Date: 18 Apr 2020 1:20 AM Title: Prologue
Love this story please finish it
Date: 17 Nov 2019 1:28 PM Title: Chapter 26
I am in love!! Please finish this! Need more Edward and his little bit!! Oh of course Edward and Bella!
Date: 13 Mar 2019 7:57 PM Title: Prologue
Loving it so far, please update!
Date: 07 Jul 2018 8:45 AM Title: Chapter 22
Please, please continue this!!!
Date: 07 Jul 2018 7:37 AM Title: Chapter 20
Please come back and finish this!
Date: 03 Jul 2018 4:33 PM Title: Prologue
I hope you continue the story. Love it
Date: 01 Jul 2018 7:33 AM Title: Chapter 9
Please continue this!
Date: 30 Jun 2018 1:57 PM Title: Prologue
I wish this was continued!
Date: 08 Jan 2017 12:58 AM Title: Chapter 26
Are you going to finish this story?
Date: 26 Jun 2016 10:51 PM Title: Chapter 21
Please update soon...at least to let us see Edward take care of Kohn or Witherdale...whatever you're calling him.
Date: 16 Jun 2016 7:36 AM Title: Chapter 26
NEED MORE PLEASE PLEASE
Date: 15 May 2016 10:57 PM Title: Prologue
Please update soon!
Date: 10 Apr 2016 11:36 PM Title: Chapter 26
Hello,
New reader here. I saw this rec'd on facebook and got sucked in right away. I noticed you didn't update since december. I really really hope an update isn't to far away. I'm not below begging. LOL so Please Pretty Please update.
Mwah
Barb
Date: 10 Apr 2016 4:36 AM Title: Chapter 26
Please update soon!! I love this story and want to read more.
Date: 05 Mar 2016 10:30 AM Title: Chapter 26
Hi
Ive just read your whole story and there isn't anymore! I loved your story it's great but what has happened. I'm sorry to complain but are you going yo finish it?
Thanks for a great story!!!
cheers
bellamay
Date: 05 Jan 2016 5:43 PM Title: Chapter 26
I'm really enjoying this story. I love this tough, but soft centered Edward.
Date: 04 Jan 2016 3:59 AM Title: Chapter 26
Glad they are all working together to keep the girls safe. Poor Riley
Date: 30 Dec 2015 11:32 PM Title: Chapter 26
I am dying to know what happened with e/b. It was Esme influenced right! Love the story.
Date: 24 Dec 2015 6:18 AM Title: Chapter 26
Just caught up. Good story. A great job of integrating the stories and characters. Very well written.
Date: 24 Dec 2015 1:03 AM Title: Chapter 26
good. can't wait to see how everything unfolds. seems like there are a lot of people who could make things worse for b.
happy holidays!
Date: 23 Dec 2015 7:06 AM Title: Chapter 26
Thanks for the update! I love this story. Keep 'em comin'! ;)
Date: 23 Dec 2015 3:53 AM Title: Chapter 26
I'm so glad that you're not giving up on this.
Merry Christmas! Good wishes for the New Year.
Date: 23 Dec 2015 2:40 AM Title: Chapter 26
Loved it can't wait for more 😍
Date: 22 Dec 2015 10:16 PM Title: Chapter 26
I'm still loving it. Been rewatching the early seasons of SOA on netflix so I was in the mood for an update on this one.
Date: 05 Nov 2015 2:59 PM Title: Chapter 12
I feel like Bella would have been celibate for the whole 10 years. She doesn't trust people easily and the premed and med student coursework takes 99% of a students time so she probably didn't ever have another boyfriend. I want to see Edward find that out : D
Date: 04 Oct 2015 4:30 AM Title: Chapter 23
Please update...*gets down on hands and knees and begs with tears*. I am a pre med student and wonderful stories like this are how I relax....and pre med students NEED to relax! Please don't let a month go by!
Date: 19 Sep 2015 3:57 AM Title: Chapter 23
Really not liking Esme at all. Skankya is going to start something nasty. Hope maddie doesn't get hurt.
Date: 16 Sep 2015 7:49 PM Title: Chapter 23
Love story so far. They need to clean some skank women out of this town. They are not worth the trouble.
Date: 11 Sep 2015 2:36 AM Title: Chapter 23
Loved it can't wait for more 😍
Date: 07 Sep 2015 9:37 PM Title: Chapter 23
Esme is a problem. She just hates without caring about the consequences. Why? Tanya, well she seems self centered but she may cause problems by sheer stupidity. Did someone steal Bella hair clip as a trophy? Great chapter.
Date: 05 Sep 2015 2:59 PM Title: Chapter 23
I can see esme attaching herself to Tanya and trying to make more waves.
Date: 05 Sep 2015 8:06 AM Title: Chapter 23
I'm more interested in finding out about the ultrasound picture that was found when Edward's house was ransacked.
Date: 05 Sep 2015 4:19 AM Title: Chapter 23
can't wait for tanya to get a reality check or swift kick to the ass ;)
Date: 18 Jul 2015 6:41 PM Title: Chapter 22
I think I'm going to like Xay lol. So far I am like this a lot, can't wait for more.p
Date: 08 Jul 2015 1:16 PM Title: Chapter 22
Loved it :) can't wait to read more :)
charleexx
Date: 07 Jul 2015 3:22 AM Title: Chapter 22
I can't wait to see what Edward has to say about the thought of someone trying to take her away from him again. Plus this might five him the kick in the ass he needs to fix his shit!
