 Feb 2014 5:01 AM Title: Chapter 3
Hopefully Edward was paying attention to what was really said, when Bella told him all he had to do was ask!
Date: 20 Feb 2014 8:15 AM Title: Chapter 2
Sounds like Bella and Edward have the same problem, exes who won't let go! This is starting out real well!
Date: 20 Feb 2014 5:59 AM Title: Chapter 1
Makes me wish I was there to listen to them! Sounds like a match made in music heaven!
Date: 20 Feb 2014 5:45 AM Title: Prologue
Tantalizing beginning, flashback to follow!
Date: 31 Jul 2013 6:56 AM Title: Chapter 22
This was a fantastic story. You're very well written and your editing was spot on for the most part. I loved the concept and your characters. Great job and I look forward to future works from you.
Date: 21 Jul 2013 6:25 PM Title: Chapter 22
Loved it! And I knew that song would be PERFECT for them :) Can't wait to read the epilogue :)
-Kate
Date: 21 Jul 2013 5:49 PM Title: Chapter 22
sweet chapter. wonderful surprise proposal.
Date: 21 Jul 2013 5:38 PM Title: Chapter 22
:) loved this story
Date: 15 Jul 2013 9:31 AM Title: Chapter 21
I hope that Bella stays in remission. It would be terrible if she got sick again
Date: 15 Jul 2013 4:42 AM Title: Chapter 21
lol for B catching him sneaking in. I agree that they do need to make time for themselves.
Date: 15 Jul 2013 2:52 AM Title: Chapter 21
Love it! :) Can't wait for more!
-Kate
Date: 29 Jun 2013 11:25 PM Title: Chapter 20
LOVED it!! So happy that her cancer is gone :)
(oh and the song he sang is mine and my husband's wedding song!) LOVE IT!
Can't wait to read more!
I think a great song for them to do as a duet would be If I didn't have you by Thompson Square, it is just a beautiful song! and fits them too!
-Kate
Date: 29 Jun 2013 9:25 PM Title: Chapter 20
Woo Hoo. Glad Cancer is gone. Happy the boy apologized they were being jerks.
Date: 27 Jun 2013 3:17 AM Title: Chapter 19
Jake is such a pussy. Of course that move by Em, Jazz, and Garrett was one too.
Poor B.
Date: 21 Jun 2013 11:22 PM Title: Chapter 19
Wow Poor Edward and Bella just having a really crappy week.....I can't believe the guys said that to him, but at least Kate went to handle it! :) Can't wait to read more!
Date: 19 Jun 2013 3:37 AM Title: Chapter 18
So sad. I had to shave my dads head when he started losing his hair :(
Date: 18 Jun 2013 6:56 PM Title: Chapter 18
So I just have to say that I have been making my way through all of your stories over the last few days!! WOW! You are an amazing writer! I have loved every story I have read. This one is just amazing and heartbreaking! :) Can't wait to read more!
-Kate
Author's Response:
Thank you. I am so glad that you're enjoying my little tales. All of them...
Thanks for reading.
Liz
Date: 17 Jun 2013 10:05 PM Title: Chapter 18
Silly girl trying to do it herself. Glad E is there for her.
Date: 17 Jun 2013 10:01 PM Title: Chapter 17
Cant blame her for wanting to do the harvest.
Date: 14 Jun 2013 2:30 PM Title: Chapter 18
loved this chapter. Poor Bella
Date: 14 Jun 2013 1:51 PM Title: Chapter 18
can't wait for more
Date: 14 Jun 2013 1:44 PM Title: Chapter 18
Great update. You are pretty much spot on with the way you feel going through chemo. Each treatment the chemo just builds up in your system and makes you feel worse. It kills your taste buds.
The radiation doesn't make you sick it makes you ready tired. And as far your hair, they told me when my hair would fall out.i ran my fingers threw my hair one day and it started falling out and I had someone shave my head, you loose every hair on your body that was very traumatic .
Date: 09 Jun 2013 6:41 PM Title: Chapter 17
Well that's a good sing I hope. Just started reading and read straight through, can't wait for more.
Date: 01 Jun 2013 5:40 PM Title: Chapter 16
glad that she is fianlly talking to him.
Date: 26 May 2013 5:48 PM Title: Chapter 15
I'm glad she is fighting it, but this i so sad
Date: 24 May 2013 7:57 PM Title: Chapter 15
oh wow. Didnt see that coming. Cancer sucks
Date: 17 May 2013 9:47 PM Title: Chapter 14
please don't leave us hanging too long. update soon.
Date: 17 May 2013 5:47 PM Title: Chapter 14
Hey! That is evil! Please tell me it isn't serious!
Date: 17 May 2013 5:46 PM Title: Chapter 14
can't wait for more
Date: 17 May 2013 5:18 PM Title: Chapter 14
glad she finally went to Carlisle.
Date: 13 May 2013 4:56 PM Title: Chapter 13
OK just read it all up to this point. I really enjoyed it. Please get Bella and Edward back together soon.
Date: 11 May 2013 10:32 AM Title: Chapter 13
Great chapter.
Date: 11 May 2013 3:07 AM Title: Chapter 13
Kate really is pathetic. At least she is getting some closure with her sisters.