Date: 04 Jul 2015 9:02 PM Title: Chapter 22
Loved it can't wait for more 😍
Date: 02 Jul 2015 9:53 AM Title: Chapter 22
I'm looking forward to Edward & Bella's reclaiming of each other. I'm sure the Tanya issue is bothering Bella & Xavier is under edward's skin.
Date: 01 Jul 2015 11:07 PM Title: Chapter 22
When will it be revealed who's ultrasound picture it really was?
Date: 01 Jul 2015 9:30 PM Title: Chapter 22
Ugh Womden like Skankya give us all a bad name. Sigh.
Date: 01 Jul 2015 9:10 PM Title: Chapter 22
YAY thanks for the update :)
can we see a little maddie and edward time maddie helping edward wish his bike maybe??
Date: 21 Jun 2015 7:05 AM Title: Chapter 21
wonder if esme knows about the baby b lost
Date: 21 Jun 2015 5:44 AM Title: Chapter 17
hmm . . . new character
Date: 21 Jun 2015 5:33 AM Title: Chapter 16
can't wait to get the rest of the story
Date: 21 Jun 2015 5:21 AM Title: Chapter 15
wondering if maybe b was pregnant and lost the baby
Date: 21 Jun 2015 5:10 AM Title: Chapter 14
wonder who's sonogram
Date: 21 Jun 2015 4:45 AM Title: Chapter 12
can't wait till esme's gets a little ass kicking for all her interfering. thinking there is something else she is trying to hide as well
Date: 21 Jun 2015 2:40 AM Title: Chapter 10
wonder if esme is somehow involved with charlie's death
Date: 21 Jun 2015 2:13 AM Title: Chapter 8
yikes, what is esme going to do
Date: 21 Jun 2015 2:02 AM Title: Chapter 7
had a feeling b would be called
Date: 21 Jun 2015 1:00 AM Title: Chapter 6
wonder if b is running away from him
Date: 21 Jun 2015 12:51 AM Title: Chapter 5
they're not really getting anywhere with clearing the air
Date: 20 Jun 2015 11:59 PM Title: Chapter 4
hmmm . . . wondering what is going on with b
Date: 20 Jun 2015 11:37 PM Title: Chapter 1
interesting . . . esme is pretty different. can't wait to meet the rest
Date: 20 Jun 2015 7:26 PM Title: Chapter 21
Great update
Date: 13 Jun 2015 4:30 AM Title: Chapter 21
Loved it can't wait for more 😍
Date: 07 Jun 2015 8:10 PM Title: Chapter 21
I just re~read from the beginning and can't wait for the next update. READ YOU SOON ♥
Date: 07 Jun 2015 5:07 AM Title: Chapter 21
Glad Bella and Edward are spending time together alone. Love this chapter.
Date: 04 Jun 2015 4:44 PM Title: Chapter 21
I understand why Bella wants to take it slow with Edward but I just want her to jump his bones! :)
Date: 04 Jun 2015 2:14 PM Title: Chapter 21
Well Esme has one redeeming quality for how she cares for Jeremy. Edward really needs to put Ma in her place and get rid of Icky Vicky once and for all.
Date: 04 Jun 2015 4:08 AM Title: Chapter 21
I'm so glad you are back!
Date: 03 Jun 2015 9:09 PM Title: Chapter 21
Red and Maddie have been missed. Doing happy dance to see a new chapter.
Date: 01 Jun 2015 7:57 AM Title: Chapter 20
This is fantastic...thank you so much for sharing your work with us! T
Date: 28 May 2015 2:38 PM Title: Chapter 20
I 'm sooo glad & happy Edward is staying the night!!!!!!
Date: 28 May 2015 2:11 PM Title: Chapter 19
I think Edward needs to give her a sweet kiss to help her get thru her story
Date: 28 May 2015 12:37 PM Title: Chapter 18
They are getting sooo mushy with each other! I LOOOVE IT!!!
Date: 28 May 2015 10:24 AM Title: Chapter 17
Who is Bella's Xavier? And the plot thickens again...
Date: 28 May 2015 10:03 AM Title: Chapter 16
Finally, they get it together & have a sweet moment!
Date: 28 May 2015 9:30 AM Title: Chapter 14
This is not good! Not Victoria, Esme, or Bella! That ultra sound pic is very interesting. It makes me think her hospital room was bugged & that pic was a clue saying there are holes in the story.
Date: 28 May 2015 9:10 AM Title: Chapter 13
I hope the agent fell for it!
Date: 28 May 2015 1:58 AM Title: Chapter 12
That was a rough one!
Date: 28 May 2015 1:35 AM Title: Chapter 11
Garrett is going to be very very regretful & I really really hope Red doesn't die
Date: 28 May 2015 12:29 AM Title: Chapter 10
I hope Edward see Esme for what she is and distances himself.
Date: 27 May 2015 12:43 PM Title: Chapter 9
I can't wait to hear about that kiss. I bet Red gave the ATF guy a good chomp.
Date: 27 May 2015 12:24 PM Title: Chapter 8
Esme is a vicious momma bear!
Date: 27 May 2015 11:50 AM Title: Chapter 6
What is that ATF guy up too?
Date: 27 May 2015 11:38 AM Title: Chapter 5
Is the ATF guy after her?
Date: 27 May 2015 11:10 AM Title: Chapter 4
What is Carmen doing with the money? Tanya is a nasty scurb!