Date: 03 May 2013 11:36 PM Title: Chapter 12
I am really surprised Kate would arrange her wedding that way. Is she jealous of Bella? I hope we find out more behind Kate's intentions.
Date: 03 May 2013 7:40 PM Title: Chapter 12
Love E and Garrett ripping into Kate the Biatch!!!
Date: 03 May 2013 1:28 PM Title: Chapter 12
can't wait for more
Date: 28 Apr 2013 2:08 PM Title: Chapter 11
AAre their songs actual work we can listen to or just your words?
Author's Response:
Links to the songs used can be found in my FB Group. Look for them at Momma's BookCase, https://www.facebook.com/groups/424670544287510/
Liz
Date: 28 Apr 2013 6:54 AM Title: Chapter 11
OK I'VE READ ALL OF YOUR CHAPTERS TO THIS STORY ( SOMETHING THAT MATTERS ) AND I LOVE IT I WAS JUST WONDERING HOW LONG IT'S GOING TO BE BEFORE YOU PUT UP A NEW CHAPTER I FEEL SO BAD FOR BOTH BELLA AND EDWARD BUT I HAVE TO SAY I FEEL THAT BELLA SHOULD HAVE GIVEN EDWARD A CHANCE TO EXPLAIN WHAT HAPPENED IN THE BUS WITH THE GIRL BUT ALSO FLIX SHOULD HAVE SPOKEN UP RIGHT AWAY TO DEFEIND EDWARD SINCE HE SAW THE GIRL FALL IN THE MUP PUDDLE. PLEASE DON'T GIVE UP ON THIS STORY I HATE TO BE LEFT HANGING FROM AND STORY I LOVE WITH NO ENDING TO COME IF YOU KNOW WHAT I MEAN.
Author's Response:
This one updates every Friday. I have no plans to aboandon this story. Even if I wanted to, which I don't, my beta wouldn't let me...LOL! The next chapter is gonna jump in time a bit. We have about 3 more chapters until we get to the Prologue. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Liz
Date: 28 Apr 2013 3:39 AM Title: Chapter 11
glad E is going to work on his issues.
Date: 27 Apr 2013 7:33 PM Title: Chapter 1
well i have read all of your storys except glass you didn't finish that one so thats why i didn't even start reading it. i like the way you write i just started this story (something that matters) and i like it so far
Author's Response:
I'm glad that you are enjoying the story. Glass is complete so you should give that one a shot. Hope to read more reviews from you.
Liz
Date: 20 Apr 2013 5:23 PM Title: Chapter 10
Dumbass, but so is she.
Date: 20 Apr 2013 5:44 AM Title: Chapter 10
E really needs to do some growing up fast
Date: 19 Apr 2013 2:51 PM Title: Chapter 10
loving this story
Date: 12 Apr 2013 5:32 PM Title: Chapter 9
Great chapter. hope B finally listens to Felix. stubborn girl.
Date: 12 Apr 2013 4:16 PM Title: Chapter 8
That was totally stupid on Edward's part. He had already been encouraging the groupies, then Bella sees that shit. He should have taken the girl to Kate, Rose or Alice if he wanted to be nice. Not been in a locked bus alone with her wearing his shirt. Some men just have no brains.... lol!
Date: 12 Apr 2013 2:55 PM Title: Chapter 9
update soon PLEASE!!!!
Date: 06 Apr 2013 2:41 AM Title: Chapter 8
Edward should not have put himself in that situation, innocent or not. You don't take an unknown underage person into private locations that lack witnesses. What if she was a fame whore and decided to cry rape? It would have been her word against his.
Date: 05 Apr 2013 6:48 PM Title: Chapter 7
just how old are Bella and Edward? twelve? They sure show the same amount of emotional maturity as a twelve year olds do...
Author's Response:
In chapter 1 I said that Bella was 22 and Edward 26. We haven't dived into the reasons behind Edward being emotionally stunted, but we will. How would you react if you walked in a room and saw what she did? Listening would not be the first thing on my mind, I can guarantee that.
Date: 05 Apr 2013 2:25 PM Title: Chapter 8
He has been pushing her away, but glad he was innocent in this, but it did look bad.
Date: 29 Mar 2013 10:49 PM Title: Chapter 7
Did Bella have a baby of Edwards that she didn't tell him about?
Date: 29 Mar 2013 6:25 PM Title: Chapter 7
Sounds like B really doesnt want to do this singing thing. ah well. ROFL for Skankren's song.
Date: 29 Mar 2013 6:19 PM Title: Chapter 6
I don't see what he did wrong in the beginning when he heard the song? Sounded like he was being supportive.....or did I miss something?
Date: 29 Mar 2013 6:14 PM Title: Chapter 5
they are too cute. Glad the guys called him out.
Date: 29 Mar 2013 6:11 PM Title: Chapter 4
They were wrong to mad at her when they asked her to sing. Glad its working out so well.
Date: 29 Mar 2013 6:07 PM Title: Chapter 3
Sneaky Sisters. LOL
Date: 29 Mar 2013 6:03 PM Title: Chapter 2
Jake is gonna be trouble I bet along with Skankren,.
Date: 29 Mar 2013 5:57 PM Title: Chapter 1
I take it this was a flashback to before they dated?
Date: 29 Mar 2013 5:54 PM Title: Prologue
Good start. cant wait to see how it plays out.